Comments received on poems by littlegreenbag
Your performance of a lifetime
L. B. Mek said:
\'I keep giving you silent treatment\'
dear Poet,
this is a powerful tool!
ignoring someone, when you finally realise
there is no other way
is a viable option for insuring
your survival
but
more than the silent treatment
you need to cultivate an indifference
to that person\'s existence
every day, reinforce your will
whatever they do
you must insure, it can\'t effect you
cultivate your independence
let their words, simply flow
like a pervasive stink, show
you can\'t avoid it all
you can\'t ignore their taunts and antics
but
with each occasion you can overcome
without reacting
you grow by marginalising their power
to influence your life
and soon, you\'ll find a cold embrace
hardening your heart
till someday, whatever they do
you realise, how pathetic they are
from your point of view
do not race to hate
that\'s a self-corrosive influence
they will try to taint you with
instead
imagine them as being too, insignificant
to hate
theirs more power in indifference, than hate...
till then, just survive day to day
and be proud
overcoming our toxic families and circumstances
of birth
is that first, hurdle
we all must navigate in life..
and never apologise
for letting your Poetry, carry
some of your burdens in life
purposed negativity, can be a tool
of self-therapy
utilise your Art, as you see fit..
stay strong!
April 7th, 2023 02:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'I keep giving you silent treatment\'
dear Poet,
this is a powerful tool!
ignoring someone, when you finally realise
there is no other way
is a viable option for insuring
your survival
but
more than the silent treatment
you need to cultivate an indifference
to that person\'s existence
every day, reinforce your will
whatever they do
you must insure, it can\'t effect you
cultivate your independence
let their words, simply flow
like a pervasive stink, show
you can\'t avoid it all
you can\'t ignore their taunts and antics
but
with each occasion you can overcome
without reacting
you grow by marginalising their power
to influence your life
and soon, you\'ll find a cold embrace
hardening your heart
till someday, whatever they do
you realise, how pathetic they are
from your point of view
do not race to hate
that\'s a self-corrosive influence
they will try to taint you with
instead
imagine them as being too, insignificant
to hate
theirs more power in indifference, than hate...
till then, just survive day to day
and be proud
overcoming our toxic families and circumstances
of birth
is that first, hurdle
we all must navigate in life..
and never apologise
for letting your Poetry, carry
some of your burdens in life
purposed negativity, can be a tool
of self-therapy
utilise your Art, as you see fit..
stay strong!
April 7th, 2023 02:43
Brother
L. B. Mek said:
I always dreamed of having a brother
I\'m jealous of all who have someone
they can relate to, without restraint
or a need to pretend
that you appreciate your gift, warms me
that you can ink your thoughts
so eloquently
makes me smile..
thank you! for choosing to share
February 13th, 2023 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
I always dreamed of having a brother
I\'m jealous of all who have someone
they can relate to, without restraint
or a need to pretend
that you appreciate your gift, warms me
that you can ink your thoughts
so eloquently
makes me smile..
thank you! for choosing to share
February 13th, 2023 05:33
Complicated love
L. B. Mek said:
musings of a restless heart at that \'Tiger hour\'..
so relatable, thanks for sharing
November 7th, 2022 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
musings of a restless heart at that \'Tiger hour\'..
so relatable, thanks for sharing
November 7th, 2022 05:15
Great (pity) party
L. B. Mek said:
such
a slim line between, compassion
and unwelcome, pitying
but its a very distinct and clearly
outlined, line..
thanks for sharing
May 20th, 2022 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
such
a slim line between, compassion
and unwelcome, pitying
but its a very distinct and clearly
outlined, line..
thanks for sharing
May 20th, 2022 03:46
I hear you
theneophiles_words said:
\'I hear you\' are the three most beautiful words you can say to someone. It holds so much in them that we cannot describe.
March 30th, 2022 13:25
theneophiles_words said:
\'I hear you\' are the three most beautiful words you can say to someone. It holds so much in them that we cannot describe.
March 30th, 2022 13:25
I won\'t forget about you
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes I feel it\'s the bond more than the memories we miss. Memories get replaced by time, but we cannot replace how someone made us feel. And it stays with us till the end.
March 30th, 2022 13:14
theneophiles_words said:
Sometimes I feel it\'s the bond more than the memories we miss. Memories get replaced by time, but we cannot replace how someone made us feel. And it stays with us till the end.
March 30th, 2022 13:14
I won\'t forget about you
Rocky Lagou said:
Memories linger forever but they\'re reminders of good times. Great poem! Have a lovely day! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 10:22
Rocky Lagou said:
Memories linger forever but they\'re reminders of good times. Great poem! Have a lovely day! 💖
March 2nd, 2022 10:22
Bring them hope
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoyed reading this piece. As a Christian and someone who truely does believe in the Lord, I know that although war does happen, and sometimes being justified, love always conquors in the end. Keep writing my friend. Keep the faith.
Persistence is key
February 25th, 2022 05:22
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoyed reading this piece. As a Christian and someone who truely does believe in the Lord, I know that although war does happen, and sometimes being justified, love always conquors in the end. Keep writing my friend. Keep the faith.
Persistence is key
February 25th, 2022 05:22
Bring them hope
Paul Bell said:
Ukraine should have been fast tracked into nato, now the puppet west will bellow hot air as usual.
February 24th, 2022 12:58
Paul Bell said:
Ukraine should have been fast tracked into nato, now the puppet west will bellow hot air as usual.
February 24th, 2022 12:58
Bring them hope
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! What a tragic headline I woke up to as well. We can only pray for a change to stir. 💖
February 24th, 2022 12:02
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen! What a tragic headline I woke up to as well. We can only pray for a change to stir. 💖
February 24th, 2022 12:02
For the delayed Valentine\'s
Alexander Pope III said:
Wonderful lines littlegreenbag. Keep it up. You will get everything great in life
February 17th, 2022 20:59
Alexander Pope III said:
Wonderful lines littlegreenbag. Keep it up. You will get everything great in life
February 17th, 2022 20:59
I hear you
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. This is so relatable. I\'m horrible at giving advice and now that I have an anthem for that is everything! Good job! 👍💖
February 7th, 2022 13:58
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. This is so relatable. I\'m horrible at giving advice and now that I have an anthem for that is everything! Good job! 👍💖
February 7th, 2022 13:58
