Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Rejuvenate our land
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this carries such genuine care and urgency through it. The poem feels like a heartfelt call for responsibility without losing its sense of hope. “It’s in our own hands / The fate of all our lands” really lands as the emotional center of the piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this carries such genuine care and urgency through it. The poem feels like a heartfelt call for responsibility without losing its sense of hope. “It’s in our own hands / The fate of all our lands” really lands as the emotional center of the piece. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
Rejuvenate our land
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem emphasizes the urgent need for environmental conservation and individuals\' collective responsibility to nurture and protect nature.
May 23rd, 2026 09:02
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem emphasizes the urgent need for environmental conservation and individuals\' collective responsibility to nurture and protect nature.
May 23rd, 2026 09:02
Rejuvenate our land
sorenbarrett said:
A noble cause set in verse. Well written with great flow. If only our rivers would flow that well and be that clear. I consider myself eco friendly but I am not a fanatic in my eyes. I don\'t believe in recycling when it uses more energy than it saves, I would rather cut down on the number of people that pollute than destroy the life style of people in general. A wonderful write
May 23rd, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A noble cause set in verse. Well written with great flow. If only our rivers would flow that well and be that clear. I consider myself eco friendly but I am not a fanatic in my eyes. I don\'t believe in recycling when it uses more energy than it saves, I would rather cut down on the number of people that pollute than destroy the life style of people in general. A wonderful write
May 23rd, 2026 07:35
Paradise at mom\'s feet
Neville said:
I imagine everyone who passes this way & no matter where they are heading will hit the heart shaped icon before leaving this page .. A beautiful tribute to so many .. Neville ❤️
May 20th, 2026 01:55
Neville said:
I imagine everyone who passes this way & no matter where they are heading will hit the heart shaped icon before leaving this page .. A beautiful tribute to so many .. Neville ❤️
May 20th, 2026 01:55
Granny
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a steady kind of love here—the kind that doesn’t rush, just shows up and stays,
Soft hands, strong spine, holding the night back so a child can dream in safer ways.
May 17th, 2026 08:54
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a steady kind of love here—the kind that doesn’t rush, just shows up and stays,
Soft hands, strong spine, holding the night back so a child can dream in safer ways.
May 17th, 2026 08:54
Granny
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, I really connected with how nurturing this feels throughout. The poem understands grandparenthood not just as affection, but as protection, listening, guidance, and emotional refuge. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, I really connected with how nurturing this feels throughout. The poem understands grandparenthood not just as affection, but as protection, listening, guidance, and emotional refuge. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 08:02
Granny
sorenbarrett said:
This is a joyous piece that I can identify with as a grandfather. If I could have had grandkids without having children I would have had hundreds.
May 17th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
This is a joyous piece that I can identify with as a grandfather. If I could have had grandkids without having children I would have had hundreds.
May 17th, 2026 04:48
Granny
Neville said:
How very endearing & sweet .. this also applies to us Grampy\'s 😎💛🌻👍
May 17th, 2026 01:54
Neville said:
How very endearing & sweet .. this also applies to us Grampy\'s 😎💛🌻👍
May 17th, 2026 01:54
Paradise at mom\'s feet
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a profound truth in the idea that to see the mother is to see the daughter, I believe.
What to say to all the mothers out there who don\'t happen to be beautiful in mind or body, and really should not have produced a daughter at all?
May 9th, 2026 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a profound truth in the idea that to see the mother is to see the daughter, I believe.
What to say to all the mothers out there who don\'t happen to be beautiful in mind or body, and really should not have produced a daughter at all?
May 9th, 2026 20:43
Paradise at mom\'s feet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is such a loving and heartfelt tribute…you can feel not only the grief here, but the deep gratitude for the kind of person your mother was and the values she planted in those around her. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is such a loving and heartfelt tribute…you can feel not only the grief here, but the deep gratitude for the kind of person your mother was and the values she planted in those around her. Really moving work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:58
Paradise at mom\'s feet
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and strong message of a mother\'s duty well done. A fave
May 9th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful and strong message of a mother\'s duty well done. A fave
May 9th, 2026 07:15
Sunset by the sea
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a soft myth in this—sun as a tired traveler who still knows how to love the world on the way out.
You stretch the scene beautifully, but a few lines could cut sharper to match the strength of your imagery.
May 5th, 2026 07:31
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a soft myth in this—sun as a tired traveler who still knows how to love the world on the way out.
You stretch the scene beautifully, but a few lines could cut sharper to match the strength of your imagery.
May 5th, 2026 07:31
Sunset by the sea
Neville said:
How beautiful is that .. truly my cup of tea ma\'am .. Neville 😎🌻👍
May 5th, 2026 02:31
Neville said:
How beautiful is that .. truly my cup of tea ma\'am .. Neville 😎🌻👍
May 5th, 2026 02:31
Sunset by the sea
arqios said:
There is such an inherent potential for peace in sunsets🕊️🙏🏻 🌅
May 1st, 2026 18:21
arqios said:
There is such an inherent potential for peace in sunsets🕊️🙏🏻 🌅
May 1st, 2026 18:21
Nobel peace prize
Waiting for Silence said:
Right questions raised. Good one Safina
May 1st, 2026 12:15
Waiting for Silence said:
Right questions raised. Good one Safina
May 1st, 2026 12:15
Sunset by the sea
Doggerel Dave said:
Tranquility - the point when all seems right with world. Well savoured, Safina.
May 1st, 2026 08:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Tranquility - the point when all seems right with world. Well savoured, Safina.
May 1st, 2026 08:28
Sunset by the sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me…there’s a gentle, steady calm running through it that feels lived and real. That image of the sun dipping into the sea, almost playfully, carries both joy and release…like the day quietly letting go. And that closing moment of stillness…you can feel it settle. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me…there’s a gentle, steady calm running through it that feels lived and real. That image of the sun dipping into the sea, almost playfully, carries both joy and release…like the day quietly letting go. And that closing moment of stillness…you can feel it settle. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:36
Sunset by the sea
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the sun setting over the sea, the activities of dolphins, and the speaker’s contemplative experience as they enjoy a moment of peace with a cup of tea.
May 1st, 2026 04:29
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the sun setting over the sea, the activities of dolphins, and the speaker’s contemplative experience as they enjoy a moment of peace with a cup of tea.
May 1st, 2026 04:29
Sunset by the sea
sorenbarrett said:
Peaceful and calming a place on earth and in mind. Well written
May 1st, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Peaceful and calming a place on earth and in mind. Well written
May 1st, 2026 03:51
Sunset by the sea
Teddy.15 said:
Breathtaking imagery that simply brings serenity 🌹
May 1st, 2026 02:54
Teddy.15 said:
Breathtaking imagery that simply brings serenity 🌹
May 1st, 2026 02:54
Spread peace
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully written, let\'s have peace throughout the world. 🕊️
April 28th, 2026 13:51
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully written, let\'s have peace throughout the world. 🕊️
April 28th, 2026 13:51
Spread peace
Thomas W Case said:
Clear and earnest—you’re speaking directly into collective anxiety, naming the sense of fracture without softening it.
The grit is in that final turn toward responsibility: not surrendering to the bleakness, but insisting that agency still exists, even when peace feels distant.
April 28th, 2026 09:09
Thomas W Case said:
Clear and earnest—you’re speaking directly into collective anxiety, naming the sense of fracture without softening it.
The grit is in that final turn toward responsibility: not surrendering to the bleakness, but insisting that agency still exists, even when peace feels distant.
April 28th, 2026 09:09
Spread peace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, there’s a real heaviness running through this…the fear, the division, all of it…yet you still bring it back to a choice, a voice that can be raised. That balance between weight and hope lands strong. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, there’s a real heaviness running through this…the fear, the division, all of it…yet you still bring it back to a choice, a voice that can be raised. That balance between weight and hope lands strong. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:02
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