Comments received on poems by Kayla Jackson

Doggerel Dave said:

There\'s a confession for you - shows plenty of self awareness.

September 28th, 2023 20:12

Worth While
L. B. Mek said:

love is negotiated as a totality,
partial participation
means they were never after
the real thing, to begin with..
(i so relate, thanks for sharing)

August 25th, 2023 03:56

The storm
vividvoid14 said:

hey kayla, so happy to see another one of your poems. They never dissapoint

August 18th, 2023 15:38

an ugly shade
Bellbell_060609 said:

This is so relatable

August 18th, 2023 10:45

vividvoid14 said:

i agree with peto

please keep writing

August 9th, 2023 14:20

Pain and heavy burdens
vividvoid14 said:

i love your poem

August 9th, 2023 14:18

peto said:

Perfect write
Says so much with so few words

August 9th, 2023 14:15

Every piece of me
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing ) self love is so important

August 8th, 2023 22:33

teardrop said:

I really like this.Put a smile on my face.

August 8th, 2023 22:16

Every piece of me
L. B. Mek said:

more power to you!

June 9th, 2023 04:20

Every piece of me
Bobby O said:

Speed that word! Twas an uplifting read.

June 9th, 2023 01:58

Beneath the stars
sasherington said:

Gosh such beautiful imagery! I can already imagine it in my head. Any inspiration?

April 21st, 2023 19:35

Hey ;)
Kayla Jackson said:

Thank You! I appreciate your kind words!

April 21st, 2023 17:00

Hey ;)
L. B. Mek said:

lovely flow
wonderfully meaningful \'found poetry\'
thanks for sharing

April 21st, 2023 05:58

an ugly shade
Kayla Jackson said:

I honestly wasn’t sure if it would be so thank you!

March 30th, 2023 17:15

an ugly shade
Keiffer said:

very relatable to anyone with depression, felt the void.

March 6th, 2023 17:01

Pain and heavy burdens
L. B. Mek said:

thanks for sharing
more power to you!
fight the good fight!
beauty is born of fragments
never delivered whole
from the outset
take your time, glue
each piece back
till you complete that puzzle
you seek, to rediscover
and if some pieces are missing
so what
nature\'s gap-toothed, \'touch\'
yields more lasting beauty
than all those shining, \'fixed\'

January 16th, 2023 05:09

The salt in his kiss
Cedrick said:

Lovely poem.

January 3rd, 2023 15:26

mvvenkataraman said:

You are a noble poet indeed,
Nowadays none sees the Sky
With awe in the night so sadly,
All are busy by chasing something,
You not only see Moon and Stars,
But you speak to them something,
Lovely and I admire your emotions!

December 30th, 2022 22:41

When you find her
L. B. Mek said:

Elizabeth Browning
would have loved
your choice wording, I think
I hope
your prince\'s, heed these wise words
and grow-up to be king\'s
who earn their mother\'s pride..
(thank you for sharing
such a lovely read
especially the last line)

August 12th, 2022 02:34

When you find her
Paul Bell said:

Seems like sound advice to me.

August 11th, 2022 12:10

Make Sure
L. B. Mek said:

wise words, I hope she heeds
if not
hope she find her own, values
to anchor: her Worth!..
thanks for sharing

June 23rd, 2022 03:48