Comments received on poems by scebrynski



Am I the Problem?
L. B. Mek said:

this is so relatable
indeed, we only have our eyes to look out from
and so, we mistakenly assume
our perspective is all there is...
a great message, thanks for sharing

November 21st, 2022 05:48

One Last Night
L. B. Mek said:

(read your words and my mind went back
to the music and lyrics I shared below,
that\'s just such a poignant accompaniment to your poetry,
thanks for sharing)..
\'I say I love you
You say that\'s kind
You don\'t wanna get too close
You loved me crazy
I lost my mind
Listen
You\'re everything I never wanted
And all the things I didn\'t need
This ain\'t who I wanna be
You don\'t have to stay forever
I\'ll take passion over pride
Full moon, high tide
Let\'s make it a long goodbye
Tomorrow we\'ll pick up the pieces
Try to mend our broken lives
Soft kiss, sweet lies
Let\'s make it a long goodbye\'..
(lyrics and link, to \'long goodbye\', by the Great: India Arie)
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ZMB0UK4eFk )

November 1st, 2021 06:51

Drowning
L. B. Mek said:

strong imagery,
maximised that classic metaphor really well..
thanks for sharing

October 29th, 2021 04:01

Easy
dusk arising said:

Pain will ease, time will do it\'s healing. Better to let go than live in a negative state. Tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life, a new beginning.

October 27th, 2021 11:11

Green Eyes
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, I too think its all in eyes
our passageway to a meaningful connection;
and that first, glimpse
of the storm of rejection, aimed straight
in our direction...
thanks for sharing, a good read

October 26th, 2021 05:37

Holiday Season
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, those seemingly minuscule actions
we harper back to, in the After;
when we realise their importance
far - too, late..
thanks for sharing,
very relatable

October 25th, 2021 04:58

I Hope
notformymother said:

Powerfully written. Keep pouring your heart on paper - it’s beautiful to read

October 22nd, 2021 20:50

I Hope
Paul Bell said:

A lot of hurt in this write.
Not for the faint-hearted me thinks.



October 22nd, 2021 11:04

I’d Like To Think
L. B. Mek said:

unassumingly subtle in delivery
but acutely succinct, in its poignant details and expressiveness..
written, purposefully accessible and relatable
thanks for sharing

October 22nd, 2021 04:27

I’d Like To Think
Caring dove said:

Lovely poem , but sad

October 22nd, 2021 01:15

I’d Like To Think
Rainbow said:

Nice poetry and well expressed

October 22nd, 2021 01:13

I’d Like To Think
Lyriclitty said:

Sweet sentiment

October 22nd, 2021 00:42