Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
An ordinary farm day
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, what a charming vista you\'ve delightfully offered up in a trice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and such a note of realism I nearly swoon in the indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 6th, 2026 11:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, what a charming vista you\'ve delightfully offered up in a trice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and such a note of realism I nearly swoon in the indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 6th, 2026 11:11
An ordinary farm day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm life so well...animals resting, small disturbances coming and going, and the day carrying on regardless. What I enjoyed most is the sense of contentment that settles over the entire piece. It feels like a warm snapshot of an ordinary day made memorable through observation. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm life so well...animals resting, small disturbances coming and going, and the day carrying on regardless. What I enjoyed most is the sense of contentment that settles over the entire piece. It feels like a warm snapshot of an ordinary day made memorable through observation. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:26
An ordinary farm day
sorenbarrett said:
A lazy setting gives a nice appeal to this poem of farm life and its slower pace. It feels very much at home and far from the world buzz. Nicely composed in rhyme it moves slowly in its pace replicating the image. Well done
June 6th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
A lazy setting gives a nice appeal to this poem of farm life and its slower pace. It feels very much at home and far from the world buzz. Nicely composed in rhyme it moves slowly in its pace replicating the image. Well done
June 6th, 2026 03:40
An ordinary farm day
soheil khodaparasti said:
The rural calm, vividly evoked through visual and auditory imagery, is briefly interrupted by tension before returning to peace. This pattern invites the reader to associate the farm scene with human life, which is likewise subject to intrusions in the form of threats, dangers, and conflicts. Although such disturbances may jeopardize peace and tranquility, they cannot ultimately destroy them, for true peace comes from within—from belonging to a settled community and accepting the rhythms of everyday existence.
The outsiders and intruders in the poem can be seen as symbols of the disruptive forces that enter our lives. Their discontent and dissatisfaction are the very forces that drive their intrusion. In contrast to the contentment of the farm\'s inhabitants, the tramps are restless, alienated, and resentful, highlighting the difference between inner fulfillment and perpetual dissatisfaction.
June 6th, 2026 01:19
soheil khodaparasti said:
The rural calm, vividly evoked through visual and auditory imagery, is briefly interrupted by tension before returning to peace. This pattern invites the reader to associate the farm scene with human life, which is likewise subject to intrusions in the form of threats, dangers, and conflicts. Although such disturbances may jeopardize peace and tranquility, they cannot ultimately destroy them, for true peace comes from within—from belonging to a settled community and accepting the rhythms of everyday existence.
The outsiders and intruders in the poem can be seen as symbols of the disruptive forces that enter our lives. Their discontent and dissatisfaction are the very forces that drive their intrusion. In contrast to the contentment of the farm\'s inhabitants, the tramps are restless, alienated, and resentful, highlighting the difference between inner fulfillment and perpetual dissatisfaction.
June 6th, 2026 01:19
Rejuvenate our land
Samprikta Paul said:
Trust me, this piece must be added in school going students\' literature book. That\'s where the actual sapling gonna grow.
June 6th, 2026 00:50
Samprikta Paul said:
Trust me, this piece must be added in school going students\' literature book. That\'s where the actual sapling gonna grow.
June 6th, 2026 00:50
An ordinary farm day
Mutley Ravishes said:
Cursing themselves most of all! Oh well, who knows how they`ve been damaged in their lifetimes?
The poem was a nice, bucolic read. At least their was no farmer shouting \"Get off my land!\" in it!
June 6th, 2026 00:04
Mutley Ravishes said:
Cursing themselves most of all! Oh well, who knows how they`ve been damaged in their lifetimes?
The poem was a nice, bucolic read. At least their was no farmer shouting \"Get off my land!\" in it!
June 6th, 2026 00:04
Strangers
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful, and yes I feel I personally know quite a few of my friends online even if we\'ve never known eachother, I guess it\'s the mannerisms through speech, which is why we write in the first place, to share our imagery and hopes and dreams and fears together. This one deserves a nobel nomination it\'s gorgeous and uplifting. 🌹
June 4th, 2026 13:50
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful, and yes I feel I personally know quite a few of my friends online even if we\'ve never known eachother, I guess it\'s the mannerisms through speech, which is why we write in the first place, to share our imagery and hopes and dreams and fears together. This one deserves a nobel nomination it\'s gorgeous and uplifting. 🌹
June 4th, 2026 13:50
Strangers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really touched me. There’s such warmth and gratitude running through every line. It feels like a celebration of the connections we build here...people separated by miles and circumstances, yet somehow gathered around the same fire of words. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really touched me. There’s such warmth and gratitude running through every line. It feels like a celebration of the connections we build here...people separated by miles and circumstances, yet somehow gathered around the same fire of words. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:38
Strangers
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes most real as I have received feedback from so many over the past years and now feel such a part of my life. Well written in good rhyme it is a fave
May 31st, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes most real as I have received feedback from so many over the past years and now feel such a part of my life. Well written in good rhyme it is a fave
May 31st, 2026 04:00
Strangers
rhmn_7 said:
Poetry, art, music are definitely universal languages which helps as meet and understand each other. Nice poem!
May 31st, 2026 01:46
rhmn_7 said:
Poetry, art, music are definitely universal languages which helps as meet and understand each other. Nice poem!
May 31st, 2026 01:46
Strangers
soheil khodaparasti said:
A lovely reflection on how poetry connects hearts across distance. Warm, heartfelt, and uplifting.
May 31st, 2026 00:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
A lovely reflection on how poetry connects hearts across distance. Warm, heartfelt, and uplifting.
May 31st, 2026 00:15
Rejuvenate our land
Paul Bell said:
Look after nature and nature will look after you.
Sadly nature is abused on earth, and when you abuse such a power, can you wonder how she reacts the way she does.
May 27th, 2026 02:46
Paul Bell said:
Look after nature and nature will look after you.
Sadly nature is abused on earth, and when you abuse such a power, can you wonder how she reacts the way she does.
May 27th, 2026 02:46
Rejuvenate our land
Neville said:
Very timely, very apt and very well stated .. Neville 🌻🌻🌻🐧💛👍
May 27th, 2026 02:14
Neville said:
Very timely, very apt and very well stated .. Neville 🌻🌻🌻🐧💛👍
May 27th, 2026 02:14
Rejuvenate our land
2781 said:
She always wins. Humanity as we know it is in extra time.
May 24th, 2026 10:33
2781 said:
She always wins. Humanity as we know it is in extra time.
May 24th, 2026 10:33
Rejuvenate our land
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this carries such genuine care and urgency through it. The poem feels like a heartfelt call for responsibility without losing its sense of hope. “It’s in our own hands / The fate of all our lands” really lands as the emotional center of the piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this carries such genuine care and urgency through it. The poem feels like a heartfelt call for responsibility without losing its sense of hope. “It’s in our own hands / The fate of all our lands” really lands as the emotional center of the piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
Rejuvenate our land
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem emphasizes the urgent need for environmental conservation and individuals\' collective responsibility to nurture and protect nature.
May 23rd, 2026 09:02
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem emphasizes the urgent need for environmental conservation and individuals\' collective responsibility to nurture and protect nature.
May 23rd, 2026 09:02
Rejuvenate our land
sorenbarrett said:
A noble cause set in verse. Well written with great flow. If only our rivers would flow that well and be that clear. I consider myself eco friendly but I am not a fanatic in my eyes. I don\'t believe in recycling when it uses more energy than it saves, I would rather cut down on the number of people that pollute than destroy the life style of people in general. A wonderful write
May 23rd, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A noble cause set in verse. Well written with great flow. If only our rivers would flow that well and be that clear. I consider myself eco friendly but I am not a fanatic in my eyes. I don\'t believe in recycling when it uses more energy than it saves, I would rather cut down on the number of people that pollute than destroy the life style of people in general. A wonderful write
May 23rd, 2026 07:35
Paradise at mom\'s feet
Neville said:
I imagine everyone who passes this way & no matter where they are heading will hit the heart shaped icon before leaving this page .. A beautiful tribute to so many .. Neville ❤️
May 20th, 2026 01:55
Neville said:
I imagine everyone who passes this way & no matter where they are heading will hit the heart shaped icon before leaving this page .. A beautiful tribute to so many .. Neville ❤️
May 20th, 2026 01:55
Granny
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a steady kind of love here—the kind that doesn’t rush, just shows up and stays,
Soft hands, strong spine, holding the night back so a child can dream in safer ways.
May 17th, 2026 08:54
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a steady kind of love here—the kind that doesn’t rush, just shows up and stays,
Soft hands, strong spine, holding the night back so a child can dream in safer ways.
May 17th, 2026 08:54
Granny
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, I really connected with how nurturing this feels throughout. The poem understands grandparenthood not just as affection, but as protection, listening, guidance, and emotional refuge. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, I really connected with how nurturing this feels throughout. The poem understands grandparenthood not just as affection, but as protection, listening, guidance, and emotional refuge. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:02
Granny
sorenbarrett said:
This is a joyous piece that I can identify with as a grandfather. If I could have had grandkids without having children I would have had hundreds.
May 17th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
This is a joyous piece that I can identify with as a grandfather. If I could have had grandkids without having children I would have had hundreds.
May 17th, 2026 04:48
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