Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Leaders
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp eyes on power’s rot—your words cut through the pomp and pride.
Truth in rhythm, a call to wake before the deep swallows us all.
January 13th, 2026 07:50
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp eyes on power’s rot—your words cut through the pomp and pride.
Truth in rhythm, a call to wake before the deep swallows us all.
January 13th, 2026 07:50
Leaders
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is clear-eyed and urgent. The moral weight of it comes through without theatrics, and that honesty gives the poem its strength. Powerful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 09:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is clear-eyed and urgent. The moral weight of it comes through without theatrics, and that honesty gives the poem its strength. Powerful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 11th, 2026 09:18
Leaders
sorenbarrett said:
A call to all to unite in a brotherhood of humanity rather than let differences divide us. Nicely written in rhyme and with good flow. Well done
January 11th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A call to all to unite in a brotherhood of humanity rather than let differences divide us. Nicely written in rhyme and with good flow. Well done
January 11th, 2026 03:55
Leaders
Doggerel Dave said:
Not just your land, believe me. You nailed it. But is anyone listening?
January 11th, 2026 00:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Not just your land, believe me. You nailed it. But is anyone listening?
January 11th, 2026 00:14
Realize your dreams..
Neville said:
I am for the most part quite content with my life .. the big picture is quite different though .. and I just love a good dream .. you can\'t beat em .. so I\'m write behind you on this one .. Neville 😎💛🌻⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
January 9th, 2026 04:13
Neville said:
I am for the most part quite content with my life .. the big picture is quite different though .. and I just love a good dream .. you can\'t beat em .. so I\'m write behind you on this one .. Neville 😎💛🌻⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
January 9th, 2026 04:13
Utopia
xTattooingPaperx said:
If only... Such a world you\'ve created with words that touches on the depth of compassion and mankind.
January 5th, 2026 19:57
xTattooingPaperx said:
If only... Such a world you\'ve created with words that touches on the depth of compassion and mankind.
January 5th, 2026 19:57
Realize your dreams..
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is warm and grounding. You acknowledge hardship without letting it dominate, then gently turn the reader back toward memory, dignity, and dreaming. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is warm and grounding. You acknowledge hardship without letting it dominate, then gently turn the reader back toward memory, dignity, and dreaming. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:00
Realize your dreams..
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are necessary for there to be progress. A wonderful write that encourages people to not only dream but to live them. Nicely done
January 5th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are necessary for there to be progress. A wonderful write that encourages people to not only dream but to live them. Nicely done
January 5th, 2026 03:58
Why does the moon..?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is a tender meditation on beauty, exhaustion, and constancy. You let the moon be playful, hiding and racing clouds, and also worn and mourned when she fades. That balance gives the poem its emotional pull. A lovely, thoughtful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is a tender meditation on beauty, exhaustion, and constancy. You let the moon be playful, hiding and racing clouds, and also worn and mourned when she fades. That balance gives the poem its emotional pull. A lovely, thoughtful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 26th, 2025 10:24
Why does the moon..?
sorenbarrett said:
I love the personification in this poem that in good rhyme sets forth the image of the moon. Well worded and with good flow it tells its tale. Nicely done
December 26th, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love the personification in this poem that in good rhyme sets forth the image of the moon. Well worded and with good flow it tells its tale. Nicely done
December 26th, 2025 03:30
Christmas
Teddy.15 said:
Compassion goes a long way, beautifully crafted. 🌹 Merry Christmas my dear friend. 🌹
December 22nd, 2025 04:35
Teddy.15 said:
Compassion goes a long way, beautifully crafted. 🌹 Merry Christmas my dear friend. 🌹
December 22nd, 2025 04:35
Christmas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this lands with quiet force. The contrast between comfort and conscience is handled plainly, which makes the questions linger longer than any accusation would. Very powerful and well done. Merry Christmas to you too! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 11:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this lands with quiet force. The contrast between comfort and conscience is handled plainly, which makes the questions linger longer than any accusation would. Very powerful and well done. Merry Christmas to you too! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 21st, 2025 11:27
Christmas
arqios said:
Somehow feels like it’s going to come and go in a flash this year🕊️🙏🏻
December 21st, 2025 08:13
arqios said:
Somehow feels like it’s going to come and go in a flash this year🕊️🙏🏻
December 21st, 2025 08:13
Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
Enjoy the holiday Nafisa thinking of others less fortunate shows a heart in the right place.
December 21st, 2025 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Enjoy the holiday Nafisa thinking of others less fortunate shows a heart in the right place.
December 21st, 2025 03:49
Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Nafisa, not all have a happy time but Happy Christmas to you.
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Nafisa, not all have a happy time but Happy Christmas to you.
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:29
Utopia
Paul Bell said:
Utopia is held by the rich, the crumbs for the poor.
When you actually think about it, nothing has changed over thousands of years, and look how far humans have come.
We\'re a race heading for extinction.
Mind you, it will be great for the rest of the animal kingdom.
December 18th, 2025 06:28
Paul Bell said:
Utopia is held by the rich, the crumbs for the poor.
When you actually think about it, nothing has changed over thousands of years, and look how far humans have come.
We\'re a race heading for extinction.
Mind you, it will be great for the rest of the animal kingdom.
December 18th, 2025 06:28
My thoughts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this reads with real sincerity…the way you trace thought from heart to action to legacy feels honest and deeply personal. It carries both effort and hope. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this reads with real sincerity…the way you trace thought from heart to action to legacy feels honest and deeply personal. It carries both effort and hope. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:48
My thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to fly high (or is it just fly?) with those thoughts, but I feel guilty and quickly land back on earth.
That\'s just me though, and everyone has their own parameters....
You wrestled that one into shape nicely.
December 13th, 2025 07:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to fly high (or is it just fly?) with those thoughts, but I feel guilty and quickly land back on earth.
That\'s just me though, and everyone has their own parameters....
You wrestled that one into shape nicely.
December 13th, 2025 07:37
My thoughts
arqios said:
You have spoken the heart of many with your own heart 🙏🏻🕊️
December 13th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
You have spoken the heart of many with your own heart 🙏🏻🕊️
December 13th, 2025 05:34
My thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
So well expressed in verse this need to set down for the future one\'s thoughts and feelings. Loved it
December 13th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
So well expressed in verse this need to set down for the future one\'s thoughts and feelings. Loved it
December 13th, 2025 04:23
Utopia
Neville said:
Far better than just good .. I simply love the message so well threaded throughout .. Oh\' and your authors note is perfect too .. Seasons best & wishing you all goof things, Neville
December 12th, 2025 06:30
Neville said:
Far better than just good .. I simply love the message so well threaded throughout .. Oh\' and your authors note is perfect too .. Seasons best & wishing you all goof things, Neville
December 12th, 2025 06:30
Utopia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet lifts another corner of the world you want to see…and then you invite us into the work. Thoughtful and inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet lifts another corner of the world you want to see…and then you invite us into the work. Thoughtful and inspiring. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:46
Utopia
Teddy.15 said:
My dear NafisaSB kudos a thousand times, for your compassion and kindness and your beautiful Poetic pen 💜
December 7th, 2025 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
My dear NafisaSB kudos a thousand times, for your compassion and kindness and your beautiful Poetic pen 💜
December 7th, 2025 05:55
Utopia
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded this poem presents and proposes a better world that is a long way from being realized, but one can always hope. Well written and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded this poem presents and proposes a better world that is a long way from being realized, but one can always hope. Well written and a fave
December 7th, 2025 03:51
Twilight on Sunday
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time, Sunday was a day of rest, now it\'s just a day.
The beach sounds great in contrast to freezing Britain.
December 2nd, 2025 14:25
Paul Bell said:
Once upon a time, Sunday was a day of rest, now it\'s just a day.
The beach sounds great in contrast to freezing Britain.
December 2nd, 2025 14:25
Twilight on Sunday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands with a calm clarity…the gentle pace, the bright sky, the tossing away of old heaviness. You captured the ease of a day meant for breathing again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this lands with a calm clarity…the gentle pace, the bright sky, the tossing away of old heaviness. You captured the ease of a day meant for breathing again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 30th, 2025 08:33
Twilight on Sunday
Doggerel Dave said:
You amaze - You mean exotic India ☺️reveres Sunday? Despite you wishing a happy weekend many times, for some reason I had never given it a thought...
The write even feels at home here too!
Thanks for the enlightenment.
November 30th, 2025 06:33
Doggerel Dave said:
You amaze - You mean exotic India ☺️reveres Sunday? Despite you wishing a happy weekend many times, for some reason I had never given it a thought...
The write even feels at home here too!
Thanks for the enlightenment.
November 30th, 2025 06:33
Twilight on Sunday
Friendship said:
Well written, Happy weekend to you.........Your poem reflects on the transformative power of a calm, leisurely day, particularly Sunday, as a time to relax, rejuvenate, and escape from the stresses of daily life. It highlights the contrast between the drabness of a city before the onset of leisure and the vibrancy that comes with relaxation and joy.
November 30th, 2025 05:34
Friendship said:
Well written, Happy weekend to you.........Your poem reflects on the transformative power of a calm, leisurely day, particularly Sunday, as a time to relax, rejuvenate, and escape from the stresses of daily life. It highlights the contrast between the drabness of a city before the onset of leisure and the vibrancy that comes with relaxation and joy.
November 30th, 2025 05:34
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