Comments received on poems by Hoolihooli
Busy bird
bellflower said:
See hanging out is no problem. That helps to know each other better. See disguise games are polluting thoughts. Everyone has a threshold bearance level. One should take care of this.
No one is this busy that they cannot take out time for their loved one. Quality time is one of the ways of showing love.
May 28th, 2022 10:49
bellflower said:
See hanging out is no problem. That helps to know each other better. See disguise games are polluting thoughts. Everyone has a threshold bearance level. One should take care of this.
No one is this busy that they cannot take out time for their loved one. Quality time is one of the ways of showing love.
May 28th, 2022 10:49
A work of art; painting hung high
L. B. Mek said:
what a well written, expression
of a soothing daydream
indeed, if only..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 27th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
what a well written, expression
of a soothing daydream
indeed, if only..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 27th, 2022 04:46
A work of art; painting hung high
Jonas Robinson said:
Sweet love and bitter trials. It\'s hard, I know. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:11
Jonas Robinson said:
Sweet love and bitter trials. It\'s hard, I know. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 26th, 2022 22:11
A work of art; painting hung high
bellflower said:
Good and bad both things attracts attention. A child when does not gets attention she does all wrong things thinking that even for a scolding they might attend me.
Your virtues are good enough to be attended if you believe. If you don\'t believe you will fail to show them to others who would then probably miss to observe and admire.
I like the childish expression of being a painting to be raised in your qualities and values so that someone atleast attends and love you too.....Beautiful metaphorical expression of insecurity one has within .
The one who will fall in love with you will see you in any form you be...good or bad you be......all things will make good connection for them.....you will not need to do anything to convince them to love you.....they will love you in every form...
May 26th, 2022 19:52
bellflower said:
Good and bad both things attracts attention. A child when does not gets attention she does all wrong things thinking that even for a scolding they might attend me.
Your virtues are good enough to be attended if you believe. If you don\'t believe you will fail to show them to others who would then probably miss to observe and admire.
I like the childish expression of being a painting to be raised in your qualities and values so that someone atleast attends and love you too.....Beautiful metaphorical expression of insecurity one has within .
The one who will fall in love with you will see you in any form you be...good or bad you be......all things will make good connection for them.....you will not need to do anything to convince them to love you.....they will love you in every form...
May 26th, 2022 19:52
Stage presence
GON said:
falling off the petal
just trying to settle...
good enough for me hooli, keep it up!
May 13th, 2022 20:05
GON said:
falling off the petal
just trying to settle...
good enough for me hooli, keep it up!
May 13th, 2022 20:05
The street lamp
PridelessIdiot said:
Amazing feel to the poem. Strong expression as to how the street lamp has been your pillar of support through the seasons. I wanted to see winter tho :( Apart from that, the rhyming feels a little bit forced. I think that if you wrote this in a free verse, there would be more expression through how the street lamp kinda gives you some freedom and room to breathe through your struggles. It is what i think tho, so if you were going for rhymes anyway, that\'s fine. Well done :)
May 12th, 2022 23:01
PridelessIdiot said:
Amazing feel to the poem. Strong expression as to how the street lamp has been your pillar of support through the seasons. I wanted to see winter tho :( Apart from that, the rhyming feels a little bit forced. I think that if you wrote this in a free verse, there would be more expression through how the street lamp kinda gives you some freedom and room to breathe through your struggles. It is what i think tho, so if you were going for rhymes anyway, that\'s fine. Well done :)
May 12th, 2022 23:01
The street lamp
GON said:
weird comment maybe but i love the sort of amber vibe i get from this
May 12th, 2022 19:27
GON said:
weird comment maybe but i love the sort of amber vibe i get from this
May 12th, 2022 19:27
Headphones my savior
L. B. Mek said:
you may also
view this moment of strife
as an opportunity..
be present, witness
all that \'they\' are doing, without shrinking
instead
try working out, why
they may be doing those things
then
take note and reassure yourself
with the knowledge
now, \'you\' know
what not, to do
and begin
the process of crafting, that \'Who\'
you\'ll become
when you get your chance
to build a home..
\'We learn far more
from our trials in life
than our successes\'..
thanks for sharing
stay strong! dear poet
May 12th, 2022 02:59
L. B. Mek said:
you may also
view this moment of strife
as an opportunity..
be present, witness
all that \'they\' are doing, without shrinking
instead
try working out, why
they may be doing those things
then
take note and reassure yourself
with the knowledge
now, \'you\' know
what not, to do
and begin
the process of crafting, that \'Who\'
you\'ll become
when you get your chance
to build a home..
\'We learn far more
from our trials in life
than our successes\'..
thanks for sharing
stay strong! dear poet
May 12th, 2022 02:59
next time say my name
bellflower said:
This is a true introspective words. Realising and mending always makes the life easy and beautiful.
Sincere efforts are always worth rewarding.
No one is perfect but seeing one\'s own mistake opens new ways of life.
May 11th, 2022 12:24
bellflower said:
This is a true introspective words. Realising and mending always makes the life easy and beautiful.
Sincere efforts are always worth rewarding.
No one is perfect but seeing one\'s own mistake opens new ways of life.
May 11th, 2022 12:24
something more
bellflower said:
Beautiful composition but I think words won\'t work at this stage it\'s time to take action or lose. Great job poet.
May 9th, 2022 22:15
bellflower said:
Beautiful composition but I think words won\'t work at this stage it\'s time to take action or lose. Great job poet.
May 9th, 2022 22:15
Sink into my mind
L. B. Mek said:
if You
are harming, Yourself
then
You
are adding, to Your
suffering..
there\'s nothing cool, necessary
or useful, in such actions
whatever your warped mindset
may make you believe..
if, You
have a strong enough
Willpower
to harm , yourself
then Please
utilise that same, Willpower
to Seek help..
remember, You
are not alone! nor
are You, the only One
battling
for your survival
please, stay strong!
( https://www.mind.org.uk/information-support/types-of-mental-health-problems/self-harm/useful-contacts/
)
(
https://blog.opencounseling.co/suicide-hotlines/
)
May 9th, 2022 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
if You
are harming, Yourself
then
You
are adding, to Your
suffering..
there\'s nothing cool, necessary
or useful, in such actions
whatever your warped mindset
may make you believe..
if, You
have a strong enough
Willpower
to harm , yourself
then Please
utilise that same, Willpower
to Seek help..
remember, You
are not alone! nor
are You, the only One
battling
for your survival
please, stay strong!
( https://www.mind.org.uk/information-support/types-of-mental-health-problems/self-harm/useful-contacts/
)
(
https://blog.opencounseling.co/suicide-hotlines/
)
May 9th, 2022 05:21
Sink into my mind
GON said:
best to face it bravely. lovely write hooli. i absolutely feel the energy.
May 8th, 2022 20:49
GON said:
best to face it bravely. lovely write hooli. i absolutely feel the energy.
May 8th, 2022 20:49
Rain
GON said:
\"Except the rain falls onto the street
And I fall for you\"
I love this line. Very sweet poetry hooli.
May 7th, 2022 08:57
GON said:
\"Except the rain falls onto the street
And I fall for you\"
I love this line. Very sweet poetry hooli.
May 7th, 2022 08:57
Tulips
L. B. Mek said:
\'flower lingo
leaving you
in limbo..\'
lol
a fun read
thanks for sharing
May 3rd, 2022 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'flower lingo
leaving you
in limbo..\'
lol
a fun read
thanks for sharing
May 3rd, 2022 03:56
Any day of the week
Hakikur Rahman said:
A lovely compose. Full of passions and love.
April 27th, 2022 23:11
Hakikur Rahman said:
A lovely compose. Full of passions and love.
April 27th, 2022 23:11
