Comments received on poems by hzugman
Smile!
arqios said:
That grin. That emotional contact and hook. Worth contemplating the communicative properties of the smile. Thanks for sharing.
June 21st, 2022 08:36
arqios said:
That grin. That emotional contact and hook. Worth contemplating the communicative properties of the smile. Thanks for sharing.
June 21st, 2022 08:36
Is it too late?
arqios said:
Wow. “That’s mine!” What a curveball of a poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 18th, 2022 19:52
arqios said:
Wow. “That’s mine!” What a curveball of a poem. Thanks for sharing.
June 18th, 2022 19:52
It\'s My Pleasure
JudyStella said:
Short and straight to the point! Really deep ❤️ And the fact that people don’t mean what they say it is so true.
June 11th, 2022 14:59
JudyStella said:
Short and straight to the point! Really deep ❤️ And the fact that people don’t mean what they say it is so true.
June 11th, 2022 14:59
Is It A Dream?
a thousand wishes said:
I love the imagery, i can picture the whole poem in my head like the talking roses and chicken and basically everything. I really liked it, made me actually have to use my imagination which I don\'t get to do often lol
June 8th, 2022 12:15
a thousand wishes said:
I love the imagery, i can picture the whole poem in my head like the talking roses and chicken and basically everything. I really liked it, made me actually have to use my imagination which I don\'t get to do often lol
June 8th, 2022 12:15
Poems For The Writer Or The Reader?
Ok Waleed said:
Best poem I’ve read in a very long time thank you
June 6th, 2022 22:24
Ok Waleed said:
Best poem I’ve read in a very long time thank you
June 6th, 2022 22:24
Poems For The Writer Or The Reader?
a thousand wishes said:
You are so right. It\'s definitely both. Love your poem structure by the way and nice rhyming
June 6th, 2022 11:26
a thousand wishes said:
You are so right. It\'s definitely both. Love your poem structure by the way and nice rhyming
June 6th, 2022 11:26
I WAS Around
a thousand wishes said:
LOL. It started off so sad and it ended up being hilarious. If this were for a grade I would give you an A+++
June 2nd, 2022 16:44
a thousand wishes said:
LOL. It started off so sad and it ended up being hilarious. If this were for a grade I would give you an A+++
June 2nd, 2022 16:44
Let Go
languale said:
I like this!
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell :) let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 07:29
languale said:
I like this!
Maybe if you want to, you could check my poem called \"about dreams\" aswell :) let me know what you think about it!
June 2nd, 2022 07:29
A Magic Life
Rozina said:
Nice one. Don\'t think twice, it\'s alright. (Kept hearing these lyrics after I read your poem!)
May 13th, 2022 21:16
Rozina said:
Nice one. Don\'t think twice, it\'s alright. (Kept hearing these lyrics after I read your poem!)
May 13th, 2022 21:16
A Magic Life
blacksparrow79 said:
Indeed. Don\'t think twice! It\'s a great feeling to fall into life. Simply captured!
May 13th, 2022 19:51
blacksparrow79 said:
Indeed. Don\'t think twice! It\'s a great feeling to fall into life. Simply captured!
May 13th, 2022 19:51
Who is my father really
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello
this is a bit heartbreaking read, but nonetheless a common story, what is beautiful here is that the heart of the son is ready to just give back love to an absent father, a beautiful spin on what could have turned into a generational pattern of hate, amazing work fellow writer...tchau
Cassia
May 12th, 2022 14:08
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello
this is a bit heartbreaking read, but nonetheless a common story, what is beautiful here is that the heart of the son is ready to just give back love to an absent father, a beautiful spin on what could have turned into a generational pattern of hate, amazing work fellow writer...tchau
Cassia
May 12th, 2022 14:08
Pain Love Fear
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello
these are wisely written words and I really like the ending...tchau...Cassia
May 11th, 2022 15:01
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello
these are wisely written words and I really like the ending...tchau...Cassia
May 11th, 2022 15:01
Do The Right Thing?
Paul Bell said:
The speculators run the world, and the air you breathe belongs to them.
You will be rewarded someday. Just not in this world. Mind you, In Britain you don\'t retire, you just die.
May 10th, 2022 11:37
Paul Bell said:
The speculators run the world, and the air you breathe belongs to them.
You will be rewarded someday. Just not in this world. Mind you, In Britain you don\'t retire, you just die.
May 10th, 2022 11:37
Where I\'m Going
Ok Waleed said:
How do I close my mind… I want to be able to open and shut it like a door when need be
May 9th, 2022 09:51
Ok Waleed said:
How do I close my mind… I want to be able to open and shut it like a door when need be
May 9th, 2022 09:51
I meditate
DestinysPerspectives said:
I absolutely love this! I meditate everyday sometimes twice a day. That feeling of nothingness yet everything is a feeling I wish I could bottle up and give to everyone so they finally understand the wonders of meditation on the mind. It really was life changing for me when I gradually learned how to meditate correctly. You described it perfectly.
May 7th, 2022 15:38
DestinysPerspectives said:
I absolutely love this! I meditate everyday sometimes twice a day. That feeling of nothingness yet everything is a feeling I wish I could bottle up and give to everyone so they finally understand the wonders of meditation on the mind. It really was life changing for me when I gradually learned how to meditate correctly. You described it perfectly.
May 7th, 2022 15:38
What\'s not to like
Paul Bell said:
This is my sort of girl, covered in chips, vinegar too, a trip to the zoo, back by two.
May 7th, 2022 05:35
Paul Bell said:
This is my sort of girl, covered in chips, vinegar too, a trip to the zoo, back by two.
May 7th, 2022 05:35
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