Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Innocent victims
Friendship said:
The poem serves as a call to action, urging readers to recognize and confront the systemic issues that lead to suffering and corruption, and to inspire a sense of responsibility towards societal improvement.
August 2nd, 2025 16:20
Friendship said:
The poem serves as a call to action, urging readers to recognize and confront the systemic issues that lead to suffering and corruption, and to inspire a sense of responsibility towards societal improvement.
August 2nd, 2025 16:20
Innocent victims
Doggerel Dave said:
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then sometimes cursorily. So thanks for the back up; where I live the issues are plain to see.
First is of course shelter, the cost of a home impossible, particularly for the young who wish to have kids. This issue has many societal deleterious effects - prevents women\'s escape from domestic violence, youngsters escaping from dysfunctional families, and so on... Child care is mostly in the hands of profit making enterprises, which it would seem do not worry about the provision of professional properly organized staff to form a culture and systems where this kind of transgression would be virtually impossible.
So government has no interest in really sorting the housing issue or providing proper resources for child care. What is to be done?
August 1st, 2025 21:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then sometimes cursorily. So thanks for the back up; where I live the issues are plain to see.
First is of course shelter, the cost of a home impossible, particularly for the young who wish to have kids. This issue has many societal deleterious effects - prevents women\'s escape from domestic violence, youngsters escaping from dysfunctional families, and so on... Child care is mostly in the hands of profit making enterprises, which it would seem do not worry about the provision of professional properly organized staff to form a culture and systems where this kind of transgression would be virtually impossible.
So government has no interest in really sorting the housing issue or providing proper resources for child care. What is to be done?
August 1st, 2025 21:17
Innocent victims
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Nafisa,
Where now the ones of mercy, the ones of compassion, even one single humanitarian politician. One can feel the anger in your poem and angry you should be. My heart goes out to these innocent victims and pray someday they find happiness in the joys of life that they truly deserve. Your poem highlights the corruption and those who suffer because of it in a powerful and heartfelt way. Thank you very much for sharing this.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 1st, 2025 05:58
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Nafisa,
Where now the ones of mercy, the ones of compassion, even one single humanitarian politician. One can feel the anger in your poem and angry you should be. My heart goes out to these innocent victims and pray someday they find happiness in the joys of life that they truly deserve. Your poem highlights the corruption and those who suffer because of it in a powerful and heartfelt way. Thank you very much for sharing this.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 1st, 2025 05:58
Innocent victims
Poetic Licence said:
We can hope that somewhere in all the darkness there is still some light for them, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
We can hope that somewhere in all the darkness there is still some light for them, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:25
Innocent victims
sorenbarrett said:
The world seems to have a shortage on compassion. Nicely worded this poem calls this point out.
August 1st, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The world seems to have a shortage on compassion. Nicely worded this poem calls this point out.
August 1st, 2025 04:31
The bubble has burst..
Neville said:
This happens so often .. Oh\' how the mighty fall .. It\'s just a shame its not that Orange one .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 01:37
Neville said:
This happens so often .. Oh\' how the mighty fall .. It\'s just a shame its not that Orange one .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 01:37
The bubble has burst..
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
How the great orators and the weight of advertising can fool the masses to elect and then regret succumbing to the big lie and the litany of broken promises. An exposition of heartless leaders and their effects on the common folk in a down to earth narrative makes this poem compulsory reading for those of us seeking change and a better way of life. Excellent, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 04:29
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
How the great orators and the weight of advertising can fool the masses to elect and then regret succumbing to the big lie and the litany of broken promises. An exposition of heartless leaders and their effects on the common folk in a down to earth narrative makes this poem compulsory reading for those of us seeking change and a better way of life. Excellent, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 04:29
The bubble has burst..
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sobering and sharply delivered poem. The rhythm fits the disillusionment well, and that final line really drove it home for me. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sobering and sharply delivered poem. The rhythm fits the disillusionment well, and that final line really drove it home for me. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:47
The bubble has burst..
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into words the great deception that has been perpetrated on so many, who knew so little. Buyers remorse is a terrible thing. How we will recover is anybody\'s guess. Thank you for speaking out!
July 25th, 2025 09:12
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into words the great deception that has been perpetrated on so many, who knew so little. Buyers remorse is a terrible thing. How we will recover is anybody\'s guess. Thank you for speaking out!
July 25th, 2025 09:12
The bubble has burst..
arqios said:
The rhymes are so delightful. What an enjoyable read. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 07:13
arqios said:
The rhymes are so delightful. What an enjoyable read. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 07:13
The bubble has burst..
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem you have expressed the sentiments of many. Does one have to amputate the leg to save the life or will the person die of shock and hemorrhage? Time will tell but for present there is certainly much pain and a lot of morphine may be needed.
July 25th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem you have expressed the sentiments of many. Does one have to amputate the leg to save the life or will the person die of shock and hemorrhage? Time will tell but for present there is certainly much pain and a lot of morphine may be needed.
July 25th, 2025 04:34
The bubble has burst..
Poetic Licence said:
The realization they made a mistake, the hen has come home to roost, as they say , enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
The realization they made a mistake, the hen has come home to roost, as they say , enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:04
Impact
Damaso said:
And now watch the flowers grow from below. Wow, how profound! What a question you\'re asking, but I think by asking it, you\'re taking on the voice of the whole world. This text shows the courage to know oneself so fragile and yet reach out to reach for the eternal. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
Damaso said:
And now watch the flowers grow from below. Wow, how profound! What a question you\'re asking, but I think by asking it, you\'re taking on the voice of the whole world. This text shows the courage to know oneself so fragile and yet reach out to reach for the eternal. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
Impact
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful poem so appealing and impressive, your poetry will be remembered as so great. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful poem so appealing and impressive, your poetry will be remembered as so great. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
Impact
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, safina,
A beautiful poem of wonder as the author ponders her legacy after the inevitable. Perhaps to be remembered as one remembers the loved ones they have lost. In a way the question also asks, how do people see me now, those nearest and dearest to me, colleagues, fellow poets etc. You have treated the subject admirably, delicately without being morbid. I like this poem, very much so and I am sure your poetry will live on and be loved long after you have flown. Much praise for this one.
Hope you have a lovely week ahead,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 09:09
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, safina,
A beautiful poem of wonder as the author ponders her legacy after the inevitable. Perhaps to be remembered as one remembers the loved ones they have lost. In a way the question also asks, how do people see me now, those nearest and dearest to me, colleagues, fellow poets etc. You have treated the subject admirably, delicately without being morbid. I like this poem, very much so and I am sure your poetry will live on and be loved long after you have flown. Much praise for this one.
Hope you have a lovely week ahead,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 09:09
Impact
Poetic Licence said:
If it least we are remembered for a good thing, thats all we can ask, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
If it least we are remembered for a good thing, thats all we can ask, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:29
Impact
sorenbarrett said:
Well written reflection upon the impact that one life may have in the ripples that follow it into the lives of others. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Well written reflection upon the impact that one life may have in the ripples that follow it into the lives of others. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 04:01
The storm
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather vivid despite the disarming simplicity unveiling scenes of destruction gradually unfolding to a devastating conclusion. And yet, the winds and waves obey the LORD, to Whom we cry for mercy and deliverance, as the Scriptures declare. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 23:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather vivid despite the disarming simplicity unveiling scenes of destruction gradually unfolding to a devastating conclusion. And yet, the winds and waves obey the LORD, to Whom we cry for mercy and deliverance, as the Scriptures declare. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 23:16
Be the first
Priya Tomar said:
Lessons to live in the world lovingly.....
Magnum opus....
July 16th, 2025 09:15
Priya Tomar said:
Lessons to live in the world lovingly.....
Magnum opus....
July 16th, 2025 09:15
The storm
Neville said:
I have lived through such storms and know for sure there are more on the horizon .. an impressive poem that I enjoyed very much my friend .. Neville
July 16th, 2025 06:35
Neville said:
I have lived through such storms and know for sure there are more on the horizon .. an impressive poem that I enjoyed very much my friend .. Neville
July 16th, 2025 06:35
The storm
Damaso said:
Terrible fate. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A superb, unparalleled story. Gripping and heartbreaking. Thank you for this; you truly leave me reeling. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:41
Damaso said:
Terrible fate. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A superb, unparalleled story. Gripping and heartbreaking. Thank you for this; you truly leave me reeling. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:41
\'C\'
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
What a wonderful creation in poetic litreture. Beautifully clever and oozing with charm and wisdom. This was an absolute joy to read - truly. Accolades galore for this one.
You are in fine health and happy, I trust,
Tony.
July 14th, 2025 07:25
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
What a wonderful creation in poetic litreture. Beautifully clever and oozing with charm and wisdom. This was an absolute joy to read - truly. Accolades galore for this one.
You are in fine health and happy, I trust,
Tony.
July 14th, 2025 07:25
The storm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless, vivid ride, my dear friend! I love how you give the storm a full arc...a furious beginning, vengeful peak, and even a worn-out exit. That personification is strong throughout, especially the final stanzas. “Laughs till they do split” is a chilling, poetic image. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless, vivid ride, my dear friend! I love how you give the storm a full arc...a furious beginning, vengeful peak, and even a worn-out exit. That personification is strong throughout, especially the final stanzas. “Laughs till they do split” is a chilling, poetic image. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:05
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