Comments received on poems by hzugman
Sippin\' but not soda
L. B. Mek said:
like your witty creativity
and yes, we do like to covet
our tools for ruin, while
sipping on that which suits us
just fine...
lol
thanks for sharing
November 25th, 2022 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
like your witty creativity
and yes, we do like to covet
our tools for ruin, while
sipping on that which suits us
just fine...
lol
thanks for sharing
November 25th, 2022 03:33
Trying too hard
Doggerel Dave said:
Remove the 18+. Kids love a good fart......
November 22nd, 2022 16:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Remove the 18+. Kids love a good fart......
November 22nd, 2022 16:26
Progress?
orchidee said:
Did they have better gardens then? Did they rush out to collect the manure?! heehee. They would have to clear it up in big doggy bags these days.
November 21st, 2022 12:44
orchidee said:
Did they have better gardens then? Did they rush out to collect the manure?! heehee. They would have to clear it up in big doggy bags these days.
November 21st, 2022 12:44
Is it too late?
orchidee said:
It will Be too late soon to comment, as your poem will go into the \'archives\'! We can always find out poems from there though. :)
November 15th, 2022 03:11
orchidee said:
It will Be too late soon to comment, as your poem will go into the \'archives\'! We can always find out poems from there though. :)
November 15th, 2022 03:11
Is it too late?
Doggerel Dave said:
When assessed in conjunction with your response to orchi, I\'s say you were on your way to a right royal blue (row)!
November 15th, 2022 00:36
Doggerel Dave said:
When assessed in conjunction with your response to orchi, I\'s say you were on your way to a right royal blue (row)!
November 15th, 2022 00:36
Love
orchidee said:
Good write H. Echoes of some of Charles Wesley\'s hymns here.
November 13th, 2022 13:22
orchidee said:
Good write H. Echoes of some of Charles Wesley\'s hymns here.
November 13th, 2022 13:22
Intelligence?
Doggerel Dave said:
Where\'s the water? - you must be an Aussi (even though you have tried to keep it quiet), H.
November 13th, 2022 04:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Where\'s the water? - you must be an Aussi (even though you have tried to keep it quiet), H.
November 13th, 2022 04:27
Intelligence?
orchidee said:
Since when was [insert name of TV programme] intelligent?! lol.
November 12th, 2022 11:14
orchidee said:
Since when was [insert name of TV programme] intelligent?! lol.
November 12th, 2022 11:14
Timing is everything
orchidee said:
Good write H.
A corny joke about time: I took so long finding out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, that when I had found out, there was no more day left to seize. It was night. Who put the lights out?! Doh! lol.
November 11th, 2022 15:37
orchidee said:
Good write H.
A corny joke about time: I took so long finding out what \'Carpe Diem\' meant, that when I had found out, there was no more day left to seize. It was night. Who put the lights out?! Doh! lol.
November 11th, 2022 15:37
That old feeling
hzugman said:
Thanx D D for the comment. Guilty as charged. Still, if the shoe fits.
November 11th, 2022 08:28
hzugman said:
Thanx D D for the comment. Guilty as charged. Still, if the shoe fits.
November 11th, 2022 08:28
That old feeling
Doggerel Dave said:
Not another old fella deploring the manners of a younger generation??
November 10th, 2022 23:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Not another old fella deploring the manners of a younger generation??
November 10th, 2022 23:04
That old feeling
orchidee said:
Seems so, at some times and in some situations.
Not me though, I said, as I trampled over everyone in the rat-race to get to the top of the ladder! Heehee, not really!
November 10th, 2022 11:40
orchidee said:
Seems so, at some times and in some situations.
Not me though, I said, as I trampled over everyone in the rat-race to get to the top of the ladder! Heehee, not really!
November 10th, 2022 11:40
Across the pond
orchidee said:
Good write H.
I thought she made the trip from the Co-op just down the road! lol. Bit further than that?
November 9th, 2022 13:57
orchidee said:
Good write H.
I thought she made the trip from the Co-op just down the road! lol. Bit further than that?
November 9th, 2022 13:57
Play fair
hzugman said:
Thanx, O. I, too, am a so so amateur singer. I\'ve given over 3,000 shows at nursing homes over the last 30 years up until COVID. I have a youtube channel with over 1,100 songs. If you like to visit just put my name, Howard Zugman, in the youtube search line and click on the picture of me and my deceased wife\'s picture It\'ll have a sample of the songs. And thanx for the comment.
November 8th, 2022 08:42
hzugman said:
Thanx, O. I, too, am a so so amateur singer. I\'ve given over 3,000 shows at nursing homes over the last 30 years up until COVID. I have a youtube channel with over 1,100 songs. If you like to visit just put my name, Howard Zugman, in the youtube search line and click on the picture of me and my deceased wife\'s picture It\'ll have a sample of the songs. And thanx for the comment.
November 8th, 2022 08:42
Play fair
orchidee said:
I\'ve got away with cheating - saying I can (supposedly) sing all these years! heehee.
November 8th, 2022 05:15
orchidee said:
I\'ve got away with cheating - saying I can (supposedly) sing all these years! heehee.
November 8th, 2022 05:15
Focus, focus, focus
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
in most cases, keeping it simple
yields greater rewards..
(wise words)
when we overthink, we complicate
ergo
to demystify our chaotic lives
we need only
keep in mind, one prize at a time...
November 7th, 2022 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
in most cases, keeping it simple
yields greater rewards..
(wise words)
when we overthink, we complicate
ergo
to demystify our chaotic lives
we need only
keep in mind, one prize at a time...
November 7th, 2022 04:39
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