Comments received on poems by junia



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Rocky Lagou said:

Great message. The hurt and tribulations that\'ll approach us in life are not going to forever bound us to suffer, but they\'re only momentary obstacles we learn to jump over. Well done!


March 17th, 2022 13:17

pools of the past
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing

March 10th, 2022 05:57

wetland in the living room
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow the imagery is present with that interior weather. Really well done!

March 7th, 2022 11:20

i´m too tired, i´m sorry
Rocky Lagou said:

Okay that \"eat Netflix and watch chocolate\" line really hit! Really ties in the sense of just pure fatigue and not caring. Well done! ✨

March 4th, 2022 09:17

i´m too tired, i´m sorry
L. B. Mek said:

\'eat Netflix and watch chocolate\'
yeah, I can vibe with that
(and in the morning
maybe
some semblance of rationality
would have returned to the world
we can: but Hope!)

March 4th, 2022 07:01

not real
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! You captured memories so well in this poem and they do feel like little whisperers just nagging us 24/7. They can recall good and bad. But they will always be with us. 💖

March 3rd, 2022 10:03

not real
Paul Bell said:

Poignant write and probably resonates with everyone who has lost someone. Memories sure bring people back.

March 3rd, 2022 09:11

a sunset
Rocky Lagou said:

What a bittersweet journey! I hope reconciliation is in the horizon. You expressed this great! Amazing job and the imagery and colors are so vivid! ✨

March 1st, 2022 10:36

we were from different times
Paul Bell said:

This is pretty sad, and a great message too. Nothing lasts forever, not even the warm pavement.

February 26th, 2022 06:27

may I ask you something?
spilleronsheet said:

A commotion caused inside
As she wove the questions of her mind
A heart wrenching tale came with her sword
The sword dripping blue tears
As it went
“May I ask you something “
A very sad and emotive write
Teary to eyes
With loneliness building beside
Was life that long and hard to resist all time
Well done dear poetess
A beautiful script you crafted with the powerful pen of yours

February 25th, 2022 15:07

may I ask you something?
Rocky Lagou said:

I love the rhetorical question you prompted with the title and it\'s very interesting. I feel like this touches on death and the unknown. Life is one big existential crisis that we\'re somehow wading through. I love the way you conveyed it! ✨

February 25th, 2022 10:51

a beautiful day
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow this was truly art. Poetry is an escape and an effective one. The way you personified nature as well is beautiful. Bravo! 💖

February 24th, 2022 12:08

a beautiful day
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

I do the same thing. Sometimes i feel guilty about, like the whole world revolves around me but there\'s no need to make a big deal about it. Its a coping mechanism is all, and we all could use one.

February 24th, 2022 11:49

a beautiful day
Nia Nour said:

Very beautiful really!

February 24th, 2022 09:06

a sonnet
Rocky Lagou said:

This brought me to tears. My mom passed away three years ago and the memories that we keep with our loved ones are always present. They\'re our comfort that although they\'re gone, we at least had the chance to enjoy them in all their splendor. Beautiful poem. Look on the bright side of life! 🌈🌟

February 16th, 2022 11:04

rewind
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow I feel like there\'s such a deeper meaning to this poem that at the moment I just can\'t grasp but this was excellent! Kudos to you! 💕🌟

February 15th, 2022 11:48