Comments received on poems by hzugman
rhyme vs. reason
Dan Williams said:
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.
October 8th, 2024 00:01
Dan Williams said:
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.
October 8th, 2024 00:01
zzzzzzzzzz
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
October 6th, 2024 10:22
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
October 6th, 2024 10:22
What can I believe?
Mase ♪ said:
It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.
October 3rd, 2024 12:14
Mase ♪ said:
It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.
October 3rd, 2024 12:14
We go together
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!
September 23rd, 2024 18:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!
September 23rd, 2024 18:28
Ya know
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 11:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 11:05
Look at it this way
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. Albeit I\'m woefully fond of routine. Variety is the spice of life and that statement led to a new Starbucks drink a year ago and this lovely little tribute is beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. Albeit I\'m woefully fond of routine. Variety is the spice of life and that statement led to a new Starbucks drink a year ago and this lovely little tribute is beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:44
Words that mislead
Cheeky Missy said:
True....but it certainly seems like there are plenty of locations which aptly classify as \"nowhere.\" I kept expecting the \"glass half full/ half empty\" argument, stupidly. Fascinating suggestion and beautifully rendered thus. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 13:35
Cheeky Missy said:
True....but it certainly seems like there are plenty of locations which aptly classify as \"nowhere.\" I kept expecting the \"glass half full/ half empty\" argument, stupidly. Fascinating suggestion and beautifully rendered thus. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 13:35
Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s downright lovely! Thank you for sharing. For my part I\'ll never know, but this is a winsome tribute to the gratitude for a clean bill of health.
September 4th, 2024 21:08
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s downright lovely! Thank you for sharing. For my part I\'ll never know, but this is a winsome tribute to the gratitude for a clean bill of health.
September 4th, 2024 21:08
Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
MR.apocalypse said:
i thought this was very funny be thankfull for the things you dont have i had no idea what i was going to read but i knew it would provoke though and that it did very nice
September 4th, 2024 20:28
MR.apocalypse said:
i thought this was very funny be thankfull for the things you dont have i had no idea what i was going to read but i knew it would provoke though and that it did very nice
September 4th, 2024 20:28
Look here and enjoy
hzugman said:
No chiding necessary just share your heart. Thanx for the comment.
September 1st, 2024 11:13
hzugman said:
No chiding necessary just share your heart. Thanx for the comment.
September 1st, 2024 11:13
Look here and enjoy
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Ergo, I purchased a big bag of Jelly Belly jellybeans, and yet don\'t usually share them. The refried beans I maunt live sans either, my dinner staple. Now you may chide me.
September 1st, 2024 11:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Precisely. Ergo, I purchased a big bag of Jelly Belly jellybeans, and yet don\'t usually share them. The refried beans I maunt live sans either, my dinner staple. Now you may chide me.
September 1st, 2024 11:06
How strange!
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, well at least you\'re relaxing more, which I figure is better.
August 30th, 2024 18:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, well at least you\'re relaxing more, which I figure is better.
August 30th, 2024 18:49
How strange!
_Mickey_ said:
The universe is a vast space in well...SPACE! See what I did there?
August 30th, 2024 14:03
_Mickey_ said:
The universe is a vast space in well...SPACE! See what I did there?
August 30th, 2024 14:03
It all depends on your point of view
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that gave me a smile and chuckle. Lovely
August 18th, 2024 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that gave me a smile and chuckle. Lovely
August 18th, 2024 12:37
It all depends on your point of view
jarcher54 said:
You are a modern Aesop today... brilliant observation!
August 18th, 2024 11:32
jarcher54 said:
You are a modern Aesop today... brilliant observation!
August 18th, 2024 11:32
Don\'t harvest the low hanging fruit
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and true. A great write.
August 14th, 2024 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded and true. A great write.
August 14th, 2024 18:30
Here\'s another way to look at things
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines all adding up to an important message. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2024 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines all adding up to an important message. Nicely done
August 2nd, 2024 15:55
Keep on swinging
sorenbarrett said:
A great motivational statement in this piece. Nicely said.
July 30th, 2024 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great motivational statement in this piece. Nicely said.
July 30th, 2024 19:55
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