Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
who are friends
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, thanks for sharing
Happy New Year to you, too
January 13th, 2023 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, thanks for sharing
Happy New Year to you, too
January 13th, 2023 05:51
in appreciation
mvvenkataraman said:
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always shows us the right route!
January 10th, 2023 02:35
mvvenkataraman said:
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always shows us the right route!
January 10th, 2023 02:35
Old year vs new
mvvenkataraman said:
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A homage to the Old Year kindly
And a well-wish for the New Year!
January 1st, 2023 01:28
mvvenkataraman said:
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A homage to the Old Year kindly
And a well-wish for the New Year!
January 1st, 2023 01:28
things i love..
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i too love doves, grass, flowers, and i esp hate conmen, rats, but i dont hate dogs, i just fear them lots, i dont hate or fear bats though. You expressed in a fab way. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i too love doves, grass, flowers, and i esp hate conmen, rats, but i dont hate dogs, i just fear them lots, i dont hate or fear bats though. You expressed in a fab way. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:03
things i love..
L. B. Mek said:
this definitely resonates with me, dear poet
welcome back! thanks for sharing
December 12th, 2022 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
this definitely resonates with me, dear poet
welcome back! thanks for sharing
December 12th, 2022 02:27
A teacher
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
a song
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
a song
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
a song
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
My shadow
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Submit
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
Dear Editor
L. B. Mek said:
personally, i think you\'re Awesome!
(keep that mighty pen, busy
write mainly for yourself and enjoy
the journey...)
August 12th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
personally, i think you\'re Awesome!
(keep that mighty pen, busy
write mainly for yourself and enjoy
the journey...)
August 12th, 2022 04:16
Cord
Ryan Robson-Bluer said:
my mum and i have been discussing this over coffee in the kitchen this morning - thank you for something so brief yet so perfectly sweet!
August 9th, 2022 03:55
Ryan Robson-Bluer said:
my mum and i have been discussing this over coffee in the kitchen this morning - thank you for something so brief yet so perfectly sweet!
August 9th, 2022 03:55
Cord
L. B. Mek said:
(even devoid of theological alignment
there is something very human
you\'ve depicted
within words of such brevity;
that aspect of internal struggle
between, that
we choose to place our faith in
and that, belated realisation
that we are never guaranteed
anything back, in return or reply
we
merely hope and pray
choosing to believe
this time, our despair
will be answered...)
this is so well written
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
(even devoid of theological alignment
there is something very human
you\'ve depicted
within words of such brevity;
that aspect of internal struggle
between, that
we choose to place our faith in
and that, belated realisation
that we are never guaranteed
anything back, in return or reply
we
merely hope and pray
choosing to believe
this time, our despair
will be answered...)
this is so well written
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:06
poetry
NafisaSB said:
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
July 29th, 2022 08:03
NafisaSB said:
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
July 29th, 2022 08:03
Be happy
NafisaSB said:
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your in-depth analysis : it is refreshing to hear what you have to say.. i don\'t find it over zealous, and am not annoyed. glad to have your frank reviews in fact, so please don\'t tone it down - i welcome whatever thoughts and ideas the readers have to share. good day
July 23rd, 2022 00:57
NafisaSB said:
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your in-depth analysis : it is refreshing to hear what you have to say.. i don\'t find it over zealous, and am not annoyed. glad to have your frank reviews in fact, so please don\'t tone it down - i welcome whatever thoughts and ideas the readers have to share. good day
July 23rd, 2022 00:57
Count on me
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing your wide shoulders
and your poetry\'s, empathetic
depths..
a lovely read, thank you!
July 22nd, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing your wide shoulders
and your poetry\'s, empathetic
depths..
a lovely read, thank you!
July 22nd, 2022 04:53
Be happy
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, happiness should be spread all around.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-4fIVD06lRQ
July 21st, 2022 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, happiness should be spread all around.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-4fIVD06lRQ
July 21st, 2022 01:13
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