Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Ooty
L. B. Mek said:
\'The panorama was magnificent – it was truly a work of art\'..
like your words..
(I read and simply close my eyes and drift
and drift
between your syllables, feel
life\'s breeze
in a room with closed windows
delighting, once more
in Nature\'s gifts..)
thank you! dear Poet
so well written
May 26th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'The panorama was magnificent – it was truly a work of art\'..
like your words..
(I read and simply close my eyes and drift
and drift
between your syllables, feel
life\'s breeze
in a room with closed windows
delighting, once more
in Nature\'s gifts..)
thank you! dear Poet
so well written
May 26th, 2022 05:34
Blessings
L. B. Mek said:
Love, in its Purest form
will avenge, all
those discrepancies
in our life\'s, ill-fate..
see, maybe
that absent father, made way
for the Greatest mother, figure
to shine
and imbue a Hue, of beloved-ness
on a soul
that deserved, nothing less!
so yes, it would be nice
if all our stories
came pre prepared, like modernity\'s
ready to go, meal\'s
but you see, dear insightful Poet
some of the best, dishes
we make
from life\'s chaotic ingredients
taste, that much better
for those mistaken, dashes
of flavourful vinegar, we add
whose, bitterness
awakens the sweetness
imbued
in those ingredients, waiting
for an opportunity
to Glow
with luminous, uncontainable: Pride...
(I\'m so happy
that the one you care for so much
had her special day!
cheers, to you witnessing
the fruition of your selfless
care and support, dear Poet
🥂🍾🥂)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
Love, in its Purest form
will avenge, all
those discrepancies
in our life\'s, ill-fate..
see, maybe
that absent father, made way
for the Greatest mother, figure
to shine
and imbue a Hue, of beloved-ness
on a soul
that deserved, nothing less!
so yes, it would be nice
if all our stories
came pre prepared, like modernity\'s
ready to go, meal\'s
but you see, dear insightful Poet
some of the best, dishes
we make
from life\'s chaotic ingredients
taste, that much better
for those mistaken, dashes
of flavourful vinegar, we add
whose, bitterness
awakens the sweetness
imbued
in those ingredients, waiting
for an opportunity
to Glow
with luminous, uncontainable: Pride...
(I\'m so happy
that the one you care for so much
had her special day!
cheers, to you witnessing
the fruition of your selfless
care and support, dear Poet
🥂🍾🥂)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 05:44
Success shall be mine
tallisman said:
And a successful poem! Enjoyed it. All the best!
May 21st, 2022 01:41
tallisman said:
And a successful poem! Enjoyed it. All the best!
May 21st, 2022 01:41
be careful
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Nafisa, to see the true beauty of a person you must look into their eyes and see their heart.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Nafisa, to see the true beauty of a person you must look into their eyes and see their heart.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 02:05
A broken heart
L. B. Mek said:
really clever!
thank you, dear Poet
\'brought a ring – a cute little thing
But you back at me, my present did fling\'..
\'Boy buys ring, girl throws it away
The same old story repeated everyday\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
really clever!
thank you, dear Poet
\'brought a ring – a cute little thing
But you back at me, my present did fling\'..
\'Boy buys ring, girl throws it away
The same old story repeated everyday\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:35
Daily walk
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy, immersive reads
like this, dear poet
wonderful imagery and insightful, commentary
gift wrapped in such a positive message..
thank you!
May 16th, 2022 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy, immersive reads
like this, dear poet
wonderful imagery and insightful, commentary
gift wrapped in such a positive message..
thank you!
May 16th, 2022 06:26
Last September
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
\'Its frosty stare
Its knowing look
Searched my heart-
An open book
Its pretty wings
Flashed in the sun
Its haughty gaze
Deceived no one\'
May 9th, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
\'Its frosty stare
Its knowing look
Searched my heart-
An open book
Its pretty wings
Flashed in the sun
Its haughty gaze
Deceived no one\'
May 9th, 2022 05:54
Mother of Mine
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Happy Mother’s Day to all the strong mothers out there. Beautiful poem dedicated to your mom nafisa 🌟
May 8th, 2022 12:14
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Happy Mother’s Day to all the strong mothers out there. Beautiful poem dedicated to your mom nafisa 🌟
May 8th, 2022 12:14
Reminiscences
Paul Bell said:
Innocence disappears when the devil introduces you to your teenage days.
That\'s what I told the judge anyway, and he concurred.
May 7th, 2022 05:23
Paul Bell said:
Innocence disappears when the devil introduces you to your teenage days.
That\'s what I told the judge anyway, and he concurred.
May 7th, 2022 05:23
Reminiscences
Nicholas Browning said:
+10 points for using the word \"uncouth\". A very descriptive write about remembrance and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
May 7th, 2022 03:21
Nicholas Browning said:
+10 points for using the word \"uncouth\". A very descriptive write about remembrance and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
May 7th, 2022 03:21
Unity
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your message!
Unity, anchored by Empathy
and a willingness
to Empower, merited Equality
that\'s the dream...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your message!
Unity, anchored by Empathy
and a willingness
to Empower, merited Equality
that\'s the dream...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 04:59
Train trip
Rozina said:
This is a lovely read. I\'m inspired to write about a train ride too.
May 3rd, 2022 02:41
Rozina said:
This is a lovely read. I\'m inspired to write about a train ride too.
May 3rd, 2022 02:41
to strive..
L. B. Mek said:
that Great! Tennyson, himself
would so
appreciate these words, dear poet..
and \'Ulysses\' by Tennyson
is one of my absolute, favourite\'s:
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30658
)
May 2nd, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
that Great! Tennyson, himself
would so
appreciate these words, dear poet..
and \'Ulysses\' by Tennyson
is one of my absolute, favourite\'s:
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30658
)
May 2nd, 2022 05:51
Riddles
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, me too. I feel like it will take a while. I loved reading this. It\'s quite clever.
May 1st, 2022 03:23
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, me too. I feel like it will take a while. I loved reading this. It\'s quite clever.
May 1st, 2022 03:23
Riddles
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Life is a question marks and it’s twisted .. great poem ✨
May 1st, 2022 02:53
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Life is a question marks and it’s twisted .. great poem ✨
May 1st, 2022 02:53
The \'Best\'
L. B. Mek said:
ChrisyLyn, already worded it
Best !
(a lovely read, so many great lines
thank you! dear Poet
your poetry
is like an oasis, to those thirsting
for some genuine poetry)
April 28th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
ChrisyLyn, already worded it
Best !
(a lovely read, so many great lines
thank you! dear Poet
your poetry
is like an oasis, to those thirsting
for some genuine poetry)
April 28th, 2022 04:04
Teenager\'s ABC
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This speaks about our present generation.. and it speaks the truth. Nice work🧡
April 27th, 2022 04:03
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This speaks about our present generation.. and it speaks the truth. Nice work🧡
April 27th, 2022 04:03
The Silent snake
L. B. Mek said:
hope this wasn\'t about me, dear poet
being called a fool, I can accept
but a snake, this ones gonna sting
for a bit...
lol
\'I always say, beware
that stealthy dark empath, in your life
once in their web, you can\'t escape
without shading tears
of crimson regret...\'
the vipers, vultures and vampires
of the world
we can often see coming from afar
thankfully!
(an important read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
April 26th, 2022 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
hope this wasn\'t about me, dear poet
being called a fool, I can accept
but a snake, this ones gonna sting
for a bit...
lol
\'I always say, beware
that stealthy dark empath, in your life
once in their web, you can\'t escape
without shading tears
of crimson regret...\'
the vipers, vultures and vampires
of the world
we can often see coming from afar
thankfully!
(an important read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
April 26th, 2022 05:30
Statement of accounts
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem! Great ideas and messages! Thanks for sharing!
April 25th, 2022 08:03
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem! Great ideas and messages! Thanks for sharing!
April 25th, 2022 08:03
Statement of accounts
L. B. Mek said:
\'He draws a margin for profits, and one for losses too
So that he will obtain a statement that *isn\'t quite fully true.\'..
(sorry it read to me as isn\'t
if I\'m wrong, please
forgive my foolish boldness)..
I cherish, so much in your
poetically didactive, message..!
but, I think
notion\'s of \'sin\' and \'purity\'
are so troublesome
to incorporate, in-to our chaotic
everyday struggles and blessings
coin flips of fate
see
\'sin\', brings with it such destructive
notions of poisonously
self-defeating, internalisations
of events and momentary choices
that sculpt, our regrets in life
when in actuality
upon reflection, of sound mind
removed from that intensity
of a moment\'s, supposed magnitude
we, just made mistakes
mistakes, embedded
in our nature\'s, fallibility..
and \'Purity\'
is just, such a futile ideal, as
we\'re born
into this world, dripping
in blood and muck
crying our heart\'s out
and its all, downhill
from there
with blessed, high points
of relief
star lighting, our cherished lives...
(forgive me, for my opinionated ranting
I just feel, our word choices
make a huge impact
and at all times
we should live a backdoor open
for those who\'ve been dropped
into that monsoon of life\'s strife
and are looking for a way, back
so for sin I Choose, to read -\'mistake\'
and for purity, I Choose to see - \'flawed beauty\')
thank you! dear Poet
please, don\'t misunderstand
I champion
your empathetic compassion
and empowering message!!!
April 25th, 2022 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'He draws a margin for profits, and one for losses too
So that he will obtain a statement that *isn\'t quite fully true.\'..
(sorry it read to me as isn\'t
if I\'m wrong, please
forgive my foolish boldness)..
I cherish, so much in your
poetically didactive, message..!
but, I think
notion\'s of \'sin\' and \'purity\'
are so troublesome
to incorporate, in-to our chaotic
everyday struggles and blessings
coin flips of fate
see
\'sin\', brings with it such destructive
notions of poisonously
self-defeating, internalisations
of events and momentary choices
that sculpt, our regrets in life
when in actuality
upon reflection, of sound mind
removed from that intensity
of a moment\'s, supposed magnitude
we, just made mistakes
mistakes, embedded
in our nature\'s, fallibility..
and \'Purity\'
is just, such a futile ideal, as
we\'re born
into this world, dripping
in blood and muck
crying our heart\'s out
and its all, downhill
from there
with blessed, high points
of relief
star lighting, our cherished lives...
(forgive me, for my opinionated ranting
I just feel, our word choices
make a huge impact
and at all times
we should live a backdoor open
for those who\'ve been dropped
into that monsoon of life\'s strife
and are looking for a way, back
so for sin I Choose, to read -\'mistake\'
and for purity, I Choose to see - \'flawed beauty\')
thank you! dear Poet
please, don\'t misunderstand
I champion
your empathetic compassion
and empowering message!!!
April 25th, 2022 06:03
On thanking God
dusk arising said:
Dont forget to thank your god for earthquakes and tsunamis, famines and plagues - god being omnipotent is therefore responsible. But there\'s the pathetic rhetorical excuse brainwashed christians come up with that it\'s all the fault of the wickedness of mankind... earthquakes and tsunamis oh yes, brainwashing serves them well.
April 23rd, 2022 17:13
dusk arising said:
Dont forget to thank your god for earthquakes and tsunamis, famines and plagues - god being omnipotent is therefore responsible. But there\'s the pathetic rhetorical excuse brainwashed christians come up with that it\'s all the fault of the wickedness of mankind... earthquakes and tsunamis oh yes, brainwashing serves them well.
April 23rd, 2022 17:13
On thanking God
Crowns4Christ said:
So grateful you wrote this, most tend to thank God for when He helps us
April 23rd, 2022 16:12
Crowns4Christ said:
So grateful you wrote this, most tend to thank God for when He helps us
April 23rd, 2022 16:12
My thoughts
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Doubts give rise to doubts.\" Yes. and Yes. We are our own setback. I enjoy your imagery and wording, excellent!
April 22nd, 2022 08:18
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Doubts give rise to doubts.\" Yes. and Yes. We are our own setback. I enjoy your imagery and wording, excellent!
April 22nd, 2022 08:18
My thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cyclonic in their strength like Wyatt’s Hurricane\'..
now that\'s: simile, metaphor and imagery
combined, to devastating - poetic effect..
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cyclonic in their strength like Wyatt’s Hurricane\'..
now that\'s: simile, metaphor and imagery
combined, to devastating - poetic effect..
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
April 22nd, 2022 04:56
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