Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
The helpless victim
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
you are so talented, dear poet
thank you
for gifting me my fist chuckle of the day
and sharing such an immersive read
for all of us to enjoy!
April 21st, 2022 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
Awesome!
you are so talented, dear poet
thank you
for gifting me my fist chuckle of the day
and sharing such an immersive read
for all of us to enjoy!
April 21st, 2022 05:10
Thhe soldier\'s song
Crowns4Christ said:
Thank you for this piece and for supporting the fighting soldiers, it\'s nice to see the support for them
April 20th, 2022 13:26
Crowns4Christ said:
Thank you for this piece and for supporting the fighting soldiers, it\'s nice to see the support for them
April 20th, 2022 13:26
Life is....
Rocky Lagou said:
The beauty of life is that it can be all these things you\'ve presented. It\'s always changing and never still. Amazing.
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Rocky Lagou said:
The beauty of life is that it can be all these things you\'ve presented. It\'s always changing and never still. Amazing.
April 19th, 2022 09:23
Life is....
L. B. Mek said:
life is these words of your poetry
touching so many, and you
asking for nothing, in return
dear poet
April 19th, 2022 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
life is these words of your poetry
touching so many, and you
asking for nothing, in return
dear poet
April 19th, 2022 05:59
my lovely days have gone..
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean wow, that first line, \"The thorn’s prick no longer evokes a long-drawn sigh\" is so dulcet. It truly evokes images and your wistful yearning is felt. I hope you at least were able to enjoy your youth days to the fullest. The golden years are also wonderful.
April 18th, 2022 12:45
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean wow, that first line, \"The thorn’s prick no longer evokes a long-drawn sigh\" is so dulcet. It truly evokes images and your wistful yearning is felt. I hope you at least were able to enjoy your youth days to the fullest. The golden years are also wonderful.
April 18th, 2022 12:45
my lovely days have gone..
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Satiated as I am, with life’s joys and sorrows
I am no longer concerned with waiting for the morrows.
Once I was young, ah, once I was young,
Once I was humble, and once highly-strung
Life then for me was sheer enchantment and joy
It lasted much longer than an unbreakable toy.
Today, I sit back and reflect on the past
Which was boundless, corner-less, and oh, so vast\'
April 18th, 2022 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
\'Satiated as I am, with life’s joys and sorrows
I am no longer concerned with waiting for the morrows.
Once I was young, ah, once I was young,
Once I was humble, and once highly-strung
Life then for me was sheer enchantment and joy
It lasted much longer than an unbreakable toy.
Today, I sit back and reflect on the past
Which was boundless, corner-less, and oh, so vast\'
April 18th, 2022 05:42
Life - 2 main aspects
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Great last line 🙂 I think life should be more happiness than sadness ..
April 17th, 2022 01:04
Caring dove said:
Great writing ! Great last line 🙂 I think life should be more happiness than sadness ..
April 17th, 2022 01:04
Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not sure I understand..
but whatever you\'re up to
stay safe, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not sure I understand..
but whatever you\'re up to
stay safe, dear poet
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2022 04:38
the Super \"Super Powers\"
L. B. Mek said:
and all, \'Voted\'
in-to power...
just
an all round, demoralising
theme, to contemplate
dear poet, thanks for sharing
(and I so agree, with every
infuriatedly bristling syllable
you\'ve inked!)
April 14th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
and all, \'Voted\'
in-to power...
just
an all round, demoralising
theme, to contemplate
dear poet, thanks for sharing
(and I so agree, with every
infuriatedly bristling syllable
you\'ve inked!)
April 14th, 2022 04:04
the Super \"Super Powers\"
voices of ghosts said:
no kidding, that is exactly how it works
April 13th, 2022 18:28
voices of ghosts said:
no kidding, that is exactly how it works
April 13th, 2022 18:28
The traveler
L. B. Mek said:
\'How I crave for a kind look.\'
(such a relatable read
really like your brave portrait, of yearning
for something
we once were so quick, to move-on
from..
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing)
\'Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And auld lang syne!
Chorus - For auld land syne, my dear,
For auld lang syne,
We\'ll tak a cup o\' kindness yet,
For auld lang syne.\'
as said best, by that great Burns
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686 )
April 12th, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'How I crave for a kind look.\'
(such a relatable read
really like your brave portrait, of yearning
for something
we once were so quick, to move-on
from..
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing)
\'Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And never brought to mind?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
And auld lang syne!
Chorus - For auld land syne, my dear,
For auld lang syne,
We\'ll tak a cup o\' kindness yet,
For auld lang syne.\'
as said best, by that great Burns
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4686 )
April 12th, 2022 05:31
My treasure trove
L. B. Mek said:
\'And though my throne is grassy
I am not one who rues it.\'
loved the humility, imbued
in your song of victorious, acceptance
may whatever God you choose to believe-in
reward your humanist, openness
and
the love and respect
your poetry alludes to
for those, brethren
with differing ideal\'s, to yours..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope you have a peaceful week
April 11th, 2022 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'And though my throne is grassy
I am not one who rues it.\'
loved the humility, imbued
in your song of victorious, acceptance
may whatever God you choose to believe-in
reward your humanist, openness
and
the love and respect
your poetry alludes to
for those, brethren
with differing ideal\'s, to yours..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
hope you have a peaceful week
April 11th, 2022 05:43
moonlight
voices of ghosts said:
very beautiful 👏
that is the power of the moon .....
April 10th, 2022 11:01
voices of ghosts said:
very beautiful 👏
that is the power of the moon .....
April 10th, 2022 11:01
moonlight
Caring dove said:
Nature can calm is sometimes . A lovely poem .. like your choice of words
April 10th, 2022 01:10
Caring dove said:
Nature can calm is sometimes . A lovely poem .. like your choice of words
April 10th, 2022 01:10
Why study?
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear friend…truly understand…i too always forget…as if all goes in some kind of abyss…cause when i draw my hands to fetch I don’t remember anything to write on that sheet of mine…
April 9th, 2022 09:39
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear friend…truly understand…i too always forget…as if all goes in some kind of abyss…cause when i draw my hands to fetch I don’t remember anything to write on that sheet of mine…
April 9th, 2022 09:39
My grandchildren
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their wriggling and their giggling
On which we dote and thrive\'..
so happy for you!
(to recognise, a child\'s light
gracing your life
is to introduce, our existence\'s
unadulterated: Beauty
in-to your hopes and dreams)
thank you!
for this soothing read, dear Poet
April 8th, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'Their wriggling and their giggling
On which we dote and thrive\'..
so happy for you!
(to recognise, a child\'s light
gracing your life
is to introduce, our existence\'s
unadulterated: Beauty
in-to your hopes and dreams)
thank you!
for this soothing read, dear Poet
April 8th, 2022 05:38
My grandchildren
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of grandchildren is so wonderful, may those memories always remain with us.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
The joy of grandchildren is so wonderful, may those memories always remain with us.
Andy
April 8th, 2022 01:16
Cupid rides pillion
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s not the silly ‘puppy love’ of youth
But the stark, plain and wholesome truth
For sun may sleep and death may die
But we’ll be together – she and I\'..
such a great read, what poetic flow!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
worthy of being favourably compared
to one of the best, love poem
dedications:
\'Annabel Lee\', by Poe
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
April 5th, 2022 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s not the silly ‘puppy love’ of youth
But the stark, plain and wholesome truth
For sun may sleep and death may die
But we’ll be together – she and I\'..
such a great read, what poetic flow!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
worthy of being favourably compared
to one of the best, love poem
dedications:
\'Annabel Lee\', by Poe
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
April 5th, 2022 04:21
An advice to sweethearts..
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
kinda like life, eh?
why not make the best of it
whilst we still can, I say
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 4th, 2022 05:20
An advice to sweethearts..
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,but so worth it when your love is true
April 4th, 2022 01:45
Crowns4Christ said:
So true,but so worth it when your love is true
April 4th, 2022 01:45
A bride\'s steps
Christina8 said:
I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride takes. Great job!
April 3rd, 2022 11:02
Christina8 said:
I like your rhymes and the meaning of hope, etc, behind each step a bride takes. Great job!
April 3rd, 2022 11:02
happy caring mode
L. B. Mek said:
interesting message and relatable read
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
interesting message and relatable read
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 05:00
Ageing
Rocky Lagou said:
A lovely piece. Those are the \"golden years\" of life and it\'s a moment to truly live life to the fullest. Continue living the perks!
March 31st, 2022 10:12
Rocky Lagou said:
A lovely piece. Those are the \"golden years\" of life and it\'s a moment to truly live life to the fullest. Continue living the perks!
March 31st, 2022 10:12
Ageing
L. B. Mek said:
\'in my, often flawed
but ever, humbled
opinionated - opinion\'
this, is brilliant!
reminded me
of one of my favourite poems
\'Warning\' by Jenny Joseph
( https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/warning/ )
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'in my, often flawed
but ever, humbled
opinionated - opinion\'
this, is brilliant!
reminded me
of one of my favourite poems
\'Warning\' by Jenny Joseph
( https://www.scottishpoetrylibrary.org.uk/poem/warning/ )
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
March 31st, 2022 05:05
in the street
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice epitome of life and the different things going on at the same time. It\'s a nice reflection and vividly displayed.
March 30th, 2022 10:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Really nice epitome of life and the different things going on at the same time. It\'s a nice reflection and vividly displayed.
March 30th, 2022 10:33
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