Comments received on poems by NafisaSB



The leaves
Doggerel Dave said:

Where I live too many people want to sweep them up into a bin. The trees they come from are older than the concrete paths which are swept.
I enjoy the multicolours of autumn.
Well painted picture you\'ve written.

July 10th, 2024 23:39

The country child
Zelda said:

its amazing safina!!!!
i hope to see another poem soon!!!!!

July 7th, 2024 22:47

The country child
Mason Vollman said:

Yep, there\'s always room to be a leader, though. Thanks Nafisa.

July 7th, 2024 09:57

The country child
Mason Vollman said:

I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!

July 7th, 2024 01:03

The Lake
MendedFences27 said:

Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.

July 5th, 2024 15:14

The Lake
MendedFences27 said:



July 5th, 2024 15:10

What is love
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.

July 2nd, 2024 01:54

the cycle ride
Doggerel Dave said:

No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.

July 1st, 2024 18:51

the cycle ride
sorenbarrett said:

An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.

July 1st, 2024 08:09

The beauty of Ooty
Cassie58 said:

You took me there with your beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the visit very much. Such beauty in your mountains and valleys. A lovely write. Thank you dear poet.

June 30th, 2024 02:52

Sailing on the sea
Cassie58 said:

The ocean holds many moods and many adventures. I like where you took me here. Nicely penned dear poet.

June 29th, 2024 05:41

Rural life
Thomas W Case said:

Great work.

June 25th, 2024 19:14

Rural life
NafisaSB said:

Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the countryside. Now that we have shifted to a high rise tower in a bustling city like Mumbai I think it will remain a pipe dream , though am happy where life has brought me

June 25th, 2024 09:46

Rural life
sorenbarrett said:

The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I have washed my cloths on a board in a hollow log and identify with a rustic life. I identify with the gong from the church having heard the church bell from a distant small country church. Happiness and less strife for sure. So nicely written it brings happiness to the soul.

June 25th, 2024 09:04

Rural life
Neilton said:

ah simple life without technology .perfect discription!

June 25th, 2024 08:15

Rural life
2781 said:

Subsistence living, sounds great.

June 25th, 2024 05:49

Puddles
Cassie58 said:

Rain when there has been drought, such a blessing. Even those muddy puddles look good. Beautiful description here in your lines. All good wishes.

June 21st, 2024 02:42

Puddles
2781 said:

Beauty in the eye of the beholder.

June 20th, 2024 09:52

Rain,rain,rain
Cassie58 said:

I’ve heard the monsoon season is a blessing for scorched earth. I can imagine everything bursting into life after the downpours. A visually pleasing poem. Lovely work.

June 20th, 2024 00:07

Rain,rain,rain
Doggerel Dave said:

If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though know it is quite possible to have too much of a good thing.....LOL

June 19th, 2024 07:56

Rain,rain,rain
2781 said:

Stay dry, and may your garden bloom.

June 19th, 2024 03:52

My treasure trove
2781 said:

Amen.

June 18th, 2024 09:41

My treasure trove
Cassie58 said:

Rich in imagery and meaning. Money isn’t everything. Much enjoyed NafisaSB. Have a beautiful day.

June 18th, 2024 07:32

Give me my due
NafisaSB said:

yes - one can pour out what\'s in one heat, and then either store it or publish it
thanks for the comments - have a lovely weekend

June 15th, 2024 01:01

Give me my due
Cassie58 said:

A call out that you wish to be noticed, appreciated and heard. You pen your stanzas well and with conviction. Nicely done NafisaSB.

June 14th, 2024 00:21

Flowers
Cassie58 said:

I love fresh flowers. Lovely to have the colour and fragrance in the home. Although I buy them, I don’t like picking them, preferring them to stay in their natural setting. A bit of a contradiction I know. I love your floral bouquet here. Have a happy Wednesday.

June 12th, 2024 02:52

Struggle
Cassie58 said:

I felt your struggle here with negativity. I think most people have suffered similar periodically. Nicely composed lines here. I enjoyed your post dear poet.

June 11th, 2024 13:56

Flame of desire
Cassie58 said:

So very nicely conveyed. Beautiful poetry NafisaSB. All good wishes.

June 9th, 2024 10:14

Flame of desire
Tony36 said:

Amazing and captivating write

June 9th, 2024 09:47

Flame of desire
sorenbarrett said:

Such a descriptive image of desire it is well displayed in this poem. Nicely done

June 9th, 2024 08:59

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