Comments received on poems by flyingfish
Deep Dive Jive
L. B. Mek said:
very creative, a ride along
with crawling shell\'s
a drainage experience, of life
worded: vividly poetic..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
very creative, a ride along
with crawling shell\'s
a drainage experience, of life
worded: vividly poetic..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:42
Just Shaking it Off
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F.
Make the bed and do the laundry, at least then, you have done two things successfully.
July 12th, 2021 13:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F.
Make the bed and do the laundry, at least then, you have done two things successfully.
July 12th, 2021 13:11
Stranger at Door
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F
I offer, as a talking point, the thesis that UFO’s are not Aliens but abandoned space probes that have been flying through the galaxy for millions of years. When they zip into the heliopause of a solar system they wake up and do what they are programed to do.
I have written two short stories exploring this thesis.
Brink of Perdition and Cat and Mouse
If you would care to read them go to…
http://www.artandadvertising.com/web-graphics
July 11th, 2021 13:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F
I offer, as a talking point, the thesis that UFO’s are not Aliens but abandoned space probes that have been flying through the galaxy for millions of years. When they zip into the heliopause of a solar system they wake up and do what they are programed to do.
I have written two short stories exploring this thesis.
Brink of Perdition and Cat and Mouse
If you would care to read them go to…
http://www.artandadvertising.com/web-graphics
July 11th, 2021 13:34
Stranger at Door
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastically fun, I\'m not sure what I do. Probably offer them a cuppa of my favourite brew and even give a biscuit or two.
Loved the flow
July 11th, 2021 07:05
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastically fun, I\'m not sure what I do. Probably offer them a cuppa of my favourite brew and even give a biscuit or two.
Loved the flow
July 11th, 2021 07:05
Stranger at Door
Doggerel Dave said:
Your fun poem does nothing to convince me that the BBC is not going down the gurgler if that\'s the best they can come up with as \'news\', John.
July 11th, 2021 01:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Your fun poem does nothing to convince me that the BBC is not going down the gurgler if that\'s the best they can come up with as \'news\', John.
July 11th, 2021 01:53
Stranger at Door
Goldfinch60 said:
They are out there just laughing at the way we treat our world.
Andy
July 11th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
They are out there just laughing at the way we treat our world.
Andy
July 11th, 2021 00:52
Free as a Bird
myself and me said:
Now we are free as a bird without wings. Great writing.
July 10th, 2021 21:00
myself and me said:
Now we are free as a bird without wings. Great writing.
July 10th, 2021 21:00
Free as a Bird
SureshG said:
Yea! The bug we created, surely taught us a lesson, that we never seem to learn, so left to pen it poetically, such as you have.
July 10th, 2021 12:17
SureshG said:
Yea! The bug we created, surely taught us a lesson, that we never seem to learn, so left to pen it poetically, such as you have.
July 10th, 2021 12:17
Shadows are Rather Stiff
SureshG said:
By light is revealed ones shadow. A haunting piece indeed.
July 9th, 2021 12:51
SureshG said:
By light is revealed ones shadow. A haunting piece indeed.
July 9th, 2021 12:51
Skipping
beano said:
Fun, educational and a perfect rhythms throughout. A pleasure to read!
July 9th, 2021 10:56
beano said:
Fun, educational and a perfect rhythms throughout. A pleasure to read!
July 9th, 2021 10:56
Shadows are Rather Stiff
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shadows can show us the real person as they cannot lie.
Andy
July 9th, 2021 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shadows can show us the real person as they cannot lie.
Andy
July 9th, 2021 01:13
Babel Bagels
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for that as I go through the exit to wherever, John. Not before: I don\'t like to suffer.....
Enjoyed - appealed to the cynic in me.
July 8th, 2021 00:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for that as I go through the exit to wherever, John. Not before: I don\'t like to suffer.....
Enjoyed - appealed to the cynic in me.
July 8th, 2021 00:31
On the outta
Goldfinch60 said:
To my mind it is such a shame that there are so many houses only occupied occasionally when there are so many homeless people. Good words John.
Andy
July 7th, 2021 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
To my mind it is such a shame that there are so many houses only occupied occasionally when there are so many homeless people. Good words John.
Andy
July 7th, 2021 01:20
On the outta
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes there are a few places up and down that stretch of coast a bit like that. Airbnb has a lot to answer for. Though I must confess I\'ve utilised....
To you my only redeeming feature is that I\'m well past the party scene...
A clear picture anyone could relate to, but especially me...
July 7th, 2021 00:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes there are a few places up and down that stretch of coast a bit like that. Airbnb has a lot to answer for. Though I must confess I\'ve utilised....
To you my only redeeming feature is that I\'m well past the party scene...
A clear picture anyone could relate to, but especially me...
July 7th, 2021 00:18
Just look at the time
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - it’s necessary to impose some artificial system of measurement in order function in this current existence, but to probe time in the abstract does my head in (Aussi?). It is there with infinite space….sorry, I must close down and refocus..
Good one ff.
July 6th, 2021 05:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - it’s necessary to impose some artificial system of measurement in order function in this current existence, but to probe time in the abstract does my head in (Aussi?). It is there with infinite space….sorry, I must close down and refocus..
Good one ff.
July 6th, 2021 05:38
Just look at the time
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is a very strange thing, it goes so slowly when you unhappy but goes so fast when you are happy.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is a very strange thing, it goes so slowly when you unhappy but goes so fast when you are happy.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 01:35
Seeing Both Sides
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories from childhood,John? (can\'t believe you are still at it). Bought back my memories, anyway - thanks.
July 5th, 2021 21:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories from childhood,John? (can\'t believe you are still at it). Bought back my memories, anyway - thanks.
July 5th, 2021 21:47
Serendipity Soup
Neville said:
very much liked by me mate ..
made me feel so hungry tho\' .. I didn\'t realise until it was almost empty, I just ate the contents of me bait box ...
please note .. I was only joking .. except apart from the bit where I said .. very much liked by me .. that bit was entirely true although somewhat downplayed ... :)
July 3rd, 2021 16:52
Neville said:
very much liked by me mate ..
made me feel so hungry tho\' .. I didn\'t realise until it was almost empty, I just ate the contents of me bait box ...
please note .. I was only joking .. except apart from the bit where I said .. very much liked by me .. that bit was entirely true although somewhat downplayed ... :)
July 3rd, 2021 16:52
Forget me knots
L. B. Mek said:
of that accrued necklace of regret
stifling our capacity, to appreciate
that gifted freedom of breathe
you so insightfully pen, dear Poet;
while your accompanying image, insures
like the flow of tide, this chocking feeling
will someday - eventually: dissolve
into our forgotten memories of sand...
a meaningfully poignant poem, thank you for sharing
July 2nd, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
of that accrued necklace of regret
stifling our capacity, to appreciate
that gifted freedom of breathe
you so insightfully pen, dear Poet;
while your accompanying image, insures
like the flow of tide, this chocking feeling
will someday - eventually: dissolve
into our forgotten memories of sand...
a meaningfully poignant poem, thank you for sharing
July 2nd, 2021 04:40
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