Comments received on poems by rosiedm



sunlight emerges
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day we arise into the sun is a wonderful day.

Andy

May 22nd, 2021 00:42

The meaning of you
L. B. Mek said:

well thought-out and written


May 20th, 2021 04:51

Grasshopper.
yellowrose said:

Very lovely poem ! Beautiful words

May 20th, 2021 04:44

The meaning of you
rosiedm said:

Thank you for reading my thoughts Teddy..
It my way of accepting my situation of just stop a while turn off your thinking of why I feel I\'ve to have the same as other\'s that are successful I ask what does successful mean? Why does it be measured with how big you are able to have your house be. or your bank account is and a new car every 2 years why is that seen as worth.. What has made humans feel that money is success maybe just life is doing less ,instead of needing do be busy every minute of every day that you forget what stillness is and what listening to silence is .. I feel sorry for people in turmoil right now and nobody cares because it\'s not their Life!
Our days should have some silence too. I like how you boil your water without a kettle . Ops are scarey they make you
Less able and more reliant lol
I think if everyone was true to themselves and lived a more minimalistic way our world would not be as it is today 😘x Rosie

May 20th, 2021 03:17

The meaning of you
Teddy.15 said:

I like your wisdom in this we should concentrate on what we do have and not on what we don\'t. I guess us poets need very little to spark our skills as writers, I don\'t even own a kettle I boil my water in a pot. That\'s just me, my kitchen is small. I hope you are fully recovered from your surgery too. That\'s a painful op, and frightening to. Best wishes . I too had a small op last November, it scares the life out of me. Your last stanza is so true, everything can change in seconds. Best wishes and thank you for sharing this reflective piece it\'s so thought provoking and a great read.

May 19th, 2021 22:54

Just for laughs
dusk arising said:

As I age disgracefully and accept my failings then I find it easy to slip into your kind of mirthful acceptance of the ridicule which faces us all in this well written piece. Very entertaining.

May 15th, 2021 06:18

Grasshopper.
dusk arising said:

A quite beautiful picture of a winters evening. I enjoyed reading this very much and have re-read it several times. You are a gifted writer.

This is a must to place among my favourites.

May 15th, 2021 06:12

Grasshopper.
orchidee said:

Good write Rosie.

May 15th, 2021 01:59

Grasshopper.
aDarkerMind said:

a very impressive work of art.

May 14th, 2021 16:57

Just for laughs
L. B. Mek said:

immersive and delicately worded, a fun read
thanks for sharing

May 7th, 2021 05:47

Just for laughs
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woah oh gah so thats how old peoples homes are?? Do they have entertainment like dancing and stuff and what if one has his wife too. But i can totally understand your not being ready to be old and plunged into a world of strangers with no familiar faces. I wouldn\'t agree to it when i grew old. Your poem is amusing and super awesome to read of. Kudos!!!

May 6th, 2021 14:41

Are we human.
rosiedm said:

Thanks. Its not recent I wrote it last year when we all where
Just beginning to understand
What was happening 🤔

May 4th, 2021 10:37

Are we human.
Michael Anthony said:

Enjoyed this Rosie, thank you. The pandemic has been a difficult/crazy/eye-opening experience for us all.

May 1st, 2021 13:32

Are we human.
Goldfinch60 said:

Things are gradually getting better in life as the lockdown eases.
Tomorrow will be there for eternity Rosie.

Andy

May 1st, 2021 00:33

Lorena
Goldfinch60 said:

May that feeling be forever with her.

Andy

April 26th, 2021 00:44

Who cares but I
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words rosie, I too feed the birds in my garden and it is wonderful to see them.

Welcome to MPS>

April 18th, 2021 00:59

Who cares but I
dusk arising said:

Great sentiment. Giving to our wildlife when we humans are doing so much damage. They - and all wildlife - need all the help each of us can offer.

Amazing to have a trusting relationship with a wild bird. Though i know jackdaws can be very friendly (wish their squawk was kinder on the ears though).

April 17th, 2021 18:15