Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Sunset by the sea
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a soft myth in this—sun as a tired traveler who still knows how to love the world on the way out.
You stretch the scene beautifully, but a few lines could cut sharper to match the strength of your imagery.
May 5th, 2026 07:31
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a soft myth in this—sun as a tired traveler who still knows how to love the world on the way out.
You stretch the scene beautifully, but a few lines could cut sharper to match the strength of your imagery.
May 5th, 2026 07:31
Sunset by the sea
Neville said:
How beautiful is that .. truly my cup of tea ma\'am .. Neville 😎🌻👍
May 5th, 2026 02:31
Neville said:
How beautiful is that .. truly my cup of tea ma\'am .. Neville 😎🌻👍
May 5th, 2026 02:31
Sunset by the sea
arqios said:
There is such an inherent potential for peace in sunsets🕊️🙏🏻 🌅
May 1st, 2026 18:21
arqios said:
There is such an inherent potential for peace in sunsets🕊️🙏🏻 🌅
May 1st, 2026 18:21
Nobel peace prize
Waiting for Silence said:
Right questions raised. Good one Safina
May 1st, 2026 12:15
Waiting for Silence said:
Right questions raised. Good one Safina
May 1st, 2026 12:15
Sunset by the sea
Doggerel Dave said:
Tranquility - the point when all seems right with world. Well savoured, Safina.
May 1st, 2026 08:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Tranquility - the point when all seems right with world. Well savoured, Safina.
May 1st, 2026 08:28
Sunset by the sea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me…there’s a gentle, steady calm running through it that feels lived and real. That image of the sun dipping into the sea, almost playfully, carries both joy and release…like the day quietly letting go. And that closing moment of stillness…you can feel it settle. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this really moved me…there’s a gentle, steady calm running through it that feels lived and real. That image of the sun dipping into the sea, almost playfully, carries both joy and release…like the day quietly letting go. And that closing moment of stillness…you can feel it settle. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:36
Sunset by the sea
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the sun setting over the sea, the activities of dolphins, and the speaker’s contemplative experience as they enjoy a moment of peace with a cup of tea.
May 1st, 2026 04:29
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the sun setting over the sea, the activities of dolphins, and the speaker’s contemplative experience as they enjoy a moment of peace with a cup of tea.
May 1st, 2026 04:29
Sunset by the sea
sorenbarrett said:
Peaceful and calming a place on earth and in mind. Well written
May 1st, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Peaceful and calming a place on earth and in mind. Well written
May 1st, 2026 03:51
Sunset by the sea
Teddy.15 said:
Breathtaking imagery that simply brings serenity 🌹
May 1st, 2026 02:54
Teddy.15 said:
Breathtaking imagery that simply brings serenity 🌹
May 1st, 2026 02:54
Spread peace
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully written, let\'s have peace throughout the world. 🕊️
April 28th, 2026 13:51
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully written, let\'s have peace throughout the world. 🕊️
April 28th, 2026 13:51
Spread peace
Thomas W Case said:
Clear and earnest—you’re speaking directly into collective anxiety, naming the sense of fracture without softening it.
The grit is in that final turn toward responsibility: not surrendering to the bleakness, but insisting that agency still exists, even when peace feels distant.
April 28th, 2026 09:09
Thomas W Case said:
Clear and earnest—you’re speaking directly into collective anxiety, naming the sense of fracture without softening it.
The grit is in that final turn toward responsibility: not surrendering to the bleakness, but insisting that agency still exists, even when peace feels distant.
April 28th, 2026 09:09
Spread peace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, there’s a real heaviness running through this…the fear, the division, all of it…yet you still bring it back to a choice, a voice that can be raised. That balance between weight and hope lands strong. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, there’s a real heaviness running through this…the fear, the division, all of it…yet you still bring it back to a choice, a voice that can be raised. That balance between weight and hope lands strong. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:02
Spread peace
sorenbarrett said:
A call for peace in a beautifully rhymed and metered poem well done
April 25th, 2026 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
A call for peace in a beautifully rhymed and metered poem well done
April 25th, 2026 10:22
Spread peace
Katie B. said:
May we come to peace. Couldn\'t agree with you more.
April 25th, 2026 07:55
Katie B. said:
May we come to peace. Couldn\'t agree with you more.
April 25th, 2026 07:55
Spread peace
Doggerel Dave said:
A call to arms - the arms of peace. Couldn\'t be more timely, Safina.
April 25th, 2026 06:53
Doggerel Dave said:
A call to arms - the arms of peace. Couldn\'t be more timely, Safina.
April 25th, 2026 06:53
On relationships
Thomas W Case said:
Direct, instructive, and steady—this reads like advice carved out of hard experience rather than theory.
The grit is in its simplicity: pain acknowledged, then pushed toward motion instead of collapse, even if it still echoes underneath.
April 21st, 2026 08:31
Thomas W Case said:
Direct, instructive, and steady—this reads like advice carved out of hard experience rather than theory.
The grit is in its simplicity: pain acknowledged, then pushed toward motion instead of collapse, even if it still echoes underneath.
April 21st, 2026 08:31
On relationships
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this hit me hard…there’s a steady, guiding voice here that feels like it’s trying to pull someone back from the edge. It carries both the sting and the resolve at the same time…like hard-earned wisdom speaking plainly. Strong piece, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this hit me hard…there’s a steady, guiding voice here that feels like it’s trying to pull someone back from the edge. It carries both the sting and the resolve at the same time…like hard-earned wisdom speaking plainly. Strong piece, my dear friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:05
On relationships
arqios said:
Superbly encouraging withing pandering. Most enjoyable. 🕊️🙏
April 19th, 2026 06:04
arqios said:
Superbly encouraging withing pandering. Most enjoyable. 🕊️🙏
April 19th, 2026 06:04
On relationships
sorenbarrett said:
Advise given in poetic rhyme. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Advise given in poetic rhyme. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 04:23
Hey snooty lady..
Doggerel Dave said:
Enough to make you antisocial if you have too many like that in a closed community..... Sure she\'s not just shy??
April 12th, 2026 00:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Enough to make you antisocial if you have too many like that in a closed community..... Sure she\'s not just shy??
April 12th, 2026 00:17
Hey snooty lady..
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this comes through strong and direct…calling out that gap between how someone presents themselves and how they actually treat people. There’s real frustration behind it, but also a push toward something better…to actually care, not just appear to. That balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this comes through strong and direct…calling out that gap between how someone presents themselves and how they actually treat people. There’s real frustration behind it, but also a push toward something better…to actually care, not just appear to. That balance works. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:53
Hey snooty lady..
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so you live in a gated area, wow certainly a class of special people 🤭 in London I used to work in these environments and yes as sad as it is they are a different mentality depending on their wealth, those who choose in any case because I\'ve worked all my life with rich women and most have been fabulous kind and generous. 💜 We are all the same in the end 💜
April 11th, 2026 04:55
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so you live in a gated area, wow certainly a class of special people 🤭 in London I used to work in these environments and yes as sad as it is they are a different mentality depending on their wealth, those who choose in any case because I\'ve worked all my life with rich women and most have been fabulous kind and generous. 💜 We are all the same in the end 💜
April 11th, 2026 04:55
Hey snooty lady..
sorenbarrett said:
A well imaged write that exposes the painted insecurities of the vain and judgmental. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A well imaged write that exposes the painted insecurities of the vain and judgmental. Nicely written
April 11th, 2026 04:51
Hey snooty lady..
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Learn to share and care… I swear I’m so tired of “ladies and gentlemen” these days… I don’t want to give up hope but it’s crazy the audacity of some of these folks.. sigh rant aside I love this poem
April 10th, 2026 23:42
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Learn to share and care… I swear I’m so tired of “ladies and gentlemen” these days… I don’t want to give up hope but it’s crazy the audacity of some of these folks.. sigh rant aside I love this poem
April 10th, 2026 23:42
Night time tales
Thomas W Case said:
A quiet nightscape unfolding with gentle detail—restlessness easing into calm.
The soft rhythm carries a grounded peace, like breath returning after unease.
April 7th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
A quiet nightscape unfolding with gentle detail—restlessness easing into calm.
The soft rhythm carries a grounded peace, like breath returning after unease.
April 7th, 2026 07:45
I am just me
Neville said:
The girl knows how to write and she soes so, so very bloomin well .. 😎🌻👍
April 7th, 2026 03:57
Neville said:
The girl knows how to write and she soes so, so very bloomin well .. 😎🌻👍
April 7th, 2026 03:57
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