Comments received on poems by Florence J



What if
Goldfinch60 said:

\"What if...\" The most asked and unanswered question in our lives Florence.

Andy

November 12th, 2021 01:26

What if
L. B. Mek said:

\'The ‘what if’s’ of unrequited love.\'
sounds like a great title
for a romantic novel..
thanks for sharing, I admire
the passion you imbued
into each line

November 11th, 2021 05:35

Teeny tiny bubble
Goldfinch60 said:

May that bubble never burst Florence.

Andy

September 8th, 2021 01:02

Through the night
yellowrose said:

A sad writing but still so very well expressed ..

September 8th, 2021 00:18

Teeny tiny bubble
yellowrose said:

Lovely words 🙂

September 8th, 2021 00:14

This is a woman’s world
Doggerel Dave said:

Go for it Flo. Took me time to work out what you were on about, but by the end, I\'d caught up. Good satire. Keep working on this topic sometimes (not every time, people will switch off).

September 3rd, 2021 04:06

This is a woman’s world
L. B. Mek said:

speak your Truth, but don\'t expect kindness
from this cruel world
be brave, insure you\'ve measured the weight of your words
before you share them with world and then, just let them be
when you feel you have to explain yourself
to prevent, deter hate or abuse
that feeling is a form of toxicity, shed it
never repress it
it will hinder your painstakingly built
sense of independence..
(forgive my rant, I meant well
I like your insightful take
on modernity\'s warped concept of empowerment
where it works, only if you sign-up to the whole package
or else you\'re deemed unworthy of its haphazard benefits)
your work reminded me
of this lyrics from Neneh Cherry\'s song \'Woman\':
\'You gotta be fortunate, you gotta be lucky now
I was just sitting here thinkin\' good and bad
But I\'m the kind of woman that was built to last
They tried erasing me, they couldn\'t wipe out my past
To save my child, I\'d rather go hungry
I\'ve got all of Ethiopia inside of me
And my blood flows through every man
In this Godless land, that delivered me
I\'ve cried so many tears even the blind can see

This is a woman\'s world, this is my world
This is a woman\'s world, for this man\'s girl
There ain\'t a woman in this world, not a woman or a girl
That can\'t deliver love, in a man\'s world\'


September 3rd, 2021 03:57

This is a woman’s world
BusyB said:

Very true, enjoyed your insight!

September 2nd, 2021 15:30

Please me
Neville said:


just going through the motions aint good enough is it .. I imagine so many here will be able to relate to these finely threaded words my friend ..

and very much enjoyed you were too ............ N :) x


August 30th, 2021 05:10

The dance of time
L. B. Mek said:

what a bravely transparent depiction
of deeply sensitive and personal musings..
sometimes we all feel stranded, from a future
we can\'t picture
as our past consumes our now, so overwhelmingly!
really like your accessible wording
thanks for sharing

August 30th, 2021 05:00

The dance of time
Floreann said:

Your poem hauntingly magical lost in the past a wonderful write..

August 29th, 2021 18:26

Through the night
L. B. Mek said:

more power to you!
fortitude is a dying trait, in our chaotic modernity
stay strong, share and reach out
hopefully, you\'ll find the response you\'ve been looking for
but remember
there is no rule saying we Have, to Be a certain way
just have to try and make the best, of our flitting life
how we do that, is completely up to us!
thanks for choosing to share

August 27th, 2021 04:13

Please me
orchidee said:

I have swooned! heehee.

July 4th, 2021 01:44

Please me
Doggerel Dave said:

Crap sex.
Welcome to MPS Please feel free to respond to commentary -MPS works best that way.

July 4th, 2021 01:00