Comments received on poems by lulu
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Paul Price said:
Its a very nice short poem. yes I would like to read more of them ; )
October 8th, 2011 17:52
Paul Price said:
Its a very nice short poem. yes I would like to read more of them ; )
October 8th, 2011 17:52
This is life :(
Cheeky Missy said:
It is so cute how you express it, almost amusing, and yet your miserably alone situation sobers it to a deep sorrow. You express a mature attitude in realizing living involves losses where it most hurts us....and the conclusion to never be close again to avoid such grief is not uncommon, but wouldn't it be better to hurt and suffer the loss than be alone and hard? Despite its deep sadness, you've got a cuteness/sweetness that made it too enjoyable to read.
January 21st, 2011 22:12
Cheeky Missy said:
It is so cute how you express it, almost amusing, and yet your miserably alone situation sobers it to a deep sorrow. You express a mature attitude in realizing living involves losses where it most hurts us....and the conclusion to never be close again to avoid such grief is not uncommon, but wouldn't it be better to hurt and suffer the loss than be alone and hard? Despite its deep sadness, you've got a cuteness/sweetness that made it too enjoyable to read.
January 21st, 2011 22:12
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Cheeky Missy said:
For your FIRST poem I think it is very good! Short and sweet and so expressive, covering to much in a few lines. The end-rhyming is very nice. I enjoyed it. Of course, I am comparing it with my first poems, which are so simplistic, that the world has never seen them yet...I think this one of yours is very promising.
January 21st, 2011 22:03
Cheeky Missy said:
For your FIRST poem I think it is very good! Short and sweet and so expressive, covering to much in a few lines. The end-rhyming is very nice. I enjoyed it. Of course, I am comparing it with my first poems, which are so simplistic, that the world has never seen them yet...I think this one of yours is very promising.
January 21st, 2011 22:03
school days
Cheeky Missy said:
I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful presentation of school days with friends...it's humorous and funny, especially the last two lines...and too cute too....
Too bad your friends have be so impossibly far away...sweet memories are comforting....but left with only memories, it is hard. This is a delightful tribute to your close friends! I love your rhyming and rythm!
January 21st, 2011 21:57
Cheeky Missy said:
I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful presentation of school days with friends...it's humorous and funny, especially the last two lines...and too cute too....
Too bad your friends have be so impossibly far away...sweet memories are comforting....but left with only memories, it is hard. This is a delightful tribute to your close friends! I love your rhyming and rythm!
January 21st, 2011 21:57
This is life :(
nair36 said:
YOur a great poet Lulu,
I can feel your poem. This one is very deep. I like it... sad but good. I'm sorry if you are having trouble in school. My advise is tokeep your head up. You're a great person. Don't forget it. :)
October 2nd, 2010 21:02
nair36 said:
YOur a great poet Lulu,
I can feel your poem. This one is very deep. I like it... sad but good. I'm sorry if you are having trouble in school. My advise is tokeep your head up. You're a great person. Don't forget it. :)
October 2nd, 2010 21:02
Sick of living
Vember-Reigh said:
wow this is simply talent , your an amazing poet , :D
September 9th, 2010 17:40
Vember-Reigh said:
wow this is simply talent , your an amazing poet , :D
September 9th, 2010 17:40
Sick of living
nair36 said:
your great lulu. your poems and yourself. its good that u know there is hope though.
August 14th, 2010 12:56
nair36 said:
your great lulu. your poems and yourself. its good that u know there is hope though.
August 14th, 2010 12:56
school days
Kri2arch said:
Wow! Memories can never be washed away by the long showers we take. Its a beautiful piece, i love it.
August 9th, 2010 02:22
Kri2arch said:
Wow! Memories can never be washed away by the long showers we take. Its a beautiful piece, i love it.
August 9th, 2010 02:22
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Huzaidi Hashim said:
A very expressive poem. You have a gift that is rare and beautiful. Your poem gave me the impression that you are still very young. Youth present many challenges not just to the young, but also to those who care for you. My poem 'Raging Youth' expresses my own feelings for my children who have ventured out into the open world. I know a little Arabic but I would love to read some of your work because poetry is best expressed in the language you are most comfortable with. I'm not sure if you can but maybe you could try posting them to us. A translated version would make it easier for us to read.
July 22nd, 2010 03:28
Huzaidi Hashim said:
A very expressive poem. You have a gift that is rare and beautiful. Your poem gave me the impression that you are still very young. Youth present many challenges not just to the young, but also to those who care for you. My poem 'Raging Youth' expresses my own feelings for my children who have ventured out into the open world. I know a little Arabic but I would love to read some of your work because poetry is best expressed in the language you are most comfortable with. I'm not sure if you can but maybe you could try posting them to us. A translated version would make it easier for us to read.
July 22nd, 2010 03:28
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lulu said:
Thanks u all 4 these words that made me feel so happy but also am writing arabic poems but i dont know if u know arabic poems or know the arabic language but if u do tell me so i can publish them :P cheers u all take care :D
July 17th, 2010 15:37
lulu said:
Thanks u all 4 these words that made me feel so happy but also am writing arabic poems but i dont know if u know arabic poems or know the arabic language but if u do tell me so i can publish them :P cheers u all take care :D
July 17th, 2010 15:37
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Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Having the guts to publish the first one ...takes a lot...
and you did it!!!
show some more of your good talent!
give us more
hugs
July 15th, 2010 06:58
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Having the guts to publish the first one ...takes a lot...
and you did it!!!
show some more of your good talent!
give us more
hugs
July 15th, 2010 06:58
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lulu said:
first of all thanks but what cool is that when u rate 3/10 ohhhh god it's my first 1 4 god saake
July 13th, 2010 10:42
lulu said:
first of all thanks but what cool is that when u rate 3/10 ohhhh god it's my first 1 4 god saake
July 13th, 2010 10:42
