Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
A complaint
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me. I love how you give the crows a voice, only to reveal that the real question isn’t about the birds at all…it’s about us. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me. I love how you give the crows a voice, only to reveal that the real question isn’t about the birds at all…it’s about us. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:07
A complaint
soheil khodaparasti said:
Violence is part of a broader pattern of human behavior, and the irony lies in the fact that some people advocate compassion in one context while accepting cruelty in another.
July 4th, 2026 08:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
Violence is part of a broader pattern of human behavior, and the irony lies in the fact that some people advocate compassion in one context while accepting cruelty in another.
July 4th, 2026 08:26
A complaint
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked this very much, Nafisa. In plain but poetic terms it calls out the depravity involved in the wilful killing of another living being.
Great moral authority.
July 4th, 2026 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
I liked this very much, Nafisa. In plain but poetic terms it calls out the depravity involved in the wilful killing of another living being.
Great moral authority.
July 4th, 2026 07:36
A complaint
sorenbarrett said:
A clever poem sending a powerful message about mankind and its disregard for life. Nicely rhymed it is a fave
July 4th, 2026 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A clever poem sending a powerful message about mankind and its disregard for life. Nicely rhymed it is a fave
July 4th, 2026 07:18
A complaint
Paul Bell said:
Man, should come with a health warning.
Never understood the hunting game, killing an animal for a trophy, what a waste.
Do like it when the animal kills the hunter though.
July 4th, 2026 03:31
Paul Bell said:
Man, should come with a health warning.
Never understood the hunting game, killing an animal for a trophy, what a waste.
Do like it when the animal kills the hunter though.
July 4th, 2026 03:31
Doll of wax
Teddy.15 said:
lol some serious reflection I love the end it\'s brilliant 🌹
July 1st, 2026 12:08
Teddy.15 said:
lol some serious reflection I love the end it\'s brilliant 🌹
July 1st, 2026 12:08
Doll of wax
Doggerel Dave said:
I am glad you were finally able to say \'enough\' and make the command work Safina, otherwise a sleepless night awaited. An elusive quest for truth which should never be undertaken at bedtime. Perhaps that was why I was taught as a child familiar prayers to say in bed before I slept. Never worked during and after adolescence...\'enough \' the watchword.
June 26th, 2026 20:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I am glad you were finally able to say \'enough\' and make the command work Safina, otherwise a sleepless night awaited. An elusive quest for truth which should never be undertaken at bedtime. Perhaps that was why I was taught as a child familiar prayers to say in bed before I slept. Never worked during and after adolescence...\'enough \' the watchword.
June 26th, 2026 20:00
Doll of wax
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is a thoughtful and beautifully flowing piece. The wandering questions, the circling thoughts, and the eventual surrender into stillness all come together so naturally. It feels both introspective and deeply human. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is a thoughtful and beautifully flowing piece. The wandering questions, the circling thoughts, and the eventual surrender into stillness all come together so naturally. It feels both introspective and deeply human. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:33
Doll of wax
sorenbarrett said:
This was a poetic ride on the back of words. Well done
June 26th, 2026 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
This was a poetic ride on the back of words. Well done
June 26th, 2026 07:39
Cascading water falls...
Neville said:
Exquisite .. you have managed to capture so many details & incorporate them all so perfectly .. Reads like a soothing balm feels .. Neville 😎🌻👍
June 20th, 2026 04:07
Neville said:
Exquisite .. you have managed to capture so many details & incorporate them all so perfectly .. Reads like a soothing balm feels .. Neville 😎🌻👍
June 20th, 2026 04:07
Cascading water falls...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me. There is such joy and vitality running through this piece...it feels like standing before a waterfall and simply letting its energy wash everything else away. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me. There is such joy and vitality running through this piece...it feels like standing before a waterfall and simply letting its energy wash everything else away. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 14th, 2026 07:32
Cascading water falls...
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nature certainly soothes, enjoyed read
June 13th, 2026 10:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nature certainly soothes, enjoyed read
June 13th, 2026 10:48
Cascading water falls...
arqios said:
Having lived by the water many, many years of my life brings a keen appreciation for this beautiful poem. 🙏🕊️
June 13th, 2026 07:32
arqios said:
Having lived by the water many, many years of my life brings a keen appreciation for this beautiful poem. 🙏🕊️
June 13th, 2026 07:32
Cascading water falls...
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem is reminiscent of Romantic poetry, particularly that of Wordsworth, in which the human subject feels a deep affinity with nature. A significant aspect of your poem is that nature’s intensity, reflecting human emotional states, leads to catharsis, emotional cleansing, psychological relief, and renewal.
June 13th, 2026 07:09
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem is reminiscent of Romantic poetry, particularly that of Wordsworth, in which the human subject feels a deep affinity with nature. A significant aspect of your poem is that nature’s intensity, reflecting human emotional states, leads to catharsis, emotional cleansing, psychological relief, and renewal.
June 13th, 2026 07:09
Cascading water falls...
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there. There is something magical as well as musical about water in its flight. A lovely write
June 13th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there. There is something magical as well as musical about water in its flight. A lovely write
June 13th, 2026 06:45
Strangers
Jeannie said:
So true, I have made several friendships on social media.
June 12th, 2026 14:28
Jeannie said:
So true, I have made several friendships on social media.
June 12th, 2026 14:28
An ordinary farm day
Teddy.15 said:
The perfect simplicity of having a day at a farm, you brought back many memories of my life when I was young, I used to take the children I worked with to the farm, we have many wonderful farms in the UK 🌹
June 9th, 2026 04:42
Teddy.15 said:
The perfect simplicity of having a day at a farm, you brought back many memories of my life when I was young, I used to take the children I worked with to the farm, we have many wonderful farms in the UK 🌹
June 9th, 2026 04:42
Strangers
Neville said:
This is so cool .. yes, relative or literary strangers maybe but a family nevertheless .. Neville 😎🌻👍
June 7th, 2026 02:10
Neville said:
This is so cool .. yes, relative or literary strangers maybe but a family nevertheless .. Neville 😎🌻👍
June 7th, 2026 02:10
An ordinary farm day
Neville said:
This reads write up my alley .. or should I say its just my cuppa tea .. Neville
June 7th, 2026 02:03
Neville said:
This reads write up my alley .. or should I say its just my cuppa tea .. Neville
June 7th, 2026 02:03
An ordinary farm day
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, what a charming vista you\'ve delightfully offered up in a trice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and such a note of realism I nearly swoon in the indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 6th, 2026 11:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, what a charming vista you\'ve delightfully offered up in a trice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and such a note of realism I nearly swoon in the indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 6th, 2026 11:11
An ordinary farm day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm life so well...animals resting, small disturbances coming and going, and the day carrying on regardless. What I enjoyed most is the sense of contentment that settles over the entire piece. It feels like a warm snapshot of an ordinary day made memorable through observation. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm life so well...animals resting, small disturbances coming and going, and the day carrying on regardless. What I enjoyed most is the sense of contentment that settles over the entire piece. It feels like a warm snapshot of an ordinary day made memorable through observation. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:26
An ordinary farm day
sorenbarrett said:
A lazy setting gives a nice appeal to this poem of farm life and its slower pace. It feels very much at home and far from the world buzz. Nicely composed in rhyme it moves slowly in its pace replicating the image. Well done
June 6th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
A lazy setting gives a nice appeal to this poem of farm life and its slower pace. It feels very much at home and far from the world buzz. Nicely composed in rhyme it moves slowly in its pace replicating the image. Well done
June 6th, 2026 03:40
An ordinary farm day
soheil khodaparasti said:
The rural calm, vividly evoked through visual and auditory imagery, is briefly interrupted by tension before returning to peace. This pattern invites the reader to associate the farm scene with human life, which is likewise subject to intrusions in the form of threats, dangers, and conflicts. Although such disturbances may jeopardize peace and tranquility, they cannot ultimately destroy them, for true peace comes from within—from belonging to a settled community and accepting the rhythms of everyday existence.
The outsiders and intruders in the poem can be seen as symbols of the disruptive forces that enter our lives. Their discontent and dissatisfaction are the very forces that drive their intrusion. In contrast to the contentment of the farm\'s inhabitants, the tramps are restless, alienated, and resentful, highlighting the difference between inner fulfillment and perpetual dissatisfaction.
June 6th, 2026 01:19
soheil khodaparasti said:
The rural calm, vividly evoked through visual and auditory imagery, is briefly interrupted by tension before returning to peace. This pattern invites the reader to associate the farm scene with human life, which is likewise subject to intrusions in the form of threats, dangers, and conflicts. Although such disturbances may jeopardize peace and tranquility, they cannot ultimately destroy them, for true peace comes from within—from belonging to a settled community and accepting the rhythms of everyday existence.
The outsiders and intruders in the poem can be seen as symbols of the disruptive forces that enter our lives. Their discontent and dissatisfaction are the very forces that drive their intrusion. In contrast to the contentment of the farm\'s inhabitants, the tramps are restless, alienated, and resentful, highlighting the difference between inner fulfillment and perpetual dissatisfaction.
June 6th, 2026 01:19
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