Comments received on poems by Coyote
Last Call
HannahElisabeth said:
The first two stanzas made me think of my favorite cover of Between the Bars by Elliot Smith, covered by the Civil Wars...
I\'m glad to see the ending conveys new beginnings. This was bitter sweet and lovely, yet again. My favorite kind of poetry.
August 12th, 2021 17:19
HannahElisabeth said:
The first two stanzas made me think of my favorite cover of Between the Bars by Elliot Smith, covered by the Civil Wars...
I\'m glad to see the ending conveys new beginnings. This was bitter sweet and lovely, yet again. My favorite kind of poetry.
August 12th, 2021 17:19
Last Call
dusk arising said:
A well constructed story throughout. One night of heartache.
August 12th, 2021 14:09
dusk arising said:
A well constructed story throughout. One night of heartache.
August 12th, 2021 14:09
Eventus
L. B. Mek said:
what smooth flow
of a cascading melodic cadence,
a delight to read
such an enticing invitation
to hum, or even sing..
a great write
a comforting read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
what smooth flow
of a cascading melodic cadence,
a delight to read
such an enticing invitation
to hum, or even sing..
a great write
a comforting read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 03:14
Eventus
Saxon Crow said:
Beautifully fluent poem Coyote. Really like this one
August 12th, 2021 01:07
Saxon Crow said:
Beautifully fluent poem Coyote. Really like this one
August 12th, 2021 01:07
Eventus
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully structured (I would not have expected less from you C), Left me slightly off balance (That’s positive – not a crit) with some high value nuggets in there – especially the last two lines.
August 11th, 2021 20:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautifully structured (I would not have expected less from you C), Left me slightly off balance (That’s positive – not a crit) with some high value nuggets in there – especially the last two lines.
August 11th, 2021 20:23
Eventus
The elder poet said:
The rhyming is awesome. It really tells your story.
August 11th, 2021 17:07
The elder poet said:
The rhyming is awesome. It really tells your story.
August 11th, 2021 17:07
Eventus
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow and rhyming are first rate in this dark lament my friend - you penned so clearly the shadows we pass through and have to cope with . That last couplet is so very telling too
August 11th, 2021 15:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow and rhyming are first rate in this dark lament my friend - you penned so clearly the shadows we pass through and have to cope with . That last couplet is so very telling too
August 11th, 2021 15:46
Lost at Sea
Goldfinch60 said:
That sea of life is there for us all and with age I can see where I am going Coyote.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That sea of life is there for us all and with age I can see where I am going Coyote.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 01:29
Lost at Sea
HannahElisabeth said:
I feel like my comments are getting redundant, but once again your words blow me away.
I love that this has a sense of hope despite feeling lost. At least that\'s how I read it...
When I felt like I didn\'t know who I was supposed to be, I took comfort in seeing life as a blank canvas waiting for art. So keep that stiff upper lip and take heart.
August 10th, 2021 18:38
HannahElisabeth said:
I feel like my comments are getting redundant, but once again your words blow me away.
I love that this has a sense of hope despite feeling lost. At least that\'s how I read it...
When I felt like I didn\'t know who I was supposed to be, I took comfort in seeing life as a blank canvas waiting for art. So keep that stiff upper lip and take heart.
August 10th, 2021 18:38
Lost at Sea
rebmasters said:
Reminds me of this beautiful song:
https://youtu.be/UcFP-9CUcWM
\"I\'m lost at sea,
the radio is jammed
I bet they won\'t find me
I swear it\'s for the best...\"
A wonderful read x
August 10th, 2021 11:18
rebmasters said:
Reminds me of this beautiful song:
https://youtu.be/UcFP-9CUcWM
\"I\'m lost at sea,
the radio is jammed
I bet they won\'t find me
I swear it\'s for the best...\"
A wonderful read x
August 10th, 2021 11:18
Marionette
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful to read,
enticingly melodic, to sing
thanks for sharing
August 10th, 2021 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful to read,
enticingly melodic, to sing
thanks for sharing
August 10th, 2021 03:53
Marionette
Doggerel Dave said:
Another perfect rhyme and metre from you C.
Submission to another’s will – a horror story really….
And more than a passing reference to the performative aspect of the roles society imposes.
August 9th, 2021 19:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Another perfect rhyme and metre from you C.
Submission to another’s will – a horror story really….
And more than a passing reference to the performative aspect of the roles society imposes.
August 9th, 2021 19:54
Marionette
HannahElisabeth said:
Gee Coyote, where ever did you get the inspiration for this title? ;)
\"While knowing nothing ever came
from unpretentious prayers...
Another grand performance
by the Princess in the tower\"
I love everything about this, it\'s absolutely flawless.
August 9th, 2021 13:45
HannahElisabeth said:
Gee Coyote, where ever did you get the inspiration for this title? ;)
\"While knowing nothing ever came
from unpretentious prayers...
Another grand performance
by the Princess in the tower\"
I love everything about this, it\'s absolutely flawless.
August 9th, 2021 13:45
Marionette
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this perfectly rhymed and metred story of drama for a princess in a tower - more please ?
August 9th, 2021 11:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this perfectly rhymed and metred story of drama for a princess in a tower - more please ?
August 9th, 2021 11:14
Conquistador
Quijote said:
Can fully appreciate the sentiments you so passionately expressed here. To me I found that mysticism( ie direct communion with God) is the common factor that connects all religious experience.
August 9th, 2021 06:27
Quijote said:
Can fully appreciate the sentiments you so passionately expressed here. To me I found that mysticism( ie direct communion with God) is the common factor that connects all religious experience.
August 9th, 2021 06:27
Dementia
L. B. Mek said:
chaos and turmoil, transmuted
into Artistry\'s: veracity
of unquestioned, Poetic Beauty!
so happy for you, dear Poet
a great write
thank you, for choosing to share
(sorry for your suffering
of all the cruel fates of Time
dementia, has to be
one of the most heart-breaking;
morosely unbearable, to survive
I dare not even imagine
those scars
it inevitably tattoos - deep)
August 9th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
chaos and turmoil, transmuted
into Artistry\'s: veracity
of unquestioned, Poetic Beauty!
so happy for you, dear Poet
a great write
thank you, for choosing to share
(sorry for your suffering
of all the cruel fates of Time
dementia, has to be
one of the most heart-breaking;
morosely unbearable, to survive
I dare not even imagine
those scars
it inevitably tattoos - deep)
August 9th, 2021 04:36
Dementia
Goldfinch60 said:
My wife had dementia and died from it. I lived with it for many years watching her disappear from me.
If anyone thinks they know about dementia and have not lived with it 24/7 they haven\'t a flaming clue what it is about.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
My wife had dementia and died from it. I lived with it for many years watching her disappear from me.
If anyone thinks they know about dementia and have not lived with it 24/7 they haven\'t a flaming clue what it is about.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:34
Dementia
Doggerel Dave said:
You do have a way with lines, pace an rhythm, C.
A neat but comprehensive picture of that condition. Reality absolute.
August 8th, 2021 23:55
Doggerel Dave said:
You do have a way with lines, pace an rhythm, C.
A neat but comprehensive picture of that condition. Reality absolute.
August 8th, 2021 23:55
Dementia
HannahElisabeth said:
This is to beautifully sad, I\'m sorry sorry this happened. Your poem is absolutely beautiful though
August 8th, 2021 15:02
HannahElisabeth said:
This is to beautifully sad, I\'m sorry sorry this happened. Your poem is absolutely beautiful though
August 8th, 2021 15:02
Dementia
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad these well rhymed set of words that is sure to affect minds and hearts of readers. Thank you Coyote for sharing the dreadful life-changing power of dementia as a tribute to your dear Dad
August 8th, 2021 13:43
Fay Slimm. said:
So sad these well rhymed set of words that is sure to affect minds and hearts of readers. Thank you Coyote for sharing the dreadful life-changing power of dementia as a tribute to your dear Dad
August 8th, 2021 13:43
Conquistador
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know why all you unhappy folks have such trouble with religion, belief in in god....just look - there\'s no one, nothing there.........
August 7th, 2021 22:27
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know why all you unhappy folks have such trouble with religion, belief in in god....just look - there\'s no one, nothing there.........
August 7th, 2021 22:27
Conquistador
HannahElisabeth said:
Hi Coyote,
Yet again, another great work.
Makes me sad that I wrote a multiple page poem somewhere in a now lost notebook that shared the same sentiment... Especially \"I will not kneel before
such an altar\".
Thank you for the reminder, I\'ve been meaning to recreate that poem for a while now.
Beautifully written my friend.
August 7th, 2021 12:55
HannahElisabeth said:
Hi Coyote,
Yet again, another great work.
Makes me sad that I wrote a multiple page poem somewhere in a now lost notebook that shared the same sentiment... Especially \"I will not kneel before
such an altar\".
Thank you for the reminder, I\'ve been meaning to recreate that poem for a while now.
Beautifully written my friend.
August 7th, 2021 12:55
Arrival
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Coyote, those moments are so special.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Coyote, those moments are so special.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:16
Arrival
Saxon Crow said:
Perfect, Coyote. Those little moments stretch out forever. Very well encapsulated in this poem my friend
August 6th, 2021 23:58
Saxon Crow said:
Perfect, Coyote. Those little moments stretch out forever. Very well encapsulated in this poem my friend
August 6th, 2021 23:58
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