Comments received on poems by CLM
Oh To Be
L. B. Mek said:
an astute distillation of why we all yearn for love..
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
an astute distillation of why we all yearn for love..
thanks for sharing
April 12th, 2021 04:52
11/18/2020
dusk arising said:
A heartfelt and touching piece. After damage is done within a relationship it takes a great deal of courage to continue.
Initially i thought i was reading a plea to a stranger and as such was readily relating to your piece.
I have only read two pieces from you and note that you have a way of expressing the deep and personal emotions of relationships.
April 12th, 2021 03:57
dusk arising said:
A heartfelt and touching piece. After damage is done within a relationship it takes a great deal of courage to continue.
Initially i thought i was reading a plea to a stranger and as such was readily relating to your piece.
I have only read two pieces from you and note that you have a way of expressing the deep and personal emotions of relationships.
April 12th, 2021 03:57
11/18/2020
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many \'times in our lives\' but many do just pass and each new day can bring us such wonder.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many \'times in our lives\' but many do just pass and each new day can bring us such wonder.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 01:12
Oh To Be
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these you would be all those things to many people, including me.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these you would be all those things to many people, including me.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:25
Oh To Be
dusk arising said:
I really like this. I think you voice a desire within all of us who are not bursting with self assuredness.
I will place this among my favourite MPS poems.
April 11th, 2021 19:14
dusk arising said:
I really like this. I think you voice a desire within all of us who are not bursting with self assuredness.
I will place this among my favourite MPS poems.
April 11th, 2021 19:14
Oh To Be
MendedFences27 said:
I really like this poem. I read it as being about empathy, feeling what others feel. As such, I think you\'ve done a wonderful job of conveying that emotion. your words leave a feelin that is almost surreal, \"Oh, to be a thought\" and your last two lines express what is the origin of your poem A lovely piece of poetry. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2021 11:18
MendedFences27 said:
I really like this poem. I read it as being about empathy, feeling what others feel. As such, I think you\'ve done a wonderful job of conveying that emotion. your words leave a feelin that is almost surreal, \"Oh, to be a thought\" and your last two lines express what is the origin of your poem A lovely piece of poetry. - Phil A.
April 11th, 2021 11:18
Another Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write CLM. I am sure the future will be be painless as your words put the pain behind you.
Welcome to MPS.
April 11th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write CLM. I am sure the future will be be painless as your words put the pain behind you.
Welcome to MPS.
April 11th, 2021 00:14
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