Comments received on poems by flyingfish



Two Herds, Two Fates
Doggerel Dave said:

I’ve tried hard not to comment on your piece here. This represents failure.

You live in NSW Australia as do I. We are subject to the same political propaganda from both State and Federal Governments. Your proposition here to me represents the latest iteration of an attempt to hide these authority’s incompetence and need to open up the economy for the benefit of profits.

We have been through ‘if it gets worse we may have to’ (reactive rather than proactive); bestows partial limited lockdowns only after the proverbial horse has bolted; ‘vaccine resistance’ (when demonstrably there weren’t enough vaccine available); attempt to reduce emphasis on number of infections and highlight number of vaccinations when now, belatedly, there is more supply.

And now, to date ( there may be more cons to come) your proposition is attempting to gain traction. There are a couple of other States, who for their sake, I hope will never comply.


August 24th, 2021 19:59

The Within
L. B. Mek said:

\'No matter, No mind\'
that\'s where all-that philosophical discourse
amounted to, in the middle ages..
scarred generations - away
from studying the metaphysical questions of life,
and insured science got stuck
in that endless loop of reverse engineering
all we glean from nature, for that satisfyingly
result yielding fast-tracked \'progression\'..
personally I think, we as people
are still children, on the ladder of evolution
for everything we do, is done to distract ourselves
from that painstakingly dreary, quintessential prerequisite
of first understanding our most basic choices...!
if you can\'t understand something mundane about yourself
like why a random individual gets under your skin
for no apparent reason, enough for you to waste your life
trying to effect - their life;
then what chance do we have of trying to understand
the truly complex mysteries of our lives..
its like trying to comprehend, without first evolving
to develop, the required capacity to listen and observe...
(wonderful, a rare treat for those
who still like our philosophical ponderings, sipped
refreshingly bold) lol
thanks for sharing

August 23rd, 2021 05:37

The Within
Doggerel Dave said:

Plenty of intelligence and thought been thrown at this question - to me it is the imponderable along with life after death.......

August 23rd, 2021 02:27

The Within
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes life is so full of mystery and you pen well the questions that spring to mind on consciousness - - \"all sharing with all\" in this thing called withiness is the nearest I feel that we can get. Thanks for the thoughtful posting my friend.

August 23rd, 2021 01:34

The Within
Lorna said:

Well penned message that for me reinforces the fact that we are really very much alone.

August 23rd, 2021 00:39

To Fell Fear Quell Anxiety
Lorna said:

Great explanations here and wise advice.... recently I\'ve stopped reading so much news (it\'s the loaded gun for me) and feel so much better. It\'s especially hard to know of so much awfulness and not be able to do anything about it.

August 22nd, 2021 04:27

Water Dear Water
L. B. Mek said:

\'On a calm day you can hear
all the seashell choir stranded on the beach\'
a wonderful modern ode
to all-things, H2O: quintessential!
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 20th, 2021 04:58

Sandbag of Dreams
L. B. Mek said:

firstly I love that picture! reminded me
it was time I visited Dickens\' bequeathed magic again;
and this, is a great line:
\'Set a goal to remember
that you’re dreaming
to become lucid.\'
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 19th, 2021 04:22

Aha Eureka!
L. B. Mek said:

a uniquely intriguing write
not quite there with you
in that \'Aha Eureka\', metaphorical stratosphere
but I am looking-on, interested..
thanks for sharing

August 17th, 2021 04:46

Old Farm Hat
Lorna said:

My husband was a horseman and died two years ago and I sleep with his old hat. Loved this one.

August 16th, 2021 05:06

Old Farm Hat
L. B. Mek said:

I too love the positive mindset behind Kintsugi
and I like your twist, a fun read
thanks for sharing

August 16th, 2021 04:24

Old Farm Hat
Doggerel Dave said:

It does indeed fit that very special art/philosophy. The antithesis of our throwaway society.
Simple satisfying read for me. Thanks.
.

August 16th, 2021 02:13

Childlike
orchidee said:

Good write FF.

August 15th, 2021 01:54

Childlike
flyingfish said:

Thanks very much for your kind response. Cheers and best wishes

August 15th, 2021 01:19

Childlike
Arvy said:

One\'s can long to their childhood when there was no care for the world just playing, sleeping,and eating until the adulthood hits you like a train. Beautiful poem filled with emotions!

August 15th, 2021 01:15

Pitter Patter
SureshG said:

Those droplets hold our attention and then we remember them forever, just like your words.

August 13th, 2021 11:01

Pitter Patter
Lorna said:

An introvert\'s rain.........

August 13th, 2021 02:46

Pitter Patter
Doggerel Dave said:

Bought back a memory or two.
Would watch that for hours as a kid; loved the random patterning , guesses when the drops would start rolling and which path it would take...little things...
Captured for me nicely.

August 13th, 2021 01:50

Pitter Patter
Thekkinkkattil said:

Good read .Thanks for sharing

August 13th, 2021 00:51

In the Herd
flyingfish said:

Yeah I read that too. Masks and social distancing for ever. Unfortunately. Spacecraft earth.

August 11th, 2021 02:31

Dank Grey Day
L. B. Mek said:

sounds like a typical \'summer\'s\', august morning
in our dear beloved blighty, lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 10th, 2021 05:17

Nature Mirror-Free
Jerry Reynolds said:

the new moon
sips from lake wisdom

August 9th, 2021 16:09

Nature Mirror-Free
L. B. Mek said:

the more succinct our poetry
the more crucial our choice wording
where we unveil, gems
like \'milieu\': utilised, with transcendent beauty
(a wonderful haiku
centred in its Natural habitat
executed, with practised ease)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 9th, 2021 05:26

Nature Mirror-Free
Laura🌻 said:

Flyingfish,

So much truth in your wonderfully penned haiku.

Laura🌻

August 9th, 2021 01:03

5 Senryu COVID Send Off
Jerry Reynolds said:

rider alert to recognize
the unexpected


August 7th, 2021 11:31

5 Senryu COVID Send Off
Doggerel Dave said:

Understand your position perfectly as I am subjected to precisely the same debate as you. Fills media segment after media segment - drives me nuts.
But I cannot leave it alone when the Pollies, the decision makers make crap decisions - especially in NSW.
Great little senyrus, BTW.


August 7th, 2021 04:16

5 Senryu COVID Send Off
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you I to walk away from most talks on this! Well written my friend

August 7th, 2021 01:42

5 Senryu COVID Send Off
Saxon Crow said:

There\'s a simple remedy to this virus. Unplug the telly, burn all newspapers, go for a walk in nature and just breathe

August 7th, 2021 00:17

To Mars or Bust
Trenz Pruca said:

Haha. A fun read. Thank you.

August 6th, 2021 16:31

To Mars or Bust
SureshG said:

Mars is not far enough, but for now your comforting words will do.

August 6th, 2021 12:23

Page 2 of 6«123456»


« Return to the profile of flyingfish