Comments received on poems by Aradhya
Blood Rose
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, your imagery is so vivid and lucid! I literally adore the way you draw inspiration from movies and books. Most of my poems just come from the dark places in my mind, lol. But truly you have a talent, never stop writing!
December 19th, 2022 13:57
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, your imagery is so vivid and lucid! I literally adore the way you draw inspiration from movies and books. Most of my poems just come from the dark places in my mind, lol. But truly you have a talent, never stop writing!
December 19th, 2022 13:57
Raindrops
Neville said:
Nature is a law unto her good self isn\'t she ........ a bloomin fine poem that clearly emphasises the point that I make here beneath it ..Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 04:30
Neville said:
Nature is a law unto her good self isn\'t she ........ a bloomin fine poem that clearly emphasises the point that I make here beneath it ..Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 04:30
Fondest Regards...
Neville said:
Your title, that which serves as a vivid visual header for the whole page that follows, could not have been better chosen to pave the way for all that which flows feather soft until the conclusion .. Much like the tireless and undulating flight of an unnamed but beautiful bird through the seasons and years and looking down upon the two lovers and their doomed love .. All in all, very muchly enjoyed my friend and from end to end ..Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 04:25
Neville said:
Your title, that which serves as a vivid visual header for the whole page that follows, could not have been better chosen to pave the way for all that which flows feather soft until the conclusion .. Much like the tireless and undulating flight of an unnamed but beautiful bird through the seasons and years and looking down upon the two lovers and their doomed love .. All in all, very muchly enjoyed my friend and from end to end ..Neville :)
December 2nd, 2022 04:25
Fondest Regards...
Rocky Lagou said:
Omg beloved poet you never fail to deliverrrrr!!!!! I love how you were inspired by a film, I\'m curious as to know which one? 🧐 The imagery you portray is so rich and vibrant. And that final line, ufffff! It\'s so heartbreaking, \"And a heartfelt candle weeps for me.\" Love this!!
November 29th, 2022 10:44
Rocky Lagou said:
Omg beloved poet you never fail to deliverrrrr!!!!! I love how you were inspired by a film, I\'m curious as to know which one? 🧐 The imagery you portray is so rich and vibrant. And that final line, ufffff! It\'s so heartbreaking, \"And a heartfelt candle weeps for me.\" Love this!!
November 29th, 2022 10:44
Cruel Rejection
Neville said:
ouch .. I bet that memory still hurts now & then .. but bloomin well crafted nevertheless and now safely wrapped in the warm hug of a poem ... Neville :)
August 28th, 2022 03:12
Neville said:
ouch .. I bet that memory still hurts now & then .. but bloomin well crafted nevertheless and now safely wrapped in the warm hug of a poem ... Neville :)
August 28th, 2022 03:12
Fragrance of kindness
Neville said:
this makes perfect scents .. my eyes, heart and nose have insisted I thank you ................... N :)
August 27th, 2022 01:00
Neville said:
this makes perfect scents .. my eyes, heart and nose have insisted I thank you ................... N :)
August 27th, 2022 01:00
To the Memories II
Neville said:
I found this little bit of brevity intriguing .. clearly something to ponder as I meander through another weekend .. quite lovely too, if you don\'t mind me saying so ... Neville
August 27th, 2022 00:55
Neville said:
I found this little bit of brevity intriguing .. clearly something to ponder as I meander through another weekend .. quite lovely too, if you don\'t mind me saying so ... Neville
August 27th, 2022 00:55
Flowers bloom from Time to Time
Neville said:
I am so glad you found me today my friend, otherwise, I may not have fallen for this .. what a delightful introduction to your ink .. I have no doubt I shall pass this way again .. Neville
August 26th, 2022 06:02
Neville said:
I am so glad you found me today my friend, otherwise, I may not have fallen for this .. what a delightful introduction to your ink .. I have no doubt I shall pass this way again .. Neville
August 26th, 2022 06:02
To the Memories II
dusk arising said:
Many many wishes are but tiny fishes swimming against the tide. Though time and tide wait for no man.
August 26th, 2022 05:43
dusk arising said:
Many many wishes are but tiny fishes swimming against the tide. Though time and tide wait for no man.
August 26th, 2022 05:43
Fragrance of kindness
Rocky Lagou said:
Omg Aradhya this is glorious!!!!
It is a known fact that it is much easier to write a \"long\" poem than it is to write a \"short\" one, because you have to try to stuff so many different ideas and emotions concisely, but you\'ve done marvelouslly.
The way you considered the way blind and deaf people perceive flowers is beautiful and the surprise ending is even better.
Bravo!
August 25th, 2022 10:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Omg Aradhya this is glorious!!!!
It is a known fact that it is much easier to write a \"long\" poem than it is to write a \"short\" one, because you have to try to stuff so many different ideas and emotions concisely, but you\'ve done marvelouslly.
The way you considered the way blind and deaf people perceive flowers is beautiful and the surprise ending is even better.
Bravo!
August 25th, 2022 10:17
Fragrance of kindness
crypticbard said:
An awesome poem on the scent we let off with other sensed things in our daily lives. Thanks for sharing.
August 25th, 2022 03:40
crypticbard said:
An awesome poem on the scent we let off with other sensed things in our daily lives. Thanks for sharing.
August 25th, 2022 03:40
To the Memories...
MendedFences27 said:
A reflection or a remembrance, I thought, of someone close to the poet. Your first two lines reminded me of Wordsworth. \"\'To laugh or To cry?\' I wonder\" caused me to believe this memory was an emotional one, maybe a loss of someone close. It happened a while ago, thus the mention of \"Time.\" That\'s what I got from this well crafted poem of yours. I enjoyed reading this and found it to be very sincere and personal . O.K. so I loved it. - Phil A.
August 20th, 2022 15:02
MendedFences27 said:
A reflection or a remembrance, I thought, of someone close to the poet. Your first two lines reminded me of Wordsworth. \"\'To laugh or To cry?\' I wonder\" caused me to believe this memory was an emotional one, maybe a loss of someone close. It happened a while ago, thus the mention of \"Time.\" That\'s what I got from this well crafted poem of yours. I enjoyed reading this and found it to be very sincere and personal . O.K. so I loved it. - Phil A.
August 20th, 2022 15:02
Daybreak
Saxon Crow said:
This has made me think which is always a good thing and always a bad thing haha
August 6th, 2022 01:24
Saxon Crow said:
This has made me think which is always a good thing and always a bad thing haha
August 6th, 2022 01:24
Daybreak
Doggerel Dave said:
You won\'t find out just laying there ....😊
A refined, neatly structured piece.
August 5th, 2022 19:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You won\'t find out just laying there ....😊
A refined, neatly structured piece.
August 5th, 2022 19:50
Medusa ; Betrayed Innocence
Chris Duffy said:
I wrote something called Medusa but it wasn’t as good as this. Fabulous!
August 5th, 2022 15:31
Chris Duffy said:
I wrote something called Medusa but it wasn’t as good as this. Fabulous!
August 5th, 2022 15:31
A Rose with Thorns
Jonas Robinson said:
Sounds like you\'re a popular girl. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 15:12
Jonas Robinson said:
Sounds like you\'re a popular girl. Thank you for sharing. :)
May 28th, 2022 15:12
A Rose with Thorns
MendedFences27 said:
A rose and her thorns, A great quandary of Nature. Excellently presented, highlighting the contrast of beauty and pain. Some would say the \"Love\" theme in Nature\'s own words. Some fresh phrases in your poem: \"a blood tear.\" \"a moment transient,\" \"too unwilling to part.\' I loved how you breathed life into the rose, making her a living being. Well done. - Phil A.
May 28th, 2022 15:08
MendedFences27 said:
A rose and her thorns, A great quandary of Nature. Excellently presented, highlighting the contrast of beauty and pain. Some would say the \"Love\" theme in Nature\'s own words. Some fresh phrases in your poem: \"a blood tear.\" \"a moment transient,\" \"too unwilling to part.\' I loved how you breathed life into the rose, making her a living being. Well done. - Phil A.
May 28th, 2022 15:08
A Rose with Thorns
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes beauty cautions us to beware. Admire me, but I am my own. A tale beautifully told in lovely verse.
May 28th, 2022 14:29
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes beauty cautions us to beware. Admire me, but I am my own. A tale beautifully told in lovely verse.
May 28th, 2022 14:29
A Rose with Thorns
JudyStella said:
For, what is A Rose without her Thorns?
Love this verse! A very reflective poem. Stems from the theme of perfect imperfections 🌹
May 28th, 2022 08:42
JudyStella said:
For, what is A Rose without her Thorns?
Love this verse! A very reflective poem. Stems from the theme of perfect imperfections 🌹
May 28th, 2022 08:42
A Rose with Thorns
crypticbard said:
An excellent poem to read. Just amazed how several rose 🌹 related poems are being posted at the site today. Thanks for sharing.
May 28th, 2022 07:10
crypticbard said:
An excellent poem to read. Just amazed how several rose 🌹 related poems are being posted at the site today. Thanks for sharing.
May 28th, 2022 07:10
When tears fall...
Bella Shepard said:
Isn\'t it a wonder that the power of emotion can make us cry when we are happy or sad? You have portrayed this phenomenon so well in beautiful phrasing and flowing lines. Well done dear poetess.
May 26th, 2022 14:45
Bella Shepard said:
Isn\'t it a wonder that the power of emotion can make us cry when we are happy or sad? You have portrayed this phenomenon so well in beautiful phrasing and flowing lines. Well done dear poetess.
May 26th, 2022 14:45
When tears fall...
JudyStella said:
Tears of sorrow and tears of joy! If it occurs at the same time, sadness because it had it be endured and happiness because you’ve lived through it. Your poem serves justice to both the emotions! Great poem❤️
May 26th, 2022 11:49
JudyStella said:
Tears of sorrow and tears of joy! If it occurs at the same time, sadness because it had it be endured and happiness because you’ve lived through it. Your poem serves justice to both the emotions! Great poem❤️
May 26th, 2022 11:49
When tears fall...
Saxon Crow said:
Both. Equally at the same time. Exquisite happy sad
May 26th, 2022 10:35
Saxon Crow said:
Both. Equally at the same time. Exquisite happy sad
May 26th, 2022 10:35
When tears fall...
L. B. Mek said:
I too, second and bow
to Teddy.15\'s wisdom...
thanks for sharing
May 26th, 2022 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
I too, second and bow
to Teddy.15\'s wisdom...
thanks for sharing
May 26th, 2022 06:52
Flowers bloom from Time to Time
Jonas Robinson said:
Beautiful nature imagery and philosophical imagination. Thank you for sharing. I will regret being cruel to not notice such wisdom.
May 25th, 2022 16:59
Jonas Robinson said:
Beautiful nature imagery and philosophical imagination. Thank you for sharing. I will regret being cruel to not notice such wisdom.
May 25th, 2022 16:59
There was a time
MendedFences27 said:
This is deep, layered, and thought provoking. It can be applied to many ideas: a comparison of youth to maturity, the coexistence of Nature and Humanity, the difference between freedom and incarceration. Loved some of your phrasings: \"a death of silence,\" Whispering to the moon,\" \"smiled back greenly.\" A lovely poem. Thank you for posting. - Phil A
May 25th, 2022 10:40
MendedFences27 said:
This is deep, layered, and thought provoking. It can be applied to many ideas: a comparison of youth to maturity, the coexistence of Nature and Humanity, the difference between freedom and incarceration. Loved some of your phrasings: \"a death of silence,\" Whispering to the moon,\" \"smiled back greenly.\" A lovely poem. Thank you for posting. - Phil A
May 25th, 2022 10:40
There was a time
Saxon Crow said:
Oooo another little gem. So many layers to this piece. Great stuff Aradhya
May 25th, 2022 02:53
Saxon Crow said:
Oooo another little gem. So many layers to this piece. Great stuff Aradhya
May 25th, 2022 02:53
Flowers bloom from Time to Time
Rozina said:
A beautiful poem and imagery. Lovely lines to be read again.
May 25th, 2022 01:06
Rozina said:
A beautiful poem and imagery. Lovely lines to be read again.
May 25th, 2022 01:06
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