Comments received on poems by apete90
An Unsettle Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This evokes feelings of being overfilled with emotion where one is ready to burst and pressure strains the walls, swelling to the point of rupture. Well written it is raw and real and makes my head dizzy.
October 14th, 2026 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
This evokes feelings of being overfilled with emotion where one is ready to burst and pressure strains the walls, swelling to the point of rupture. Well written it is raw and real and makes my head dizzy.
October 14th, 2026 18:51
An Open House
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric as well as literal image here. Nicely written
October 13th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric as well as literal image here. Nicely written
October 13th, 2026 03:55
Comforting Photograph
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a photograph and the emotions evoked. Well done
October 11th, 2026 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a photograph and the emotions evoked. Well done
October 11th, 2026 16:30
A Devoted Avoidant
sorenbarrett said:
This write makes her rather important indeed. Nicely done
October 5th, 2026 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
This write makes her rather important indeed. Nicely done
October 5th, 2026 16:50
Invisible Visibility
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in rhyme it draws one onward. Nicely done
October 1st, 2026 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in rhyme it draws one onward. Nicely done
October 1st, 2026 08:59
Phases of Life
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of the passing of time and erosion that occurred. Nicely written
September 20th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of the passing of time and erosion that occurred. Nicely written
September 20th, 2026 11:07
Story to the Cover
peto said:
Welcome
Bit of a cryptic start
I enjoyed it
So will look out for the unfolding story
Clever
July 14th, 2021 14:58
peto said:
Welcome
Bit of a cryptic start
I enjoyed it
So will look out for the unfolding story
Clever
July 14th, 2021 14:58
