Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
My thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this reads with real sincerity…the way you trace thought from heart to action to legacy feels honest and deeply personal. It carries both effort and hope. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this reads with real sincerity…the way you trace thought from heart to action to legacy feels honest and deeply personal. It carries both effort and hope. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:48
My thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to fly high (or is it just fly?) with those thoughts, but I feel guilty and quickly land back on earth.
That\'s just me though, and everyone has their own parameters....
You wrestled that one into shape nicely.
December 13th, 2025 07:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to fly high (or is it just fly?) with those thoughts, but I feel guilty and quickly land back on earth.
That\'s just me though, and everyone has their own parameters....
You wrestled that one into shape nicely.
December 13th, 2025 07:37
My thoughts
arqios said:
You have spoken the heart of many with your own heart 🙏🏻🕊️
December 13th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
You have spoken the heart of many with your own heart 🙏🏻🕊️
December 13th, 2025 05:34
My thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
So well expressed in verse this need to set down for the future one\'s thoughts and feelings. Loved it
December 13th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
So well expressed in verse this need to set down for the future one\'s thoughts and feelings. Loved it
December 13th, 2025 04:23
Utopia
Neville said:
Far better than just good .. I simply love the message so well threaded throughout .. Oh\' and your authors note is perfect too .. Seasons best & wishing you all goof things, Neville
December 12th, 2025 06:30
Neville said:
Far better than just good .. I simply love the message so well threaded throughout .. Oh\' and your authors note is perfect too .. Seasons best & wishing you all goof things, Neville
December 12th, 2025 06:30
Utopia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet lifts another corner of the world you want to see…and then you invite us into the work. Thoughtful and inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet lifts another corner of the world you want to see…and then you invite us into the work. Thoughtful and inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:46
Utopia
Teddy.15 said:
My dear NafisaSB kudos a thousand times, for your compassion and kindness and your beautiful Poetic pen 💜
December 7th, 2025 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
My dear NafisaSB kudos a thousand times, for your compassion and kindness and your beautiful Poetic pen 💜
December 7th, 2025 05:55
Utopia
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded this poem presents and proposes a better world that is a long way from being realized, but one can always hope. Well written and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded this poem presents and proposes a better world that is a long way from being realized, but one can always hope. Well written and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:51
Twilight on Sunday
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time, Sunday was a day of rest, now it\'s just a day.
The beach sounds great in contrast to freezing Britain.
December 2nd, 2025 14:25
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time, Sunday was a day of rest, now it\'s just a day.
The beach sounds great in contrast to freezing Britain.
December 2nd, 2025 14:25
Twilight on Sunday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands with a calm clarity…the gentle pace, the bright sky, the tossing away of old heaviness. You captured the ease of a day meant for breathing again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands with a calm clarity…the gentle pace, the bright sky, the tossing away of old heaviness. You captured the ease of a day meant for breathing again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:33
Twilight on Sunday
Doggerel Dave said:
You amaze - You mean exotic India ☺️reveres Sunday? Despite you wishing a happy weekend many times, for some reason I had never given it a thought...
The write even feels at home here too!
Thanks for the enlightenment.
November 30th, 2025 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
You amaze - You mean exotic India ☺️reveres Sunday? Despite you wishing a happy weekend many times, for some reason I had never given it a thought...
The write even feels at home here too!
Thanks for the enlightenment.
November 30th, 2025 06:33
Twilight on Sunday
Friendship said:
Well written, Happy weekend to you.........Your poem reflects on the transformative power of a calm, leisurely day, particularly Sunday, as a time to relax, rejuvenate, and escape from the stresses of daily life. It highlights the contrast between the drabness of a city before the onset of leisure and the vibrancy that comes with relaxation and joy.
November 30th, 2025 05:34
Friendship said:
Well written, Happy weekend to you.........Your poem reflects on the transformative power of a calm, leisurely day, particularly Sunday, as a time to relax, rejuvenate, and escape from the stresses of daily life. It highlights the contrast between the drabness of a city before the onset of leisure and the vibrancy that comes with relaxation and joy.
November 30th, 2025 05:34
Twilight on Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
This poem had the meter of the season meaning it felt somehow Christmassy. The message a good one cleverly said. And may your day be full of peace and joy Nafisa
November 30th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem had the meter of the season meaning it felt somehow Christmassy. The message a good one cleverly said. And may your day be full of peace and joy Nafisa
November 30th, 2025 03:48
Twilight on Sunday
Goldfinch60 said:
May all of your Sundays be filled with joy Nafisa.
Andy
November 30th, 2025 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May all of your Sundays be filled with joy Nafisa.
Andy
November 30th, 2025 02:28
Walk
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed, your poem speaks to the importance of being mindful as you walk through life, and in the last three lines are words that should echo in the mind every day. Very well Written!
November 25th, 2025 15:17
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed, your poem speaks to the importance of being mindful as you walk through life, and in the last three lines are words that should echo in the mind every day. Very well Written!
November 25th, 2025 15:17
Walk
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
True and well said. Kudos to a great poem with thought-provoking didactics .
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 10:08
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
True and well said. Kudos to a great poem with thought-provoking didactics .
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 10:08
Walk
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the graveyard, the shadows, the aging body… then the gentler rise toward giving and grounding… the contrast makes the ending glow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 22nd, 2025 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the graveyard, the shadows, the aging body… then the gentler rise toward giving and grounding… the contrast makes the ending glow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 22nd, 2025 08:30
Walk
arqios said:
Meditations on life and mortality expressed through beautiful verse. Much enjoyed! 🕊️🙏
November 22nd, 2025 07:59
arqios said:
Meditations on life and mortality expressed through beautiful verse. Much enjoyed! 🕊️🙏
November 22nd, 2025 07:59
Walk
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sends its message of taking care of one\'s values and actions to make life worth while. Nicely written in good rhyme and flow it sings out to the reader.
November 22nd, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sends its message of taking care of one\'s values and actions to make life worth while. Nicely written in good rhyme and flow it sings out to the reader.
November 22nd, 2025 03:30
The merry-go-round
thinkerbell said:
a beautiful poem about the merry go round
of life
November 16th, 2025 01:01
thinkerbell said:
a beautiful poem about the merry go round
of life
November 16th, 2025 01:01
The merry-go-round
Bella Shepard said:
I love your analogy of the merry-go-round, for it truly is. Your lovely imagery brings each season to life. Beautifully written my friend!
November 15th, 2025 12:52
Bella Shepard said:
I love your analogy of the merry-go-round, for it truly is. Your lovely imagery brings each season to life. Beautifully written my friend!
November 15th, 2025 12:52
The merry-go-round
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve certainly given rich life to seasonal change; a rolling snapshot well delivered. I cannot agree that it is always \'merry\' though...😊
November 15th, 2025 10:42
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve certainly given rich life to seasonal change; a rolling snapshot well delivered. I cannot agree that it is always \'merry\' though...😊
November 15th, 2025 10:42
The merry-go-round
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, the shifts from storm to sunlight, from fear to song, make this feel like nature’s own lullaby…a whole world breathing in cycles. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, the shifts from storm to sunlight, from fear to song, make this feel like nature’s own lullaby…a whole world breathing in cycles. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 08:05
The merry-go-round
sorenbarrett said:
There is the cycle of life presented in this poem and a beautiful cycle it is indeed.
November 15th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is the cycle of life presented in this poem and a beautiful cycle it is indeed.
November 15th, 2025 03:48
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