Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Walk
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed, your poem speaks to the importance of being mindful as you walk through life, and in the last three lines are words that should echo in the mind every day. Very well Written!
November 25th, 2025 15:17
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully versed, your poem speaks to the importance of being mindful as you walk through life, and in the last three lines are words that should echo in the mind every day. Very well Written!
November 25th, 2025 15:17
Walk
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
True and well said. Kudos to a great poem with thought-provoking didactics .
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 10:08
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
True and well said. Kudos to a great poem with thought-provoking didactics .
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 10:08
Walk
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the graveyard, the shadows, the aging body… then the gentler rise toward giving and grounding… the contrast makes the ending glow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 22nd, 2025 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the graveyard, the shadows, the aging body… then the gentler rise toward giving and grounding… the contrast makes the ending glow. Very well done!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 22nd, 2025 08:30
Walk
arqios said:
Meditations on life and mortality expressed through beautiful verse. Much enjoyed! 🕊️🙏
November 22nd, 2025 07:59
arqios said:
Meditations on life and mortality expressed through beautiful verse. Much enjoyed! 🕊️🙏
November 22nd, 2025 07:59
Walk
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sends its message of taking care of one\'s values and actions to make life worth while. Nicely written in good rhyme and flow it sings out to the reader.
November 22nd, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that sends its message of taking care of one\'s values and actions to make life worth while. Nicely written in good rhyme and flow it sings out to the reader.
November 22nd, 2025 03:30
The merry-go-round
thinkerbell said:
a beautiful poem about the merry go round
of life
November 16th, 2025 01:01
thinkerbell said:
a beautiful poem about the merry go round
of life
November 16th, 2025 01:01
The merry-go-round
Bella Shepard said:
I love your analogy of the merry-go-round, for it truly is. Your lovely imagery brings each season to life. Beautifully written my friend!
November 15th, 2025 12:52
Bella Shepard said:
I love your analogy of the merry-go-round, for it truly is. Your lovely imagery brings each season to life. Beautifully written my friend!
November 15th, 2025 12:52
The merry-go-round
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve certainly given rich life to seasonal change; a rolling snapshot well delivered. I cannot agree that it is always \'merry\' though...😊
November 15th, 2025 10:42
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve certainly given rich life to seasonal change; a rolling snapshot well delivered. I cannot agree that it is always \'merry\' though...😊
November 15th, 2025 10:42
The merry-go-round
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, the shifts from storm to sunlight, from fear to song, make this feel like nature’s own lullaby…a whole world breathing in cycles. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, the shifts from storm to sunlight, from fear to song, make this feel like nature’s own lullaby…a whole world breathing in cycles. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 08:05
The merry-go-round
sorenbarrett said:
There is the cycle of life presented in this poem and a beautiful cycle it is indeed.
November 15th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is the cycle of life presented in this poem and a beautiful cycle it is indeed.
November 15th, 2025 03:48
A morning note
Neville said:
You just can\'t beat a nice smile .. especially first thing .. Lovely poetry to put one on anybodies face .. Neville 😎🌻👍
November 11th, 2025 06:26
Neville said:
You just can\'t beat a nice smile .. especially first thing .. Lovely poetry to put one on anybodies face .. Neville 😎🌻👍
November 11th, 2025 06:26
A morning note
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem the simple gesture of a smile can spread to other and brighten days. Very nicely written
November 9th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem the simple gesture of a smile can spread to other and brighten days. Very nicely written
November 9th, 2025 03:45
Autumn leaves
Neville said:
What a picture you have painted here for us all to enjoy throughout what remains of our autumn and for the rest of forever .. Neville 🍁🍂🍃🍀🌿🥬🍁🍁🍃🍂🌿
November 4th, 2025 03:25
Neville said:
What a picture you have painted here for us all to enjoy throughout what remains of our autumn and for the rest of forever .. Neville 🍁🍂🍃🍀🌿🥬🍁🍁🍃🍂🌿
November 4th, 2025 03:25
Autumn leaves
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet you pay a beautiful tribute to my favorite season. The imagery takes me on a walk through the forest where I can catch a falling leave for luck. It flows gently like your babbling brook, and instills a sense of peace and contentment. Thank You!
November 3rd, 2025 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet you pay a beautiful tribute to my favorite season. The imagery takes me on a walk through the forest where I can catch a falling leave for luck. It flows gently like your babbling brook, and instills a sense of peace and contentment. Thank You!
November 3rd, 2025 13:45
Autumn leaves
coracaodacripta said:
This is straight out of a walk through the forests of deserted castles in Scotland. And your use of onomatopoeia is impressive. I don\'t think I\'ve ever enjoyed a poem about nature so much.
This poem has invited me to consider the eternity of nature. For as long as the existence of our earth, there has been the flourishing of life.
November 1st, 2025 19:42
coracaodacripta said:
This is straight out of a walk through the forests of deserted castles in Scotland. And your use of onomatopoeia is impressive. I don\'t think I\'ve ever enjoyed a poem about nature so much.
This poem has invited me to consider the eternity of nature. For as long as the existence of our earth, there has been the flourishing of life.
November 1st, 2025 19:42
Autumn leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is an elegant hymn to transience...each verse gently turning the page of a golden day. It soothes like sunlight filtered through falling leaves. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 05:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is an elegant hymn to transience...each verse gently turning the page of a golden day. It soothes like sunlight filtered through falling leaves. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 1st, 2025 05:56
Autumn leaves
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem it shows bravery in the use of so many good near rhymes along with its rhymes. There is good creativity in the wording and metaphor use in this poem and it leaves a peaceful feeling. Loved it a fave
November 1st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem it shows bravery in the use of so many good near rhymes along with its rhymes. There is good creativity in the wording and metaphor use in this poem and it leaves a peaceful feeling. Loved it a fave
November 1st, 2025 04:13
Autumn leaves
Rocky Lagou said:
Thank you for this rich and prismatic poem! Obsessed.
November 1st, 2025 01:18
Rocky Lagou said:
Thank you for this rich and prismatic poem! Obsessed.
November 1st, 2025 01:18
a rare sight
Teddy.15 said:
The last time I visited st James park in London, with my young son it was an incredible treat for him to meet the squirrels, very rare do we see them here in Italy 💜 a lovely nostalgic piece, also brought me home with this one 🌹
October 29th, 2025 10:10
Teddy.15 said:
The last time I visited st James park in London, with my young son it was an incredible treat for him to meet the squirrels, very rare do we see them here in Italy 💜 a lovely nostalgic piece, also brought me home with this one 🌹
October 29th, 2025 10:10
a rare sight
rhmn_7 said:
I also remembered some familiar memories versed in your poem. Thank you for this beautiful description!
October 26th, 2025 15:55
rhmn_7 said:
I also remembered some familiar memories versed in your poem. Thank you for this beautiful description!
October 26th, 2025 15:55
a rare sight
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem reflects on the loss of nature and childhood innocence, lamenting the decline of wildlife and the simpler pleasures of life that once brought joy. It expresses a deep nostalgia for the past and a sense of grief for the disappearing flora and fauna.
October 24th, 2025 14:09
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem reflects on the loss of nature and childhood innocence, lamenting the decline of wildlife and the simpler pleasures of life that once brought joy. It expresses a deep nostalgia for the past and a sense of grief for the disappearing flora and fauna.
October 24th, 2025 14:09
a rare sight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, gentle and mournful all at once…that vision of sparrows and swings carries both loss and love. It lingers long after reading. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, gentle and mournful all at once…that vision of sparrows and swings carries both loss and love. It lingers long after reading. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 07:45
a rare sight
Doggerel Dave said:
You have that absolutely right. In just over twenty years, as I\'ve lived in the same place, I\'ve noticed a severe decline in the number of birds which at one time graced our lawn and sung particularly after dawn. Also I once suffered regularly from intrusive mosquitos, and while a sigh of relief at their disappearance may be in order, it is also indicative ........
October 24th, 2025 06:21
Doggerel Dave said:
You have that absolutely right. In just over twenty years, as I\'ve lived in the same place, I\'ve noticed a severe decline in the number of birds which at one time graced our lawn and sung particularly after dawn. Also I once suffered regularly from intrusive mosquitos, and while a sigh of relief at their disappearance may be in order, it is also indicative ........
October 24th, 2025 06:21
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