Comments received on poems by hzugman



I\'m through
jarcher54 said:

touche\' my friend!

June 10th, 2025 20:48

I\'m through
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of saying it as it is, enjoyed the read

June 9th, 2025 12:17

I\'m through
sorenbarrett said:

I\'m with you. Society too soft needs a chill of cold water telling it as it is and not pretending. Lovely

June 9th, 2025 11:25

I\'m through
orchidee said:

Good write H.

June 9th, 2025 11:14

Too much!
sorenbarrett said:

Now that is what I call short and a full example of what it is about it deserves a fave for its cleverness

June 8th, 2025 10:06

One step at a time
Muse of Calliope said:

This poem has a very positive message; thank you for this well-written reminder to strive for progress rather than perfection. Have a blessed day! 😊

June 7th, 2025 16:13

One step at a time
Poetic Licence said:

Getting better is achievable, perfection is not, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read

June 7th, 2025 11:05

One step at a time
sorenbarrett said:

Progression not perfection. Short but nicely said this poem speaks truth in few words.

June 7th, 2025 09:04

Focus
Poetic Licence said:

Focus your attention on the now, not your dreams or past, sound advice in this write, enjoyed the read

June 4th, 2025 13:19

Focus
sorenbarrett said:

Great poem with good advice for anyone not just a kid. Loved the idea though since experience usually has good advice.

June 4th, 2025 10:18

Pick and choose
sorenbarrett said:

Differences often make for the best unity. A lovely write

June 2nd, 2025 15:31

Peek-a-boo
Poetic Licence said:

This is so true, not enough take the time to do this or understand the importance of it, enjoyed the read

May 28th, 2025 12:36

Peek-a-boo
sorenbarrett said:

Listen to yourself and understand. Well written

May 28th, 2025 11:11

Try this
Poetic Licence said:

A very positive write which I know is right, but I struggle to achieve that way of thinking, nicely crafted and expressed

May 26th, 2025 16:28

Try this
sorenbarrett said:

A most positive view that I have tried to assume for many years now. Loved it

May 26th, 2025 14:46

Thank you!
Poetic Licence said:

That is a lovely write, contentment better than perfection, then we always have room for improvement, Enjoyed the read

May 26th, 2025 12:03

Thank you!
RSM0812 said:

There is always room for improvement but of course nothing is perfect.

May 26th, 2025 09:04

Thank you!
sorenbarrett said:

Some people are just lucky if you consider contentment good. An enjoyable read

May 24th, 2025 09:30

Smoke and Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:

Loved the continuity of this piece and the good rhyme. Very nice

May 21st, 2025 09:37

Choose Or Not (Redux)
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of how quickly and easily your life can change, one phone call and being bothered to answer it, enjoyed the read, nicely expressed

May 20th, 2025 10:44

Choose Or Not (Redux)
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem of satisfying unknow need by technology. Well written in poetic style.

May 20th, 2025 10:29

An ounce of ......
Demar Desu said:

LOL

May 19th, 2025 15:05

An ounce of ......
sorenbarrett said:

I love poetic license it unties the bonds of tied up lines.

May 19th, 2025 12:45

Yummy!
sorenbarrett said:

This could be an advertisement for either Hawaiian Punch or Oscar Meyer a fun read

May 16th, 2025 19:45

I\'m hungry
DLewis88 said:

This is a well written poem. I like it.

May 15th, 2025 14:16

I\'m hungry
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 15th, 2025 12:04

I\'m hungry
sorenbarrett said:

Greed fuels the fires of capitalism and drives the nation\'s economy. Greed starts in each individual and there are few that don\'t contain it. A lovely write

May 15th, 2025 05:15

Oh you smart-assed worms
RSM0812 said:

Very imaginative. Short and sweet. Great write.

May 12th, 2025 07:48

The big guy\'s pissed
RSM0812 said:

Great write. Good point. Thank God for being forgiving. We will get another chance... and another... and...

May 8th, 2025 06:15

Share the wealth not the misery
Poetic Licence said:

A very profound and wise write, nicely done

May 7th, 2025 09:50

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