Comments received on poems by Blue Violet
I can\'t write
Thomas W Case said:
Writer\'s block happens. You will write your way out of it. Great job.
October 21st, 2023 11:25
Thomas W Case said:
Writer\'s block happens. You will write your way out of it. Great job.
October 21st, 2023 11:25
To calm the heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'these too shall pass, they said
still, I have to live it through
ironic
how my mind knows enough
but my heart is still, a child
a fool.\'
(I strive to write poetry
that flows as effortlessly
and conquers hearts, as subtly
as your lines)
what a privilege to witness your poetic growth,
and read your memorable words
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
December 17th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'these too shall pass, they said
still, I have to live it through
ironic
how my mind knows enough
but my heart is still, a child
a fool.\'
(I strive to write poetry
that flows as effortlessly
and conquers hearts, as subtly
as your lines)
what a privilege to witness your poetic growth,
and read your memorable words
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
December 17th, 2021 05:11
To calm the heart
Nilanjana said:
Your writing is beautiful , my mind is a mess........
December 17th, 2021 01:28
Nilanjana said:
Your writing is beautiful , my mind is a mess........
December 17th, 2021 01:28
Why?
myself and me said:
We all have that why, yet none of us know the answer.
August 27th, 2021 15:21
myself and me said:
We all have that why, yet none of us know the answer.
August 27th, 2021 15:21
Why?
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, I have known it well, love\'s dilemma. Expressed by you so eloquently.
August 27th, 2021 09:33
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, I have known it well, love\'s dilemma. Expressed by you so eloquently.
August 27th, 2021 09:33
Lover
rebmasters said:
Love this last stanza:
\'Kiss me softly,
until we see the dawn
Kiss me until your loneliness is gone.\'
So beautiful ❤
August 24th, 2021 09:46
rebmasters said:
Love this last stanza:
\'Kiss me softly,
until we see the dawn
Kiss me until your loneliness is gone.\'
So beautiful ❤
August 24th, 2021 09:46
Don\'t forget me, but-
L. B. Mek said:
I think Arvy, phrased it best
an \'intimate conversation\'
is what this felt like,
worded poetic, to serenade the passing
of a most beloved connection..
a beautifully subtle offering from you today
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
I think Arvy, phrased it best
an \'intimate conversation\'
is what this felt like,
worded poetic, to serenade the passing
of a most beloved connection..
a beautifully subtle offering from you today
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 12th, 2021 04:48
Don\'t forget me, but-
rebmasters said:
Reminds me of this beautiful song:
https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44
\'Will you remember us, while having your coffee?\'
Those endless, aching questions we can never know the answer to. Wonderful words x
August 12th, 2021 01:42
rebmasters said:
Reminds me of this beautiful song:
https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44
\'Will you remember us, while having your coffee?\'
Those endless, aching questions we can never know the answer to. Wonderful words x
August 12th, 2021 01:42
Don\'t forget me, but-
Arvy said:
This felt like an intimate conversation between two broken people. Fine write dear Blue Violet!
August 12th, 2021 01:04
Arvy said:
This felt like an intimate conversation between two broken people. Fine write dear Blue Violet!
August 12th, 2021 01:04
Time to say goodbye
HannahElisabeth said:
Love is the most beautiful kind of madness, you captured this so beautifully. Thank you for sharing something so personal, I\'m currently facing the same harsh truth that some people don\'t always stick around.
August 9th, 2021 13:53
HannahElisabeth said:
Love is the most beautiful kind of madness, you captured this so beautifully. Thank you for sharing something so personal, I\'m currently facing the same harsh truth that some people don\'t always stick around.
August 9th, 2021 13:53
Time to say goodbye
Lorna said:
I agree with LB Mek - this phrase was stellar: that we are just meant to meet, not meant to be
August 9th, 2021 06:22
Lorna said:
I agree with LB Mek - this phrase was stellar: that we are just meant to meet, not meant to be
August 9th, 2021 06:22
Time to say goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
sincere in its worded anguish
and clever in poetic phrasing:
\'for you and me
that we are just meant to meet,
not meant to be.\'
(thanks for sharing)
August 9th, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
sincere in its worded anguish
and clever in poetic phrasing:
\'for you and me
that we are just meant to meet,
not meant to be.\'
(thanks for sharing)
August 9th, 2021 05:43
