Comments received on poems by FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š



The Pain Life Holds
spilleronsheet said:

Never hold back pain
Let it go and itโ€™s alright to speak
A good one dear poet
Donโ€™t let pain hold you back

January 15th, 2022 11:49

The Pain Life Holds
orchidee said:

Good write Angel.

January 15th, 2022 03:17

The Pain Life Holds
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Thanks Goldfinch,..I think our deepest pain never really leaves us. The best we can do is manage it.
\"My storm has eased is and now just rain\" the storm is the grief and heart wrenching deep pain,it eases but never really passes completely. Thanks again๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿป

January 15th, 2022 01:44

The Pain Life Holds
Goldfinch60 said:

May that storm pass and the brightness comes into you life fallenangel.

Andy

January 15th, 2022 01:31

Comments I see
Laura๐ŸŒป said:

fallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š,

โ€ข โ€œComments I Seeโ€
When I saw the title of your poem, it intrigued me. I had to read it! When I finished reading it, the first comment I saw was from Michael. I TOTALLY agree with his comment and all the others. We all have our styles and we write when weโ€™re inspired or whenever we wish to. We learn from one anotherโ€ฆincluding from the dictionary by your side. I still have and sometimes refer to my original dictionary I used when I was learning the English language.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts .๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ˜„

Laura๐ŸŒป


January 14th, 2022 20:24

Comments I see
L. B. Mek said:

the true test of poetry
is not in its wording or form-fitting
or rather, even its championing
of eloquence..
the true test of poetry
is in its capacity to convey sincerity
and that, dear Poet
is what you\'ve done here
so brilliantly! thank you
for choosing to share
(I read and learn, humbly)

January 14th, 2022 06:05

Comments I see
woundedheart said:

Three dots mean pause between lines, you pen as eloquently as anyone here your poetry is always beautiful. โ˜บ

January 14th, 2022 05:19

Comments I see
dusk arising said:

Us poets do what comes naturally. We express ourselves using a thing called communication. Communication for others to see and so that we can at a later date see what we wrote. Typos and spelling errors we see plenty but who cares really? So long as the meter hasn\'t been shot in the foot or the grammar is really bad or worse still its in a foreign language.. who cares. It\'s thoughts we are transmitting.... expressions of our feelings

January 14th, 2022 05:12

Comments I see
Rozina said:

This is such a clever poem. It is very original, your own. From MPS I have seen poems that flow so beautifully but some I don\'t understand too. The meaning is very deep. I can only do rhyming ones with simple direct words. Still learning. Thank you for sharing this.

January 14th, 2022 03:42

Comments I see
orchidee said:

Good write Angel. Maybe you\'ve invented a new word, though spell-checker does not like it!
The only words you gotta worry about is the ones that I sing, cos I torture everyone by singing \'em! heehee.

January 14th, 2022 03:07

Comments I see
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Thanks spiller๐Ÿ˜€

January 14th, 2022 02:29

Comments I see
spilleronsheet said:

A poet is born cause he speaks from heart
Those elegance and refine isnโ€™t a true poet inside
Cause the true words come straight from inside
Dwelling in readerโ€™s mind

January 14th, 2022 02:13

Comments I see
Goldfinch60 said:

Good honest words fallenAngel that come from the heart.

Andy

January 14th, 2022 01:53

Comments I see
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Thank you so much Michael. That really means a lot coming from such a talent as yourself. Much appreciation๐Ÿ˜€

January 14th, 2022 01:42

Comments I see
Michael Edwards said:

Absolutely love this - so original in concept and a great read - you\'re a true poet.

January 14th, 2022 01:28

๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”žThe Girl Of My Dreams๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

If anybody could Katie,it\'s you๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿป๐ŸŒน

January 13th, 2022 14:02

๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”žThe Girl Of My Dreams๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž
kitty the naughty poet said:

hahaha well im glad i could inspire a wonderfully well-written piece of \'smut\' hahaha

January 13th, 2022 13:35

๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”žThe Girl Of My Dreams๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Lmao๐Ÿ˜‚ I\'ll keep that in mind if I ever find myself down that way,but I live a half hour car ride from Toronto(Church St. & Wellesley St.)one of the worlds biggest lgbtq communities. Our first pride parade was the year I was born,I\'m taking that as a sign๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿป lol๐Ÿ˜ƒ I\'m so glad you likeed it,I was a little worried about how explicit and vulgar it is. I\'m sure someone is bound to be offended,but that seems to be the world we live in these days,where no matter what we say,it will offend someone. Thanks so much for your supportive words here Katie๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ž๐ŸŒนP.s. This is partly your doing too,your influence runs deep. I think you may have created a monster๐Ÿ‘น๐Ÿ™€

January 13th, 2022 12:11

๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”žThe Girl Of My Dreams๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž
kitty the naughty poet said:

hahaha that had me giggling,
nice share lol

January 13th, 2022 11:03


My Little Rant(That Ends With A Question)
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Lmao,no more lost than I am,..well at least we are lost together,as the song goes๐Ÿ˜œ

January 12th, 2022 13:30

My Little Rant(That Ends With A Question)
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Lmao๐Ÿ˜‚ What is what? Did you forget to eat your wheaties this morning?

January 12th, 2022 12:56

My Little Rant(That Ends With A Question)
Michael Edwards said:

I can confirm it = it was ever on the cards. 1972? - you\'re a spring chicken. ๐Ÿ˜š

January 12th, 2022 08:52

My Little Rant(That Ends With A Question)
orchidee said:

\'It wasn\'t me!\' as \'they\' say - whoever they are?!
I wish they would stop messing about spending millions on space travel. Don\'t they know E.T. has gone home?

January 12th, 2022 06:05

Deeper Thoughts
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Thanks rose,..I\'ve learned that some pain like the loss of a loved one brings can\'t be run form or hid from. And I\'ve learned it here at MPS๐Ÿ˜˜






January 11th, 2022 11:11

Deeper Thoughts
Caring dove said:

I like the idea of being away from difficult feelings and emotions , feeling free safe stable and peaceful

A nice writing ))

January 11th, 2022 10:59

This Little Cloud Nine Of Mine That I Did Find
Caring dove said:

Nice poem , fallen Angel ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚.

I love the acceptance and support on here .

January 10th, 2022 13:57

Movie Poetry Madness(Little Gems)
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Thanks Teddy๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ˜˜

January 10th, 2022 12:42

Movie Poetry Madness(Little Gems)
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

Thanks dusk. There certainly is much inspiration to be found in movies. I\'m glad you enjoyed,and thanks for taking the time to read and comment.๐Ÿ˜€

January 10th, 2022 11:44

Movie Poetry Madness(Little Gems)
dusk arising said:

I savour such gems as you\'ve shown us here. I have a file full of phrases and saying which i periodically browse for inspiration.

January 10th, 2022 11:22

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