Comments received on poems by hzugman

Wants and needs
jarcher54 said:

Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!

September 23rd, 2023 13:26

How things are
Pop64 (Michael) said:

A well rhyming piece of truth. Message perfectly expressed.

September 21st, 2023 10:17

The value of trying
Pop64 (Michael) said:

very wise and profound all put together and displayed in a well rhyming piece of poetry.

September 19th, 2023 13:41

What do you know?
hzugman said:

I thought that since 2+7+8+1= 18 it might be considered a nickname.

September 16th, 2023 10:18

What do you know?
2781 said:

What is truth?

September 16th, 2023 09:57

whose side are you on?
Bobby O said:

Dig that!

September 14th, 2023 22:52

whose side are you on?
2781 said:

Amen. If everyone\'s doing it it\'s probably wrong.

September 14th, 2023 22:07

You and me babe
hzugman said:

Thanx Pop. Appreciate the comment.

BTW I\'m 83 does that make me Pop pop?

September 13th, 2023 09:09

You and me babe
Pop64 (Michael) said:

Short and sweet, often the most profound in delivery, as in this case. Wonderfully written!

September 13th, 2023 09:00

The whole enchilada
peto said:

I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound cheeky
But at your age you must have lived through some horrendous times
Always so positive and a joy to read
Great example for us all

September 6th, 2023 04:36

The whole enchilada
vividvoid14 said:

keep writing

September 5th, 2023 15:39

Judging rules
Soman Ragavan said:

4 September, 2023
My comments on the poem \"Judging rules” by Hzugman

We can quote the bible on this :

“So when they continued asking him, he lifted up himself, and said unto them, He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her.
John 8:7-11 King James Version (KJV)”

Soman Ragavan. 4 September, 2023.

September 3rd, 2023 22:10

My girl, my girl, my girl
vividvoid14 said:

favorite line is when u say \" though i\'m pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me\"

September 3rd, 2023 19:18

My girl, my girl, my girl
peto said:

Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme

September 3rd, 2023 09:36

My girl, my girl, my girl
Suetah said:

Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)

September 3rd, 2023 09:01

Inclucde every item
peto said:

Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever

August 29th, 2023 09:18

I am sorry
orchidee said:

I am not sorry I read this good write H.

August 26th, 2023 12:30

Say \"hi\"
2781 said:

I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.

August 23rd, 2023 12:20

Say \"hi\"
Pop64 (Michael) said:

Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.

August 23rd, 2023 08:47

Singing therapy
LIZ said:

I love this! I do that all the time!

August 21st, 2023 11:12

Better goals
jarcher54 said:

Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!

August 19th, 2023 10:28

One way to say thank you
LIZ said:

This is true! A game changer for sure!!

August 16th, 2023 14:27

Relatively speaking
peto said:

Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you

August 14th, 2023 09:43

Learn something new each day
jarcher54 said:

I\'ll try brother, I promise!

August 6th, 2023 23:23

Steps to success
Pop64 (Michael) said:

Very wise and oh so true!

July 31st, 2023 09:22

good offerings everywhere
Bobby O said:

I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read

July 30th, 2023 17:42

My favorite hippocrene
Bobby O said:

I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.

July 28th, 2023 22:50

Pick one
Pop64 (Michael) said:

Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!

July 27th, 2023 10:57

Pop64 (Michael) said:

Very clear, with great rhyming makes for a very good write.

July 26th, 2023 11:25

Thank you MyPoeticSide
peto said:

Love reading you daily
Keep them coming

July 25th, 2023 23:30

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