Comments received on poems by Coyote



Penitus
Doggerel Dave said:

Been out There and found no evidence of either Heaven or Hell. In here? Mind your own business. 😊
Neat piece with much content in such a shortie, C.

November 24th, 2021 00:37

Penitus
Teddy.15 said:

Dear coyote, quite magnificent and very clever. What a great read. X

November 24th, 2021 00:08

Penitus
Robert Haigh said:

An interesting write. Heaven and hell travel with us, I would say.

November 23rd, 2021 18:21

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
spilleronsheet said:

Dear poet you really have a way with those words
Maybe a conformist may be praised and a deviant shall always be blamed
The society is so rule bound today, that anything out of the book is considered insanity

November 21st, 2021 18:52

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Doggerel Dave said:

Great to see you back and on form, C.
Perfect proof that context is all when deciding which side of the sanity line people are on.
I’m also given to understand that something called ‘bluetooth’ causes a lot of people to talk to themselves on the street. When I first noticed this I did attempt to advise a couple of folks to up their dental hygiene regimens, but the response wasn’t very encouraging, so I gave up……


November 21st, 2021 18:48

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Accidental Poet said:

Just maybe, the guy who isn\'t there is really the part of us we always try to see. Excellent write Coyote. 👍

November 21st, 2021 10:02

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Revealing those invisible figures we all know exist, but seldom make reference to. Beautifully carved!

November 21st, 2021 02:14

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Coyote, you are so right about the thousands/millions of people who talk to the guy who isn\'t there.

Andy

November 21st, 2021 01:55

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
fallenAngel1🕊 said:

I think everyone knows a guy like that at sometime or another,I know I did,hehehe. Great read,it gave me great memories,thanks for sharing 🤗

November 20th, 2021 19:40

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
HannahElisabeth said:

This is fantastic Coyote, I\'m glad to see you\'re still around friend!

November 20th, 2021 19:02

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Lyn_Dejesus said:

This was so amazing great read and feel it so much

November 20th, 2021 15:29

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Marie said:

Your imagination is on fire in this superbly penned poem, dear Coyote. As I read your words reminded me of those of the philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche: \"And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music\". Because we don\'t see someone with our human eyes, does not mean they don\'t exist and you have captured that wonderfully well in this very insightful and thought provoking write, my friend. Love the perfect rhythm and rhyme in which the poem is inked and love how you narrate the story so perfectly too! LOVE this poem, dear Coyote and with a very humble heart, I thank you for sharing with me. A privilege to read :-)

November 20th, 2021 13:48

The Guy Who Wasn\'t There
Michael Edwards said:

What a great fun read - love it

November 20th, 2021 10:17

Omega Sunset (an ode to Yeats)
Doggerel Dave said:

The trouble with subject specific pieces such as this, on a site such as this is that one either knows the subject or doesn\'t - and I don\'t know Yeats (Neither, it would seem, do many others...)

But welcome back - thought you had gone forever ....

Still hopeful for some of your comic stuff...

November 20th, 2021 04:15

Abyss
Marie said:

The theme in this excellently penned poem is as relevant in today\'s world as it was all those years ago, dear Coyote! Life as it was, as it is and as it will continue to be superbly expressed through both excellent word choice and depiction! Thank you for sharing, my dear friend. Bless you always, dear Coyote...

November 17th, 2021 16:27

Feline Awakening
Mysterium said:

Wonderful and superb! Enjoyed reading!

September 20th, 2021 09:10

Feline Awakening
Marie said:

What a wise cat! Love this poem, dear Coyote, it is filled with spiritual truths. A sagacious write, intense and philosophically subtle, yet penned with your usual and delightful sense of humour as shown in the final two lines of the poem. Jameson and Absolute are a very potent mix, but what wonderful spiritual insights they bring to the fore! Superb penning, my friend! Thank you for sharing...

September 18th, 2021 13:19

EIEIO
John Prophet said:

Dogma is never the truth! Nice write.

September 2nd, 2021 20:26

Feline Awakening
L. B. Mek said:

is that feline named Euclid? dear poet
thank you! for sharing your profound insights..
\'All that is transitory is a metaphor
for the eternal and all that is eternal
is a metaphor for the self.
The self is the collective consciousness
we all share and what we share is our
experience of being.
Being is nothing but an illusion created
in the mind of God while God is simply
a metaphor for eternity in the mind of
man.
Now pour me some kibble for I know
many things but do not possess opposable
thumbs”.\'

September 2nd, 2021 03:22

Feline Awakening
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, what a wonderful jaw dropping piece Coyote. 😂 Brilliant 🐱

September 2nd, 2021 02:24

Feline Awakening
Saxon Crow said:

Schrodinger is an absolute thicky compared to your cat, Coyote. Great read

September 2nd, 2021 00:24

Abyss
John Prophet said:

I love your explanatory note on the timing of this write!

September 1st, 2021 05:47

Abyss
Lorna said:

You were young and angry and things have only gotten worse! I felt the pain!

September 1st, 2021 00:32

Abyss
Goldfinch60 said:

And things have changed?

Andy

September 1st, 2021 00:16

Abyss
Doggerel Dave said:

I like it C, because of its cynicism and pissedoffedness (creative use of language there: big tick? No? oh well – moving on….), but as you state, it was an early Coyote and I know you are in a different place….so come on, mate – I need cheering up….

August 31st, 2021 19:16

Abyss
dusk arising said:

Makes sense in todays world too though doesn\'t it.

August 31st, 2021 16:59

Abyss
Teddy.15 said:

You are obviously a great psychic lol brilliant!

August 31st, 2021 15:15

EIEIO
L. B. Mek said:

this is so empowering and enlightening! thanks for sharing
but please, do remember when you remove the fallacies
of peoples \'interpretations\' of dogmatic theology
from your life,
you don\'t mistakenly, weaken those moral \'pillar\'s\'
that have gotten you this far, in life
there are more option available to us
than acceptance and reactionary, total rejection
take your time, choose the path
that fits you best
by allowing their lies to rob you
of your capacity to intrust/invest meaningfully in anything
you\'re only making yourself vulnerable
to an existence, where you believe, in no one and nothing
then, all you\'ve have left is that nihilistically bitter existence
of enforced solitude..
(forgive me for another sermon-\'esque\' rant, dear poet
I promise to not subject you, to anymore in the future
thanks for tolerating my overzealous need
to sprout my Bul sht...) lol

August 27th, 2021 04:29

EIEIO
rebmasters said:

A wonderful quote to end with & how very gracious & tolerant you are. Beautiful craftsmanship 🖤

August 27th, 2021 03:18

EIEIO
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes you have got it , C. But some people cannot live without something like faith - just don\'t let them try to inflict it on me.

August 26th, 2021 20:32

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