Comments received on poems by Kayla Jackson
The Unfound
sorenbarrett said:
This short poem has a certain hidden charm to it. It is hidden in the rhyme in the center of this poem with a triple repetition framed with a starting line without rhyme and an ending line without rhyme. It is not just this but the meaning of the poem is deep with the introduction of searching within for another. A lovely write and a fave
January 24th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This short poem has a certain hidden charm to it. It is hidden in the rhyme in the center of this poem with a triple repetition framed with a starting line without rhyme and an ending line without rhyme. It is not just this but the meaning of the poem is deep with the introduction of searching within for another. A lovely write and a fave
January 24th, 2026 03:40
Emotional Ink
sorenbarrett said:
Color such an important part of artistic expression is generally left out of print because of the difficulty discerning letters from background. I once wrote a poem in yellow and had so many complain that they could not read it. Contrast works here. A lovely poem of metaphor in color and emotion well written
January 16th, 2026 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Color such an important part of artistic expression is generally left out of print because of the difficulty discerning letters from background. I once wrote a poem in yellow and had so many complain that they could not read it. Contrast works here. A lovely poem of metaphor in color and emotion well written
January 16th, 2026 06:35
Emotional Ink
Paul Bell said:
Colour does rule your life in a way.
And at the moment we all want blue skies yellow sun, blue lagoon, and topped up tan.
January 16th, 2026 04:37
Paul Bell said:
Colour does rule your life in a way.
And at the moment we all want blue skies yellow sun, blue lagoon, and topped up tan.
January 16th, 2026 04:37
Hourglass and Bone
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery in this poem is wonderful and it seemed surreal. The meaning too was wonderful as I thought of that is all that we are left with. A lovely piece and a fave
December 12th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery in this poem is wonderful and it seemed surreal. The meaning too was wonderful as I thought of that is all that we are left with. A lovely piece and a fave
December 12th, 2025 04:03
An unforgettable taste
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write where the taste of the past is like savoring wine, the fine memories grow fonder and the bad sour more. Nicely done
November 24th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write where the taste of the past is like savoring wine, the fine memories grow fonder and the bad sour more. Nicely done
November 24th, 2025 03:47
High Tide
Megan Blaney said:
Beautiful. I love how your poems say so much with few lines
November 20th, 2025 18:51
Megan Blaney said:
Beautiful. I love how your poems say so much with few lines
November 20th, 2025 18:51
The world a distant hum
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls to the reader from the shadows. It speaks softly and seductively with allure. Nicely done
November 19th, 2025 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls to the reader from the shadows. It speaks softly and seductively with allure. Nicely done
November 19th, 2025 03:34
Nothing young can stay
sorenbarrett said:
This poem required multiple readings due to the last line that provoked different thoughts each time read. Nicely done
November 14th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem required multiple readings due to the last line that provoked different thoughts each time read. Nicely done
November 14th, 2025 04:12
High Tide
sorenbarrett said:
When someone incompatible becomes incorporated into you there is this feeling. Nicely written
November 11th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
When someone incompatible becomes incorporated into you there is this feeling. Nicely written
November 11th, 2025 04:09
High Tide
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! For one who looks so young you sing like an old soul!
November 10th, 2025 22:42
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! For one who looks so young you sing like an old soul!
November 10th, 2025 22:42
Quiet Battles
sorenbarrett said:
This one echoes like steel on stone in a dark ally. It calls out of the night and in poetic words speaks desperation. Well done a fave
November 6th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
This one echoes like steel on stone in a dark ally. It calls out of the night and in poetic words speaks desperation. Well done a fave
November 6th, 2025 04:30
Quiet Battles
NinjaGirl said:
Thank goodness for mothers everywhere! For holding us up when they were holding themselves together. Beautiful tribute
November 5th, 2025 20:30
NinjaGirl said:
Thank goodness for mothers everywhere! For holding us up when they were holding themselves together. Beautiful tribute
November 5th, 2025 20:30
After the coma
sorenbarrett said:
Often what we see as another\'s fault is that of our own. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
Often what we see as another\'s fault is that of our own. Nicely written
October 26th, 2025 14:41
Autoimmune
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is like holding onto the wind\'s tail. Well written
October 20th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is like holding onto the wind\'s tail. Well written
October 20th, 2025 11:46
Patience
RSM0812 said:
A remarkable poem envoking to me a sense of a person trying to rebuild their life. Nice ✍️. I thouroughly enjoyed this.
October 14th, 2025 05:24
RSM0812 said:
A remarkable poem envoking to me a sense of a person trying to rebuild their life. Nice ✍️. I thouroughly enjoyed this.
October 14th, 2025 05:24
Patience
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and explanation. Short but it makes its point quickly. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning and explanation. Short but it makes its point quickly. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 03:35
The Desire
sorenbarrett said:
The sky always stimulates the imagination and a sense of wonder. How much time spent looking off into space. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
The sky always stimulates the imagination and a sense of wonder. How much time spent looking off into space. Nicely written
September 23rd, 2025 04:00
self-loathing
sorenbarrett said:
Not being a woman I will take your word for it. This write is clear and and concise in its message and nicely put in a poetic manner
September 21st, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Not being a woman I will take your word for it. This write is clear and and concise in its message and nicely put in a poetic manner
September 21st, 2025 20:10
Continue reading
Keeter C said:
I can sympathize with this testament all too well. Nice!
September 4th, 2025 11:34
Keeter C said:
I can sympathize with this testament all too well. Nice!
September 4th, 2025 11:34
echoes
MatPie said:
Goes to show how history sometimes never repeats itself. The echo is gone. What a nice poem
August 26th, 2025 00:56
MatPie said:
Goes to show how history sometimes never repeats itself. The echo is gone. What a nice poem
August 26th, 2025 00:56
echoes
sorenbarrett said:
Short and sweet a clever play on a famous saying applied to missing someone
August 25th, 2025 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
Short and sweet a clever play on a famous saying applied to missing someone
August 25th, 2025 17:05
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