Comments received on poems by hzugman
Am I Dreaming?
Salvia.S said:
It’s a thought-provoking way of questioning what’s real, suggesting that maybe dreams feel more genuine than reality itself.
Well written!!
May 4th, 2025 09:11
Salvia.S said:
It’s a thought-provoking way of questioning what’s real, suggesting that maybe dreams feel more genuine than reality itself.
Well written!!
May 4th, 2025 09:11
Want love?
jarcher54 said:
You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings... then the last line!
May 2nd, 2025 21:17
jarcher54 said:
You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings... then the last line!
May 2nd, 2025 21:17
Am I Dreaming?
sorenbarrett said:
That thought I have had before and then I wondered am I dreaming I\'m awake or awake remembering a dream? A fun read
May 2nd, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
That thought I have had before and then I wondered am I dreaming I\'m awake or awake remembering a dream? A fun read
May 2nd, 2025 09:53
Predator and Prey
vicecream said:
This very thing i have spent so much of my life wrestling with, pondering, trying to find what’s right, where’s the balance, how do we live without causing n harm when we must eat to live? Plant or animal it’s still life.. i still don’t have answers..
April 29th, 2025 19:04
vicecream said:
This very thing i have spent so much of my life wrestling with, pondering, trying to find what’s right, where’s the balance, how do we live without causing n harm when we must eat to live? Plant or animal it’s still life.. i still don’t have answers..
April 29th, 2025 19:04
My girl
sorenbarrett said:
Not much for overly sweetened things this one seems special and the cleverness of it gains a fave
April 28th, 2025 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
Not much for overly sweetened things this one seems special and the cleverness of it gains a fave
April 28th, 2025 10:08
Predator and Prey
Dan Williams said:
Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
April 27th, 2025 00:33
Dan Williams said:
Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
April 27th, 2025 00:33
Predator and Prey
Cheeky Missy said:
Dearest me! Now you\'ll chide me for killing mosquitoes? I\'m not even adroit enough to pull off poetic justice with them. Since the LORD God gave the animals to man for food after the flood, what shall we do? Beautifully rendered with an excellent twist. Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Dearest me! Now you\'ll chide me for killing mosquitoes? I\'m not even adroit enough to pull off poetic justice with them. Since the LORD God gave the animals to man for food after the flood, what shall we do? Beautifully rendered with an excellent twist. Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 17:37
Predator and Prey
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message and so nicely said in rhyme with so few words
April 25th, 2025 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message and so nicely said in rhyme with so few words
April 25th, 2025 14:15
Sorting it out
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, if you do not use the contraction you have options since \"is not\" has easy rhymes, you know? Especially in this age of literal bots. Prettily rendered. Thank you for sharing.
April 19th, 2025 22:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, if you do not use the contraction you have options since \"is not\" has easy rhymes, you know? Especially in this age of literal bots. Prettily rendered. Thank you for sharing.
April 19th, 2025 22:11
Sorting it out
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem and not much rhymes with isn\'t except byzant an old coin. Great write
April 19th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem and not much rhymes with isn\'t except byzant an old coin. Great write
April 19th, 2025 11:38
If God ever married
orchidee said:
I probably can\'t get away with this, in these days of equality - But what can a man never understand? Answer: A woman\'s mind! lol.
April 13th, 2025 02:56
orchidee said:
I probably can\'t get away with this, in these days of equality - But what can a man never understand? Answer: A woman\'s mind! lol.
April 13th, 2025 02:56
If God ever married
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if God has been married countless times?!
April 13th, 2025 00:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if God has been married countless times?!
April 13th, 2025 00:22
If God ever married
James Michael said:
Jim’s probably my favorite comedian. We must have a sense of humor these days! God’s wife would be right 50 percent of the time, making for a proper marriage!
April 12th, 2025 21:27
James Michael said:
Jim’s probably my favorite comedian. We must have a sense of humor these days! God’s wife would be right 50 percent of the time, making for a proper marriage!
April 12th, 2025 21:27
If God ever married
Poetic Licence said:
This is probably true, and maybe with a wife to nag him, he would do something about the state of today\'s world. An entertaining and enjoyable read
April 12th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
This is probably true, and maybe with a wife to nag him, he would do something about the state of today\'s world. An entertaining and enjoyable read
April 12th, 2025 13:35
If God ever married
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure that is true but we would never know because to cover his masculine image he would keep it behind closed doors or rather pearly gates. A fun read enjoyed it.
April 12th, 2025 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m sure that is true but we would never know because to cover his masculine image he would keep it behind closed doors or rather pearly gates. A fun read enjoyed it.
April 12th, 2025 12:48
Taking the long view
Poetic Licence said:
A humorous write with a point, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 01:39
Poetic Licence said:
A humorous write with a point, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 01:39
Taking the long view
sorenbarrett said:
I love the idea and humor in this short piece
April 11th, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love the idea and humor in this short piece
April 11th, 2025 14:40
The dreaded list
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme here. This fits the truth as we learn more we find out how little we really know. Well stated.
April 9th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme here. This fits the truth as we learn more we find out how little we really know. Well stated.
April 9th, 2025 13:13
The dreaded list
Poetic Licence said:
So very true and each day it gets longer and longer, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
So very true and each day it gets longer and longer, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:10
Look at it these ways
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This is quite the mirror, I do believe so, there is not just ONE single truth there are many truths. Having it as a collective is a fabulous idea!
April 9th, 2025 01:38
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This is quite the mirror, I do believe so, there is not just ONE single truth there are many truths. Having it as a collective is a fabulous idea!
April 9th, 2025 01:38
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