Comments received on poems by hzugman
Stay open late
L. B. Mek said:
(to me, it means
when you\'re open, to life
you quickly appreciate
redoing things, as part of the norm
so you learn, to rub out
your certainty\'s in life
with every other, shattered hope
of chance
or bruised heart,
you learn, we learn
to heed
that chaos of chance, embedded
in all our choices
and accept, however precise
our preparedness or belief
we must live life, devoid of outcome
as our gage to success
the journey itself
just like the erasing and re-editing
of a write
is rewarding enough, plenty
should we choose it to be
in any race of life, there\'s far too
few, medals
and so what
if fate, decides
we\'re not meant for that 1 percentile
ease of life
with our pencil\'s of hope
we can always, erase and try again
till that grain, in our sand of time
tips
and we too, can sigh in relief
taking pride
in a life, lived
giving it all we\'ve got!)
a great write, thanks for sharing dear Poet
(forgive me if I\'ve misunderstood
or hijacked the meaning to your wonderful work
I meant no disrespect)
December 23rd, 2022 07:36
L. B. Mek said:
(to me, it means
when you\'re open, to life
you quickly appreciate
redoing things, as part of the norm
so you learn, to rub out
your certainty\'s in life
with every other, shattered hope
of chance
or bruised heart,
you learn, we learn
to heed
that chaos of chance, embedded
in all our choices
and accept, however precise
our preparedness or belief
we must live life, devoid of outcome
as our gage to success
the journey itself
just like the erasing and re-editing
of a write
is rewarding enough, plenty
should we choose it to be
in any race of life, there\'s far too
few, medals
and so what
if fate, decides
we\'re not meant for that 1 percentile
ease of life
with our pencil\'s of hope
we can always, erase and try again
till that grain, in our sand of time
tips
and we too, can sigh in relief
taking pride
in a life, lived
giving it all we\'ve got!)
a great write, thanks for sharing dear Poet
(forgive me if I\'ve misunderstood
or hijacked the meaning to your wonderful work
I meant no disrespect)
December 23rd, 2022 07:36
Here today, gone tomorrow
Geeky Greek said:
Power in a few words. I absolutely love it
December 20th, 2022 16:08
Geeky Greek said:
Power in a few words. I absolutely love it
December 20th, 2022 16:08
Awesome!
Eugene S. said:
It strikes me as a toast to freedom! Come on thunder, let\'s see what you got!
December 20th, 2022 01:20
Eugene S. said:
It strikes me as a toast to freedom! Come on thunder, let\'s see what you got!
December 20th, 2022 01:20
Say What?
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ve said it! lol.
Sometimes I have \'reserve\' poems in case of writers block.
December 16th, 2022 13:35
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ve said it! lol.
Sometimes I have \'reserve\' poems in case of writers block.
December 16th, 2022 13:35
Squeaky wheel
Doggerel Dave said:
Comment for you only (not for many of the rest):
I like your long form - Please keep it up. 🙂
December 12th, 2022 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Comment for you only (not for many of the rest):
I like your long form - Please keep it up. 🙂
December 12th, 2022 17:33
Kant spel
sorenbarrett said:
No one knows how to spell anymore. they don\'t teach cursive writing anymore and soon no one will know how to read. Great message and poem
December 11th, 2022 21:56
sorenbarrett said:
No one knows how to spell anymore. they don\'t teach cursive writing anymore and soon no one will know how to read. Great message and poem
December 11th, 2022 21:56
The new math
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on, Mate - you know you are an undergraduate at the University of Life, don\'tcha?
December 9th, 2022 01:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on, Mate - you know you are an undergraduate at the University of Life, don\'tcha?
December 9th, 2022 01:15
Definitions
Kinsey Peterson said:
definition poetry is one of my favourite types. thank you for bringing a smile to my face.
December 6th, 2022 15:11
Kinsey Peterson said:
definition poetry is one of my favourite types. thank you for bringing a smile to my face.
December 6th, 2022 15:11
Definitions
orchidee said:
I\'m defining this poem as a fine write H. (heehee).
Carry on cranking!
December 6th, 2022 11:16
orchidee said:
I\'m defining this poem as a fine write H. (heehee).
Carry on cranking!
December 6th, 2022 11:16
Definitions
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely definition,
It is indeed superb,
Great job dear poet,
Continue to inspire!
December 6th, 2022 09:42
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely definition,
It is indeed superb,
Great job dear poet,
Continue to inspire!
December 6th, 2022 09:42
Missing with no explanantion
orchidee said:
Cos of writer\'s block, you skipping a poem or two?
December 5th, 2022 12:03
orchidee said:
Cos of writer\'s block, you skipping a poem or two?
December 5th, 2022 12:03
Nobody knows everything
orchidee said:
I thought only you and I know everything! lol.
December 4th, 2022 14:50
orchidee said:
I thought only you and I know everything! lol.
December 4th, 2022 14:50
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