Comments received on poems by N
Stories And Stardust
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really beautiful ! Lovely poem .. nice to have such a love in your life
April 23rd, 2022 00:08
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really beautiful ! Lovely poem .. nice to have such a love in your life
April 23rd, 2022 00:08
Stories And Stardust
L. B. Mek said:
\'There’s ecstasy in your laugh
A painting in your eyes
Even the silence is too profound
Speaks so much without a sound.
Our love is deeper than the blues of the ocean
Clearer than the cloudless sky
Even the nature envies us
For it cries when we quarrel\'..
probably best dedication, love poem
I have read this year! thank you
for choosing to share
April 22nd, 2022 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'There’s ecstasy in your laugh
A painting in your eyes
Even the silence is too profound
Speaks so much without a sound.
Our love is deeper than the blues of the ocean
Clearer than the cloudless sky
Even the nature envies us
For it cries when we quarrel\'..
probably best dedication, love poem
I have read this year! thank you
for choosing to share
April 22nd, 2022 03:57
Stories And Stardust
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh my goodness, this is...I\'m speechless, it\'s how I feel about my husband,, so beautiful and pure and Heaven,
April 21st, 2022 23:29
Crowns4Christ said:
Oh my goodness, this is...I\'m speechless, it\'s how I feel about my husband,, so beautiful and pure and Heaven,
April 21st, 2022 23:29
Too Much
Rocky Lagou said:
This is poignant yet quite relatable. I sense this \"man\" could be referencing a father, or a father figure, and speaking from somebody who had an absent dad I can resonate with your words. Sometimes it feels like it\'s only us. Always focus on the light.
April 14th, 2022 12:09
Rocky Lagou said:
This is poignant yet quite relatable. I sense this \"man\" could be referencing a father, or a father figure, and speaking from somebody who had an absent dad I can resonate with your words. Sometimes it feels like it\'s only us. Always focus on the light.
April 14th, 2022 12:09
Where Beauty Lies
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing romantic piece! I love this strong and intense feeling of love that your words are transmitting and your imagery is really nice. A great poem!
April 11th, 2022 12:59
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing romantic piece! I love this strong and intense feeling of love that your words are transmitting and your imagery is really nice. A great poem!
April 11th, 2022 12:59
Maze In The Eye
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem .. really like this
April 1st, 2022 09:38
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem .. really like this
April 1st, 2022 09:38
Couldn\'t Quit
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ) like your words
March 11th, 2022 12:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ) like your words
March 11th, 2022 12:05
Eternity?
Blackstar said:
Humans, like him and i... we know our hell. You cannot bear enumerable physical scars... and not hold the same inside.
When you are so afraid of being hurt, you shut the world out so that you never hurt them back. Only to compound your own pain, your own distrust. Things which can\'t be healed... only coped with.
Sounds like it hurt you, yet hearing this offers another side... leaving to protect from pain causing it all the same. Feeling damned is still the appropriate term for ones like us...
Fallen or not, that angel stands. I know well how they must feel. Even if only knowing we are both forever alone. With the obligation to carry, and never pass on the scars we never had a choice to wear.
March 8th, 2022 07:48
Blackstar said:
Humans, like him and i... we know our hell. You cannot bear enumerable physical scars... and not hold the same inside.
When you are so afraid of being hurt, you shut the world out so that you never hurt them back. Only to compound your own pain, your own distrust. Things which can\'t be healed... only coped with.
Sounds like it hurt you, yet hearing this offers another side... leaving to protect from pain causing it all the same. Feeling damned is still the appropriate term for ones like us...
Fallen or not, that angel stands. I know well how they must feel. Even if only knowing we are both forever alone. With the obligation to carry, and never pass on the scars we never had a choice to wear.
March 8th, 2022 07:48
Eternity?
Ivy Madara said:
I felt my own heart break slightly as I read this, knowing the pain of losing yourself to love followed by the departure of that person from your life. Is there anything like eternity?
March 8th, 2022 07:32
Ivy Madara said:
I felt my own heart break slightly as I read this, knowing the pain of losing yourself to love followed by the departure of that person from your life. Is there anything like eternity?
March 8th, 2022 07:32
Darkness
L. B. Mek said:
arrowed wording of the despair we all can relate to
still, we must strive to overcome..
thanks for sharing
March 7th, 2022 07:24
L. B. Mek said:
arrowed wording of the despair we all can relate to
still, we must strive to overcome..
thanks for sharing
March 7th, 2022 07:24
Darkness
Rainbow said:
Thankyou . It’s good to let those feelings out in poetry .
March 7th, 2022 05:36
Rainbow said:
Thankyou . It’s good to let those feelings out in poetry .
March 7th, 2022 05:36
Color Me In Hope
Christina8 said:
this is an awesome love poem, really enjoyed reading it!
March 6th, 2022 19:53
Christina8 said:
this is an awesome love poem, really enjoyed reading it!
March 6th, 2022 19:53
Color Me In Hope
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this ! Great writing
March 6th, 2022 12:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like this ! Great writing
March 6th, 2022 12:24
