Comments received on poems by flyingfish
Dreams All at Sea
Saxon Crow said:
Enjoyable read FF. What happens if you catch a whale of a dream?!
July 26th, 2021 00:23
Saxon Crow said:
Enjoyable read FF. What happens if you catch a whale of a dream?!
July 26th, 2021 00:23
Doors Perceived
Doggerel Dave said:
So John - feng shui has always been a mystery to me, but I confess one I have not pursued. Thanks for the intro.
July 24th, 2021 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
So John - feng shui has always been a mystery to me, but I confess one I have not pursued. Thanks for the intro.
July 24th, 2021 01:26
Sun Up Late
Jerry Reynolds said:
Principled write, F.F.
My work ethic sucks that bad.
Sometimes.
July 23rd, 2021 08:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Principled write, F.F.
My work ethic sucks that bad.
Sometimes.
July 23rd, 2021 08:38
Gummy Snakes
SureshG said:
These profound words so poetically describe the creative process, of expert poets like yourself.
July 22nd, 2021 12:34
SureshG said:
These profound words so poetically describe the creative process, of expert poets like yourself.
July 22nd, 2021 12:34
Pondering Sideways Glance
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - something I think I was aware of more or less subconsciously - thanks for defining it for me.. Not sure walking the bush in the dark is something I would engage in, but each to their own...
Peripheral vision thing I shall remember, though.
July 21st, 2021 02:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - something I think I was aware of more or less subconsciously - thanks for defining it for me.. Not sure walking the bush in the dark is something I would engage in, but each to their own...
Peripheral vision thing I shall remember, though.
July 21st, 2021 02:03
The Eye\'s Pupil
SureshG said:
To be able to see one’s reflection in someone’s eye, is not to see an image but to know how they really see you.
A short but a very powerful poem.
July 20th, 2021 13:01
SureshG said:
To be able to see one’s reflection in someone’s eye, is not to see an image but to know how they really see you.
A short but a very powerful poem.
July 20th, 2021 13:01
The Eye\'s Pupil
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
and an important message:
\"To be loved
one must first learn
to love oneself\"..
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 20th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
and an important message:
\"To be loved
one must first learn
to love oneself\"..
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 20th, 2021 04:16
Oh to be Tranquil
SureshG said:
ataraxia - show me the way, send me the subscription, and if not, at least, now I have these words of yours
July 19th, 2021 13:11
SureshG said:
ataraxia - show me the way, send me the subscription, and if not, at least, now I have these words of yours
July 19th, 2021 13:11
Oh to be Tranquil
L. B. Mek said:
\'Neither denying nor affirming anything in
shadows that cross my path, beyond my control.
I’ve got my stuff together, with my life
back in balance, stable, \'
(what more is there, to wish for!
I have said it before, in a reply to Kurt before;
if Stoic\'s and those with Epicurean mindset\'s
had merged and fine tuned
their ideologies: than opposed and belittled
each others merit of worth
we could have long - retired
that social philosophy of day to day, survival
and made some headway
into unfurling those real, quintessential mysteries
at our nucleus of all-things: metaphysical
to this experiment of symbiotic existence
we\'ve titled: life...)
a great read, of a socio philosophical dipped
poetic treat, thank you dear poet
July 19th, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'Neither denying nor affirming anything in
shadows that cross my path, beyond my control.
I’ve got my stuff together, with my life
back in balance, stable, \'
(what more is there, to wish for!
I have said it before, in a reply to Kurt before;
if Stoic\'s and those with Epicurean mindset\'s
had merged and fine tuned
their ideologies: than opposed and belittled
each others merit of worth
we could have long - retired
that social philosophy of day to day, survival
and made some headway
into unfurling those real, quintessential mysteries
at our nucleus of all-things: metaphysical
to this experiment of symbiotic existence
we\'ve titled: life...)
a great read, of a socio philosophical dipped
poetic treat, thank you dear poet
July 19th, 2021 06:37
Awaken not Stirred
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine images, F.F.
The sea is an endless source of material for poets.
July 18th, 2021 07:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine images, F.F.
The sea is an endless source of material for poets.
July 18th, 2021 07:53
Waste of Space
Goldfinch60 said:
Space is there for all of us, as many on this site know I will be waiting for you all at the edge of the Universe so that we can all move into a new life beyond the Universe.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Space is there for all of us, as many on this site know I will be waiting for you all at the edge of the Universe so that we can all move into a new life beyond the Universe.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 00:45
Nine Sighs
L. B. Mek said:
Venice truly has a lot
of sigh-seeing landmarks to visit
probably why it ends-up
becoming a cathartic experience.. lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
(sorry for the lame pun btw)
July 16th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
Venice truly has a lot
of sigh-seeing landmarks to visit
probably why it ends-up
becoming a cathartic experience.. lol
a fun read, thanks for sharing
(sorry for the lame pun btw)
July 16th, 2021 05:19
Wood-fired Kiln
SureshG said:
Everyone admires the potters vision, but there’s another at play, hidden from the view, that your title has so poetically acclaimed. I have spent many hours staring at the wood burning in a fireplace and am always awed by the multitudes of images I envision.
July 15th, 2021 12:20
SureshG said:
Everyone admires the potters vision, but there’s another at play, hidden from the view, that your title has so poetically acclaimed. I have spent many hours staring at the wood burning in a fireplace and am always awed by the multitudes of images I envision.
July 15th, 2021 12:20
Wood-fired Kiln
L. B. Mek said:
informative and worded poetically enticing
thanks for sharing
July 15th, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
informative and worded poetically enticing
thanks for sharing
July 15th, 2021 05:02
Wood-fired Kiln
Doggerel Dave said:
Pottery and ceramics, among the highest of the arts. You capture the process and the uncertainties beyond the initial concept. Your piece an education in itself. Kudos.
July 15th, 2021 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Pottery and ceramics, among the highest of the arts. You capture the process and the uncertainties beyond the initial concept. Your piece an education in itself. Kudos.
July 15th, 2021 01:54
Demeaning Meaning
Doggerel Dave said:
Great read - I really enjoyed the ride. For me, though, I may well get something out of the piece unintended by the author, but where\'s the harm in also asking the originator for additional meanings?
Language is pretty inadequate when dealing with multifaceted topics - even poetry, especially poetry.
July 14th, 2021 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Great read - I really enjoyed the ride. For me, though, I may well get something out of the piece unintended by the author, but where\'s the harm in also asking the originator for additional meanings?
Language is pretty inadequate when dealing with multifaceted topics - even poetry, especially poetry.
July 14th, 2021 00:53
Demeaning Meaning
dusk arising said:
I do see quite a few posts on MPS where the author wiggles and waggles so much around a subject that they defeat it with educated twaddle. Result... shrug of shoulders and pass on by. What others read into such pieces is for them alone.
I totally agree with your amusing post today.
July 14th, 2021 00:16
dusk arising said:
I do see quite a few posts on MPS where the author wiggles and waggles so much around a subject that they defeat it with educated twaddle. Result... shrug of shoulders and pass on by. What others read into such pieces is for them alone.
I totally agree with your amusing post today.
July 14th, 2021 00:16
Deep Dive Jive
L. B. Mek said:
very creative, a ride along
with crawling shell\'s
a drainage experience, of life
worded: vividly poetic..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
very creative, a ride along
with crawling shell\'s
a drainage experience, of life
worded: vividly poetic..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 13th, 2021 05:42
Just Shaking it Off
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F.
Make the bed and do the laundry, at least then, you have done two things successfully.
July 12th, 2021 13:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F.
Make the bed and do the laundry, at least then, you have done two things successfully.
July 12th, 2021 13:11
Stranger at Door
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F
I offer, as a talking point, the thesis that UFO’s are not Aliens but abandoned space probes that have been flying through the galaxy for millions of years. When they zip into the heliopause of a solar system they wake up and do what they are programed to do.
I have written two short stories exploring this thesis.
Brink of Perdition and Cat and Mouse
If you would care to read them go to…
http://www.artandadvertising.com/web-graphics
July 11th, 2021 13:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, F.F
I offer, as a talking point, the thesis that UFO’s are not Aliens but abandoned space probes that have been flying through the galaxy for millions of years. When they zip into the heliopause of a solar system they wake up and do what they are programed to do.
I have written two short stories exploring this thesis.
Brink of Perdition and Cat and Mouse
If you would care to read them go to…
http://www.artandadvertising.com/web-graphics
July 11th, 2021 13:34
Stranger at Door
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastically fun, I\'m not sure what I do. Probably offer them a cuppa of my favourite brew and even give a biscuit or two.
Loved the flow
July 11th, 2021 07:05
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastically fun, I\'m not sure what I do. Probably offer them a cuppa of my favourite brew and even give a biscuit or two.
Loved the flow
July 11th, 2021 07:05
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