Comments received on poems by hzugman



Looking through the other end of the telescope
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 19th, 2024 20:21

Upside down
Doggerel Dave said:

Always.

October 14th, 2024 06:02

Upside down
Tony36 said:

Nailed it

October 13th, 2024 15:55

Upside down
Cheeky Missy said:

Haha, good one!

October 13th, 2024 15:14

rhyme vs. reason
sunshine777 said:

Most important is the message, truth!

October 13th, 2024 09:43

Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
sunshine777 said:

That\'s real

October 13th, 2024 09:07

rhyme vs. reason
Dan Williams said:

You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.

October 8th, 2024 00:01

rhyme vs. reason
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 7th, 2024 15:10

rhyme vs. reason
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 7th, 2024 12:26

zzzzzzzzzz
jarcher54 said:

Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!

October 6th, 2024 10:22

What can I believe?
Mase ♪ said:

It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.

October 3rd, 2024 12:14

We go together
Mase ♪ said:

Stunning write!!

September 24th, 2024 01:58

We go together
Cheeky Missy said:

Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!

September 23rd, 2024 18:28

Ya know
Cheeky Missy said:

Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.

September 22nd, 2024 11:05

Look at it this way
Cheeky Missy said:

Charming. Albeit I\'m woefully fond of routine. Variety is the spice of life and that statement led to a new Starbucks drink a year ago and this lovely little tribute is beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.

September 12th, 2024 19:44

Words that mislead
Cheeky Missy said:

True....but it certainly seems like there are plenty of locations which aptly classify as \"nowhere.\" I kept expecting the \"glass half full/ half empty\" argument, stupidly. Fascinating suggestion and beautifully rendered thus. Thank you for sharing.

September 11th, 2024 13:35

Words that mislead
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 10th, 2024 14:35

Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
Cheeky Missy said:

That\'s downright lovely! Thank you for sharing. For my part I\'ll never know, but this is a winsome tribute to the gratitude for a clean bill of health.

September 4th, 2024 21:08

Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
MR.apocalypse said:

i thought this was very funny be thankfull for the things you dont have i had no idea what i was going to read but i knew it would provoke though and that it did very nice

September 4th, 2024 20:28

Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 4th, 2024 09:43

Look here and enjoy
hzugman said:

No chiding necessary just share your heart. Thanx for the comment.

September 1st, 2024 11:13

Look here and enjoy
Cheeky Missy said:

Precisely. Ergo, I purchased a big bag of Jelly Belly jellybeans, and yet don\'t usually share them. The refried beans I maunt live sans either, my dinner staple. Now you may chide me.

September 1st, 2024 11:06

True colors
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 31st, 2024 10:10

How strange!
Cheeky Missy said:

Hmm, well at least you\'re relaxing more, which I figure is better.

August 30th, 2024 18:49

How strange!
hzugman said:

Thanx for the comment, Mickey.

August 30th, 2024 14:43

How strange!
_Mickey_ said:

The universe is a vast space in well...SPACE! See what I did there?

August 30th, 2024 14:03

It all depends on your point of view
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read that gave me a smile and chuckle. Lovely

August 18th, 2024 12:37

It all depends on your point of view
jarcher54 said:

You are a modern Aesop today... brilliant observation!

August 18th, 2024 11:32

Don\'t harvest the low hanging fruit
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly worded and true. A great write.

August 14th, 2024 18:30

Here\'s another way to look at things
sorenbarrett said:

Great lines all adding up to an important message. Nicely done

August 2nd, 2024 15:55

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