Comments received on poems by hzugman
Man vs. Machine
sorenbarrett said:
We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes cold science and there is no more joy in writing. Good write
April 27th, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes cold science and there is no more joy in writing. Good write
April 27th, 2026 20:11
Hidden meaning
jarcher54 said:
A lovely ditty and a deep thought! One of your best sir!! One small question: why did you write it? (-:
April 20th, 2026 10:39
jarcher54 said:
A lovely ditty and a deep thought! One of your best sir!! One small question: why did you write it? (-:
April 20th, 2026 10:39
Hidden meaning
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Sometimes I can’t wrap my head around why people do the things they do… let alone everything else… sigh. Great poem
April 9th, 2026 10:29
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Sometimes I can’t wrap my head around why people do the things they do… let alone everything else… sigh. Great poem
April 9th, 2026 10:29
Both outcomes matter
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of jargon to complete the rhyme and good advice as well.
March 26th, 2026 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever use of jargon to complete the rhyme and good advice as well.
March 26th, 2026 09:58
Take a chance
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic poem meaning you aren\'t daredevils, good! Thumbs up!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah fantastic poem meaning you aren\'t daredevils, good! Thumbs up!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 12:17
Take a chance
sorenbarrett said:
Got you. Good rhyme led me in now I\'m waiting for the tall part.
March 12th, 2026 09:47
sorenbarrett said:
Got you. Good rhyme led me in now I\'m waiting for the tall part.
March 12th, 2026 09:47
Survival
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes for a clever piece. I loved it
March 6th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes for a clever piece. I loved it
March 6th, 2026 03:36
I turned a loss into a winner
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a most fun read. Well done
March 4th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and a most fun read. Well done
March 4th, 2026 20:44
The problem is the solution
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the full story.
March 1st, 2026 05:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the full story.
March 1st, 2026 05:09
The problem is the solution
Soman Ragavan said:
There are things that need people with technical knowledge to be fixed, eg electrical, electronic, etc. Lord Finchley\" by Hilaire Belloc, published around 1911. It humorously critiques wealthy individuals attempting DIY repairs instead of hiring professionals. A quote :
This is a famous four-line poem titled \"Lord Finchley tried to mend the Electric Light
Himself. It struck him dead:
And serve him right!
It is the business of the wealthy man
To give employment to the artisan.\"
February 28th, 2026 21:32
Soman Ragavan said:
There are things that need people with technical knowledge to be fixed, eg electrical, electronic, etc. Lord Finchley\" by Hilaire Belloc, published around 1911. It humorously critiques wealthy individuals attempting DIY repairs instead of hiring professionals. A quote :
This is a famous four-line poem titled \"Lord Finchley tried to mend the Electric Light
Himself. It struck him dead:
And serve him right!
It is the business of the wealthy man
To give employment to the artisan.\"
February 28th, 2026 21:32
The problem is the solution
sorenbarrett said:
True it is and how long the fix lasts depends on how much you mess with it. Good write
February 28th, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
True it is and how long the fix lasts depends on how much you mess with it. Good write
February 28th, 2026 14:08
Am I confused?
coracaodacripta said:
Sounds like me when I\'ve had an ounce too many of whiskey
February 27th, 2026 23:44
coracaodacripta said:
Sounds like me when I\'ve had an ounce too many of whiskey
February 27th, 2026 23:44
Am I confused?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording takes one in loops nicely done
February 27th, 2026 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording takes one in loops nicely done
February 27th, 2026 14:46
Who\'s in charge here?
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! such a good twist of words that makes so much sense. Loved it
February 18th, 2026 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! such a good twist of words that makes so much sense. Loved it
February 18th, 2026 16:12
As the years go by
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed it uses time as a measure of relationships strength. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed it uses time as a measure of relationships strength. Well done
February 15th, 2026 04:23
Hit or miss
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem and concept as well. Loved it
February 13th, 2026 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem and concept as well. Loved it
February 13th, 2026 12:16
The tricky connection
Doggerel Dave said:
Good to see you on trend with the fart...........
February 7th, 2026 17:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Good to see you on trend with the fart...........
February 7th, 2026 17:43
The tricky connection
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is another one that made me smile. Fun read
February 7th, 2026 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is another one that made me smile. Fun read
February 7th, 2026 14:17
Who knows?
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought why enhance what is already perfect, piercings, body painting, tatoos, scarification.
January 30th, 2026 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought why enhance what is already perfect, piercings, body painting, tatoos, scarification.
January 30th, 2026 16:32
Do you hear what I hear?
Soman Ragavan said:
That hand has done the impossible. Two hands are needed for clapping. Here just one hand did it... Banging on the table is different from clapping...
January 21st, 2026 06:05
Soman Ragavan said:
That hand has done the impossible. Two hands are needed for clapping. Here just one hand did it... Banging on the table is different from clapping...
January 21st, 2026 06:05
Do you hear what I hear?
sorenbarrett said:
Sly and stealthy is that hand but it can clap to beat the band. Good write
January 20th, 2026 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
Sly and stealthy is that hand but it can clap to beat the band. Good write
January 20th, 2026 20:53
Whereja get that idea?
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately too true nothing can be counted on anymore
January 17th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately too true nothing can be counted on anymore
January 17th, 2026 14:36
Hey baby, what I say?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and catchy this short rhyme reminds me of that old saying that if you have nothing good to say it is better to say nothing at all.
December 23rd, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and catchy this short rhyme reminds me of that old saying that if you have nothing good to say it is better to say nothing at all.
December 23rd, 2025 15:47
What did Freud really say
2781 said:
I was to young to meet you but she must have been a looker!
November 22nd, 2025 09:53
2781 said:
I was to young to meet you but she must have been a looker!
November 22nd, 2025 09:53
What did Freud really say
Doggerel Dave said:
Safely put that one away with the disclaimer in the second line. One cannot be too careful.....
November 17th, 2025 01:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Safely put that one away with the disclaimer in the second line. One cannot be too careful.....
November 17th, 2025 01:35
What did Freud really say
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting and entertaining read. No Freud had little to say about girls but Carl Jung proposed the Electra complex as a daughter in competition with her mother for her father.
November 16th, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting and entertaining read. No Freud had little to say about girls but Carl Jung proposed the Electra complex as a daughter in competition with her mother for her father.
November 16th, 2025 11:27
The way things are
jarcher54 said:
Your talent\'s undeniable
Your output so reliable
Your wisdom undefiable
Inspired by King James\'s Biable
November 10th, 2025 22:40
jarcher54 said:
Your talent\'s undeniable
Your output so reliable
Your wisdom undefiable
Inspired by King James\'s Biable
November 10th, 2025 22:40
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