Comments received on poems by hzugman



Depends upon how you look at it
jarcher54 said:

You get a like just for the humorous rhyme!

February 23rd, 2023 15:06

Dream Away
Ok Waleed said:

Glad to hear you’re dreaming of me

February 21st, 2023 11:09

Seriously
2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

February 20th, 2023 16:56

Now hear this
Doggerel Dave said:

Sage advice, H.

Considered before being acted out?

February 19th, 2023 20:17

Yummy!
Natalie Gladmir said:

Even if you have errors in the diet, nothing bad will happen. You are funny, sir. Thanks for the good mood.

February 19th, 2023 15:38

Now hear this
dzineb said:

I like it so much!

February 19th, 2023 11:44

Now hear this
orchidee said:

I\'m hearing it! Good write H.

February 19th, 2023 10:46

Smarty pants
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 17th, 2023 12:31

Real freedom in the USA
Parisab said:

So true sir! Keep writing please-

February 16th, 2023 17:53

sharing is caring
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 14th, 2023 10:15

And nothing but the truth
willowthewisp said:

Scary! But I agree--not nearly as scary as it sounds🙂

February 13th, 2023 14:33

And nothing but the truth
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 13th, 2023 13:51

Meant to be
Ok Waleed said:

Thoughts on people not following their purpose in life ?

February 12th, 2023 11:37

Day by day
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 11th, 2023 13:58

Day by day
Ok Waleed said:

I’ve been on a roll posting everyday on this site as well. Thanks for sharing your work

February 11th, 2023 09:58

Whose wine is it, anyway?
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks OKW for sorting that one.
I see you\'ve noted, H so...
How about (second line) \" Ain\'t getting none of mine\"..................Double negative?......Damn - back to the drawing board....well not the drawing board, exactly.....what\'s that thingo? ........ keyboard?....whatever...good luck anyway...

February 9th, 2023 23:42

Whose wine is it, anyway?
Ok Waleed said:

I don’t get it

February 9th, 2023 13:06

Me and she and the dog
Eileen Clark said:

I love it, short cute sweet and I can see the two of you.

February 8th, 2023 13:17

Me and she and the dog
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 7th, 2023 11:57

Me and she and the dog
jarcher54 said:

Watch for rug burns!

February 7th, 2023 10:47

Me and she and the dog
willowthewisp said:

This made me smile—such a joyful and warm image

February 7th, 2023 10:20

Choose Or Not
Neville said:



this is almost zen like .. & might well become juxtaposed to a tree falling in a forest with no one around to check whether it makes a sound or not ... and I kinda liked it really ............. Neville


February 7th, 2023 01:39

Climbing up the ladder
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot have I been telling you? Extend the wordage and the world (well MPS) is your oyster.....
Mine rarely appear and then hover around the bottom...oh woe is me...I shrink into a foetal position and refuse food or drink.....the world is dead to me....Oh do me a favour - what care I if my genius remains unacknowledged ..........................??

February 6th, 2023 21:05

Unconnected thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:

So it would seem, H. thanks for extending the riff...

February 5th, 2023 20:04

Unconnected thoughts
jarcher54 said:

Very creative way of cheating by submitting two (or three?) poems in one day! Howard, I do look forward to your contributions! You are like a Dr. Seuss for adults!

February 5th, 2023 11:25

Unconnected thoughts
orchidee said:

Good write H.

February 5th, 2023 10:32

Unconnected thoughts
Ok Waleed said:

I’m assuming you don’t believe in evolution ?

February 5th, 2023 10:25

Name calling
Doggerel Dave said:

Same system applies here with respect to \'Friends\'.
I like most of your stuff H, I\'d like to see some answers though......

February 4th, 2023 18:43

Name calling
orchidee said:

We have to be careful.
There could be all sorts of shifty looking folk wanting to be our \'friends\'. Not all are like that though. lol.

February 4th, 2023 10:12

Know thy country
itsme rachel said:

Those ignorant Americans didn\'t emerge from their mothers\' wombs any more cognizant of their nationality than any Somali, Italian, or Czech--I think many are lost in the zeitgeist, searching. That said, I\'ve no doubt there are plenty of immigrants who could teach many of us a thing or two about both the bliss and the responsibility of liberty.

February 3rd, 2023 15:23



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