Comments received on poems by Thomasine Dye
I Met A Griffin As He Prayed
jarcher54 said:
Your poems are far from perfect, but they are perfectly wonderful. I am so thrilled I stumbled on your contributions. They are unique; you are adept at making simple words into something enchanting.
December 4th, 2022 02:57
jarcher54 said:
Your poems are far from perfect, but they are perfectly wonderful. I am so thrilled I stumbled on your contributions. They are unique; you are adept at making simple words into something enchanting.
December 4th, 2022 02:57
A Rhyme From A Lost Childhood
jarcher54 said:
Your writing is very beautiful, very pregnant with emotion and thoughtful observation. I am fascinated by this little piece, and it\'s gonna take me a bit longer to figure out exactly why. The short lines belie the weighty emotions each one carries. This piece is like a child discovering adult things. This was the sweetest part of a long day.
December 4th, 2022 02:49
jarcher54 said:
Your writing is very beautiful, very pregnant with emotion and thoughtful observation. I am fascinated by this little piece, and it\'s gonna take me a bit longer to figure out exactly why. The short lines belie the weighty emotions each one carries. This piece is like a child discovering adult things. This was the sweetest part of a long day.
December 4th, 2022 02:49
Eternal Strangers
jarcher54 said:
I like this... it is over the top but sophisticated and mature at the same time. Thanks for letting us look in on you.
December 4th, 2022 02:44
jarcher54 said:
I like this... it is over the top but sophisticated and mature at the same time. Thanks for letting us look in on you.
December 4th, 2022 02:44
We Live Ourselves to Death
Neil Higgins said:
\"we most live in silent obscurity\" this is a brilliant line.The rest of the poetry is superb as well 👏
November 23rd, 2022 06:44
Neil Higgins said:
\"we most live in silent obscurity\" this is a brilliant line.The rest of the poetry is superb as well 👏
November 23rd, 2022 06:44
We Live Ourselves to Death
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is this a great poem I\'ve realized that not only do we write in the same style but about similar topics
November 23rd, 2022 03:13
MR.apocalypse said:
not only is this a great poem I\'ve realized that not only do we write in the same style but about similar topics
November 23rd, 2022 03:13
I Really Am Fine
L. B. Mek said:
yes, so many deserving
silenced
by the cacophonous
noise
of the self-serving..
June 24th, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
yes, so many deserving
silenced
by the cacophonous
noise
of the self-serving..
June 24th, 2022 04:13
A Child When it Happened
JudyStella said:
Childhood trauma is carried into ones adulthood as well. I am sorry for your experiences, hope you heal slowly though I know it cannot be eradicated. Thanks for sharing ✨
June 20th, 2022 03:34
JudyStella said:
Childhood trauma is carried into ones adulthood as well. I am sorry for your experiences, hope you heal slowly though I know it cannot be eradicated. Thanks for sharing ✨
June 20th, 2022 03:34
A Child When it Happened
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Beautifully written. Many different emotions in this poem.
June 19th, 2022 17:36
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Beautifully written. Many different emotions in this poem.
June 19th, 2022 17:36
To Land on Your Feet
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words BDB, all we here about in this world are the bad things that happen but there are more good people in this world than there are bad but only the bad get recognised.
The world is a good place in many and most respects.
Andy
June 5th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words BDB, all we here about in this world are the bad things that happen but there are more good people in this world than there are bad but only the bad get recognised.
The world is a good place in many and most respects.
Andy
June 5th, 2022 01:38
Mere Existence
a thousand wishes said:
I LOVED, I repeat LOVED this poem. I understood the feeling and really appreciated the raw emotion flowing throughout this piece. You told an important story with your words.
June 4th, 2022 00:24
a thousand wishes said:
I LOVED, I repeat LOVED this poem. I understood the feeling and really appreciated the raw emotion flowing throughout this piece. You told an important story with your words.
June 4th, 2022 00:24
A Ruined Place
Amon said:
I once spent some time there, or somewhere similar, and I\'m taken back there in memories, it sucks
June 2nd, 2022 05:36
Amon said:
I once spent some time there, or somewhere similar, and I\'m taken back there in memories, it sucks
June 2nd, 2022 05:36
A Ruined Place
L. B. Mek said:
such a vivid portrayal
of those dark corners in all our minds..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 2nd, 2022 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
such a vivid portrayal
of those dark corners in all our minds..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 2nd, 2022 04:20
A Ruined Place
tallisman said:
Hello, really good, word play brings out a description that belies the length of the poem, if that makes sense! Minimum words, maximum effect! I keep rereading it!! Thanks for sharing….
June 2nd, 2022 01:38
tallisman said:
Hello, really good, word play brings out a description that belies the length of the poem, if that makes sense! Minimum words, maximum effect! I keep rereading it!! Thanks for sharing….
June 2nd, 2022 01:38
Mute Surrender
tallisman said:
I’m with ATW on this one, a really good poem, thankyou
June 1st, 2022 00:53
tallisman said:
I’m with ATW on this one, a really good poem, thankyou
June 1st, 2022 00:53
Mute Surrender
a thousand wishes said:
Somehow, this made my day. Reading something so emotive and intense. and the lines about mute surrender and even the title, this is just a work of art, really, thank you for writing this
June 1st, 2022 00:11
a thousand wishes said:
Somehow, this made my day. Reading something so emotive and intense. and the lines about mute surrender and even the title, this is just a work of art, really, thank you for writing this
June 1st, 2022 00:11
Defective
L. B. Mek said:
poignant and heart wrenchingly, relatable
there are categories of fate
in our worth, if we compare
then \'We\' lose;
best to just balance, on our thimbles
of opportunity
count our blessings, knowing
it could have been a lot, worse
just
as It Should Have Been Much, Better!
onwards
let\'s not squander, what little mercy
we\'ve been afforded, dear Poet
stay strong!
May 26th, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
poignant and heart wrenchingly, relatable
there are categories of fate
in our worth, if we compare
then \'We\' lose;
best to just balance, on our thimbles
of opportunity
count our blessings, knowing
it could have been a lot, worse
just
as It Should Have Been Much, Better!
onwards
let\'s not squander, what little mercy
we\'ve been afforded, dear Poet
stay strong!
May 26th, 2022 06:49
Another Worthless Poem
LMTobin said:
You shared your feelings with the world through beautiful words---that is one of the most worthwhile, noble things you can do.
We are all blessed you shared such intense emotion here.
I\'m so sorry for your loss.
May 23rd, 2022 19:58
LMTobin said:
You shared your feelings with the world through beautiful words---that is one of the most worthwhile, noble things you can do.
We are all blessed you shared such intense emotion here.
I\'m so sorry for your loss.
May 23rd, 2022 19:58
Another Worthless Poem
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good poem . I’m sorry for your sadness and the loss of your sister
May 23rd, 2022 11:56
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good poem . I’m sorry for your sadness and the loss of your sister
May 23rd, 2022 11:56
Another Worthless Poem
turbo1904 said:
This is a great poem. I enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing. You captured my heart with this one.
May 23rd, 2022 11:28
turbo1904 said:
This is a great poem. I enjoyed every word. Thank you for sharing. You captured my heart with this one.
May 23rd, 2022 11:28
Another Worthless Poem
Rocky Lagou said:
I\'m so sorry to hear this, but know that everything will be alright. I lost my mother at 13, so I know what loss feel like. It\'s unbearable, but keep in mind that there\'s always light, even when you can\'t see it. Your poems are your legacy.
May 23rd, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
I\'m so sorry to hear this, but know that everything will be alright. I lost my mother at 13, so I know what loss feel like. It\'s unbearable, but keep in mind that there\'s always light, even when you can\'t see it. Your poems are your legacy.
May 23rd, 2022 08:24
Another Worthless Poem
tallisman said:
Never worthless, some poems talk to others, some to ourselves. I wish you a path to a happier future…and by the way, this was a well crafted and emotional poem, well done…
May 23rd, 2022 01:02
tallisman said:
Never worthless, some poems talk to others, some to ourselves. I wish you a path to a happier future…and by the way, this was a well crafted and emotional poem, well done…
May 23rd, 2022 01:02
Another Worthless Poem
jarcher54 said:
Another lovely poem... far from worthless... as Frost said, the woods are lovely, dark and deep. So is your little poem. We all feel something like the way you do in this poem sometimes. I for one feel blessed that you shared your deepest thoughts in this candid, deceptively simple lyric. There is nothing like a poem to bring out such emotions and ponderings.
May 23rd, 2022 01:01
jarcher54 said:
Another lovely poem... far from worthless... as Frost said, the woods are lovely, dark and deep. So is your little poem. We all feel something like the way you do in this poem sometimes. I for one feel blessed that you shared your deepest thoughts in this candid, deceptively simple lyric. There is nothing like a poem to bring out such emotions and ponderings.
May 23rd, 2022 01:01
Nowhere to Go
Rachel Summons said:
Very moving. The melancholic grips me tight and I can\'t help but to reread it all over again.
May 22nd, 2022 01:40
Rachel Summons said:
Very moving. The melancholic grips me tight and I can\'t help but to reread it all over again.
May 22nd, 2022 01:40
I Hide Behind My Veil
L. B. Mek said:
\'to survive, we adapt
if void is your, thread
to that grip, as a - hold
for all that you treasure
in life
then, so be it..\'
dear poet
stay strong!
May 19th, 2022 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'to survive, we adapt
if void is your, thread
to that grip, as a - hold
for all that you treasure
in life
then, so be it..\'
dear poet
stay strong!
May 19th, 2022 05:03
Sweet the Venom
Thomasine Dye said:
Thank you all for the kind words! I\'m very glad others were able to receive something from my middle-of-the-night verse epiphanies.
May 18th, 2022 02:23
Thomasine Dye said:
Thank you all for the kind words! I\'m very glad others were able to receive something from my middle-of-the-night verse epiphanies.
May 18th, 2022 02:23
Sweet the Venom
Christina8 said:
Seeking acceptance is only natural, but the right person just comes along no matter what you are wearing....Great write!
May 17th, 2022 08:13
Christina8 said:
Seeking acceptance is only natural, but the right person just comes along no matter what you are wearing....Great write!
May 17th, 2022 08:13
Sweet the Venom
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, what an amazing poetic display! This is truly a touching piece. I feel that so many in our generation our desperately seeking acceptance from others and have shunned their own inner-beauty. Thank you for this affirmation.
May 17th, 2022 08:08
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, what an amazing poetic display! This is truly a touching piece. I feel that so many in our generation our desperately seeking acceptance from others and have shunned their own inner-beauty. Thank you for this affirmation.
May 17th, 2022 08:08
Sweet the Venom
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic genius with us, dear Poet
\'Because all of it is a lie
So much wasted time
Pursuing something I am not
All this loathing and doubt
Over this ideal I’ve sought
I am no different from any other\'..
\'To stave off rejection’s cruel remembrance
Delusions come abound
For the hope-starved heart\'..
\'How sweet the venom
Of such affirming lies
For the truth cannot be known
To hear it is to die\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
thank you! for choosing to share
your poetic genius with us, dear Poet
\'Because all of it is a lie
So much wasted time
Pursuing something I am not
All this loathing and doubt
Over this ideal I’ve sought
I am no different from any other\'..
\'To stave off rejection’s cruel remembrance
Delusions come abound
For the hope-starved heart\'..
\'How sweet the venom
Of such affirming lies
For the truth cannot be known
To hear it is to die\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:24
Long Days and Short Years
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hurt has made me humble
Shown me what I am
So in these last dire moments
I do right however I can
Apologies to the few that are left
I make my peace with ghosts
Then I gaze at the sapling trees
Who are more than I’ll ever know\'..
Amen!
(when I grow up
I wish to attain, a percentage
of the humble wisdom
in these words...!)
thank you for choosing to share, oh wise Poet
May 17th, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Hurt has made me humble
Shown me what I am
So in these last dire moments
I do right however I can
Apologies to the few that are left
I make my peace with ghosts
Then I gaze at the sapling trees
Who are more than I’ll ever know\'..
Amen!
(when I grow up
I wish to attain, a percentage
of the humble wisdom
in these words...!)
thank you for choosing to share, oh wise Poet
May 17th, 2022 05:00
Long Days and Short Years
Vaughn Walker said:
Beautiful and yet sorrowful. Thank you for sharing this.
May 16th, 2022 21:24
Vaughn Walker said:
Beautiful and yet sorrowful. Thank you for sharing this.
May 16th, 2022 21:24
