Comments received on poems by hzugman
Wants and needs
jarcher54 said:
Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!
September 23rd, 2023 13:26
jarcher54 said:
Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!
September 23rd, 2023 13:26
How things are
Pop64 (Michael) said:
A well rhyming piece of truth. Message perfectly expressed.
September 21st, 2023 10:17
Pop64 (Michael) said:
A well rhyming piece of truth. Message perfectly expressed.
September 21st, 2023 10:17
The value of trying
Pop64 (Michael) said:
very wise and profound all put together and displayed in a well rhyming piece of poetry.
September 19th, 2023 13:41
Pop64 (Michael) said:
very wise and profound all put together and displayed in a well rhyming piece of poetry.
September 19th, 2023 13:41
What do you know?
hzugman said:
I thought that since 2+7+8+1= 18 it might be considered a nickname.
September 16th, 2023 10:18
hzugman said:
I thought that since 2+7+8+1= 18 it might be considered a nickname.
September 16th, 2023 10:18
whose side are you on?
2781 said:
Amen. If everyone\'s doing it it\'s probably wrong.
September 14th, 2023 22:07
2781 said:
Amen. If everyone\'s doing it it\'s probably wrong.
September 14th, 2023 22:07
You and me babe
hzugman said:
Thanx Pop. Appreciate the comment.
BTW I\'m 83 does that make me Pop pop?
September 13th, 2023 09:09
hzugman said:
Thanx Pop. Appreciate the comment.
BTW I\'m 83 does that make me Pop pop?
September 13th, 2023 09:09
You and me babe
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Short and sweet, often the most profound in delivery, as in this case. Wonderfully written!
September 13th, 2023 09:00
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Short and sweet, often the most profound in delivery, as in this case. Wonderfully written!
September 13th, 2023 09:00
The whole enchilada
peto said:
I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound cheeky
But at your age you must have lived through some horrendous times
Always so positive and a joy to read
Great example for us all
September 6th, 2023 04:36
peto said:
I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound cheeky
But at your age you must have lived through some horrendous times
Always so positive and a joy to read
Great example for us all
September 6th, 2023 04:36
Judging rules
Soman Ragavan said:
4 September, 2023
My comments on the poem \"Judging rules” by Hzugman
We can quote the bible on this :
“So when they continued asking him, he lifted up himself, and said unto them, He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her.
John 8:7-11 King James Version (KJV)”
https://www.google.mu/search?q=let+him+who+has+never+sinned+cast+the+first+stone&sca_esv=562421344&source=hp&ei=xkj1ZKv3B6G_i...
Soman Ragavan. 4 September, 2023.
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September 3rd, 2023 22:10
Soman Ragavan said:
4 September, 2023
My comments on the poem \"Judging rules” by Hzugman
We can quote the bible on this :
“So when they continued asking him, he lifted up himself, and said unto them, He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her.
John 8:7-11 King James Version (KJV)”
https://www.google.mu/search?q=let+him+who+has+never+sinned+cast+the+first+stone&sca_esv=562421344&source=hp&ei=xkj1ZKv3B6G_i...
Soman Ragavan. 4 September, 2023.
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September 3rd, 2023 22:10
My girl, my girl, my girl
vividvoid14 said:
favorite line is when u say \" though i\'m pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me\"
September 3rd, 2023 19:18
vividvoid14 said:
favorite line is when u say \" though i\'m pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me\"
September 3rd, 2023 19:18
My girl, my girl, my girl
peto said:
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
September 3rd, 2023 09:36
peto said:
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
September 3rd, 2023 09:36
My girl, my girl, my girl
Suetah said:
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)
September 3rd, 2023 09:01
Suetah said:
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)
September 3rd, 2023 09:01
Inclucde every item
peto said:
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever
August 29th, 2023 09:18
peto said:
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever
August 29th, 2023 09:18
Say \"hi\"
2781 said:
I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.
August 23rd, 2023 12:20
2781 said:
I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.
August 23rd, 2023 12:20
Say \"hi\"
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.
August 23rd, 2023 08:47
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.
August 23rd, 2023 08:47
Better goals
jarcher54 said:
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!
August 19th, 2023 10:28
jarcher54 said:
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!
August 19th, 2023 10:28
Relatively speaking
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you
August 14th, 2023 09:43
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you
August 14th, 2023 09:43
good offerings everywhere
Bobby O said:
I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read
July 30th, 2023 17:42
Bobby O said:
I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read
July 30th, 2023 17:42
My favorite hippocrene
Bobby O said:
I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.
July 28th, 2023 22:50
Bobby O said:
I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.
July 28th, 2023 22:50
Pick one
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!
July 27th, 2023 10:57
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!
July 27th, 2023 10:57
Thanx
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Very clear, with great rhyming makes for a very good write.
July 26th, 2023 11:25
Pop64 (Michael) said:
Very clear, with great rhyming makes for a very good write.
July 26th, 2023 11:25
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