Comments received on poems by flyingfish
Borrowed Upright
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last two lines in this work. Well done
July 28th, 2026 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last two lines in this work. Well done
July 28th, 2026 16:14
The Elbow Hypothesis
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that accompanied with the picture makes for a beautiful scene
July 23rd, 2026 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write that accompanied with the picture makes for a beautiful scene
July 23rd, 2026 12:03
In the Other Pocket
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one there seems hidden meaning in this write with an underlying meaning in some of the lines such as the last where the hand did not forget the stone. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 11:32
sorenbarrett said:
I like this one there seems hidden meaning in this write with an underlying meaning in some of the lines such as the last where the hand did not forget the stone. Well done
July 22nd, 2026 11:32
The Hearth Kept Their Faces
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic poem of those that tended it in the past. Well written with great images painted. Nicely done
July 21st, 2026 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic poem of those that tended it in the past. Well written with great images painted. Nicely done
July 21st, 2026 16:45
Mend the Fences - Burn the Bridges
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well in this write of broken relationship bridges. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 20:15
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well in this write of broken relationship bridges. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 20:15
the kinkeeper
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and you taught me a new word (weft) for that I am grateful. This poem is deeper than I expected in such a short piece. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor and you taught me a new word (weft) for that I am grateful. This poem is deeper than I expected in such a short piece. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2026 13:21
Hymn of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write to inspire and ignite the spark of creativity in others. Very nicely done in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 18th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write to inspire and ignite the spark of creativity in others. Very nicely done in good rhyme and meter. Well done
July 18th, 2026 12:09
The Stand-Up and The Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem. Comic or poet looking for approval from the crowd. Well written
July 17th, 2026 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem. Comic or poet looking for approval from the crowd. Well written
July 17th, 2026 14:35
The Art of Under Over
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor open to interpretation it speaks of art but not the normal type of seeing beyond. Well done
July 16th, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor open to interpretation it speaks of art but not the normal type of seeing beyond. Well done
July 16th, 2026 14:24
Thoughts on Oughts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of decisions or lack there of. Well done
July 15th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of decisions or lack there of. Well done
July 15th, 2026 13:43
When the Pattern Hesitates
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of discovery to those that dare to look beyond the visible and the mundane. Well written
July 14th, 2026 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of discovery to those that dare to look beyond the visible and the mundane. Well written
July 14th, 2026 13:21
Oh! Corrector Mirror on the Wall?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem proceeded with laying out those that came to mind Narcissus, Alice and the mirror on the wall from fairy tales. Yet not a mirror but a painting also came to mind in Dorian Gray and I wonder if the mirror is not the same. Well written
July 13th, 2026 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem proceeded with laying out those that came to mind Narcissus, Alice and the mirror on the wall from fairy tales. Yet not a mirror but a painting also came to mind in Dorian Gray and I wonder if the mirror is not the same. Well written
July 13th, 2026 14:33
Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative format that follows the flow of emotions and actions in the poem. Very nice a fave
July 12th, 2026 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative format that follows the flow of emotions and actions in the poem. Very nice a fave
July 12th, 2026 13:09
Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
rhmn_7 said:
A very interesting perspective which is truly refreshing dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 07:34
rhmn_7 said:
A very interesting perspective which is truly refreshing dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 07:34
In the Kerfuffle of Shuffling Time
sorenbarrett said:
Here the probability of the draw is changed with deliberate mixture and fiddling a most interesting write of life as a luck of the draw.
July 11th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Here the probability of the draw is changed with deliberate mixture and fiddling a most interesting write of life as a luck of the draw.
July 11th, 2026 14:17
Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a veggo (which includes fish), but beyond that I would not open any can which did not have a detailed label attached securely. (and that goes for alcohol too, lol) Above all this, Your piece has the feel of a song....and I would have caught that even without the obvious hints.
July 10th, 2026 18:42
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a veggo (which includes fish), but beyond that I would not open any can which did not have a detailed label attached securely. (and that goes for alcohol too, lol) Above all this, Your piece has the feel of a song....and I would have caught that even without the obvious hints.
July 10th, 2026 18:42
Lava Lamp
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories full of nostalgia of the sixties and seventies. Shows my fascination hasn\'t diminished.
July 10th, 2026 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories full of nostalgia of the sixties and seventies. Shows my fascination hasn\'t diminished.
July 10th, 2026 18:37
Masterpiece
Doggerel Dave said:
A portrait of a painting I enjoyed for it\'s insights very much.
July 10th, 2026 18:30
Doggerel Dave said:
A portrait of a painting I enjoyed for it\'s insights very much.
July 10th, 2026 18:30
Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
sorenbarrett said:
Tuna is as far as I go in canned fish. I\'ll take the crackers but about fish I am picky must be fresh. A fun read that has a real bounce to it. Well written
July 10th, 2026 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
Tuna is as far as I go in canned fish. I\'ll take the crackers but about fish I am picky must be fresh. A fun read that has a real bounce to it. Well written
July 10th, 2026 13:17
Tinned Fish is Having a Moment
Syd said:
I\'m a member of a Facebook group called The Tinned Fish Appreciation Society. I\'m sure they\'d love this.
Nice write - Syd 🍄
July 10th, 2026 12:24
Syd said:
I\'m a member of a Facebook group called The Tinned Fish Appreciation Society. I\'m sure they\'d love this.
Nice write - Syd 🍄
July 10th, 2026 12:24
Lava Lamp
sorenbarrett said:
Longing in lava lamp shapes in this poem well written
July 9th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Longing in lava lamp shapes in this poem well written
July 9th, 2026 13:29
Masterpiece
sorenbarrett said:
Creative in format and beautiful whichever path is taken that of technique and mastery or of simple beauty one and the same. A fave
July 8th, 2026 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Creative in format and beautiful whichever path is taken that of technique and mastery or of simple beauty one and the same. A fave
July 8th, 2026 13:14
In The Aquarium
Syd said:
Nice write, I really enjoyed this poem written from the perspective of the fish. I\'m a pisces too.
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:27
Syd said:
Nice write, I really enjoyed this poem written from the perspective of the fish. I\'m a pisces too.
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:27
In The Aquarium
sorenbarrett said:
A fish personified may well be in metaphor any of us with no privacy left in this world. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fish personified may well be in metaphor any of us with no privacy left in this world. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 13:15
Just a Slip of Tongue
sorenbarrett said:
An amusing poem taking the real and making it humorous. Lovely
July 31st, 2025 21:18
sorenbarrett said:
An amusing poem taking the real and making it humorous. Lovely
July 31st, 2025 21:18
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