Comments received on poems by Arvy

Like a Mirage
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery
and tonality, to your poetic voice..
thanks for sharing
\'Made me feel like a poisonous flower
Do you feel the rush and do you desire
Does the magnitude of the tension make you want to devour
Your honor is hanging by a thread that could rupture
All that you have been building what you would call a “structure”
You must be mortified of the rain that you did not foresee
The power i hold could drown you and me\'

July 8th, 2022 05:22

Sunshine and Strawberries
empty vial said:

agh, i love your poems so much :)
they are truly a wonderful read

April 20th, 2022 16:38

Sunshine and Strawberries
orchidee said:

Good write Arvy.

April 8th, 2022 02:44

Sunshine and Strawberries
Dahlia said:

so beautiful a great read :-)

April 7th, 2022 13:34

Sunshine and Strawberries
notbasil said:

Ayooooo, i swear ur poems overclock my imagination

April 7th, 2022 12:46

Dahlia said:

Very well expressed, the way it flows cascading into a superb end, despite what was going on in your personal life, this writing is beautiful & authentic...
Dahlia Vitalia

March 25th, 2022 17:48

When we meet again
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor. We all come from different places though we walk the same road.

March 22nd, 2022 13:23

White shadows
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful paradoxical images of white shadows and a weight pushing to space. Like colors that have no names this poem in its beauty leaves me without words.

March 22nd, 2022 13:17

When we meet again
Rocky Lagou said:

Such a strong message. \"Don\'t belittle my exertion\" was a line that really hit. We\'re all in this same journey together. I love your imagery, this was great!

March 18th, 2022 09:27

Goodbye, until next time.
sorenbarrett said:

A complicated affair much like life itself is complicated. Painful at times not as cognizant of what signals are being sent we blunder and then after dream of what could have been. A good write

March 17th, 2022 13:06

Goodbye, until next time.
Accidental Poet said:

An emotional write Arvy. One we\'ve all experienced at least once. 👍

September 7th, 2021 04:51

Goodbye, until next time.
Inko said:

beautifully written Arvy and its true that love is complicated but even the wisest man, deep inside human nature we all want to love. well done Arvy

September 1st, 2021 13:24

In peace, Forever
Arvy said:

Thank you Job welime

August 15th, 2021 11:24

In peace, Forever
Job welime said:

I lose the sensation just moments from touching anything, I cry, I hold my head low, I can’t look them in the eye, I feel ashamed, can’t fight it, they ask me to but I just can’t, impossible, I cry, I ache, I lie , I sleep, I wake , I eat, I think, I stop
Wow!!! that kinda spoke to me,nice piece Arvy

August 15th, 2021 10:52

In peace, Forever
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Arvy, so much feeling said in your words.


August 14th, 2021 11:50

In peace, Forever
Saxon Crow said:

What a beautiful poem Arvy, full of yearning and heartache. I love this

August 14th, 2021 02:54

In peace, Forever
Arvy said:

In a way, the sky never sleeps, true! It\'s always watching over. And it\'s healthy when people look after themselves but it\'s also healthy to let people who care about you look after you too. The need to be seen and noticed is a human nature, some are lucky to have it, others are still in the look for it. Thank you Teddy for reading, I appreciate it ♥️

August 14th, 2021 02:31

SureshG said:

Intense, intense love, intensely painful when left unspoken
A superb write.

August 13th, 2021 10:26

jarcher54 said:

Well done. Starts out like a love poem, but turns into something so much more. Still a love poem, but a hard-nosed, honest, painful, grown-up gritty love poem. One moment hearts are beating, next thing you know they are bleeding. Sigh...

August 12th, 2021 22:36

Quijote said:

The sadness of an old love silently passing by like a stranger. Well expressed Arvy

August 12th, 2021 08:45

A backtab
Quijote said:

Very emotional write Arvy something at times everyone discovers as Sartre\'s expressed in his famous phrase \"L\'enfer, c\'est les autres\" or \"Hell is other people\"

August 12th, 2021 01:01