Comments received on poems by Coyote



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dusk arising said:

Love the format, the idea, and the excellence of the whole.
Really good stuff, original. Envious of your creative mind.

August 19th, 2021 13:19

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GON said:

the atmosphere is a vibe

August 19th, 2021 12:56

Untitled 2
Goldfinch60 said:

Being at one with the world is the only way to go in our lives Coyote.

Andy

August 19th, 2021 00:52

Untitled 2
Doggerel Dave said:

If memory serves me correctly. I\'ve stated this before:

Man made God in his own image, then flipped it and the rest is history.

The much maligned snake deserves everyone\'s vote. Great advocacy there, C.

August 18th, 2021 18:13

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:

It actually happens in many churches, you words are so fit for purpose.

Andy

August 18th, 2021 01:52

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
Doggerel Dave said:

Didn’t have much choice, really did you, C?
You can’t count sheep backwards – it’s against the laws of sheep physics…..or something..
But your attempt to sidestep your bible project by making the issue more local won’t wash with me…washing - that’s It; could try counting the socks to make sure you have an even number..as you take them OFF the line..
Great driving rhyme and rhythm ensures my full attention..and the maths. Thanks.


August 17th, 2021 18:23

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
Saxon Crow said:

Mate if that\'s your mind wondering before bed it\'s pretty effing awesome! Great fun poem

August 17th, 2021 16:45

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
Saxon Crow said:

Mate if that\'s your mind wondering before bed it\'s pretty effing awesome! Great fun poem

August 17th, 2021 16:44

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
Fay Slimm. said:

Hi from me Coyote your rhythm came through well - what a flowing piece of rhyming and with such a tale to tell - am still hearing that fine metre and your wit\'s on form again.......... hope sleep came soon and gave you dreams of how this ditty ends - - - - loved all the read.

August 17th, 2021 15:48

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
Thekkinkkattil said:

A very enjoyable read

August 17th, 2021 11:34

Nonsense to Help Me Sleep
dusk arising said:

I would have cheated and tried to convince everyone that turquoise rhymes with purpose.
What an excellent nonsense piece and quite obviously fit for purpose of sending u back for slumber.
I enjoyed this a lot.

August 17th, 2021 11:17

Untitled 1
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, finding open minded people is quite rare
but finding open hearted people? well
we could go through our entire lives
without finding someone, That brave
and for those who do, I can only imagine
how blissful it all, must feel!
a Great shorty
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 17th, 2021 03:42

Untitled 1
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Coyote, those open hearts can be seen by all.

Andy

August 17th, 2021 00:26

Untitled 1
The elder poet said:

short but sweet.

August 16th, 2021 14:14

Untitled 1
dusk arising said:

Untitled huh? I\'d venture a title for this fine piece of yours today :- \'The way of it\'

August 16th, 2021 12:47

The Priest Without Pants
L. B. Mek said:

vile subject!
a brave fun take, really well written
even if I can\'t laugh along, I appreciate your execution
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 16th, 2021 03:24

The Priest Without Pants
Doggerel Dave said:

A fishy tale - let\'s hope no one with a religious bent....of should that be a bent religious? gets offended..........
Entertainment plus - enjoyed immensely, C.

August 15th, 2021 20:20

The Priest Without Pants
Coyote said:

Thanks Lorna. Glad I could help brighten your day🙂

August 15th, 2021 10:51

The Priest Without Pants
Lorna said:

I know this is a very touchy subject in real life (no pun intended) - but I am sitting here shrieking with laughter, choking in fact. And I was in a bad mood before reading this. To hell with politically correct - this is a riot.

August 15th, 2021 10:38

Noah (the real story?)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever write Coyote. It sums up the idea of what is possibly true in that book.

Andy

August 15th, 2021 00:13

Noah (the real story?)
Saxon Crow said:

Wow Coyote. What an amazing piece here. You\'re certainly on fire with these epic poems my friend. Very enjoyable

August 15th, 2021 00:12

Noah (the real story?)
Doggerel Dave said:

Brother, I\'m really enjoying this. It is a lot clearer than the bits I got read at Sunday School.

I have a terrible dilemma though - I want to know how it ends and am inclined to go for the book, because by the time you get through to Revelation , I will be about a hundred and twenty (just saying - my maths ain\'t that good)
But on the other hand I think I\'d rather have a good laugh while I can......

August 14th, 2021 22:16

Noah (the real story?)
HannahElisabeth said:

You\'re absolutely killing me with these, please keep this up

August 14th, 2021 20:05

Noah (the real story?)
GON said:

Ok you got me good, this is an amazing write

August 14th, 2021 12:41

In the Beginning...
Goldfinch60 said:

A good interpretation Coyote, enjoyed it.

Andy

August 14th, 2021 00:50

In the Beginning...
Saxon Crow said:

Bloody love this Coyote. Absolutely brilliant

August 13th, 2021 20:42

In the Beginning...
Doggerel Dave said:

After your \'try before you buy\' I\'m going straight to Amazon, get me the complete volume and read it from end to end...will it be one of those books which change me???
Thanks for the introduction to such a fun book.

August 13th, 2021 17:58

In the Beginning...
dusk arising said:

LOL, my fears that this was going to be some religious bullshit were soon quashed as I got into the spirit of your writing and began to thoroughly enjoy myself.
A really good fun read, thank you.

August 13th, 2021 15:09

In the Beginning...
Coyote said:

Thank you so much Fay🙂

August 13th, 2021 13:44

In the Beginning...
Fay Slimm. said:

I do not believe any account of Adam and Eve could make me laugh out loud so much and such a surprise final line too -- reading your poem the once Coyote will hot be enough so in it must go to my list of reading treats - - really great stuff and thanks a load for this truly hilarious post.

August 13th, 2021 12:48

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