Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Cascading water falls...
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nature certainly soothes, enjoyed read
June 13th, 2026 10:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nature certainly soothes, enjoyed read
June 13th, 2026 10:48
Cascading water falls...
arqios said:
Having lived by the water many, many years of my life brings a keen appreciation for this beautiful poem. 🙏🕊️
June 13th, 2026 07:32
arqios said:
Having lived by the water many, many years of my life brings a keen appreciation for this beautiful poem. 🙏🕊️
June 13th, 2026 07:32
Cascading water falls...
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem is reminiscent of Romantic poetry, particularly that of Wordsworth, in which the human subject feels a deep affinity with nature. A significant aspect of your poem is that nature’s intensity, reflecting human emotional states, leads to catharsis, emotional cleansing, psychological relief, and renewal.
June 13th, 2026 07:09
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem is reminiscent of Romantic poetry, particularly that of Wordsworth, in which the human subject feels a deep affinity with nature. A significant aspect of your poem is that nature’s intensity, reflecting human emotional states, leads to catharsis, emotional cleansing, psychological relief, and renewal.
June 13th, 2026 07:09
Cascading water falls...
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there. There is something magical as well as musical about water in its flight. A lovely write
June 13th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there. There is something magical as well as musical about water in its flight. A lovely write
June 13th, 2026 06:45
Strangers
Jeannie said:
So true, I have made several friendships on social media.
June 12th, 2026 14:28
Jeannie said:
So true, I have made several friendships on social media.
June 12th, 2026 14:28
An ordinary farm day
Teddy.15 said:
The perfect simplicity of having a day at a farm, you brought back many memories of my life when I was young, I used to take the children I worked with to the farm, we have many wonderful farms in the UK 🌹
June 9th, 2026 04:42
Teddy.15 said:
The perfect simplicity of having a day at a farm, you brought back many memories of my life when I was young, I used to take the children I worked with to the farm, we have many wonderful farms in the UK 🌹
June 9th, 2026 04:42
Strangers
Neville said:
This is so cool .. yes, relative or literary strangers maybe but a family nevertheless .. Neville 😎🌻👍
June 7th, 2026 02:10
Neville said:
This is so cool .. yes, relative or literary strangers maybe but a family nevertheless .. Neville 😎🌻👍
June 7th, 2026 02:10
An ordinary farm day
Neville said:
This reads write up my alley .. or should I say its just my cuppa tea .. Neville
June 7th, 2026 02:03
Neville said:
This reads write up my alley .. or should I say its just my cuppa tea .. Neville
June 7th, 2026 02:03
An ordinary farm day
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, what a charming vista you\'ve delightfully offered up in a trice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and such a note of realism I nearly swoon in the indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 6th, 2026 11:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, what a charming vista you\'ve delightfully offered up in a trice. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, a haunting poignancy, and such a note of realism I nearly swoon in the indulgence. Thank you so very much for sharing.
June 6th, 2026 11:11
An ordinary farm day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm life so well...animals resting, small disturbances coming and going, and the day carrying on regardless. What I enjoyed most is the sense of contentment that settles over the entire piece. It feels like a warm snapshot of an ordinary day made memorable through observation. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really made me smile. You capture the easy rhythm of farm life so well...animals resting, small disturbances coming and going, and the day carrying on regardless. What I enjoyed most is the sense of contentment that settles over the entire piece. It feels like a warm snapshot of an ordinary day made memorable through observation. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:26
An ordinary farm day
sorenbarrett said:
A lazy setting gives a nice appeal to this poem of farm life and its slower pace. It feels very much at home and far from the world buzz. Nicely composed in rhyme it moves slowly in its pace replicating the image. Well done
June 6th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
A lazy setting gives a nice appeal to this poem of farm life and its slower pace. It feels very much at home and far from the world buzz. Nicely composed in rhyme it moves slowly in its pace replicating the image. Well done
June 6th, 2026 03:40
An ordinary farm day
soheil khodaparasti said:
The rural calm, vividly evoked through visual and auditory imagery, is briefly interrupted by tension before returning to peace. This pattern invites the reader to associate the farm scene with human life, which is likewise subject to intrusions in the form of threats, dangers, and conflicts. Although such disturbances may jeopardize peace and tranquility, they cannot ultimately destroy them, for true peace comes from within—from belonging to a settled community and accepting the rhythms of everyday existence.
The outsiders and intruders in the poem can be seen as symbols of the disruptive forces that enter our lives. Their discontent and dissatisfaction are the very forces that drive their intrusion. In contrast to the contentment of the farm\'s inhabitants, the tramps are restless, alienated, and resentful, highlighting the difference between inner fulfillment and perpetual dissatisfaction.
June 6th, 2026 01:19
soheil khodaparasti said:
The rural calm, vividly evoked through visual and auditory imagery, is briefly interrupted by tension before returning to peace. This pattern invites the reader to associate the farm scene with human life, which is likewise subject to intrusions in the form of threats, dangers, and conflicts. Although such disturbances may jeopardize peace and tranquility, they cannot ultimately destroy them, for true peace comes from within—from belonging to a settled community and accepting the rhythms of everyday existence.
The outsiders and intruders in the poem can be seen as symbols of the disruptive forces that enter our lives. Their discontent and dissatisfaction are the very forces that drive their intrusion. In contrast to the contentment of the farm\'s inhabitants, the tramps are restless, alienated, and resentful, highlighting the difference between inner fulfillment and perpetual dissatisfaction.
June 6th, 2026 01:19
Rejuvenate our land
Samprikta Paul said:
Trust me, this piece must be added in school going students\' literature book. That\'s where the actual sapling gonna grow.
June 6th, 2026 00:50
Samprikta Paul said:
Trust me, this piece must be added in school going students\' literature book. That\'s where the actual sapling gonna grow.
June 6th, 2026 00:50
An ordinary farm day
Mutley Ravishes said:
Cursing themselves most of all! Oh well, who knows how they`ve been damaged in their lifetimes?
The poem was a nice, bucolic read. At least their was no farmer shouting \"Get off my land!\" in it!
June 6th, 2026 00:04
Mutley Ravishes said:
Cursing themselves most of all! Oh well, who knows how they`ve been damaged in their lifetimes?
The poem was a nice, bucolic read. At least their was no farmer shouting \"Get off my land!\" in it!
June 6th, 2026 00:04
Strangers
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful, and yes I feel I personally know quite a few of my friends online even if we\'ve never known eachother, I guess it\'s the mannerisms through speech, which is why we write in the first place, to share our imagery and hopes and dreams and fears together. This one deserves a nobel nomination it\'s gorgeous and uplifting. 🌹
June 4th, 2026 13:50
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful, and yes I feel I personally know quite a few of my friends online even if we\'ve never known eachother, I guess it\'s the mannerisms through speech, which is why we write in the first place, to share our imagery and hopes and dreams and fears together. This one deserves a nobel nomination it\'s gorgeous and uplifting. 🌹
June 4th, 2026 13:50
Strangers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really touched me. There’s such warmth and gratitude running through every line. It feels like a celebration of the connections we build here...people separated by miles and circumstances, yet somehow gathered around the same fire of words. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really touched me. There’s such warmth and gratitude running through every line. It feels like a celebration of the connections we build here...people separated by miles and circumstances, yet somehow gathered around the same fire of words. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:38
Strangers
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes most real as I have received feedback from so many over the past years and now feel such a part of my life. Well written in good rhyme it is a fave
May 31st, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes most real as I have received feedback from so many over the past years and now feel such a part of my life. Well written in good rhyme it is a fave
May 31st, 2026 04:00
Strangers
rhmn_7 said:
Poetry, art, music are definitely universal languages which helps as meet and understand each other. Nice poem!
May 31st, 2026 01:46
rhmn_7 said:
Poetry, art, music are definitely universal languages which helps as meet and understand each other. Nice poem!
May 31st, 2026 01:46
Strangers
soheil khodaparasti said:
A lovely reflection on how poetry connects hearts across distance. Warm, heartfelt, and uplifting.
May 31st, 2026 00:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
A lovely reflection on how poetry connects hearts across distance. Warm, heartfelt, and uplifting.
May 31st, 2026 00:15
Rejuvenate our land
Paul Bell said:
Look after nature and nature will look after you.
Sadly nature is abused on earth, and when you abuse such a power, can you wonder how she reacts the way she does.
May 27th, 2026 02:46
Paul Bell said:
Look after nature and nature will look after you.
Sadly nature is abused on earth, and when you abuse such a power, can you wonder how she reacts the way she does.
May 27th, 2026 02:46
Rejuvenate our land
Neville said:
Very timely, very apt and very well stated .. Neville 🌻🌻🌻🐧💛👍
May 27th, 2026 02:14
Neville said:
Very timely, very apt and very well stated .. Neville 🌻🌻🌻🐧💛👍
May 27th, 2026 02:14
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