Comments received on poems by hzugman
Does this make sense
Doggerel Dave said:
That that is is that that is not is not that so?
October 28th, 2025 02:02
Doggerel Dave said:
That that is is that that is not is not that so?
October 28th, 2025 02:02
Does this make sense
sorenbarrett said:
I do believe that much of what one is able to accomplish is based upon their self beliefs but I have to say the last two lines have confused me a bit.
October 27th, 2025 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
I do believe that much of what one is able to accomplish is based upon their self beliefs but I have to say the last two lines have confused me a bit.
October 27th, 2025 14:16
Does this make sense
peto said:
I think the 1st 2 lines say
Believe in your goals and yourself enough and you will achieve them
And 2nd part
When we discover what is and what is not we find the truth
Best I can come up with my friend
Good to see a write from you
October 27th, 2025 12:24
peto said:
I think the 1st 2 lines say
Believe in your goals and yourself enough and you will achieve them
And 2nd part
When we discover what is and what is not we find the truth
Best I can come up with my friend
Good to see a write from you
October 27th, 2025 12:24
When you wish upon a star
sorenbarrett said:
A nice twist in the expected in this poem. This is a fun read and well done.
October 17th, 2025 18:03
sorenbarrett said:
A nice twist in the expected in this poem. This is a fun read and well done.
October 17th, 2025 18:03
I see you - or do I?
sorenbarrett said:
Short but very clever wording and thought in this gem that now is a fave
October 14th, 2025 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
Short but very clever wording and thought in this gem that now is a fave
October 14th, 2025 03:37
My personal GPS
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play make the rhyme in this short poem. Well done
October 4th, 2025 15:33
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play make the rhyme in this short poem. Well done
October 4th, 2025 15:33
The way things are
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme in this poem of truisms. Well done.
October 2nd, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme in this poem of truisms. Well done.
October 2nd, 2025 12:02
Relearning is harder than learning
sorenbarrett said:
Yes indeed the hardest things I have to learn are those that I have to unlearn. Your poem puts it just right. Nicely said
September 27th, 2025 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Yes indeed the hardest things I have to learn are those that I have to unlearn. Your poem puts it just right. Nicely said
September 27th, 2025 10:11
Again and again and again
sorenbarrett said:
This goes deeper than the surface and speaks of how love is a continual process of proving it. Lovely and a fave
September 19th, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
This goes deeper than the surface and speaks of how love is a continual process of proving it. Lovely and a fave
September 19th, 2025 13:41
Again and again and again
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written
September 19th, 2025 13:15
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Beautifully written
September 19th, 2025 13:15
It\'s the bloody truth
sorenbarrett said:
Dark a poem with deeper intent. Well written
September 16th, 2025 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dark a poem with deeper intent. Well written
September 16th, 2025 20:17
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Keeter C said:
I seldom comment for fear of being a rube. It amazes me that tho I thought highly educated I am not.
September 9th, 2025 00:17
Keeter C said:
I seldom comment for fear of being a rube. It amazes me that tho I thought highly educated I am not.
September 9th, 2025 00:17
Out they go
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of a woman I met that insisted on telling me of her bowels and how she was so constipated that she had to dig it out with her tea spoon.
September 7th, 2025 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of a woman I met that insisted on telling me of her bowels and how she was so constipated that she had to dig it out with her tea spoon.
September 7th, 2025 19:37
Out they go
Doggerel Dave said:
Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by Technicolor illustrations (only a limited range of shades required there though).
Good luck with your further studies.
September 7th, 2025 18:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by Technicolor illustrations (only a limited range of shades required there though).
Good luck with your further studies.
September 7th, 2025 18:44
The stories we tell ourselves
Doggerel Dave said:
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06
Starting right now
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should treasure. Nicely said in rhyme
August 26th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should treasure. Nicely said in rhyme
August 26th, 2025 04:18
Help without taking credit
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you are. Nicely said
August 21st, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you are. Nicely said
August 21st, 2025 04:15
Help without taking credit
Cheeky Missy said:
I liked that particular flick, don\'t you? Thanks for the reminder.
August 20th, 2025 22:14
Cheeky Missy said:
I liked that particular flick, don\'t you? Thanks for the reminder.
August 20th, 2025 22:14
There\'s still more
sorenbarrett said:
Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our hearts do have more love to give. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our hearts do have more love to give. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 04:40
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
jarcher54 said:
Jonus!! I love it. It\'s so perfect you had to use it!! Brilliant.
Maybe we need to call YOU \"Poetic License\"...
August 10th, 2025 17:29
jarcher54 said:
Jonus!! I love it. It\'s so perfect you had to use it!! Brilliant.
Maybe we need to call YOU \"Poetic License\"...
August 10th, 2025 17:29
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Poetic Licence said:
An open mind we need more off, to many today are closed. Liked the whale reference, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
An open mind we need more off, to many today are closed. Liked the whale reference, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 12:27
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
sorenbarrett said:
And why not believe the whale? A fun read
August 9th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
And why not believe the whale? A fun read
August 9th, 2025 12:12
Wha ja say yer name wuz?
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem. Labels we all have em but they mean nothing nor do any of the other labels society awards. Well done
August 8th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem. Labels we all have em but they mean nothing nor do any of the other labels society awards. Well done
August 8th, 2025 14:26
Wha ja say yer name wuz?
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting write, something we can control our name, if not happy with allocated name we can change to one we have full ownership off, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 13:50
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting write, something we can control our name, if not happy with allocated name we can change to one we have full ownership off, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 13:50
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