Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
What is love
sorenbarrett said:
Many of loves qualities listed in this poem and they bring to mind many more. Well said in verse with good flow that carries the reader onward
October 24th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Many of loves qualities listed in this poem and they bring to mind many more. Well said in verse with good flow that carries the reader onward
October 24th, 2024 05:21
The leaves
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this poem introduces a metaphor or girls and leaves as well. Love the rhyme and the flow of the poem it dances like the leaves in a breeze.
October 24th, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
So well written this poem introduces a metaphor or girls and leaves as well. Love the rhyme and the flow of the poem it dances like the leaves in a breeze.
October 24th, 2024 05:12
Fascinating colors
Neville said:
Lobsters are only red when they are dead, a bit like old poets books really .. A fun read indeed, my literary friend .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 00:34
Neville said:
Lobsters are only red when they are dead, a bit like old poets books really .. A fun read indeed, my literary friend .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 00:34
Emancipation
Neville said:
I sincerely hope that many will come to this place and worship the words you have laid here before them .. it would be a crying shame if your message was not heard, and understood by the masses .. Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:32
Neville said:
I sincerely hope that many will come to this place and worship the words you have laid here before them .. it would be a crying shame if your message was not heard, and understood by the masses .. Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:32
3 parts of a man
Neville said:
This is a very ambitious post and I think under the circumstances you have excelled and probably achieved your objectives .. kindest of regards, Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:28
Neville said:
This is a very ambitious post and I think under the circumstances you have excelled and probably achieved your objectives .. kindest of regards, Neville
October 21st, 2024 03:28
3 parts of a man
sorenbarrett said:
A great insight into the nature of the human being who like some animals, swells up to appear bigger than he is and sometimes to attract a mate. The three forms you presented are an interesting breakdown of how people have false presentations nicely done
October 20th, 2024 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great insight into the nature of the human being who like some animals, swells up to appear bigger than he is and sometimes to attract a mate. The three forms you presented are an interesting breakdown of how people have false presentations nicely done
October 20th, 2024 05:42
Diplomacy
sorenbarrett said:
I agree diplomats are a part of government which I find a necessary evil in a world of too many people. I can hear the anger and revultion in this poem and it rings all the way through. It is powerful and sounds its bell. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I agree diplomats are a part of government which I find a necessary evil in a world of too many people. I can hear the anger and revultion in this poem and it rings all the way through. It is powerful and sounds its bell. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 05:05
\"U\" AND \"I\"
Neville said:
On a grey day like today, these words of yours brought a little ray of sunshine with them .. IOU for the gift of that .. Neville
October 19th, 2024 02:13
Neville said:
On a grey day like today, these words of yours brought a little ray of sunshine with them .. IOU for the gift of that .. Neville
October 19th, 2024 02:13
Emancipation
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Fascinating colors
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
Emancipation
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
\"U\" AND \"I\"
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
Twain will meet..
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
Twain will meet..
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Fascinating colors
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Fascinating colors
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
\'Eyes\'
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
On war..
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
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