Comments received on poems by Kayla Jackson
Steps
NDOU ROLIVHUWA said:
Wow, Kayla, your poem is incredibly powerful and inspiring! Your words are a testament to your strength and resilience. You\'re claiming your worth and identity, and it\'s a beautiful thing to see. Keep speaking your truth and shining your light - your poem is a reminder that our flaws and imperfections are a part of what make us unique and valuable. Keep climbing, Kayla, and know that your words are making a difference.
June 25th, 2024 13:33
NDOU ROLIVHUWA said:
Wow, Kayla, your poem is incredibly powerful and inspiring! Your words are a testament to your strength and resilience. You\'re claiming your worth and identity, and it\'s a beautiful thing to see. Keep speaking your truth and shining your light - your poem is a reminder that our flaws and imperfections are a part of what make us unique and valuable. Keep climbing, Kayla, and know that your words are making a difference.
June 25th, 2024 13:33
A smile she hides
Bobby O said:
I think maybe she is worth it and I feel the weight transferred to her was actually his plan along. He failed her and pompously hides that with a chest thump that actually exposes him as the charlatan that slid the weight of his shortcomings into her. Perhaps her only fault is trusting a selfish fuck that tucks his problems and faults into the waistband of a goodhearted soul that wants to believe and he abused her kindness.
Nice write goood read
June 6th, 2024 23:50
Bobby O said:
I think maybe she is worth it and I feel the weight transferred to her was actually his plan along. He failed her and pompously hides that with a chest thump that actually exposes him as the charlatan that slid the weight of his shortcomings into her. Perhaps her only fault is trusting a selfish fuck that tucks his problems and faults into the waistband of a goodhearted soul that wants to believe and he abused her kindness.
Nice write goood read
June 6th, 2024 23:50
Self-Pity
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a confession for you - shows plenty of self awareness.
September 28th, 2023 20:12
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s a confession for you - shows plenty of self awareness.
September 28th, 2023 20:12
Worth While
L. B. Mek said:
love is negotiated as a totality,
partial participation
means they were never after
the real thing, to begin with..
(i so relate, thanks for sharing)
August 25th, 2023 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
love is negotiated as a totality,
partial participation
means they were never after
the real thing, to begin with..
(i so relate, thanks for sharing)
August 25th, 2023 03:56
The storm
vividvoid14 said:
hey kayla, so happy to see another one of your poems. They never dissapoint
August 18th, 2023 15:38
vividvoid14 said:
hey kayla, so happy to see another one of your poems. They never dissapoint
August 18th, 2023 15:38
Every piece of me
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) self love is so important
August 8th, 2023 22:33
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) self love is so important
August 8th, 2023 22:33
Beneath the stars
sasherington said:
Gosh such beautiful imagery! I can already imagine it in my head. Any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:35
sasherington said:
Gosh such beautiful imagery! I can already imagine it in my head. Any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:35
Hey ;)
L. B. Mek said:
lovely flow
wonderfully meaningful \'found poetry\'
thanks for sharing
April 21st, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
lovely flow
wonderfully meaningful \'found poetry\'
thanks for sharing
April 21st, 2023 05:58
an ugly shade
Kayla Jackson said:
I honestly wasn’t sure if it would be so thank you!
March 30th, 2023 17:15
Kayla Jackson said:
I honestly wasn’t sure if it would be so thank you!
March 30th, 2023 17:15
an ugly shade
Keiffer said:
very relatable to anyone with depression, felt the void.
March 6th, 2023 17:01
Keiffer said:
very relatable to anyone with depression, felt the void.
March 6th, 2023 17:01
Pain and heavy burdens
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
more power to you!
fight the good fight!
beauty is born of fragments
never delivered whole
from the outset
take your time, glue
each piece back
till you complete that puzzle
you seek, to rediscover
and if some pieces are missing
so what
nature\'s gap-toothed, \'touch\'
yields more lasting beauty
than all those shining, \'fixed\'
fakery..
January 16th, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing
more power to you!
fight the good fight!
beauty is born of fragments
never delivered whole
from the outset
take your time, glue
each piece back
till you complete that puzzle
you seek, to rediscover
and if some pieces are missing
so what
nature\'s gap-toothed, \'touch\'
yields more lasting beauty
than all those shining, \'fixed\'
fakery..
January 16th, 2023 05:09
Sometimes
mvvenkataraman said:
You are a noble poet indeed,
Nowadays none sees the Sky
With awe in the night so sadly,
All are busy by chasing something,
You not only see Moon and Stars,
But you speak to them something,
Lovely and I admire your emotions!
December 30th, 2022 22:41
mvvenkataraman said:
You are a noble poet indeed,
Nowadays none sees the Sky
With awe in the night so sadly,
All are busy by chasing something,
You not only see Moon and Stars,
But you speak to them something,
Lovely and I admire your emotions!
December 30th, 2022 22:41
When you find her
L. B. Mek said:
Elizabeth Browning
would have loved
your choice wording, I think
I hope
your prince\'s, heed these wise words
and grow-up to be king\'s
who earn their mother\'s pride..
(thank you for sharing
such a lovely read
especially the last line)
August 12th, 2022 02:34
L. B. Mek said:
Elizabeth Browning
would have loved
your choice wording, I think
I hope
your prince\'s, heed these wise words
and grow-up to be king\'s
who earn their mother\'s pride..
(thank you for sharing
such a lovely read
especially the last line)
August 12th, 2022 02:34
Make Sure
L. B. Mek said:
wise words, I hope she heeds
if not
hope she find her own, values
to anchor: her Worth!..
thanks for sharing
June 23rd, 2022 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
wise words, I hope she heeds
if not
hope she find her own, values
to anchor: her Worth!..
thanks for sharing
June 23rd, 2022 03:48
