Comments received on poems by Coyote
Dementia
HannahElisabeth said:
This is to beautifully sad, I\'m sorry sorry this happened. Your poem is absolutely beautiful though
August 8th, 2021 15:02
HannahElisabeth said:
This is to beautifully sad, I\'m sorry sorry this happened. Your poem is absolutely beautiful though
August 8th, 2021 15:02
Dementia
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad these well rhymed set of words that is sure to affect minds and hearts of readers. Thank you Coyote for sharing the dreadful life-changing power of dementia as a tribute to your dear Dad
August 8th, 2021 13:43
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad these well rhymed set of words that is sure to affect minds and hearts of readers. Thank you Coyote for sharing the dreadful life-changing power of dementia as a tribute to your dear Dad
August 8th, 2021 13:43
Conquistador
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know why all you unhappy folks have such trouble with religion, belief in in god....just look - there\'s no one, nothing there.........
August 7th, 2021 22:27
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know why all you unhappy folks have such trouble with religion, belief in in god....just look - there\'s no one, nothing there.........
August 7th, 2021 22:27
Conquistador
HannahElisabeth said:
Hi Coyote,
Yet again, another great work.
Makes me sad that I wrote a multiple page poem somewhere in a now lost notebook that shared the same sentiment... Especially \"I will not kneel before
such an altar\".
Thank you for the reminder, I\'ve been meaning to recreate that poem for a while now.
Beautifully written my friend.
August 7th, 2021 12:55
HannahElisabeth said:
Hi Coyote,
Yet again, another great work.
Makes me sad that I wrote a multiple page poem somewhere in a now lost notebook that shared the same sentiment... Especially \"I will not kneel before
such an altar\".
Thank you for the reminder, I\'ve been meaning to recreate that poem for a while now.
Beautifully written my friend.
August 7th, 2021 12:55
Arrival
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Coyote, those moments are so special.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Coyote, those moments are so special.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:16
Arrival
Saxon Crow said:
Perfect, Coyote. Those little moments stretch out forever. Very well encapsulated in this poem my friend
August 6th, 2021 23:58
Saxon Crow said:
Perfect, Coyote. Those little moments stretch out forever. Very well encapsulated in this poem my friend
August 6th, 2021 23:58
Passive Awareness
L. B. Mek said:
they Quench our thirst, serving us Bowls
naively, we lap it up
till, they callously Decide
we\'re not needed
then all we know, are the empty Bottles;
as a remnant carcass
of that Kindness
we assumed was ours...
Now, we search for whatever
can help us traverse
life\'s, bleak blanket of Night!
\'I can see it\'s outline
in the forgotten drag
of the day\'s last cigarette
Amber solace to sooth
a tortured mind and numb
a jaded soul
Until morning...\'
(a wonderful poetic read
triumphantly abstract, yet grounded
in all-things tangible and real
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 6th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
they Quench our thirst, serving us Bowls
naively, we lap it up
till, they callously Decide
we\'re not needed
then all we know, are the empty Bottles;
as a remnant carcass
of that Kindness
we assumed was ours...
Now, we search for whatever
can help us traverse
life\'s, bleak blanket of Night!
\'I can see it\'s outline
in the forgotten drag
of the day\'s last cigarette
Amber solace to sooth
a tortured mind and numb
a jaded soul
Until morning...\'
(a wonderful poetic read
triumphantly abstract, yet grounded
in all-things tangible and real
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
August 6th, 2021 04:01
Seventeen Lines
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery
and a profoundly empowering message
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 5th, 2021 03:10
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery
and a profoundly empowering message
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 5th, 2021 03:10
Seventeen Lines
Doggerel Dave said:
So did I!
Beyond the beautifully crafted lines and structure, you have provided an picture indelibly printed on my mind. I put that up at least parallel with Lennon and Ono\'s Imagine.
August 4th, 2021 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
So did I!
Beyond the beautifully crafted lines and structure, you have provided an picture indelibly printed on my mind. I put that up at least parallel with Lennon and Ono\'s Imagine.
August 4th, 2021 19:14
Seventeen Lines
HannahElisabeth said:
Your poetry hits so close to home for me. \"where no single rule or concept
dooms us all to God’s abyss\" is such a painfully beautiful sentiment. This reminds me very much of struggling with religion I was raised with.
August 4th, 2021 14:25
HannahElisabeth said:
Your poetry hits so close to home for me. \"where no single rule or concept
dooms us all to God’s abyss\" is such a painfully beautiful sentiment. This reminds me very much of struggling with religion I was raised with.
August 4th, 2021 14:25
A Dark Wind
HannahElisabeth said:
\"Lucifer set my plate
somewhere between
Dickinson and Twain
so I may learn from
their sardonic wit
just what it is to
be human, and what
it means to love
and to feel\"
I absolutely love this
August 3rd, 2021 21:05
HannahElisabeth said:
\"Lucifer set my plate
somewhere between
Dickinson and Twain
so I may learn from
their sardonic wit
just what it is to
be human, and what
it means to love
and to feel\"
I absolutely love this
August 3rd, 2021 21:05
Psychosis
L. B. Mek said:
there is a sincerity to your choice wording
and a defiance, in your tone of acceptance
an impassioned write
thank you for sharing
August 3rd, 2021 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
there is a sincerity to your choice wording
and a defiance, in your tone of acceptance
an impassioned write
thank you for sharing
August 3rd, 2021 04:35
Psychosis
HannahElisabeth said:
\"wailing in desperation
for understanding and
forgiveness\"
This is amazing, I felt this in my soul
August 2nd, 2021 16:26
HannahElisabeth said:
\"wailing in desperation
for understanding and
forgiveness\"
This is amazing, I felt this in my soul
August 2nd, 2021 16:26
Psychosis
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry in the wilderness and so well written I almost heard that howl for compassion - first class writing Coyote. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
August 2nd, 2021 15:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry in the wilderness and so well written I almost heard that howl for compassion - first class writing Coyote. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
August 2nd, 2021 15:48
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