Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Grounded
Doggerel Dave said:
A set of ideas well rounded in great poetic form. I like both the simplicity and the depth of your thoughts..
October 5th, 2025 17:09
Doggerel Dave said:
A set of ideas well rounded in great poetic form. I like both the simplicity and the depth of your thoughts..
October 5th, 2025 17:09
Grounded
sorenbarrett said:
I love how this poem begins with literal flight and gradually progresses to the mental flight that occurs in imagination. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
I love how this poem begins with literal flight and gradually progresses to the mental flight that occurs in imagination. Nicely done
October 5th, 2025 04:03
On life
Soman Ragavan said:
Peeling onion makes your eyes run... As happens sometimes in life...
October 1st, 2025 09:51
Soman Ragavan said:
Peeling onion makes your eyes run... As happens sometimes in life...
October 1st, 2025 09:51
Act
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine motivating write. Thanks for sharing.
September 29th, 2025 04:44
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done. A fine motivating write. Thanks for sharing.
September 29th, 2025 04:44
Act
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This comes across as sharp and motivating. No fluff, just a call to act, to stop waiting and move. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This comes across as sharp and motivating. No fluff, just a call to act, to stop waiting and move. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 27th, 2025 07:55
Act
sorenbarrett said:
A motivational poem that is meant to inspire people to take action and not just dream and fantasize. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
A motivational poem that is meant to inspire people to take action and not just dream and fantasize. Nicely written
September 27th, 2025 07:38
When will it end?
Soman Ragavan said:
Leaders will be forgotten but poets live for eternity through their writings. Happy birthday on 19 September !
September 20th, 2025 20:55
Soman Ragavan said:
Leaders will be forgotten but poets live for eternity through their writings. Happy birthday on 19 September !
September 20th, 2025 20:55
When will it end?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, dear friend, this is raw and urgent. The broken promises, bleeding hearts, and trembling spirits land heavy…a cry that can’t be ignored. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, dear friend, this is raw and urgent. The broken promises, bleeding hearts, and trembling spirits land heavy…a cry that can’t be ignored. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 20th, 2025 19:15
When will it end?
Teddy.15 said:
Dear NafisaSB, your compassion and empathy, for all that\'s wrong with the world is beautifully written into this poem, your rhyming is flawless, I can truly agree with your observations on it all, it is a mess all of it. 🌹 Kudos my dear friend.
September 20th, 2025 16:21
Teddy.15 said:
Dear NafisaSB, your compassion and empathy, for all that\'s wrong with the world is beautifully written into this poem, your rhyming is flawless, I can truly agree with your observations on it all, it is a mess all of it. 🌹 Kudos my dear friend.
September 20th, 2025 16:21
When will it end?
Friendship said:
This poem expresses a deep sense of despair and frustration over the state of the world, particularly in relation to violence, suffering, and the moral failures of leaders. It questions the ethics of power and the impact of greed and madness on innocent lives.
September 20th, 2025 15:08
Friendship said:
This poem expresses a deep sense of despair and frustration over the state of the world, particularly in relation to violence, suffering, and the moral failures of leaders. It questions the ethics of power and the impact of greed and madness on innocent lives.
September 20th, 2025 15:08
When will it end?
Doggerel Dave said:
Wish I knew, Nafisa. Very well stated, with the only question one could possibly ask at your conclusion.
September 20th, 2025 03:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Wish I knew, Nafisa. Very well stated, with the only question one could possibly ask at your conclusion.
September 20th, 2025 03:04
Do not give advice..
Bella Shepard said:
I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem, and you give very sound advice. Good write!
September 15th, 2025 07:57
Bella Shepard said:
I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem, and you give very sound advice. Good write!
September 15th, 2025 07:57
Do not give advice..
arqios said:
Unsolicited advice tends to backfire not so much for the volatility of the the advice themselves. But there we go🕊️🙏🏻
September 15th, 2025 06:04
arqios said:
Unsolicited advice tends to backfire not so much for the volatility of the the advice themselves. But there we go🕊️🙏🏻
September 15th, 2025 06:04
Do not give advice..
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice about not giving advice Nafisa the irony in this is magnificent. All done in rhyme as well
September 15th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice about not giving advice Nafisa the irony in this is magnificent. All done in rhyme as well
September 15th, 2025 04:35
Do not give advice..
Doggerel Dave said:
Bless your cotton socks for giving me a good laugh, Nafisa👍☺️
September 15th, 2025 01:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Bless your cotton socks for giving me a good laugh, Nafisa👍☺️
September 15th, 2025 01:18
Do not give advice..
Teddy.15 said:
Hilarious in irony, dearest NafisaSB you couldn\'t imagine how much trouble I get into for loving others. A wonderful if I may say, inside out piece, brilliant and very creative. 🌹
September 14th, 2025 23:40
Teddy.15 said:
Hilarious in irony, dearest NafisaSB you couldn\'t imagine how much trouble I get into for loving others. A wonderful if I may say, inside out piece, brilliant and very creative. 🌹
September 14th, 2025 23:40
On life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window into how life unfolds...and the way you close it leaves the whole piece shining with joy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 7th, 2025 18:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window into how life unfolds...and the way you close it leaves the whole piece shining with joy. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
September 7th, 2025 18:26
On life
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love how this poem compares life to everyday objects and experiences. The imagery of onions, drums, clouds, and treasures makes the message relatable, and the uplifting tone encourages resilience and enjoying each moment.
September 7th, 2025 09:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love how this poem compares life to everyday objects and experiences. The imagery of onions, drums, clouds, and treasures makes the message relatable, and the uplifting tone encourages resilience and enjoying each moment.
September 7th, 2025 09:41
On life
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses several thoughts but to each the onion comes back to mind each a layer of life. Nicely crafted
September 7th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem encompasses several thoughts but to each the onion comes back to mind each a layer of life. Nicely crafted
September 7th, 2025 05:06
Choose
Teddy.15 said:
Wow this is a clever reflective piece for the reader, I guess I would choose the pencil, because I like to re-write mistakes, but then again I like to also see them and learn from them so it could well be the pen, with scribbled out lines, as for my family, they have never been anything but a rock holding me under water, so I chose my life and I don\'t regret a thing. 🌹 Brilliant maybe you should be a detective. You can get a confession easily.🤣
September 4th, 2025 01:34
Teddy.15 said:
Wow this is a clever reflective piece for the reader, I guess I would choose the pencil, because I like to re-write mistakes, but then again I like to also see them and learn from them so it could well be the pen, with scribbled out lines, as for my family, they have never been anything but a rock holding me under water, so I chose my life and I don\'t regret a thing. 🌹 Brilliant maybe you should be a detective. You can get a confession easily.🤣
September 4th, 2025 01:34
Choose
Keeter C said:
I tend to conceive with pencil and then cement it with ink.
September 3rd, 2025 14:28
Keeter C said:
I tend to conceive with pencil and then cement it with ink.
September 3rd, 2025 14:28
Choose
Bella Shepard said:
Choice leads us in so many different directions, it\'s the story of our lives. You say this so beautifully in thought provoking verse of contemplation. Expuisite!
September 3rd, 2025 08:41
Bella Shepard said:
Choice leads us in so many different directions, it\'s the story of our lives. You say this so beautifully in thought provoking verse of contemplation. Expuisite!
September 3rd, 2025 08:41
Impact
Neville said:
I share that hope .. I\'m sure in truth most people do .. they certainly all think about the very issues you have so eloquently broached here .. write on my friend and always .. Neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:28
Neville said:
I share that hope .. I\'m sure in truth most people do .. they certainly all think about the very issues you have so eloquently broached here .. write on my friend and always .. Neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:28
Choose
Neville said:
what an outcome that would be .. its always best to have a few options open and to choose carefully after an appropriate period of consideration and reflection .. enjoyed muchly safina .. neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:24
Neville said:
what an outcome that would be .. its always best to have a few options open and to choose carefully after an appropriate period of consideration and reflection .. enjoyed muchly safina .. neville
September 2nd, 2025 04:24
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