Comments received on poems by hzugman
Rings and things
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
True well said in brevity. Kudos for this fine poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 06:21
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
True well said in brevity. Kudos for this fine poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 06:21
The lamb vs. the lion
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this rhyme and it closes the thought well. A poem of nature\'s doing. Well said my friend
August 4th, 2026 15:03
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording in this rhyme and it closes the thought well. A poem of nature\'s doing. Well said my friend
August 4th, 2026 15:03
The lamb vs. the lion
Cheeky Missy said:
Definitely thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2026 14:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Definitely thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2026 14:15
Is it real or imagined?
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Least said, soonest mended\' (extended meaning for this old saw).
August 1st, 2026 16:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Least said, soonest mended\' (extended meaning for this old saw).
August 1st, 2026 16:15
Is it real or imagined?
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in rhyme my friend. I believe and have told my family that I don\'t get sick the day I do I will die. There are days I don\'t feel well but I am not sick. Never missed a day of work in thirty years.
August 1st, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in rhyme my friend. I believe and have told my family that I don\'t get sick the day I do I will die. There are days I don\'t feel well but I am not sick. Never missed a day of work in thirty years.
August 1st, 2026 11:34
Does forty equal 4 times ten?
sorenbarrett said:
Certain numbers had magical significance (3, 7, 12, 40, 72)
July 25th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Certain numbers had magical significance (3, 7, 12, 40, 72)
July 25th, 2026 10:54
Does this rime or knot
hzugman said:
Who\'s on first said Bud to Lou. Actually it ws the other way around.
July 19th, 2026 20:52
hzugman said:
Who\'s on first said Bud to Lou. Actually it ws the other way around.
July 19th, 2026 20:52
Does this rime or knot
peto said:
Love the title
Still thinking of a rhyyme
Good writing
July 19th, 2026 15:50
peto said:
Love the title
Still thinking of a rhyyme
Good writing
July 19th, 2026 15:50
Does this rime or knot
sorenbarrett said:
A fun but all too true a rhyme. Well done my friend
July 19th, 2026 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
A fun but all too true a rhyme. Well done my friend
July 19th, 2026 11:17
Nu Nu Nu
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge for knowledge sake. Nicely written. I too like to learn new things.
July 16th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge for knowledge sake. Nicely written. I too like to learn new things.
July 16th, 2026 11:25
Ouch!
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of an old rhyme my mother used to tell me and turning it around. You may want to change my to may.
June 29th, 2026 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of an old rhyme my mother used to tell me and turning it around. You may want to change my to may.
June 29th, 2026 18:47
Be open and grow
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with great rhyme and meter.
June 23rd, 2026 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with great rhyme and meter.
June 23rd, 2026 11:48
Maybe I\'m right and maybe I\'m wrong
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true to be funny. It is a poem of wisdom that no one is always right or wrong not even God. A fave
June 14th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true to be funny. It is a poem of wisdom that no one is always right or wrong not even God. A fave
June 14th, 2026 14:36
Just relax
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a skill ignored by most parents and not taught to children. Each finds their own way. Nicely written
May 30th, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a skill ignored by most parents and not taught to children. Each finds their own way. Nicely written
May 30th, 2026 11:28
Do I win or do I lose
marissa said:
Accepting you have a big heart,is the best way to realise you lost nothing!
May 20th, 2026 19:32
marissa said:
Accepting you have a big heart,is the best way to realise you lost nothing!
May 20th, 2026 19:32
Do I win or do I lose
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message sent most poetically. Well done and a fave
May 20th, 2026 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message sent most poetically. Well done and a fave
May 20th, 2026 16:09
Man vs. Machine
sorenbarrett said:
We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes cold science and there is no more joy in writing. Good write
April 27th, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes cold science and there is no more joy in writing. Good write
April 27th, 2026 20:11
Hidden meaning
jarcher54 said:
A lovely ditty and a deep thought! One of your best sir!! One small question: why did you write it? (-:
April 20th, 2026 10:39
jarcher54 said:
A lovely ditty and a deep thought! One of your best sir!! One small question: why did you write it? (-:
April 20th, 2026 10:39
Hidden meaning
Demar Desu said:
Sometimes I can’t wrap my head around why people do the things they do… let alone everything else… sigh. Great poem
April 9th, 2026 10:29
Demar Desu said:
Sometimes I can’t wrap my head around why people do the things they do… let alone everything else… sigh. Great poem
April 9th, 2026 10:29
Both outcomes matter
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of jargon to complete the rhyme and good advice as well.
March 26th, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of jargon to complete the rhyme and good advice as well.
March 26th, 2026 09:58
Take a chance
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic poem meaning you aren\'t daredevils, good! Thumbs up!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic poem meaning you aren\'t daredevils, good! Thumbs up!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:17
Take a chance
sorenbarrett said:
Got you. Good rhyme led me in now I\'m waiting for the tall part.
March 12th, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
Got you. Good rhyme led me in now I\'m waiting for the tall part.
March 12th, 2026 09:47
Survival
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes for a clever piece. I loved it
March 6th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes for a clever piece. I loved it
March 6th, 2026 03:36
I turned a loss into a winner
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a most fun read. Well done
March 4th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a most fun read. Well done
March 4th, 2026 20:44
The problem is the solution
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the full story.
March 1st, 2026 05:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the full story.
March 1st, 2026 05:09
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