Comments received on poems by hzugman
Riches
TobaniNataiella said:
Very uplifting short poem, that says so much, very enjoyable read
December 22nd, 2024 02:18
TobaniNataiella said:
Very uplifting short poem, that says so much, very enjoyable read
December 22nd, 2024 02:18
Riches
Cassie58 said:
If you have love in your life, you have all the wealth you need. Uplifting brevity. Nicely composed.
December 21st, 2024 21:57
Cassie58 said:
If you have love in your life, you have all the wealth you need. Uplifting brevity. Nicely composed.
December 21st, 2024 21:57
Riches
arqios said:
Refreshingly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing! That is truly what makes us rich. 👍🏻
December 21st, 2024 14:58
arqios said:
Refreshingly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing! That is truly what makes us rich. 👍🏻
December 21st, 2024 14:58
Where IS that?
TobaniNataiella said:
that is a clever little ditty, enjoyed
December 18th, 2024 18:22
TobaniNataiella said:
that is a clever little ditty, enjoyed
December 18th, 2024 18:22
Where did it go?
TobaniNataiella said:
My first chuckle of the day, very funny poem, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 09:47
TobaniNataiella said:
My first chuckle of the day, very funny poem, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 09:47
How did we get this way?
TobaniNataiella said:
Few words but point made, Nice write
December 9th, 2024 22:32
TobaniNataiella said:
Few words but point made, Nice write
December 9th, 2024 22:32
How did we get this way?
teardrop said:
You get your point across very well here. Thank you for the readf.
December 9th, 2024 20:37
teardrop said:
You get your point across very well here. Thank you for the readf.
December 9th, 2024 20:37
How did we get this way?
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Courage, Merry. Courage!\"
You asked a good question in this rhyme.
December 9th, 2024 19:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Courage, Merry. Courage!\"
You asked a good question in this rhyme.
December 9th, 2024 19:17
Surprise!
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you, Sir, that\'s correct. Beautifully rendered with a sweet rhythm.
December 8th, 2024 15:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you, Sir, that\'s correct. Beautifully rendered with a sweet rhythm.
December 8th, 2024 15:55
Something to ponder
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s a very interesting suggestion, leading me down a trail I never thought to take. I mean, there\'s Jacob and Esau who struggled together in Rebekah\'s womb, which seems to indicate they had plenty of thoughts BEFORE birth. Fascinating and charmingly rendered in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 18:11
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s a very interesting suggestion, leading me down a trail I never thought to take. I mean, there\'s Jacob and Esau who struggled together in Rebekah\'s womb, which seems to indicate they had plenty of thoughts BEFORE birth. Fascinating and charmingly rendered in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 18:11
rhyme vs. reason
Dan Williams said:
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.
October 8th, 2024 00:01
Dan Williams said:
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.
October 8th, 2024 00:01
zzzzzzzzzz
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
October 6th, 2024 10:22
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
October 6th, 2024 10:22
What can I believe?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.
October 3rd, 2024 12:14
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.
October 3rd, 2024 12:14
We go together
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!
September 23rd, 2024 18:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!
September 23rd, 2024 18:28
Ya know
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 11:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 11:05
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