Comments received on poems by flyingfish
Come In, Spinner
sorenbarrett said:
A great tale told in poetic form with good rhyme. Probability will tell you that the chance of getting two of the same on a throw remains the same despite how many occur in a row but the one betting feels that the chances increase with each double throw. Well done
August 6th, 2026 02:10
sorenbarrett said:
A great tale told in poetic form with good rhyme. Probability will tell you that the chance of getting two of the same on a throw remains the same despite how many occur in a row but the one betting feels that the chances increase with each double throw. Well done
August 6th, 2026 02:10
Silver Illusionist- Behind the Glass
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor from the physical science to the existential search through the image of a mirror. Nicely developed layer following layer wiped and peeled away from the fog to the glass on silver the search for true self in a mirror as opposed to just a shadow. Well done
August 5th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor from the physical science to the existential search through the image of a mirror. Nicely developed layer following layer wiped and peeled away from the fog to the glass on silver the search for true self in a mirror as opposed to just a shadow. Well done
August 5th, 2026 03:54
Humdrum
sorenbarrett said:
This well could be a song with meter that has a beat. The wording is creative and there is fun in the rhyme. Well done John
August 3rd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This well could be a song with meter that has a beat. The wording is creative and there is fun in the rhyme. Well done John
August 3rd, 2026 03:55
The Pensive Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A most famous cover by Sammy Davis Jr. a good write that carries its message well. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most famous cover by Sammy Davis Jr. a good write that carries its message well. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2026 04:18
Please Pass the Participles
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read metaphoric and with great personification it speaks its message well
August 1st, 2026 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read metaphoric and with great personification it speaks its message well
August 1st, 2026 03:15
Please Pass the Participles
2781 said:
I don\'t like having favourites, especially when I know I know nothing about grammar, but this hit a note, for me.
Well done it seems?
August 1st, 2026 02:21
2781 said:
I don\'t like having favourites, especially when I know I know nothing about grammar, but this hit a note, for me.
Well done it seems?
August 1st, 2026 02:21
The Game of Borrowed Names
Doggerel Dave said:
Rhyming riddling I managed to stay focussed on to the end.
July 31st, 2026 19:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Rhyming riddling I managed to stay focussed on to the end.
July 31st, 2026 19:18
The Game of Borrowed Names
sorenbarrett said:
Viruses, ransomware, phishing, malware all lie inside this Trojan horse. Very nicely crafted with great metaphor and so well imaged in a harmless appearing story that could be mythical or a children\'s story it mocks the very issue it talking about. Clever and well crafted it got into my brain. A fave
July 31st, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Viruses, ransomware, phishing, malware all lie inside this Trojan horse. Very nicely crafted with great metaphor and so well imaged in a harmless appearing story that could be mythical or a children\'s story it mocks the very issue it talking about. Clever and well crafted it got into my brain. A fave
July 31st, 2026 04:29
The Little Twin Eclipses
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive through the mirrors to the soul. Nicely rhymed and metered it flows well. Good write
July 30th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive through the mirrors to the soul. Nicely rhymed and metered it flows well. Good write
July 30th, 2026 03:40
Borrowed Upright
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last two lines in this work. Well done
July 28th, 2026 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last two lines in this work. Well done
July 28th, 2026 16:14
The Elbow Hypothesis
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that accompanied with the picture makes for a beautiful scene
July 23rd, 2026 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that accompanied with the picture makes for a beautiful scene
July 23rd, 2026 12:03
In the Other Pocket
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one there seems hidden meaning in this write with an underlying meaning in some of the lines such as the last where the hand did not forget the stone. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one there seems hidden meaning in this write with an underlying meaning in some of the lines such as the last where the hand did not forget the stone. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 11:32
The Hearth Kept Their Faces
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic poem of those that tended it in the past. Well written with great images painted. Nicely done
July 21st, 2026 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic poem of those that tended it in the past. Well written with great images painted. Nicely done
July 21st, 2026 16:45
Mend the Fences - Burn the Bridges
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well in this write of broken relationship bridges. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 20:15
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well in this write of broken relationship bridges. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 20:15
the kinkeeper
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and you taught me a new word (weft) for that I am grateful. This poem is deeper than I expected in such a short piece. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and you taught me a new word (weft) for that I am grateful. This poem is deeper than I expected in such a short piece. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2026 13:21
Hymn of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write to inspire and ignite the spark of creativity in others. Very nicely done in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 18th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write to inspire and ignite the spark of creativity in others. Very nicely done in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 18th, 2026 12:09
The Stand-Up and The Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem. Comic or poet looking for approval from the crowd. Well written
July 17th, 2026 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem. Comic or poet looking for approval from the crowd. Well written
July 17th, 2026 14:35
The Art of Under Over
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor open to interpretation it speaks of art but not the normal type of seeing beyond. Well done
July 16th, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor open to interpretation it speaks of art but not the normal type of seeing beyond. Well done
July 16th, 2026 14:24
Thoughts on Oughts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of decisions or lack there of. Well done
July 15th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of decisions or lack there of. Well done
July 15th, 2026 13:43
When the Pattern Hesitates
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of discovery to those that dare to look beyond the visible and the mundane. Well written
July 14th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of discovery to those that dare to look beyond the visible and the mundane. Well written
July 14th, 2026 13:21
Oh! Corrector Mirror on the Wall?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem proceeded with laying out those that came to mind Narcissus, Alice and the mirror on the wall from fairy tales. Yet not a mirror but a painting also came to mind in Dorian Gray and I wonder if the mirror is not the same. Well written
July 13th, 2026 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem proceeded with laying out those that came to mind Narcissus, Alice and the mirror on the wall from fairy tales. Yet not a mirror but a painting also came to mind in Dorian Gray and I wonder if the mirror is not the same. Well written
July 13th, 2026 14:33
Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative format that follows the flow of emotions and actions in the poem. Very nice a fave
July 12th, 2026 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative format that follows the flow of emotions and actions in the poem. Very nice a fave
July 12th, 2026 13:09
Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
rhmn_7 said:
A very interesting perspective which is truly refreshing dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 07:34
rhmn_7 said:
A very interesting perspective which is truly refreshing dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 07:34
In the Kerfuffle of Shuffling Time
sorenbarrett said:
Here the probability of the draw is changed with deliberate mixture and fiddling a most interesting write of life as a luck of the draw.
July 11th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Here the probability of the draw is changed with deliberate mixture and fiddling a most interesting write of life as a luck of the draw.
July 11th, 2026 14:17
Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a veggo (which includes fish), but beyond that I would not open any can which did not have a detailed label attached securely. (and that goes for alcohol too, lol) Above all this, Your piece has the feel of a song....and I would have caught that even without the obvious hints.
July 10th, 2026 18:42
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a veggo (which includes fish), but beyond that I would not open any can which did not have a detailed label attached securely. (and that goes for alcohol too, lol) Above all this, Your piece has the feel of a song....and I would have caught that even without the obvious hints.
July 10th, 2026 18:42
Lava Lamp
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories full of nostalgia of the sixties and seventies. Shows my fascination hasn\'t diminished.
July 10th, 2026 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories full of nostalgia of the sixties and seventies. Shows my fascination hasn\'t diminished.
July 10th, 2026 18:37
Masterpiece
Doggerel Dave said:
A portrait of a painting I enjoyed for it\'s insights very much.
July 10th, 2026 18:30
Doggerel Dave said:
A portrait of a painting I enjoyed for it\'s insights very much.
July 10th, 2026 18:30
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