Comments received on poems by joslouis
Sunclouds
Cassie58 said:
I found sunshine in this lovely poem, and that may not be a cure for all hurts, but it certainly helps. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:33
Cassie58 said:
I found sunshine in this lovely poem, and that may not be a cure for all hurts, but it certainly helps. Happy new year.
January 1st, 2024 08:33
Sunclouds
Bragee said:
Poem of passion!
Reminds me of my feeling towards my daughter!
January 1st, 2024 04:22
Bragee said:
Poem of passion!
Reminds me of my feeling towards my daughter!
January 1st, 2024 04:22
Life is an opportunity
L. B. Mek said:
so true
wise words, thanks for sharing dear poet
June 9th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
so true
wise words, thanks for sharing dear poet
June 9th, 2023 04:10
Decision
L. B. Mek said:
mindfully
that keyword, saved for last
to be mindful
that come what may, we find a way
to prevail, to witness
what our stories may yet yield
(a most relatable read, dear poet
thanks for sharing)
June 2nd, 2023 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
mindfully
that keyword, saved for last
to be mindful
that come what may, we find a way
to prevail, to witness
what our stories may yet yield
(a most relatable read, dear poet
thanks for sharing)
June 2nd, 2023 04:26
I Spilled my Treasure
Ok Waleed said:
You ever seen Nemo? You gotta be like that fish that loves his treasure
March 19th, 2023 10:36
Ok Waleed said:
You ever seen Nemo? You gotta be like that fish that loves his treasure
March 19th, 2023 10:36
Anyone
L. B. Mek said:
so very clever!
read the lines in reverse
from bottom, up
to extract that poetic volition
\'our existential crisis, versed\'
so very clever!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
(Camus would like this I think)
\'Anyone\'
so true, so raw
such a sad reality for so many..
February 10th, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
so very clever!
read the lines in reverse
from bottom, up
to extract that poetic volition
\'our existential crisis, versed\'
so very clever!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
(Camus would like this I think)
\'Anyone\'
so true, so raw
such a sad reality for so many..
February 10th, 2023 05:58
Anyone
Ok Waleed said:
Thank you for writing this. When you feel alone find art, indulge in it, create it. Thank you for sharing
February 10th, 2023 01:13
Ok Waleed said:
Thank you for writing this. When you feel alone find art, indulge in it, create it. Thank you for sharing
February 10th, 2023 01:13
Anyone
2781 said:
Fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you, yes,I will uphold you with My righteous right hand.\'
February 9th, 2023 22:21
2781 said:
Fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you, yes,I will uphold you with My righteous right hand.\'
February 9th, 2023 22:21
Under the Blanket
L. B. Mek said:
rain does help curate
that most seductive of mellow ambiences
so enticing to blink, in beat
with those droplets on our window screens
and let them usher us back to a time of rest..
a relatable read, thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2022 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
rain does help curate
that most seductive of mellow ambiences
so enticing to blink, in beat
with those droplets on our window screens
and let them usher us back to a time of rest..
a relatable read, thanks for sharing
December 16th, 2022 06:07
At the Train
L. B. Mek said:
that repetitive drumming of metal
that track as narrowed destiny
that promise of a seated journey
train tracks, too
can be a source of solace
just like
that shoreline\'s calming waves...
(such clarity of vividity
a dive within refreshing words
brilliantly executed, dear poet)
thank you!
November 7th, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
that repetitive drumming of metal
that track as narrowed destiny
that promise of a seated journey
train tracks, too
can be a source of solace
just like
that shoreline\'s calming waves...
(such clarity of vividity
a dive within refreshing words
brilliantly executed, dear poet)
thank you!
November 7th, 2022 05:53
Ghost
L. B. Mek said:
Thanks for sharing, a memorable and therapeutic read for me personally
please, forgive my overopinionated rant below
I interpreted your words a little too literally:
(distance, is my go-to
for problem solving or avoiding
those toxic people
we all come across...
since there\'s no way to fight
such levels of callous obliviousness or wilful ignorance..
warped mindset\'s, determined to inflict destruction
wherever they pass
pathetic creatures
who try to paint double-suicide pacts
as romantic
because they\'re too much of a coward
to ruin their own life and have it be enough...
this be those true ghost\'s in our daily lives
those mythically entwined, ethereal ones
are just lost, i think
looking for that illusive exit door)
October 31st, 2022 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
Thanks for sharing, a memorable and therapeutic read for me personally
please, forgive my overopinionated rant below
I interpreted your words a little too literally:
(distance, is my go-to
for problem solving or avoiding
those toxic people
we all come across...
since there\'s no way to fight
such levels of callous obliviousness or wilful ignorance..
warped mindset\'s, determined to inflict destruction
wherever they pass
pathetic creatures
who try to paint double-suicide pacts
as romantic
because they\'re too much of a coward
to ruin their own life and have it be enough...
this be those true ghost\'s in our daily lives
those mythically entwined, ethereal ones
are just lost, i think
looking for that illusive exit door)
October 31st, 2022 07:20
I Have Let You Go
jk said:
\"I choose to let you go I am stone cold\" - I really enjoy your poem. thank you for sharing.
September 2nd, 2022 18:11
jk said:
\"I choose to let you go I am stone cold\" - I really enjoy your poem. thank you for sharing.
September 2nd, 2022 18:11
Now Let the Joy Begin
Paul Bell said:
That\'s the attitude.
Move forward and smile.
August 8th, 2022 11:20
Paul Bell said:
That\'s the attitude.
Move forward and smile.
August 8th, 2022 11:20
Day and Night
Aradhya said:
a very beautiful poetic interpretation of natural occurrences. an enchanting read dear poet, nicely penned!
May 25th, 2022 05:35
Aradhya said:
a very beautiful poetic interpretation of natural occurrences. an enchanting read dear poet, nicely penned!
May 25th, 2022 05:35
Humble myself
L. B. Mek said:
one choice and step at a time
reflect when given the chance
to insure, our next decisions
take us closer, towards that person
we want to become..
(great message, thanks for sharing)
May 23rd, 2022 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
one choice and step at a time
reflect when given the chance
to insure, our next decisions
take us closer, towards that person
we want to become..
(great message, thanks for sharing)
May 23rd, 2022 05:56
Are you happy?
PridelessIdiot said:
Good inquiry to what happiness is. But I think it is too factual, there is no emotional anchor as to how you feel about happiness. Perhaps you can try to write about your experiences with joy or pain to further anchor your thoughts on happiness
May 12th, 2022 22:52
PridelessIdiot said:
Good inquiry to what happiness is. But I think it is too factual, there is no emotional anchor as to how you feel about happiness. Perhaps you can try to write about your experiences with joy or pain to further anchor your thoughts on happiness
May 12th, 2022 22:52
At Night
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, our night\'s
are a journey
in and of themselves
learning to traverse them
is an acquired, skill
in and of itself...
(thanks for sharing)
May 12th, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, our night\'s
are a journey
in and of themselves
learning to traverse them
is an acquired, skill
in and of itself...
(thanks for sharing)
May 12th, 2022 03:54
Hometown
L. B. Mek said:
nice theme, not everyone
has a favourable opinion of their origins
most spend their life, trying
to run away from
all those childhood mistakes and hardships..
a basic, refreshing - read
thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2022 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
nice theme, not everyone
has a favourable opinion of their origins
most spend their life, trying
to run away from
all those childhood mistakes and hardships..
a basic, refreshing - read
thanks for sharing
May 5th, 2022 03:48
A Cup of Joe
Crowns4Christ said:
Add a little sweetness to the coffee,add a little hope and faith to the bitterness in life, that is the perfect analogy
April 27th, 2022 23:47
Crowns4Christ said:
Add a little sweetness to the coffee,add a little hope and faith to the bitterness in life, that is the perfect analogy
April 27th, 2022 23:47
Bright Stars
Saxon Crow said:
A very wonderful gift if a poem Jos. Very awe inspiring.
April 27th, 2022 00:50
Saxon Crow said:
A very wonderful gift if a poem Jos. Very awe inspiring.
April 27th, 2022 00:50
Book of Life
L. B. Mek said:
\'You will know me through *these words
The truth and facts you have not heard\'..
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
April 25th, 2022 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'You will know me through *these words
The truth and facts you have not heard\'..
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
April 25th, 2022 04:49
Book of Life
Crowns4Christ said:
Life is what ever we make of it, good thought giving piece
April 24th, 2022 22:59
Crowns4Christ said:
Life is what ever we make of it, good thought giving piece
April 24th, 2022 22:59
Garden of Eden
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, I think we all want our own little bliss. Sadly in today\'s world there\'s so much corruptness, it seems impossible to find. Hope for better days!
April 22nd, 2022 08:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes, I think we all want our own little bliss. Sadly in today\'s world there\'s so much corruptness, it seems impossible to find. Hope for better days!
April 22nd, 2022 08:13
« Return to the profile of joslouis
