Comments received on poems by CLM



These Hands
sonal monhyung said:

Amazing!

January 8th, 2024 06:27

06/21/2023
peto said:

Sounds like a great memory to hold onto
Enjoyed the read very much
Also the format and background .
Excellent

June 22nd, 2023 06:49

11/14/2021
A.H. Browning said:

Those were the right words.
Kindest Regards.

December 20th, 2021 23:38

11/14/2021
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, I know these sentiments
very well
although I doubt, I could have ever
expressed them with such clarity..
love your choice of accessible wording
thank you, for choosing to share

November 15th, 2021 06:19

11/14/2021
orchidee said:

And now you\'ve found these fine words! :)

November 15th, 2021 02:55

04/06/2015
Jay-Lee Jane said:

A fine write, well done.

October 5th, 2021 06:15

04/06/2015
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing style, and a wonderful theme..
thanks for sharing

October 5th, 2021 05:33

04/06/2015
Goldfinch60 said:

May all your days be filled with wonder CLM and your nights filled with glorious dreams.

Andy

October 5th, 2021 01:05

02/16/2018
L. B. Mek said:

\'Between lonely days and all the lies
You slowly broke my heart.
Suddenly there was nothing
Not even a reason to try.
All that we should\'ve would\'ve could\'ve had
Frozen with a lie.\'
(wonderfully expressive and sincere, I cherish your accessible wording, making this that much easier to connect with,
lastly, I really appreciate how smooth the writing flowed,
a great read)
thanks for choosing to share

October 4th, 2021 05:21

02/16/2018
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive words CLM. That warmth will come back and love will abound in your life.

Andy

October 4th, 2021 00:52

05/30/2021
A.H. Browning said:

I just found this one. Very nice writing. “Of quiet in the midst of all the noise.” I find I desire those moments. I’ve been working at my mom’s estate this week, something that is a challenge due to living in another state. She passed a few years ago. Anyway, after being here for a week I finally had a moment like that this morning. It always seems to take me several days of being away from my job and normal responsibilities to be able to enjoy a moment like you described in your writing. I’m enjoying that now and I will take that tranquil peace whenever I’m fortunate enough to find it.

AH Browning

October 3rd, 2021 08:44

10/02/2021
Goldfinch60 said:

I do hope that one day that person will be there for you CLM.

Andy

October 3rd, 2021 00:42

05/30/2021
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
wonderfully written,
thanks for sharing

May 31st, 2021 06:10

05/30/2021
Goldfinch60 said:

Those moments of quiet in our lives are so important in them and so wonderful to enjoy.

Andy

May 31st, 2021 00:31

02/22/2021
orchidee said:

A fine write CLM.

April 24th, 2021 01:33

02/22/2021
Goldfinch60 said:

Could emotive write CLM.

Andy

April 24th, 2021 00:42

December 24, 2016
Goldfinch60 said:

That door will lead to the wonder of new love in your heart.

Andy

April 19th, 2021 00:33

01/24/2018
dusk arising said:

Again you bring the realism of true feelings. This time the lingering hurt and injustice mostly put away but nonetheless still present in times of self doubt. REally relateable for me.

April 17th, 2021 04:53

01/24/2018
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times ahead of you will be wondrous CLM, go for them.

Andy

April 17th, 2021 02:24

Heartstrings
Goldfinch60 said:

May that trust be fulfilled.

Andy

April 17th, 2021 00:46

09/13/2016
Bragee said:

Patience is a virtue of the upmost importance! Wonderful writing.

April 16th, 2021 10:55

09/13/2016
orchidee said:

Good write CLM.

April 16th, 2021 02:03

09/13/2016
Goldfinch60 said:

Your life is there in front of you and love will be there.

Andy

April 16th, 2021 01:33

The Message
Bragee said:

Very fine writing

April 15th, 2021 11:44

11/18/2020
Mad Matt Rambles said:

\"Where the tape and the glue and the lies were used\"
I love this picture...
I feel the longing in this piece. I also feel the hurt. Thanks for putting your feelings into words and being willing to share.

April 15th, 2021 11:01

The Message
L. B. Mek said:

\'Wandering thoughts, shooting stars,
Have always seemed to help mend the scars.\'
reminds me of a film I watched, with a similar theme
your writing style has that fresh feel of having been written in the spur of the moment, reflecting the romantic nuances of whatever inspired your poetic creativity

April 15th, 2021 05:51

The Message
orchidee said:

Good write CLM.

April 15th, 2021 01:44

The Message
Goldfinch60 said:

Your wishes will always come true if you keep writing words like these CLM.

Andy

April 15th, 2021 00:44

05/09/2018
Goldfinch60 said:

Much truth in your words CLM but the bridges of love can always be repaired in ones mind and heart.

Andy

April 14th, 2021 00:36

05/09/2018
Trenz Pruca said:

I enjoyed your poem very much. \"let the past ignite,\" sound advice.

April 13th, 2021 19:53

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