To the Pretty Women
Crowns4Christ said:

Aww this is a beautiful tribute to women

April 20th, 2022 22:17

Universe
Kittykoala said:

This made me smile :)

April 19th, 2022 00:32

The Wildest Dream
L. B. Mek said:

aim high
but soar, at ease
knowing you\'ve given it all
that you have, to give
and the rest, let it just be
as fate wills it to be
grasp, your dreams lightly
but march
towards your aspirations, boldly!
I wish you all the best, dear poet

April 12th, 2022 04:40

Show me the way
L. B. Mek said:

\'God is so good all the time\'
\'At my darkest, I almost gave up\'
these lines, contradict
themselves...
(oh and btw
exactly, which \'God\' is that?
Thanatos, Hel, Osiris
or
that same, shared God
of the Jews, Christians and Muslims?)
try to be more than just another herd member, walking
blind
shouting \'God is great\'
and showcasing
that religious, egotistical elitism
by assuming your God
is the Only, God
then smiling
at your friends and work colleagues
with their differing, ideal\'s..
that\'s for the weak willed
Ignorant
you dear poet, demonstrate
enough insight in your poetry
so Please
have faith! in your chosen God
think through
your Dogma\'s hate fuelling, veils
see the God
that you can Question
and still, Believe in...!
personally, I think
the term
\'God is Kind!\'
has more merit
thanks for sharing, dear poet

April 8th, 2022 04:54

The Sinner
L. B. Mek said:

the power of forgiveness
is not only for those
\'who believe, in the Lord\'
the one\'s preaching, such a distortion
of their own Dogma
need that forgiveness, the most..
(simply
strive, to do better
learn, contemplate
your mistakes
heed, wiser free thinking minds
and allow yourself
that same, second chance
the dawning of a new day
affords, All
of us...!)
loved your poems, empowering message
thanks for sharing, dear poet

April 7th, 2022 04:10

Listen
L. B. Mek said:

we all do, friend
thanks for sharing

April 5th, 2022 04:16

Hurt
L. B. Mek said:

\'When tears was like water
I drank it way too much\'
if you ever, tasted
your tears
you\'ll realise, how actually salty
they are
and so, drinking your tears
would only make you, thirsty
kinda like
being stuck in the ocean, and
being surrounded by salty
sea water
if we Choose to survive
we have to, boil
that water under the sun
and hope most of the salt, dissipates..
just like, our dark clouds in life
we wait
till, they too - eventually
dissipate
so we may glean, those clear skies
we crave...
(thanks for sharing)
stay strong!

March 31st, 2022 04:21

Butterfly
Hakikur Rahman said:

Nice feelings about nature.

March 22nd, 2022 01:16

My Fantasy
Rocky Lagou said:

Relatable. It\'s a sensation that\'s uncomfortable and persistent. Hopefully you\'ve moved on.

March 18th, 2022 09:37

Mind
dusk arising said:

LOL are you letting your childhood brainwash of christian values interfere with living?
Sins and devils are man made frigteners..... invented with mind control intent.

March 17th, 2022 07:35

Temptation
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes. Temptations are truly a killer. I have horrible self-control and I can relate to this poem very much. Great job!

March 16th, 2022 08:52

Rain
rrodriguez said:

Jo\'s, we come from countries where rain is part of us. Where the wind is swirling around us and the sound of both mesmerize us. I enjoyed your take on these elements of nature. I invite you to read my poem Please don\'t stop the rain. Thank you for sharing.

March 9th, 2022 05:59

Sunshine
L. B. Mek said:

good for you
and more Power
to your self-affirmed sense
of self worth
I wish you, the very best!
thanks for sharing, such an energetic write

March 7th, 2022 07:22

Serenity
L. B. Mek said:

what a soothing last verse!
a good read, with seamless flow
thanks for sharing

March 1st, 2022 05:42

Hope
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

Simple and concise. The parallels are a nice way of adding to what you perceive yourself as, imagery is a powerful thing.

February 24th, 2022 05:00