Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
On life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window into how life unfolds...and the way you close it leaves the whole piece shining with joy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 7th, 2025 18:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window into how life unfolds...and the way you close it leaves the whole piece shining with joy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 7th, 2025 18:26
On life
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
I love how this poem compares life to everyday objects and experiences. The imagery of onions, drums, clouds, and treasures makes the message relatable, and the uplifting tone encourages resilience and enjoying each moment.
September 7th, 2025 09:41
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
I love how this poem compares life to everyday objects and experiences. The imagery of onions, drums, clouds, and treasures makes the message relatable, and the uplifting tone encourages resilience and enjoying each moment.
September 7th, 2025 09:41
On life
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses several thoughts but to each the onion comes back to mind each a layer of life. Nicely crafted
September 7th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses several thoughts but to each the onion comes back to mind each a layer of life. Nicely crafted
September 7th, 2025 05:06
Choose
Teddy.15 said:
Wow this is a clever reflective piece for the reader, I guess I would choose the pencil, because I like to re-write mistakes, but then again I like to also see them and learn from them so it could well be the pen, with scribbled out lines, as for my family, they have never been anything but a rock holding me under water, so I chose my life and I don\'t regret a thing. 🌹 Brilliant maybe you should be a detective. You can get a confession easily.🤣
September 4th, 2025 01:34
Teddy.15 said:
Wow this is a clever reflective piece for the reader, I guess I would choose the pencil, because I like to re-write mistakes, but then again I like to also see them and learn from them so it could well be the pen, with scribbled out lines, as for my family, they have never been anything but a rock holding me under water, so I chose my life and I don\'t regret a thing. 🌹 Brilliant maybe you should be a detective. You can get a confession easily.🤣
September 4th, 2025 01:34
Choose
Keeter C said:
I tend to conceive with pencil and then cement it with ink.
September 3rd, 2025 14:28
Keeter C said:
I tend to conceive with pencil and then cement it with ink.
September 3rd, 2025 14:28
Choose
Bella Shepard said:
Choice leads us in so many different directions, it\'s the story of our lives. You say this so beautifully in thought provoking verse of contemplation. Expuisite!
September 3rd, 2025 08:41
Bella Shepard said:
Choice leads us in so many different directions, it\'s the story of our lives. You say this so beautifully in thought provoking verse of contemplation. Expuisite!
September 3rd, 2025 08:41
Impact
Neville said:
I share that hope .. I\'m sure in truth most people do .. they certainly all think about the very issues you have so eloquently broached here .. write on my friend and always .. Neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:28
Neville said:
I share that hope .. I\'m sure in truth most people do .. they certainly all think about the very issues you have so eloquently broached here .. write on my friend and always .. Neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:28
Choose
Neville said:
what an outcome that would be .. its always best to have a few options open and to choose carefully after an appropriate period of consideration and reflection .. enjoyed muchly safina .. neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:24
Neville said:
what an outcome that would be .. its always best to have a few options open and to choose carefully after an appropriate period of consideration and reflection .. enjoyed muchly safina .. neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:24
Choose
Doggerel Dave said:
The crucial, fundamental choice: stay with family or go.
Let\'s hope both societal norms and economic conditions make that choice a real one...
Question well posed.
August 31st, 2025 18:45
Doggerel Dave said:
The crucial, fundamental choice: stay with family or go.
Let\'s hope both societal norms and economic conditions make that choice a real one...
Question well posed.
August 31st, 2025 18:45
Choose
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea of choice for life is always a choice that often we blame on others or circumstances. A very nice write about taking responsibility for what we do. Nicely written
August 31st, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
I like the idea of choice for life is always a choice that often we blame on others or circumstances. A very nice write about taking responsibility for what we do. Nicely written
August 31st, 2025 04:28
I danced...
Poetic Dan said:
You really are such a beautiful and wonderful soul.
Thank you for sharing
August 28th, 2025 19:11
Poetic Dan said:
You really are such a beautiful and wonderful soul.
Thank you for sharing
August 28th, 2025 19:11
Today
Poetic Dan said:
Many words were felt after this well needed read, bring my spirit up from it knees. I look forward to absorbing more of your poetry, truly an honour to receive these wishes.
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
August 28th, 2025 19:07
Poetic Dan said:
Many words were felt after this well needed read, bring my spirit up from it knees. I look forward to absorbing more of your poetry, truly an honour to receive these wishes.
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
August 28th, 2025 19:07
Disillusioned
RSM0812 said:
I agree some people know how to talk big and make promises. Your intelect will always give u a warning hopefully and one can learn to disbelieve, ignore and move on.
August 27th, 2025 21:17
RSM0812 said:
I agree some people know how to talk big and make promises. Your intelect will always give u a warning hopefully and one can learn to disbelieve, ignore and move on.
August 27th, 2025 21:17
Disillusioned
Teddy.15 said:
What an incredibly wisdomous poem. Powerful and to the point. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 09:32
Teddy.15 said:
What an incredibly wisdomous poem. Powerful and to the point. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 09:32
Disillusioned
Neville said:
here amid the beauty, you have layered and so eloquently, so much truth ⭐👍
August 27th, 2025 01:25
Neville said:
here amid the beauty, you have layered and so eloquently, so much truth ⭐👍
August 27th, 2025 01:25
Disillusioned
Doggerel Dave said:
I saw you more optimistic than that, but cannot deny that realistic does for you very well. Neat truth more often than not.
August 25th, 2025 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I saw you more optimistic than that, but cannot deny that realistic does for you very well. Neat truth more often than not.
August 25th, 2025 18:19
Today
RSM0812 said:
A unique and positive poem. People should live by this one. Lol
August 25th, 2025 11:49
RSM0812 said:
A unique and positive poem. People should live by this one. Lol
August 25th, 2025 11:49
Disillusioned
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Buyer\'s shock or remorse should not be a thing after reading this poem. Warning issued! Truth, my friend. A very wise and clever poem indeed. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Buyer\'s shock or remorse should not be a thing after reading this poem. Warning issued! Truth, my friend. A very wise and clever poem indeed. A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:36
Disillusioned
arqios said:
Dear Safina, this poem carries with it the precision of a fable: short, clear images that work like stepping stones toward a quiet but stinging truth. It’s spare, but it lingers, the kind of poem where the spaces between the lines feel as loaded as the words themselves.
August 25th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
Dear Safina, this poem carries with it the precision of a fable: short, clear images that work like stepping stones toward a quiet but stinging truth. It’s spare, but it lingers, the kind of poem where the spaces between the lines feel as loaded as the words themselves.
August 25th, 2025 05:34
Disillusioned
sorenbarrett said:
Buyer beware they always used to say. A clever poem of advice that anyone with any sense will listen to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Buyer beware they always used to say. A clever poem of advice that anyone with any sense will listen to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 04:02
Innocent victims
NinjaGirl said:
Hopeless is often wrapped in distractions...
August 24th, 2025 01:32
NinjaGirl said:
Hopeless is often wrapped in distractions...
August 24th, 2025 01:32
Impact
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ll never know...maybe the person you walk by every morning likes seeing your face, or a little girl thought your hair was cool. There are so many little things that people love, and that make people so loveable
August 24th, 2025 01:30
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ll never know...maybe the person you walk by every morning likes seeing your face, or a little girl thought your hair was cool. There are so many little things that people love, and that make people so loveable
August 24th, 2025 01:30
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