Comments received on poems by hzugman



It doesn\'t hurt to be lucky
jarcher54 said:

You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in perspective, makes it a little less abstract. And equating it (indirectly) with dinners reminds us how miraculous even small pleasures and a little social company make life rich.

March 14th, 2023 10:09

Good advice
Ok Waleed said:

Great advice

March 13th, 2023 10:45

words rhyme sometimes
2781 said:

Falling on your sporange, sounds painful

March 11th, 2023 17:23

Do it yourself
hzugman said:

Thanx for the update 2781. And thanx for the compliment. Had careers in engineering and later sales but I never could nail down the hangman gig.

March 6th, 2023 10:37

Do it yourself
2781 said:

Pull the other one

March 6th, 2023 09:07

Whole lotta shakin\' goin\' on
L. B. Mek said:

(scorched fingers and heart\'s
tend, to teach us
to pace our adventure\'s in life)
a wonderfully relatable poem
admire your succinct wording
thanks for sharing, dear poet

March 6th, 2023 05:10

True friend
orchidee said:

Good write H.

March 4th, 2023 12:50

True friend
Ok Waleed said:

Sad

March 4th, 2023 12:12

Friendship
Natalie Gladmir said:

Dear Sir,
I admire your sense of humor!
Thank God, I don\'t have friends either who will tell me that my tights are torn. lol

March 3rd, 2023 16:00

Her
orchidee said:

Will that be \'She (or Her) who must be obeyed?!\' lol.

March 1st, 2023 13:33

Raise your hand if you know the question
Eileen Clark said:

Hi, short but so cool. If that word isn\'t used anymore try this one, great!

February 26th, 2023 15:48

Raise your hand if you know the question
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 26th, 2023 11:08

Let it go
Ok Waleed said:

I agree, poetry is the souls piss and poop 😂😂

February 25th, 2023 11:28

Let it go
orchidee said:

And baked beans?! lol.

February 25th, 2023 10:48

Depends upon how you look at it
hzugman said:

Wow! Thanx for the comment J54.

February 23rd, 2023 15:33

Depends upon how you look at it
jarcher54 said:

You get a like just for the humorous rhyme!

February 23rd, 2023 15:06

Dream Away
Ok Waleed said:

Glad to hear you’re dreaming of me

February 21st, 2023 11:09

Seriously
2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

February 20th, 2023 16:56

Now hear this
Doggerel Dave said:

Sage advice, H.

Considered before being acted out?

February 19th, 2023 20:17

Yummy!
Natalie Gladmir said:

Even if you have errors in the diet, nothing bad will happen. You are funny, sir. Thanks for the good mood.

February 19th, 2023 15:38

Now hear this
dzineb said:

I like it so much!

February 19th, 2023 11:44

Now hear this
orchidee said:

I\'m hearing it! Good write H.

February 19th, 2023 10:46

Smarty pants
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 17th, 2023 12:31

Real freedom in the USA
Parisab said:

So true sir! Keep writing please-

February 16th, 2023 17:53

sharing is caring
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 14th, 2023 10:15

And nothing but the truth
willowthewisp said:

Scary! But I agree--not nearly as scary as it sounds🙂

February 13th, 2023 14:33

And nothing but the truth
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 13th, 2023 13:51

Meant to be
Ok Waleed said:

Thoughts on people not following their purpose in life ?

February 12th, 2023 11:37

Day by day
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 11th, 2023 13:58

Day by day
Ok Waleed said:

I’ve been on a roll posting everyday on this site as well. Thanks for sharing your work

February 11th, 2023 09:58



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