Comments received on poems by hzugman
It\'s the bloody truth
sorenbarrett said:
Dark a poem with deeper intent. Well written
September 16th, 2025 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dark a poem with deeper intent. Well written
September 16th, 2025 20:17
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Keeter C said:
I seldom comment for fear of being a rube. It amazes me that tho I thought highly educated I am not.
September 9th, 2025 00:17
Keeter C said:
I seldom comment for fear of being a rube. It amazes me that tho I thought highly educated I am not.
September 9th, 2025 00:17
Out they go
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of a woman I met that insisted on telling me of her bowels and how she was so constipated that she had to dig it out with her tea spoon.
September 7th, 2025 19:37
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of a woman I met that insisted on telling me of her bowels and how she was so constipated that she had to dig it out with her tea spoon.
September 7th, 2025 19:37
Out they go
Doggerel Dave said:
Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by Technicolor illustrations (only a limited range of shades required there though).
Good luck with your further studies.
September 7th, 2025 18:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by Technicolor illustrations (only a limited range of shades required there though).
Good luck with your further studies.
September 7th, 2025 18:44
The stories we tell ourselves
Doggerel Dave said:
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06
Starting right now
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should treasure. Nicely said in rhyme
August 26th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should treasure. Nicely said in rhyme
August 26th, 2025 04:18
Help without taking credit
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you are. Nicely said
August 21st, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you are. Nicely said
August 21st, 2025 04:15
Help without taking credit
Cheeky Missy said:
I liked that particular flick, don\'t you? Thanks for the reminder.
August 20th, 2025 22:14
Cheeky Missy said:
I liked that particular flick, don\'t you? Thanks for the reminder.
August 20th, 2025 22:14
There\'s still more
sorenbarrett said:
Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our hearts do have more love to give. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our hearts do have more love to give. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 04:40
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
jarcher54 said:
Jonus!! I love it. It\'s so perfect you had to use it!! Brilliant.
Maybe we need to call YOU \"Poetic License\"...
August 10th, 2025 17:29
jarcher54 said:
Jonus!! I love it. It\'s so perfect you had to use it!! Brilliant.
Maybe we need to call YOU \"Poetic License\"...
August 10th, 2025 17:29
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Poetic Licence said:
An open mind we need more off, to many today are closed. Liked the whale reference, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
An open mind we need more off, to many today are closed. Liked the whale reference, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 12:27
Whose responsibility is it anyhow
sorenbarrett said:
And why not believe the whale? A fun read
August 9th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
And why not believe the whale? A fun read
August 9th, 2025 12:12
Wha ja say yer name wuz?
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem. Labels we all have em but they mean nothing nor do any of the other labels society awards. Well done
August 8th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem. Labels we all have em but they mean nothing nor do any of the other labels society awards. Well done
August 8th, 2025 14:26
Wha ja say yer name wuz?
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting write, something we can control our name, if not happy with allocated name we can change to one we have full ownership off, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 13:50
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting write, something we can control our name, if not happy with allocated name we can change to one we have full ownership off, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 13:50
Tree fruit confusion
Poetic Licence said:
The dilemmas of life and the fruit, nicely done, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 11:48
Poetic Licence said:
The dilemmas of life and the fruit, nicely done, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 11:48
Tree fruit confusion
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for people nicely said
August 4th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor for people nicely said
August 4th, 2025 10:16
Change is the only constant
sorenbarrett said:
A true statement about life. The ups and downs and all we can do is forgive.
August 3rd, 2025 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A true statement about life. The ups and downs and all we can do is forgive.
August 3rd, 2025 13:03
Change is the only constant
Poetic Licence said:
The only thing we know will happen apart from death, things will always change, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 11:43
Poetic Licence said:
The only thing we know will happen apart from death, things will always change, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 11:43
Change is the only constant
peto said:
The wise man returns
The last 2 words say it all
Good to see you hzugman
August 3rd, 2025 10:03
peto said:
The wise man returns
The last 2 words say it all
Good to see you hzugman
August 3rd, 2025 10:03
Gentle persuasion
Poetic Licence said:
A great write, the one\'s that are forced always end up weaker, if it flows naturally it will appear more honest, genuine and have more emotion, clevet write, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
A great write, the one\'s that are forced always end up weaker, if it flows naturally it will appear more honest, genuine and have more emotion, clevet write, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 12:07
Gentle persuasion
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes so true poetry like love can not be forced, it can be faked but it comes through. Very nice
July 23rd, 2025 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes so true poetry like love can not be forced, it can be faked but it comes through. Very nice
July 23rd, 2025 11:40
Gentle persuasion
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you remind me of the other night last week when I and two other poetesses were hanging out, tis very true, which I wish more artists understood. Inspiration is akin to a horse: you can try to force it to little or no avail; or you can give the horse his head and see where he takes you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fun poignancy.
July 23rd, 2025 11:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, you remind me of the other night last week when I and two other poetesses were hanging out, tis very true, which I wish more artists understood. Inspiration is akin to a horse: you can try to force it to little or no avail; or you can give the horse his head and see where he takes you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fun poignancy.
July 23rd, 2025 11:12
The stories we tell ourselves
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting poem, most poems are fiction but i usually write true real experiences and reality. Kudos for this poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
An interesting poem, most poems are fiction but i usually write true real experiences and reality. Kudos for this poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:05
The stories we tell ourselves
Poetic Licence said:
What we need is people to understand we are wrong and singing a false song, not sure that\'s going to happen, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 17:47
Poetic Licence said:
What we need is people to understand we are wrong and singing a false song, not sure that\'s going to happen, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 17:47
The stories we tell ourselves
sorenbarrett said:
Mind provoking and if we are lucky we will understand. Nice work
July 20th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Mind provoking and if we are lucky we will understand. Nice work
July 20th, 2025 20:11
Permission to thrive
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write that hits the nail on the head, give yourself permission, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write that hits the nail on the head, give yourself permission, enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 12:03
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