Comments received on poems by NafisaSB



Disillusioned
mirrorball said:

woww


October 13th, 2025 10:34

Genocide
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Wealth and power are great bedfellows. We choose to call them divine or devil depending on circumstances

October 12th, 2025 08:30

Genocide
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Nafisa, maybe one day love and peace will come to all the world.

Andy

October 12th, 2025 01:09

Genocide
Doggerel Dave said:

You\'ve really got up close and personal to the state of the world and humanity, haven\'t You ? Great write Nafisa.

October 11th, 2025 16:25

Genocide
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Safina, this is both lament and mirror...each line demanding we look closer, care deeper. Youโ€™ve captured humanityโ€™s fracture with raw clarity and heart. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 11th, 2025 08:22

Genocide
Neville said:



Yes absolutely .. sadly but oh so truly poemed .. I have a feeling these words were just dying to be set free and spoken out loud .. Neville

October 11th, 2025 07:39

Genocide
Paul Bell said:

When the free press is not allowed into countries to report, you just know genocide is happening.
Sadly, the countries that should be shouting appear to be quiet.

October 11th, 2025 06:14

Genocide
Poetic Licence said:

A sad and haunting write of what is happening in front off our eyes, heartbreaking to watch any killing so visibly displayed, well written

October 11th, 2025 04:20

Genocide
sorenbarrett said:

This has happened several times in the past and probably will happen again and again. There is fear in this poem. Nicely done

October 11th, 2025 03:39

Grounded
Doggerel Dave said:

A set of ideas well rounded in great poetic form. I like both the simplicity and the depth of your thoughts..

October 5th, 2025 17:09

Grounded
sorenbarrett said:

I love how this poem begins with literal flight and gradually progresses to the mental flight that occurs in imagination. Nicely done

October 5th, 2025 04:03

On life
Soman Ragavan said:

Peeling onion makes your eyes run... As happens sometimes in life...

October 1st, 2025 09:51

Act
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. A fine motivating write. Thanks for sharing.

September 29th, 2025 04:44

Act
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This comes across as sharp and motivating. No fluff, just a call to act, to stop waiting and move. Strong piece, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 27th, 2025 07:55

Act
sorenbarrett said:

A motivational poem that is meant to inspire people to take action and not just dream and fantasize. Nicely written

September 27th, 2025 07:38

Act
NafisaSB said:

the time to act is - now

September 27th, 2025 07:23

When will it end?
Thomas W Case said:

Superb

September 20th, 2025 23:08

When will it end?
Soman Ragavan said:

Leaders will be forgotten but poets live for eternity through their writings. Happy birthday on 19 September !

September 20th, 2025 20:55

When will it end?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Safina, dear friend, this is raw and urgent. The broken promises, bleeding hearts, and trembling spirits land heavyโ€ฆa cry that canโ€™t be ignored. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 20th, 2025 19:15

When will it end?
Teddy.15 said:

Dear NafisaSB, your compassion and empathy, for all that\'s wrong with the world is beautifully written into this poem, your rhyming is flawless, I can truly agree with your observations on it all, it is a mess all of it. ๐ŸŒน Kudos my dear friend.

September 20th, 2025 16:21

When will it end?
Friendship said:

This poem expresses a deep sense of despair and frustration over the state of the world, particularly in relation to violence, suffering, and the moral failures of leaders. It questions the ethics of power and the impact of greed and madness on innocent lives.

September 20th, 2025 15:08

When will it end?
Doggerel Dave said:

Wish I knew, Nafisa. Very well stated, with the only question one could possibly ask at your conclusion.

September 20th, 2025 03:04

Do not give advice..
Bella Shepard said:

I love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem, and you give very sound advice. Good write!

September 15th, 2025 07:57

Do not give advice..
arqios said:

Unsolicited advice tends to backfire not so much for the volatility of the the advice themselves. But there we go๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

September 15th, 2025 06:04

Do not give advice..
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice about not giving advice Nafisa the irony in this is magnificent. All done in rhyme as well

September 15th, 2025 04:35

Do not give advice..
Doggerel Dave said:

Bless your cotton socks for giving me a good laugh, Nafisa๐Ÿ‘โ˜บ๏ธ

September 15th, 2025 01:18

Do not give advice..
Teddy.15 said:

Hilarious in irony, dearest NafisaSB you couldn\'t imagine how much trouble I get into for loving others. A wonderful if I may say, inside out piece, brilliant and very creative. ๐ŸŒน

September 14th, 2025 23:40

On life
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

September 13th, 2025 19:21

Today
jenny.g said:

Such a beautiful poem, so full of love!

September 11th, 2025 13:20

On life
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window into how life unfolds...and the way you close it leaves the whole piece shining with joy. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ› Well done.

September 7th, 2025 18:26

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