Comments received on poems by hzugman



I see you - or do I?
sorenbarrett said:

Short but very clever wording and thought in this gem that now is a fave

October 14th, 2025 03:37

My personal GPS
sorenbarrett said:

Clever word play make the rhyme in this short poem. Well done

October 4th, 2025 15:33

The way things are
sorenbarrett said:

Clever rhyme in this poem of truisms. Well done.

October 2nd, 2025 12:02

What day is it?
sorenbarrett said:

True it is on both counts. Nicely said

September 29th, 2025 13:08

Relearning is harder than learning
sorenbarrett said:

Yes indeed the hardest things I have to learn are those that I have to unlearn. Your poem puts it just right. Nicely said

September 27th, 2025 10:11

Again and again and again
sorenbarrett said:

This goes deeper than the surface and speaks of how love is a continual process of proving it. Lovely and a fave

September 19th, 2025 13:41

Again and again and again
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

Beautifully written

September 19th, 2025 13:15

It\'s the bloody truth
Demar Desu said:

Tell em get a straw

September 16th, 2025 21:17

It\'s the bloody truth
sorenbarrett said:

Dark a poem with deeper intent. Well written

September 16th, 2025 20:17

Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Keeter C said:

I seldom comment for fear of being a rube. It amazes me that tho I thought highly educated I am not.

September 9th, 2025 00:17

Out they go
sorenbarrett said:

Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of a woman I met that insisted on telling me of her bowels and how she was so constipated that she had to dig it out with her tea spoon.

September 7th, 2025 19:37

Out they go
Doggerel Dave said:

Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by Technicolor illustrations (only a limited range of shades required there though).

Good luck with your further studies.

September 7th, 2025 18:44

The stories we tell ourselves
Doggerel Dave said:

Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.

August 28th, 2025 07:06

Whatever
sorenbarrett said:

Ah yes so true a great short.

August 27th, 2025 20:09

Starting right now
sorenbarrett said:

Truth in few words. Too often we grow neglectful of what we should treasure. Nicely said in rhyme

August 26th, 2025 04:18

Help without taking credit
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you are. Nicely said

August 21st, 2025 04:15

Help without taking credit
Cheeky Missy said:

I liked that particular flick, don\'t you? Thanks for the reminder.

August 20th, 2025 22:14

There\'s still more
sorenbarrett said:

Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our hearts do have more love to give. Nicely done

August 19th, 2025 04:40

Whose responsibility is it anyhow
jarcher54 said:

Jonus!! I love it. It\'s so perfect you had to use it!! Brilliant.
Maybe we need to call YOU \"Poetic License\"...

August 10th, 2025 17:29

Whose responsibility is it anyhow
Poetic Licence said:

An open mind we need more off, to many today are closed. Liked the whale reference, enjoyed the read

August 9th, 2025 12:27

Whose responsibility is it anyhow
sorenbarrett said:

And why not believe the whale? A fun read

August 9th, 2025 12:12

Wha ja say yer name wuz?
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem. Labels we all have em but they mean nothing nor do any of the other labels society awards. Well done

August 8th, 2025 14:26

Wha ja say yer name wuz?
Poetic Licence said:

Interesting write, something we can control our name, if not happy with allocated name we can change to one we have full ownership off, enjoyed the read

August 8th, 2025 13:50

Tree fruit confusion
peto said:

A juicy fruity write
Keep em coming hzugman

August 4th, 2025 12:11

Tree fruit confusion
Poetic Licence said:

The dilemmas of life and the fruit, nicely done, enjoyed the read

August 4th, 2025 11:48

Tree fruit confusion
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor for people nicely said

August 4th, 2025 10:16

Change is the only constant
sorenbarrett said:

A true statement about life. The ups and downs and all we can do is forgive.

August 3rd, 2025 13:03

Change is the only constant
Poetic Licence said:

The only thing we know will happen apart from death, things will always change, enjoyed the read

August 3rd, 2025 11:43

Change is the only constant
peto said:

The wise man returns
The last 2 words say it all
Good to see you hzugman

August 3rd, 2025 10:03

Gentle persuasion
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 23rd, 2025 17:46

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