Comments received on poems by hzugman



What did Freud really say
2781 said:

I was to young to meet you but she must have been a looker!

November 22nd, 2025 09:53

What did Freud really say
Doggerel Dave said:

Safely put that one away with the disclaimer in the second line. One cannot be too careful.....

November 17th, 2025 01:35

What did Freud really say
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting and entertaining read. No Freud had little to say about girls but Carl Jung proposed the Electra complex as a daughter in competition with her mother for her father.

November 16th, 2025 11:27

The way things are
jarcher54 said:

Your talent\'s undeniable
Your output so reliable
Your wisdom undefiable
Inspired by King James\'s Biable



November 10th, 2025 22:40

When you wish upon a star
jarcher54 said:

As wise as it is witty,
This silly little ditty
Despite my expectation
Cements your reputation.

November 10th, 2025 22:29

Does this make sense
William Hromada said:

It makes sense, we believe to achieve

November 6th, 2025 08:29

Does this make sense
Doggerel Dave said:

That that is is that that is not is not that so?

October 28th, 2025 02:02

Does this make sense
sorenbarrett said:

I do believe that much of what one is able to accomplish is based upon their self beliefs but I have to say the last two lines have confused me a bit.

October 27th, 2025 14:16

Does this make sense
peto said:

I think the 1st 2 lines say
Believe in your goals and yourself enough and you will achieve them
And 2nd part
When we discover what is and what is not we find the truth
Best I can come up with my friend
Good to see a write from you

October 27th, 2025 12:24

Does this make sense
Niko Papadatos said:

Very well expressed. Good job!

October 27th, 2025 11:28

When you wish upon a star
hzugman said:

Thanx again, SB.

October 17th, 2025 19:02

When you wish upon a star
sorenbarrett said:

A nice twist in the expected in this poem. This is a fun read and well done.

October 17th, 2025 18:03

I see you - or do I?
sorenbarrett said:

Short but very clever wording and thought in this gem that now is a fave

October 14th, 2025 03:37

My personal GPS
sorenbarrett said:

Clever word play make the rhyme in this short poem. Well done

October 4th, 2025 15:33

The way things are
sorenbarrett said:

Clever rhyme in this poem of truisms. Well done.

October 2nd, 2025 12:02

What day is it?
sorenbarrett said:

True it is on both counts. Nicely said

September 29th, 2025 13:08

Relearning is harder than learning
sorenbarrett said:

Yes indeed the hardest things I have to learn are those that I have to unlearn. Your poem puts it just right. Nicely said

September 27th, 2025 10:11

Again and again and again
sorenbarrett said:

This goes deeper than the surface and speaks of how love is a continual process of proving it. Lovely and a fave

September 19th, 2025 13:41

Again and again and again
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

Beautifully written

September 19th, 2025 13:15

It\'s the bloody truth
Demar Desu said:

Tell em get a straw

September 16th, 2025 21:17

It\'s the bloody truth
sorenbarrett said:

Dark a poem with deeper intent. Well written

September 16th, 2025 20:17

Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Keeter C said:

I seldom comment for fear of being a rube. It amazes me that tho I thought highly educated I am not.

September 9th, 2025 00:17

Out they go
sorenbarrett said:

Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of a woman I met that insisted on telling me of her bowels and how she was so constipated that she had to dig it out with her tea spoon.

September 7th, 2025 19:37

Out they go
Doggerel Dave said:

Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by Technicolor illustrations (only a limited range of shades required there though).

Good luck with your further studies.

September 7th, 2025 18:44

The stories we tell ourselves
Doggerel Dave said:

Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.

August 28th, 2025 07:06

Whatever
sorenbarrett said:

Ah yes so true a great short.

August 27th, 2025 20:09

Starting right now
sorenbarrett said:

Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should treasure. Nicely said in rhyme

August 26th, 2025 04:18

Help without taking credit
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you are. Nicely said

August 21st, 2025 04:15

Help without taking credit
Cheeky Missy said:

I liked that particular flick, don\'t you? Thanks for the reminder.

August 20th, 2025 22:14

There\'s still more
sorenbarrett said:

Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our hearts do have more love to give. Nicely done

August 19th, 2025 04:40

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