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My execution
orchidee said:

Where ya going? Not leaving us? We needs ya to write more fine poems still.
Yes, and if ya went - also - who who feed the cat? or dog? heehee.

June 1st, 2022 02:17

The both of us
tallisman said:

Another good one, loved the way this one flows. ..


June 1st, 2022 00:50

My execution
tallisman said:

This is good, and it leaves so many questions! , ATW, a good write, ..

June 1st, 2022 00:44

The both of us
JudyStella said:

This poem made me think of Tess in the novel, Tess of the D’Urbervilles by Thomas Hardy. The narrator’s love seems to be unconditional ❤️ Beautiful poem!

May 31st, 2022 12:55

The both of us
Paul Bell said:

This is pretty sad and a bit optimistic too. Two people on the road, maybe going different directions though, but still together.

May 31st, 2022 11:28

Internal Wars
tallisman said:

This is emotive, quite powerful. Good write!

May 31st, 2022 00:32

Internal Wars
JudyStella said:

Emotional poem put into words so well❤️Keep fighting dear friend!

May 30th, 2022 10:37

Flashback
L. B. Mek said:

very well written, thanks for sharing

May 30th, 2022 05:07

Flashback
JudyStella said:

It is written in such a way that it grips my heart! A very emotional poem🥺 and I am so sorry

May 30th, 2022 02:08

Flashback
tallisman said:

Well written. Such strong emotion coming through, it burns my heart…

May 30th, 2022 00:35

Flashback
TK said:

I understand. Completely. I\'ve been there too and I\'m so sorry.

May 29th, 2022 17:33

Flashback
GON said:

i like the rhythm in parts, particularly..
\"I had a flashback -
a panic attack
It may have faded away\"

May 29th, 2022 16:03

Flatline
tallisman said:

Great TW, good descriptive work….

May 29th, 2022 12:19

Flatline
Bella Shepard said:

Hello my new friend! I love this beautiful description of that teetering between life and death, minutes counting down to the end. Who hasn\'t imagined what this will be like. Very poignant, well done.

May 29th, 2022 09:34

Flatline
orchidee said:

Good write TW.

May 29th, 2022 01:54

Flatline
Jonas Robinson said:

Good stuff. :)

May 28th, 2022 12:00

Everything good in life
Kim12 said:

Great flow through this poem. Nicely written :)

May 27th, 2022 16:10

My amygdala
Jonas Robinson said:

I enjoyed the nature and spark of darkness that this arose in me. It\'s good to see some of that in romance, at least once in a while. Thank you for sharing. And goodwill toward you, my friend.

May 25th, 2022 16:23

What she sees
Jonas Robinson said:

A dark sensational beauty that can only fabricate time. I love this and hope to see more of your work. I enjoyed this nature and eloquence that you brought into this mirage of fine crafted words.

May 25th, 2022 16:06

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