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You can
dusk arising said:
Here here, plse have a peep at my post \'easy\' on here today which really is in the same vein as your message.
I guess it\'s what we lose which makes us appreciate what we have.
August 12th, 2021 13:52
dusk arising said:
Here here, plse have a peep at my post \'easy\' on here today which really is in the same vein as your message.
I guess it\'s what we lose which makes us appreciate what we have.
August 12th, 2021 13:52
Free
L. B. Mek said:
\'Like a locust, destroying all in its way,
we are like a virus making all other life pay!
We attack and capture, we hurt and we repeat,
We kill and we use, we make it fat so we can eat.\'
*whoever, doesn\'t understand
or agree, to the undisputable Veracity
imbued, in your poems impassioned plea
has long - left, their Humanity: behind...
(timely and Very much necessary
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet)
August 5th, 2021 02:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Like a locust, destroying all in its way,
we are like a virus making all other life pay!
We attack and capture, we hurt and we repeat,
We kill and we use, we make it fat so we can eat.\'
*whoever, doesn\'t understand
or agree, to the undisputable Veracity
imbued, in your poems impassioned plea
has long - left, their Humanity: behind...
(timely and Very much necessary
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet)
August 5th, 2021 02:39
Don\'t say anymore
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a friend who has been going through this abuse by her partner and has eventually had the strength to throw him out, she has become so much happier as if released from the chains holding her down. I do hope that you can find that strength so that you can get into a good place in your life.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a friend who has been going through this abuse by her partner and has eventually had the strength to throw him out, she has become so much happier as if released from the chains holding her down. I do hope that you can find that strength so that you can get into a good place in your life.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:12
Don\'t say anymore
dusk arising said:
This is a heartfelt cry for help. I hope you the author can hear that cry yourself.
I am happy in my place
I am happy in my space
Two very important lines there. You are a happy soul until somebody drags you down. Again and again it seems.
Dear poet, if this is your life at the moment, I am sad for you. We were not born into this life to be unhappy. We all have inbuilt joy and should be free to express our joy to the world and one another.
June 29th, 2021 14:44
dusk arising said:
This is a heartfelt cry for help. I hope you the author can hear that cry yourself.
I am happy in my place
I am happy in my space
Two very important lines there. You are a happy soul until somebody drags you down. Again and again it seems.
Dear poet, if this is your life at the moment, I am sad for you. We were not born into this life to be unhappy. We all have inbuilt joy and should be free to express our joy to the world and one another.
June 29th, 2021 14:44
My friends, my soldiers
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful dedication
it takes true wisdom, to realise
and appreciate those subtle, nuanced traits
in our friends;
since, sadly - often, what\'s freely shared
is taken for granted: far, far too often
June 28th, 2021 07:52
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful dedication
it takes true wisdom, to realise
and appreciate those subtle, nuanced traits
in our friends;
since, sadly - often, what\'s freely shared
is taken for granted: far, far too often
June 28th, 2021 07:52
Middle aged
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh - and I wuz starting to get up.... a perspiration....
Never mind - having eliminated half the penultimate and final stanzas I\'ll get off on the rest....
June 28th, 2021 04:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh - and I wuz starting to get up.... a perspiration....
Never mind - having eliminated half the penultimate and final stanzas I\'ll get off on the rest....
June 28th, 2021 04:32
My friends, my soldiers
Thekkinkkattil said:
Good words for the soldier Sandra
Nice poem
June 28th, 2021 00:54
Thekkinkkattil said:
Good words for the soldier Sandra
Nice poem
June 28th, 2021 00:54
Who could ask for more
Saxon Crow said:
Oh yes the ultimate goal for many of us. Kindness is all that matters in the end. Great poem
June 27th, 2021 00:51
Saxon Crow said:
Oh yes the ultimate goal for many of us. Kindness is all that matters in the end. Great poem
June 27th, 2021 00:51
Another night alone
dusk arising said:
The sadness of desiring more than is available.
June 19th, 2021 08:01
dusk arising said:
The sadness of desiring more than is available.
June 19th, 2021 08:01
Another night alone
Bearsphotohub said:
Very thoughtful and moving - thank you for sharing
June 19th, 2021 05:25
Bearsphotohub said:
Very thoughtful and moving - thank you for sharing
June 19th, 2021 05:25
Stronger than you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong words Hanna, your strength will take you into that wonderful life.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong words Hanna, your strength will take you into that wonderful life.
Andy
June 19th, 2021 01:28
I\'m sorry I failed you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words Sandra, we often have secrets we do not share with special peopl people and always regret that..
Andy
June 17th, 2021 15:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words Sandra, we often have secrets we do not share with special peopl people and always regret that..
Andy
June 17th, 2021 15:09
I\'m sorry I failed you
sandra said:
Thank you, I love to hear how my words mean something to each person.
I had a beautiful relationship with my mum but when I look back I could have done more, life ,work, can and does, get in the way. Sadly we don\'t always notice this until it\'s too late. I\'m sure if my mum was asked did I let her down, she\'d smile and with her beautiful blue eyes would look straight at me without hesitation and answer, no, never ❤️
June 17th, 2021 09:59
sandra said:
Thank you, I love to hear how my words mean something to each person.
I had a beautiful relationship with my mum but when I look back I could have done more, life ,work, can and does, get in the way. Sadly we don\'t always notice this until it\'s too late. I\'m sure if my mum was asked did I let her down, she\'d smile and with her beautiful blue eyes would look straight at me without hesitation and answer, no, never ❤️
June 17th, 2021 09:59
Inside out
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read, truly insightful
and I loved those last two lines
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 17th, 2021 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful read, truly insightful
and I loved those last two lines
a great write!
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 17th, 2021 03:22
Inside out
Goldfinch60 said:
If the truth within us could be shared by all the world would be such a better place Sandra.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
If the truth within us could be shared by all the world would be such a better place Sandra.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:12
Inside out
Saxon Crow said:
If only! It would be a far more interesting place to say the least and possibly everyone would realise we are actually living in eden!
June 16th, 2021 03:30
Saxon Crow said:
If only! It would be a far more interesting place to say the least and possibly everyone would realise we are actually living in eden!
June 16th, 2021 03:30
Inside out
dusk arising said:
You really touched me with this piece. I like to think I am an open book but there are secret chapters I hide away and hide away from.
Really well considered artful composition.
Into my favourites for sure
June 16th, 2021 02:39
dusk arising said:
You really touched me with this piece. I like to think I am an open book but there are secret chapters I hide away and hide away from.
Really well considered artful composition.
Into my favourites for sure
June 16th, 2021 02:39
Between the place..
dusk arising said:
What you describe is treasure for the human soul way above any material riches.
June 14th, 2021 06:32
dusk arising said:
What you describe is treasure for the human soul way above any material riches.
June 14th, 2021 06:32
Between the place..
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful first read of my day Sandra - thank you sincerely for this piece of positive space for which to aim.
June 14th, 2021 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful first read of my day Sandra - thank you sincerely for this piece of positive space for which to aim.
June 14th, 2021 02:39
How many tears?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I know where you are coming from Sandra as my wife passed away 17 months ago but I know I will be with her again in the future.
Andy
June 14th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I know where you are coming from Sandra as my wife passed away 17 months ago but I know I will be with her again in the future.
Andy
June 14th, 2021 00:26
How many tears?
Blue Poet said:
Asking the right questions. Beautiful poem. Sorry for your loss.
June 13th, 2021 08:57
Blue Poet said:
Asking the right questions. Beautiful poem. Sorry for your loss.
June 13th, 2021 08:57
Would you?
peto said:
I\'ve been there
So no
I wouldn\'t
Keep writing it out sandra
Enjoyed the structure and rhyme as well as message
June 13th, 2021 03:14
peto said:
I\'ve been there
So no
I wouldn\'t
Keep writing it out sandra
Enjoyed the structure and rhyme as well as message
June 13th, 2021 03:14
Would you?
Jayasree said:
That\'s a touching write, with a good message. Sometimes when we are so caught up in our own life and feelings, we don\'t notice the loneliness of others. A life can be saved with a gentle word or touch and showing some care.
June 13th, 2021 01:22
Jayasree said:
That\'s a touching write, with a good message. Sometimes when we are so caught up in our own life and feelings, we don\'t notice the loneliness of others. A life can be saved with a gentle word or touch and showing some care.
June 13th, 2021 01:22
Would you?
Saxon Crow said:
Everyone feels like this. Ironically, they are not alone!
June 13th, 2021 00:57
Saxon Crow said:
Everyone feels like this. Ironically, they are not alone!
June 13th, 2021 00:57
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