Comments received on poems by hzugman
Peek-a-boo
Poetic Licence said:
This is so true, not enough take the time to do this or understand the importance of it, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
This is so true, not enough take the time to do this or understand the importance of it, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 12:36
Try this
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive write which I know is right, but I struggle to achieve that way of thinking, nicely crafted and expressed
May 26th, 2025 16:28
Poetic Licence said:
A very positive write which I know is right, but I struggle to achieve that way of thinking, nicely crafted and expressed
May 26th, 2025 16:28
Try this
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive view that I have tried to assume for many years now. Loved it
May 26th, 2025 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive view that I have tried to assume for many years now. Loved it
May 26th, 2025 14:46
Thank you!
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, contentment better than perfection, then we always have room for improvement, Enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely write, contentment better than perfection, then we always have room for improvement, Enjoyed the read
May 26th, 2025 12:03
Thank you!
RSM0812 said:
There is always room for improvement but of course nothing is perfect.
May 26th, 2025 09:04
RSM0812 said:
There is always room for improvement but of course nothing is perfect.
May 26th, 2025 09:04
Thank you!
sorenbarrett said:
Some people are just lucky if you consider contentment good. An enjoyable read
May 24th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Some people are just lucky if you consider contentment good. An enjoyable read
May 24th, 2025 09:30
Smoke and Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the continuity of this piece and the good rhyme. Very nice
May 21st, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the continuity of this piece and the good rhyme. Very nice
May 21st, 2025 09:37
Choose Or Not (Redux)
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of how quickly and easily your life can change, one phone call and being bothered to answer it, enjoyed the read, nicely expressed
May 20th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of how quickly and easily your life can change, one phone call and being bothered to answer it, enjoyed the read, nicely expressed
May 20th, 2025 10:44
Choose Or Not (Redux)
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of satisfying unknow need by technology. Well written in poetic style.
May 20th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of satisfying unknow need by technology. Well written in poetic style.
May 20th, 2025 10:29
An ounce of ......
sorenbarrett said:
I love poetic license it unties the bonds of tied up lines.
May 19th, 2025 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love poetic license it unties the bonds of tied up lines.
May 19th, 2025 12:45
Yummy!
sorenbarrett said:
This could be an advertisement for either Hawaiian Punch or Oscar Meyer a fun read
May 16th, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
This could be an advertisement for either Hawaiian Punch or Oscar Meyer a fun read
May 16th, 2025 19:45
I\'m hungry
sorenbarrett said:
Greed fuels the fires of capitalism and drives the nation\'s economy. Greed starts in each individual and there are few that don\'t contain it. A lovely write
May 15th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Greed fuels the fires of capitalism and drives the nation\'s economy. Greed starts in each individual and there are few that don\'t contain it. A lovely write
May 15th, 2025 05:15
Oh you smart-assed worms
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative. Short and sweet. Great write.
May 12th, 2025 07:48
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative. Short and sweet. Great write.
May 12th, 2025 07:48
The big guy\'s pissed
RSM0812 said:
Great write. Good point. Thank God for being forgiving. We will get another chance... and another... and...
May 8th, 2025 06:15
RSM0812 said:
Great write. Good point. Thank God for being forgiving. We will get another chance... and another... and...
May 8th, 2025 06:15
Share the wealth not the misery
Poetic Licence said:
A very profound and wise write, nicely done
May 7th, 2025 09:50
Poetic Licence said:
A very profound and wise write, nicely done
May 7th, 2025 09:50
Share the wealth not the misery
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for a piece of wisdom well said in poetic form.
May 7th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for a piece of wisdom well said in poetic form.
May 7th, 2025 09:28
The big guy\'s pissed
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant write, the question is can it be fixed and will we be allowed to do that, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:01
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant write, the question is can it be fixed and will we be allowed to do that, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:01
The big guy\'s pissed
NinjaGirl said:
I imagine Him as broken-hearted...underneath all the anger is hurt and sadness. Good write!
May 6th, 2025 18:43
NinjaGirl said:
I imagine Him as broken-hearted...underneath all the anger is hurt and sadness. Good write!
May 6th, 2025 18:43
Am I Dreaming?
Salvia.S said:
It’s a thought-provoking way of questioning what’s real, suggesting that maybe dreams feel more genuine than reality itself.
Well written!!
May 4th, 2025 09:11
Salvia.S said:
It’s a thought-provoking way of questioning what’s real, suggesting that maybe dreams feel more genuine than reality itself.
Well written!!
May 4th, 2025 09:11
Want love?
jarcher54 said:
You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings... then the last line!
May 2nd, 2025 21:17
jarcher54 said:
You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings... then the last line!
May 2nd, 2025 21:17
Am I Dreaming?
sorenbarrett said:
That thought I have had before and then I wondered am I dreaming I\'m awake or awake remembering a dream? A fun read
May 2nd, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
That thought I have had before and then I wondered am I dreaming I\'m awake or awake remembering a dream? A fun read
May 2nd, 2025 09:53
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