Comments received on poems by razlin
i wish,, i wish,, i wish.
jessenunez said:
That’s a fight that you never stop fighting, until you do..
November 7th, 2022 20:56
jessenunez said:
That’s a fight that you never stop fighting, until you do..
November 7th, 2022 20:56
I’ve stopped caring.
Christina8 said:
Hey I might write happy poems for the most part now but I\'ve been there. You can message me anytime if you need someone to talk to....Christina
April 5th, 2022 09:17
Christina8 said:
Hey I might write happy poems for the most part now but I\'ve been there. You can message me anytime if you need someone to talk to....Christina
April 5th, 2022 09:17
I don’t want to get better
Christina8 said:
I\'ve been there, but trust me you DO want to get better because then you begin to see colors again and love. Thanks for sharing!
April 4th, 2022 10:45
Christina8 said:
I\'ve been there, but trust me you DO want to get better because then you begin to see colors again and love. Thanks for sharing!
April 4th, 2022 10:45
Attaching too soon.
L. B. Mek said:
people talk about amicable or mutual breakups, like
they\'re some fairy-tale dream, free of pain
when in actuality, they serve-up
twice
of everything, since
you\'re empathizing with that other, someone
whose probably going through
the same misery, you are
the only one
who can understand, your suffering completely
yet
you know reaching out your fingers, to help
or ask for aid
would be an act of cruelty
to you, both...
(such a relatable read
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
people talk about amicable or mutual breakups, like
they\'re some fairy-tale dream, free of pain
when in actuality, they serve-up
twice
of everything, since
you\'re empathizing with that other, someone
whose probably going through
the same misery, you are
the only one
who can understand, your suffering completely
yet
you know reaching out your fingers, to help
or ask for aid
would be an act of cruelty
to you, both...
(such a relatable read
thanks for sharing)
March 25th, 2022 05:16
I envy you
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m sorry about your brother, very sad,may you find comfort in the Lord and may he hold you in his arms while you pour your heart out to Him
March 2nd, 2022 10:00
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m sorry about your brother, very sad,may you find comfort in the Lord and may he hold you in his arms while you pour your heart out to Him
March 2nd, 2022 10:00
I envy you
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. An emotion conveyed directly and understood completely. Envy, It\'s a force that could cause self-destruction. ✨
March 1st, 2022 10:31
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. An emotion conveyed directly and understood completely. Envy, It\'s a force that could cause self-destruction. ✨
March 1st, 2022 10:31
Too much, too early
junia said:
thank you for sharing! the poem is good. i like that the rhymes feel almost accidental which stresses the raw and confused emotions. “heaven knows I tried” is heartbreaking. it is extremely hard to speak up in situations like that and if you are talking from personal experience I hope you were able to find support and help!
February 25th, 2022 14:20
junia said:
thank you for sharing! the poem is good. i like that the rhymes feel almost accidental which stresses the raw and confused emotions. “heaven knows I tried” is heartbreaking. it is extremely hard to speak up in situations like that and if you are talking from personal experience I hope you were able to find support and help!
February 25th, 2022 14:20
Too much, too early
Rocky Lagou said:
Well this was not what I was expecting. CONSENT is a human right. Do not allow yourself to be treated like an animal. No means no. 💖
February 25th, 2022 13:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Well this was not what I was expecting. CONSENT is a human right. Do not allow yourself to be treated like an animal. No means no. 💖
February 25th, 2022 13:12
Untitled #3
Rocky Lagou said:
You ARE loved! Even though it may not be obvious. Self-harm is not worth it. Trust me. I\'m a teenager myself and I lost my own mother at the age of 13. I know how hard loss is. I feel your pain. But I just want to remind you that although the person you\'ve lost may not be present physically anymore, they will forever live on in your memories and your poetry. That\'s why I love poetry, you can express yourself in creative ways. But please, don\'t harm yourself. Life will always have an obstacle along the way, but you just need to take a step back from the chaos of life and really evaluate your position. You\'re still alive. Everyday you wake up is a blessing. Love is always around you, although you may not see it. Life is worth more than death, and I hope that you lift your spirits. 💖
February 24th, 2022 10:22
Rocky Lagou said:
You ARE loved! Even though it may not be obvious. Self-harm is not worth it. Trust me. I\'m a teenager myself and I lost my own mother at the age of 13. I know how hard loss is. I feel your pain. But I just want to remind you that although the person you\'ve lost may not be present physically anymore, they will forever live on in your memories and your poetry. That\'s why I love poetry, you can express yourself in creative ways. But please, don\'t harm yourself. Life will always have an obstacle along the way, but you just need to take a step back from the chaos of life and really evaluate your position. You\'re still alive. Everyday you wake up is a blessing. Love is always around you, although you may not see it. Life is worth more than death, and I hope that you lift your spirits. 💖
February 24th, 2022 10:22
Why didn’t you stop me?
Rocky Lagou said:
I\'m sorry but reading this brought a Mitski song to mind of the same title. It\'s just how my brain is wired. But I honestly understand the despair of this poem, I also struggle with depression. I hope you can see the light in the darkness. You are loved! 💖
February 24th, 2022 10:17
Rocky Lagou said:
I\'m sorry but reading this brought a Mitski song to mind of the same title. It\'s just how my brain is wired. But I honestly understand the despair of this poem, I also struggle with depression. I hope you can see the light in the darkness. You are loved! 💖
February 24th, 2022 10:17
Why didn’t you stop me?
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Shockingly scary words to read. I\'m sorry for your misfortunes,..🌹🕊🌞
January 29th, 2022 19:26
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Shockingly scary words to read. I\'m sorry for your misfortunes,..🌹🕊🌞
January 29th, 2022 19:26
again
kirahdavids said:
absolutely loved this poem, brang tears to my eyes tbh and i relate to this too much : )
December 12th, 2021 07:40
kirahdavids said:
absolutely loved this poem, brang tears to my eyes tbh and i relate to this too much : )
December 12th, 2021 07:40
the last words i’ll say to you
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
I feel this. Great job!
December 10th, 2021 15:16
screaming goat. (New and Improved) said:
I feel this. Great job!
December 10th, 2021 15:16
the last words i’ll say to you
Caring dove said:
Maybe you should talk to a family member about how you feel … or someone who may be able to help .
Take care …
December 10th, 2021 12:14
Caring dove said:
Maybe you should talk to a family member about how you feel … or someone who may be able to help .
Take care …
December 10th, 2021 12:14
untitled #2
Draven said:
Wow, powerful words you write, my friend! Well written too.
December 7th, 2021 17:12
Draven said:
Wow, powerful words you write, my friend! Well written too.
December 7th, 2021 17:12
Fading Scars
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, thank you for the conscientious 🔞
and for wording your struggles
so thoroughly transparent..
I\'m so tired of people
using self harming
as sensationalist imagery
for their self-aggrandizing
nihilistic poetry..
But, when someone
genuinely words such sincere
lines of excruciating anxiety
and strife,
we can only praise you
for your bravery!
\'in my humble opinion..
(thank you for choosing to share
and just fyi
I always try to include info on possible helplines
and sources of advise
if I write words that may trigger people into seeking help for themselves
make their first step, that little easier to realise and grasp)
( https://www.therapyroute.com/article/helplines-suicide-hotlines-and-crisis-lines-from-around-the-world )
(
https://www.mind.org.uk/information-support/types-of-mental-health-problems/self-harm/useful-contacts/ )
December 7th, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, thank you for the conscientious 🔞
and for wording your struggles
so thoroughly transparent..
I\'m so tired of people
using self harming
as sensationalist imagery
for their self-aggrandizing
nihilistic poetry..
But, when someone
genuinely words such sincere
lines of excruciating anxiety
and strife,
we can only praise you
for your bravery!
\'in my humble opinion..
(thank you for choosing to share
and just fyi
I always try to include info on possible helplines
and sources of advise
if I write words that may trigger people into seeking help for themselves
make their first step, that little easier to realise and grasp)
( https://www.therapyroute.com/article/helplines-suicide-hotlines-and-crisis-lines-from-around-the-world )
(
https://www.mind.org.uk/information-support/types-of-mental-health-problems/self-harm/useful-contacts/ )
December 7th, 2021 05:14
Fading Scars
Caring dove said:
I read the comments , didn’t read the poem completely … but I’m sorry your in pain and maybe you could find someone to help you with how you feel .
Take care
December 7th, 2021 05:07
Caring dove said:
I read the comments , didn’t read the poem completely … but I’m sorry your in pain and maybe you could find someone to help you with how you feel .
Take care
December 7th, 2021 05:07
my black and white nightgown
Draven said:
Reading this fills me with dread. Very well written and so, so heavy x
December 5th, 2021 06:53
Draven said:
Reading this fills me with dread. Very well written and so, so heavy x
December 5th, 2021 06:53
