Comments received on poems by flyingfish



The Hearth Kept Their Faces
sorenbarrett said:

A nostalgic poem of those that tended it in the past. Well written with great images painted. Nicely done

July 21st, 2026 16:45

Mend the Fences - Burn the Bridges
sorenbarrett said:

The metaphor works well in this write of broken relationship bridges. Nicely done

July 20th, 2026 20:15

the kinkeeper
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor and you taught me a new word (weft) for that I am grateful. This poem is deeper than I expected in such a short piece. Nicely done.

July 19th, 2026 13:21

Hymn of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write to inspire and ignite the spark of creativity in others. Very nicely done in good rhyme and meter. Well done

July 18th, 2026 12:09

The Stand-Up and The Poet
Demar Desu said:

Is this A.I?

July 17th, 2026 17:23

The Stand-Up and The Poet
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely poem. Comic or poet looking for approval from the crowd. Well written

July 17th, 2026 14:35

The Art of Under Over
sorenbarrett said:

A surreal poem of metaphor open to interpretation it speaks of art but not the normal type of seeing beyond. Well done

July 16th, 2026 14:24

Thoughts on Oughts
Friendship said:

Nicely done

July 15th, 2026 16:13

Thoughts on Oughts
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of decisions or lack there of. Well done

July 15th, 2026 13:43

When the Pattern Hesitates
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write of discovery to those that dare to look beyond the visible and the mundane. Well written

July 14th, 2026 13:21

Oh! Corrector Mirror on the Wall?
sorenbarrett said:

This poem proceeded with laying out those that came to mind Narcissus, Alice and the mirror on the wall from fairy tales. Yet not a mirror but a painting also came to mind in Dorian Gray and I wonder if the mirror is not the same. Well written

July 13th, 2026 14:33

Last Breath
marissa said:

this is a cool way to write!!

July 12th, 2026 18:54

Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:

A most creative format that follows the flow of emotions and actions in the poem. Very nice a fave

July 12th, 2026 13:09

Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
rhmn_7 said:

A very interesting perspective which is truly refreshing dear poet!

July 12th, 2026 07:34

In the Kerfuffle of Shuffling Time
sorenbarrett said:

Here the probability of the draw is changed with deliberate mixture and fiddling a most interesting write of life as a luck of the draw.

July 11th, 2026 14:17

Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m a veggo (which includes fish), but beyond that I would not open any can which did not have a detailed label attached securely. (and that goes for alcohol too, lol) Above all this, Your piece has the feel of a song....and I would have caught that even without the obvious hints.

July 10th, 2026 18:42

Lava Lamp
Doggerel Dave said:

Memories full of nostalgia of the sixties and seventies. Shows my fascination hasn\'t diminished.

July 10th, 2026 18:37

Masterpiece
Doggerel Dave said:

A portrait of a painting I enjoyed for it\'s insights very much.

July 10th, 2026 18:30

Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
sorenbarrett said:

Tuna is as far as I go in canned fish. I\'ll take the crackers but about fish I am picky must be fresh. A fun read that has a real bounce to it. Well written

July 10th, 2026 13:17

Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
Syd said:

I\'m a member of a Facebook group called The Tinned Fish Appreciation Society. I\'m sure they\'d love this.

Nice write - Syd 🍄

July 10th, 2026 12:24

Lava Lamp
Demar Desu said:

Maybe I should get one

July 9th, 2026 19:59

Lava Lamp
sorenbarrett said:

Longing in lava lamp shapes in this poem well written

July 9th, 2026 13:29

Masterpiece
Friendship said:

Lovely written

July 8th, 2026 13:29

Masterpiece
sorenbarrett said:

Creative in format and beautiful whichever path is taken that of technique and mastery or of simple beauty one and the same. A fave

July 8th, 2026 13:14

In The Aquarium
Syd said:

Nice write, I really enjoyed this poem written from the perspective of the fish. I\'m a pisces too.

- Syd 🍄



July 7th, 2026 13:27

In The Aquarium
sorenbarrett said:

A fish personified may well be in metaphor any of us with no privacy left in this world. Nicely written

July 7th, 2026 13:15

Just a Slip of Tongue
sorenbarrett said:

An amusing poem taking the real and making it humorous. Lovely

July 31st, 2025 21:18

Just a Slip of Tongue
Poetic Licence said:

Interesting and enjoyable read, nicely done

July 31st, 2025 20:30

Minuet in the Dark
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 31st, 2025 09:15

Minuet in the Dark
Poetic Licence said:

A very romantic and wonderfully written rememberance of love, enjoyed the read

July 31st, 2025 05:23

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