Comments received on poems by Susanne
Red string
L. B. Mek said:
I do like the lore of the red string of fate
but mainly because, it\'s potentially limitless
in length
and so, you can miss your opportunities
time n again
and still have that same string cross your path,
but if you stay still and give-in
to those stumbles and momentary defeats
the string will also remain listless
and seemingly distant..
so yes, fate can be cruel
but we still have some say
in what \'good\' we can
curate
out of our own lives...
(good imagery and expressive writing, thanks for sharing)
March 7th, 2022 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
I do like the lore of the red string of fate
but mainly because, it\'s potentially limitless
in length
and so, you can miss your opportunities
time n again
and still have that same string cross your path,
but if you stay still and give-in
to those stumbles and momentary defeats
the string will also remain listless
and seemingly distant..
so yes, fate can be cruel
but we still have some say
in what \'good\' we can
curate
out of our own lives...
(good imagery and expressive writing, thanks for sharing)
March 7th, 2022 05:08
Painting Paragraphs
Rozina said:
I’m not an artist. But you have made me think about poetry and art in a different way. It’s beautiful.
February 26th, 2022 17:30
Rozina said:
I’m not an artist. But you have made me think about poetry and art in a different way. It’s beautiful.
February 26th, 2022 17:30
Painting Paragraphs
Michael Edwards said:
I have a vast collection of poetry in many volumes which I call collectively \'Painting with Words\' this is partly because I am primarily an artist and I see poetry as going hand in glove with art - from cartoons through to realism. My special love is abstract art and I\'m posting a poem tomorrow which is semi-abstract in form in that it invites the reader to interpret it. Enough about me for which I apologise and back to your poem - I\'m with every word you write and if only others would view poetry this way it would be so much more popular. Great write Susanne.
February 26th, 2022 15:25
Michael Edwards said:
I have a vast collection of poetry in many volumes which I call collectively \'Painting with Words\' this is partly because I am primarily an artist and I see poetry as going hand in glove with art - from cartoons through to realism. My special love is abstract art and I\'m posting a poem tomorrow which is semi-abstract in form in that it invites the reader to interpret it. Enough about me for which I apologise and back to your poem - I\'m with every word you write and if only others would view poetry this way it would be so much more popular. Great write Susanne.
February 26th, 2022 15:25
Cake Of Sorrows
orchidee said:
You are so old now - 13. Doh! heehee.
But you have hardly started your life. lol.
February 5th, 2022 11:55
orchidee said:
You are so old now - 13. Doh! heehee.
But you have hardly started your life. lol.
February 5th, 2022 11:55
Cake Of Sorrows
Paul Bell said:
Man, there\'s a lot of hurt in this poem. A little betrayal with salt thrown in the wounds.
February 5th, 2022 11:37
Paul Bell said:
Man, there\'s a lot of hurt in this poem. A little betrayal with salt thrown in the wounds.
February 5th, 2022 11:37
Little Bird
L. B. Mek said:
\'Gaslight us into thinking it’s us with the problem
It\'s not us
We’re not the problem it’s not us
We’re the person who is in a birdcage trying to break free
Struggling as others watch in silence\'..
(an empowering read, to say the least
thanks for sharing)
February 4th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Gaslight us into thinking it’s us with the problem
It\'s not us
We’re not the problem it’s not us
We’re the person who is in a birdcage trying to break free
Struggling as others watch in silence\'..
(an empowering read, to say the least
thanks for sharing)
February 4th, 2022 04:46
Smile
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Love this ! Lovely writing 🙂
February 2nd, 2022 17:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Love this ! Lovely writing 🙂
February 2nd, 2022 17:39
