Comments received on poems by hzugman
Does forty equal 4 times ten?
sorenbarrett said:
Certain numbers had magical significance (3, 7, 12, 40, 72)
July 25th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Certain numbers had magical significance (3, 7, 12, 40, 72)
July 25th, 2026 10:54
Does this rime or knot
hzugman said:
Who\'s on first said Bud to Lou. Actually it ws the other way around.
July 19th, 2026 20:52
hzugman said:
Who\'s on first said Bud to Lou. Actually it ws the other way around.
July 19th, 2026 20:52
Does this rime or knot
peto said:
Love the title
Still thinking of a rhyyme
Good writing
July 19th, 2026 15:50
peto said:
Love the title
Still thinking of a rhyyme
Good writing
July 19th, 2026 15:50
Does this rime or knot
sorenbarrett said:
A fun but all too true a rhyme. Well done my friend
July 19th, 2026 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
A fun but all too true a rhyme. Well done my friend
July 19th, 2026 11:17
Nu Nu Nu
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge for knowledge sake. Nicely written. I too like to learn new things.
July 16th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge for knowledge sake. Nicely written. I too like to learn new things.
July 16th, 2026 11:25
Ouch!
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of an old rhyme my mother used to tell me and turning it around. You may want to change my to may.
June 29th, 2026 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of an old rhyme my mother used to tell me and turning it around. You may want to change my to may.
June 29th, 2026 18:47
Be open and grow
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with great rhyme and meter.
June 23rd, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with great rhyme and meter.
June 23rd, 2026 11:48
Maybe I\'m right and maybe I\'m wrong
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true to be funny. It is a poem of wisdom that no one is always right or wrong not even God. A fave
June 14th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true to be funny. It is a poem of wisdom that no one is always right or wrong not even God. A fave
June 14th, 2026 14:36
Just relax
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a skill ignored by most parents and not taught to children. Each finds their own way. Nicely written
May 30th, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a skill ignored by most parents and not taught to children. Each finds their own way. Nicely written
May 30th, 2026 11:28
Do I win or do I lose
marissa said:
Accepting you have a big heart,is the best way to realise you lost nothing!
May 20th, 2026 19:32
marissa said:
Accepting you have a big heart,is the best way to realise you lost nothing!
May 20th, 2026 19:32
Do I win or do I lose
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message sent most poetically. Well done and a fave
May 20th, 2026 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message sent most poetically. Well done and a fave
May 20th, 2026 16:09
Man vs. Machine
sorenbarrett said:
We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes cold science and there is no more joy in writing. Good write
April 27th, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes cold science and there is no more joy in writing. Good write
April 27th, 2026 20:11
Hidden meaning
jarcher54 said:
A lovely ditty and a deep thought! One of your best sir!! One small question: why did you write it? (-:
April 20th, 2026 10:39
jarcher54 said:
A lovely ditty and a deep thought! One of your best sir!! One small question: why did you write it? (-:
April 20th, 2026 10:39
Hidden meaning
Demar Desu said:
Sometimes I can’t wrap my head around why people do the things they do… let alone everything else… sigh. Great poem
April 9th, 2026 10:29
Demar Desu said:
Sometimes I can’t wrap my head around why people do the things they do… let alone everything else… sigh. Great poem
April 9th, 2026 10:29
Both outcomes matter
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of jargon to complete the rhyme and good advice as well.
March 26th, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of jargon to complete the rhyme and good advice as well.
March 26th, 2026 09:58
Take a chance
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic poem meaning you aren\'t daredevils, good! Thumbs up!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic poem meaning you aren\'t daredevils, good! Thumbs up!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:17
Take a chance
sorenbarrett said:
Got you. Good rhyme led me in now I\'m waiting for the tall part.
March 12th, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
Got you. Good rhyme led me in now I\'m waiting for the tall part.
March 12th, 2026 09:47
Survival
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes for a clever piece. I loved it
March 6th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes for a clever piece. I loved it
March 6th, 2026 03:36
I turned a loss into a winner
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a most fun read. Well done
March 4th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a most fun read. Well done
March 4th, 2026 20:44
The problem is the solution
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the full story.
March 1st, 2026 05:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the full story.
March 1st, 2026 05:09
The problem is the solution
Soman Ragavan said:
There are things that need people with technical knowledge to be fixed, eg electrical, electronic, etc. Lord Finchley\" by Hilaire Belloc, published around 1911. It humorously critiques wealthy individuals attempting DIY repairs instead of hiring professionals. A quote :
This is a famous four-line poem titled \"Lord Finchley tried to mend the Electric Light
Himself. It struck him dead:
And serve him right!
It is the business of the wealthy man
To give employment to the artisan.\"
February 28th, 2026 21:32
Soman Ragavan said:
There are things that need people with technical knowledge to be fixed, eg electrical, electronic, etc. Lord Finchley\" by Hilaire Belloc, published around 1911. It humorously critiques wealthy individuals attempting DIY repairs instead of hiring professionals. A quote :
This is a famous four-line poem titled \"Lord Finchley tried to mend the Electric Light
Himself. It struck him dead:
And serve him right!
It is the business of the wealthy man
To give employment to the artisan.\"
February 28th, 2026 21:32
The problem is the solution
sorenbarrett said:
True it is and how long the fix lasts depends on how much you mess with it. Good write
February 28th, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
True it is and how long the fix lasts depends on how much you mess with it. Good write
February 28th, 2026 14:08
Am I confused?
coracaodacripta said:
Sounds like me when I\'ve had an ounce too many of whiskey
February 27th, 2026 23:44
coracaodacripta said:
Sounds like me when I\'ve had an ounce too many of whiskey
February 27th, 2026 23:44
Am I confused?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording takes one in loops nicely done
February 27th, 2026 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording takes one in loops nicely done
February 27th, 2026 14:46
Who\'s in charge here?
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! such a good twist of words that makes so much sense. Loved it
February 18th, 2026 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! such a good twist of words that makes so much sense. Loved it
February 18th, 2026 16:12
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