Comments received on poems by 0121_Pedro
Does Santa really care?
L. B. Mek said:
who cares?
when we can become Santa\'s
in that one, deed
(beautiful sentiments
what words of empathy and hope
to put out into this callous world
thank you! kind Poet
wield your empathy, as bravely
as you cultivate meaning
within your wonderful poetry
stay strong! this world is extra hard
for those who seek sincerity\'s path...)
December 19th, 2022 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
who cares?
when we can become Santa\'s
in that one, deed
(beautiful sentiments
what words of empathy and hope
to put out into this callous world
thank you! kind Poet
wield your empathy, as bravely
as you cultivate meaning
within your wonderful poetry
stay strong! this world is extra hard
for those who seek sincerity\'s path...)
December 19th, 2022 06:08
I miss you
Neville said:
I am glad that I trawled back in time and found this, ... so sad that I\'m almost ashamed to tell you how much I enjoyed it .... Neville
May 15th, 2022 11:31
Neville said:
I am glad that I trawled back in time and found this, ... so sad that I\'m almost ashamed to tell you how much I enjoyed it .... Neville
May 15th, 2022 11:31
I miss you
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed but so sad (( grief is so difficult , missing someone so very much
May 14th, 2022 02:49
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed but so sad (( grief is so difficult , missing someone so very much
May 14th, 2022 02:49
Let me kiss it better
0121_Pedro said:
Crypticbard, the fact that it had that affect on you means that the writing cut through, so that in itself is positive even though the subject matter isn’t at all nice, but in answer to you, mine was simply 2 different scenarios, one of the mother being treated cruelly and then the son being given what some might call ‘tough love’.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts 🙏
May 14th, 2022 02:43
0121_Pedro said:
Crypticbard, the fact that it had that affect on you means that the writing cut through, so that in itself is positive even though the subject matter isn’t at all nice, but in answer to you, mine was simply 2 different scenarios, one of the mother being treated cruelly and then the son being given what some might call ‘tough love’.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts 🙏
May 14th, 2022 02:43
Let me kiss it better
arqios said:
This gave me an imaginary scenario of a boy that witnessed the mother being abused by the father and later on just like she used to make it better for the little boy, he reached out to her, to kiss and make it better. It may be a totally different take but hopefully along the same feel. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 14th, 2022 02:18
arqios said:
This gave me an imaginary scenario of a boy that witnessed the mother being abused by the father and later on just like she used to make it better for the little boy, he reached out to her, to kiss and make it better. It may be a totally different take but hopefully along the same feel. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
May 14th, 2022 02:18
Let me kiss it better
Caring dove said:
Some people simply like to hurt others .. and are just not kind .
May 14th, 2022 01:17
Caring dove said:
Some people simply like to hurt others .. and are just not kind .
May 14th, 2022 01:17
Tonight outside it’s cold
0121_Pedro said:
Thank you, this started as a song many years ago that didn’t get finished, and the ‘rich men’ part was going to be the chorus, and so ended up the end of the poem as I felt it was the most on point ending and the title of the poem spoke for itself
May 13th, 2022 07:48
0121_Pedro said:
Thank you, this started as a song many years ago that didn’t get finished, and the ‘rich men’ part was going to be the chorus, and so ended up the end of the poem as I felt it was the most on point ending and the title of the poem spoke for itself
May 13th, 2022 07:48
Tonight outside it’s cold
arqios said:
\"Rich men do\'t get hungry\" boy, did that line get to me. Here\'s to those that have to brave the elements, left without dignity or bread. Sombre poem.
May 13th, 2022 02:21
arqios said:
\"Rich men do\'t get hungry\" boy, did that line get to me. Here\'s to those that have to brave the elements, left without dignity or bread. Sombre poem.
May 13th, 2022 02:21
Nothing is for sure
arqios said:
Nothing is for sure. Pretty much what can be summed up from observing what is around us. Good read. Thanks for sharing.
May 12th, 2022 05:37
arqios said:
Nothing is for sure. Pretty much what can be summed up from observing what is around us. Good read. Thanks for sharing.
May 12th, 2022 05:37
Keep calm and carry on
Nicholas Browning said:
Working in factories all my life I share the sentiments of this operator. A much enjoyed read.
May 7th, 2022 03:01
Nicholas Browning said:
Working in factories all my life I share the sentiments of this operator. A much enjoyed read.
May 7th, 2022 03:01
Smile
Natalia B. Odair said:
Beautiful poem, and a solid truth! Sparing a smile, I\'ve found, can save someone\'s day!!!
May 5th, 2022 07:30
Natalia B. Odair said:
Beautiful poem, and a solid truth! Sparing a smile, I\'ve found, can save someone\'s day!!!
May 5th, 2022 07:30
Smile
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'that Smile of wisdom\'s, fortitude\'
more power to you
and your humble mindset, dear Poet
\'let the world end itself
an eye for eye, at a time
you just Smile
through it all, defiantly!
and make her proud\'
May 5th, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'that Smile of wisdom\'s, fortitude\'
more power to you
and your humble mindset, dear Poet
\'let the world end itself
an eye for eye, at a time
you just Smile
through it all, defiantly!
and make her proud\'
May 5th, 2022 05:37
