Comments received on poems by a thousand wishes
I know
_lonely__side said:
I really love it. you\'ve expressed emotions too well.
June 12th, 2022 12:13
_lonely__side said:
I really love it. you\'ve expressed emotions too well.
June 12th, 2022 12:13
The door
JudyStella said:
I feel that opening a door seems like opening upto someone about ones feelings and experiences that were kept away for so long. And once that door is open there’s no way closing it back as what’s said is said. And once you open up I am sure there’ll be more support than you’d imagine. And if you ever want help there’s a whole community that you can talk to including me😊❤️
June 12th, 2022 08:54
JudyStella said:
I feel that opening a door seems like opening upto someone about ones feelings and experiences that were kept away for so long. And once that door is open there’s no way closing it back as what’s said is said. And once you open up I am sure there’ll be more support than you’d imagine. And if you ever want help there’s a whole community that you can talk to including me😊❤️
June 12th, 2022 08:54
Dead (unfinished)
GON said:
my first thought is that i\'m wondering who you\'re talking to. what you\'re in a position to do in order to illustrate that as a writer is describe further his/her character by shining some light on things he\'s done or said and reflecting your own thoughts off of that.
June 9th, 2022 10:10
GON said:
my first thought is that i\'m wondering who you\'re talking to. what you\'re in a position to do in order to illustrate that as a writer is describe further his/her character by shining some light on things he\'s done or said and reflecting your own thoughts off of that.
June 9th, 2022 10:10
The red-eyed raven
JudyStella said:
I love the structure and the symbols used! Good one!
June 8th, 2022 14:46
JudyStella said:
I love the structure and the symbols used! Good one!
June 8th, 2022 14:46
The red-eyed raven
hzugman said:
Very nice poem 1000. What a coincidence that with both wrote poems on the dream theme.
June 8th, 2022 12:10
hzugman said:
Very nice poem 1000. What a coincidence that with both wrote poems on the dream theme.
June 8th, 2022 12:10
The red-eyed raven
GON said:
This is actually my favorite of yours so far. The form is great, the images you call are interesting, and the rhymes are mostly tasteful. Very cool!
June 8th, 2022 11:30
GON said:
This is actually my favorite of yours so far. The form is great, the images you call are interesting, and the rhymes are mostly tasteful. Very cool!
June 8th, 2022 11:30
I know
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read and so appealing. Your final stanza is amazing.
June 6th, 2022 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read and so appealing. Your final stanza is amazing.
June 6th, 2022 16:01
I know
GON said:
I especially love the two final stanzas. \"We had to fall before we flew.\" Nothing short of beautiful and poetic. Well done.
June 6th, 2022 15:37
GON said:
I especially love the two final stanzas. \"We had to fall before we flew.\" Nothing short of beautiful and poetic. Well done.
June 6th, 2022 15:37
I know
RL Randall said:
It\'s not the falling that matters but how you get up. Falling should always make you stronger and wiser for the next. time A very nice piece!
June 6th, 2022 12:27
RL Randall said:
It\'s not the falling that matters but how you get up. Falling should always make you stronger and wiser for the next. time A very nice piece!
June 6th, 2022 12:27
I know
Rocky Lagou said:
A powerful message. The lines \"There´s beauty in the risks / that we take\" is so true.
June 6th, 2022 12:22
Rocky Lagou said:
A powerful message. The lines \"There´s beauty in the risks / that we take\" is so true.
June 6th, 2022 12:22
I know
hzugman said:
Very nicely done. I sense that you might like reading a book I\'m just finishing called, \"What Happened To You\". Here\'s the link: https://www.amazon.com/s?k=what+happened+to+you+oprah+winfrey+and+bruce+perry&i=stripbooks&crid=2E87DEMLYCND5&sprefix=what+happened+to+you%2Cstripbooks%2C171&ref=nb_sb_ss_ts-doa-p_2_20.
June 6th, 2022 11:52
hzugman said:
Very nicely done. I sense that you might like reading a book I\'m just finishing called, \"What Happened To You\". Here\'s the link: https://www.amazon.com/s?k=what+happened+to+you+oprah+winfrey+and+bruce+perry&i=stripbooks&crid=2E87DEMLYCND5&sprefix=what+happened+to+you%2Cstripbooks%2C171&ref=nb_sb_ss_ts-doa-p_2_20.
June 6th, 2022 11:52
Flatline
Blueledge said:
Facing my own mortality is something I tend to think about now I\'m getting older.
June 6th, 2022 00:30
Blueledge said:
Facing my own mortality is something I tend to think about now I\'m getting older.
June 6th, 2022 00:30
Pain
GON said:
pain is the undeniable truth of life, but we can only hope there\'s something more to it than that. i definitely do!
June 5th, 2022 17:06
GON said:
pain is the undeniable truth of life, but we can only hope there\'s something more to it than that. i definitely do!
June 5th, 2022 17:06
Pain
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem gets me in the heart, and the gut. So many conflicts in our turbulent world, and I understand that pain. Very well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:14
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem gets me in the heart, and the gut. So many conflicts in our turbulent world, and I understand that pain. Very well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:14
The harder we fell
a thousand wishes said:
It is unfinished but if you guys have suggestions I am open to hearing or reading some lol
June 4th, 2022 00:21
a thousand wishes said:
It is unfinished but if you guys have suggestions I am open to hearing or reading some lol
June 4th, 2022 00:21
Internal Wars
RL Randall said:
The fight is always to keep it from becoming nuclear. This a well thought out piece.
June 3rd, 2022 19:20
RL Randall said:
The fight is always to keep it from becoming nuclear. This a well thought out piece.
June 3rd, 2022 19:20
The trouble with coming out
Jeannie said:
Love your poem. I have family members and friends who are gay and I love them just the same as I always have. I\'m sorry you have people in your life that don\'t understand and I\'m sure it is hard for you to have them distance themselves / reject you. Stay strong, believe in yourself and have faith.
June 3rd, 2022 15:56
Jeannie said:
Love your poem. I have family members and friends who are gay and I love them just the same as I always have. I\'m sorry you have people in your life that don\'t understand and I\'m sure it is hard for you to have them distance themselves / reject you. Stay strong, believe in yourself and have faith.
June 3rd, 2022 15:56
My execution
morange said:
I love the line \"I\'m close to the ceiling fan and it\'s blowing me away\". Gives this feeling of lost control in a really beautiful way.
June 3rd, 2022 08:39
morange said:
I love the line \"I\'m close to the ceiling fan and it\'s blowing me away\". Gives this feeling of lost control in a really beautiful way.
June 3rd, 2022 08:39
The trouble with coming out
cherm said:
Step into the light. Embrace yourself sooner rather than later.
I enjoyed your poem. Well written and well done. 😊
June 2nd, 2022 22:57
cherm said:
Step into the light. Embrace yourself sooner rather than later.
I enjoyed your poem. Well written and well done. 😊
June 2nd, 2022 22:57
The trouble with coming out
Paul Bell said:
If you\'ve got to come out, you\'ve got to come out. If it bothers others, tough, get used to it. It\'s not like you can go back in.
June 2nd, 2022 16:04
Paul Bell said:
If you\'ve got to come out, you\'ve got to come out. If it bothers others, tough, get used to it. It\'s not like you can go back in.
June 2nd, 2022 16:04
The trouble with coming out
JudyStella said:
Conservative people can be very close minded and adamant. People should be able to embrace each other’s differences
June 2nd, 2022 12:26
JudyStella said:
Conservative people can be very close minded and adamant. People should be able to embrace each other’s differences
June 2nd, 2022 12:26
The trouble with coming out
orchidee said:
A daft comment from me, though it\'s a real situation.
Well, I was going to come out. But it started raining, so I went back in! Doh! lol.
Hope that\'s not killed the \'atmosphere\' of the poem altogether.
June 2nd, 2022 12:19
orchidee said:
A daft comment from me, though it\'s a real situation.
Well, I was going to come out. But it started raining, so I went back in! Doh! lol.
Hope that\'s not killed the \'atmosphere\' of the poem altogether.
June 2nd, 2022 12:19
The trouble with coming out
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:12
languale said:
Such a beautiful use of language! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Maybe you want to check on mine too? I\'d be happy if you leave a comment. I\'ts always exiting to know what other people like about your work. :)
June 2nd, 2022 11:12
My execution
Bella Shepard said:
The feeling of the \"execution\"from the perspective of the person who is experiencing it, is so intriguing. A feeling of peace and freedom that is seductive, but love and life pull you back. I Love the way you\'ve phrased this poem, and love that you will go on to write many more.
June 1st, 2022 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
The feeling of the \"execution\"from the perspective of the person who is experiencing it, is so intriguing. A feeling of peace and freedom that is seductive, but love and life pull you back. I Love the way you\'ve phrased this poem, and love that you will go on to write many more.
June 1st, 2022 13:16
Flashback
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your emotions speak volumes. Very relatable.
June 1st, 2022 13:15
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your emotions speak volumes. Very relatable.
June 1st, 2022 13:15
What she sees
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Well written! The depths of the darkness yet coming to life.
June 1st, 2022 13:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Well written! The depths of the darkness yet coming to life.
June 1st, 2022 13:13
My execution
Neville said:
very original and believe me .. I have had similar experiences whilst meditating and practising astral projection ............. write on my friend .. Neville
June 1st, 2022 08:40
Neville said:
very original and believe me .. I have had similar experiences whilst meditating and practising astral projection ............. write on my friend .. Neville
June 1st, 2022 08:40
My execution
JudyStella said:
An emotional piece crafted well. I love that In the end, you show love is strong that it can win over pain! I am glad the brother walked in before it was too late💖
June 1st, 2022 02:33
JudyStella said:
An emotional piece crafted well. I love that In the end, you show love is strong that it can win over pain! I am glad the brother walked in before it was too late💖
June 1st, 2022 02:33
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