Comments received on poems by Katrina
Out In The Open
Cheeky Missy said:
It's very like a terribly true bold-faced acknowledgment of wrong-doing. For the speaker says in L6 that it shouldn't be spoken....wherefore? Can't it be had or is it illicit? Almost eerie for the seeming forbidden desire, it excellently conveys the sense of passion, concluding hauntingly with the dangling unknown. Very well done.
July 19th, 2011 19:45
Cheeky Missy said:
It's very like a terribly true bold-faced acknowledgment of wrong-doing. For the speaker says in L6 that it shouldn't be spoken....wherefore? Can't it be had or is it illicit? Almost eerie for the seeming forbidden desire, it excellently conveys the sense of passion, concluding hauntingly with the dangling unknown. Very well done.
July 19th, 2011 19:45
No Heart
Emilou G. said:
A poem that speaks of pain. May you one day be free from your sufferings and care no more whether he'll gonna cry or not.
SMILE! THE DAY IS GOD'S NEW GIFT!
:)emilou g.
March 20th, 2011 23:47
Emilou G. said:
A poem that speaks of pain. May you one day be free from your sufferings and care no more whether he'll gonna cry or not.
SMILE! THE DAY IS GOD'S NEW GIFT!
:)emilou g.
March 20th, 2011 23:47
Little Pink Cow
Zwinkele said:
I enjoyed the randomness of the poem, especially everyhting pink. Although a few rhymes just made me groan... but i guess im just not a rhyming person
January 6th, 2011 16:32
Zwinkele said:
I enjoyed the randomness of the poem, especially everyhting pink. Although a few rhymes just made me groan... but i guess im just not a rhyming person
January 6th, 2011 16:32
Little Pink Cow
Cheeky Missy said:
Jolly good funny one! I quite enjoyed it. But, seriously what is it about....what is the pink cow? Is it related to a pink elephant?
January 5th, 2011 21:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Jolly good funny one! I quite enjoyed it. But, seriously what is it about....what is the pink cow? Is it related to a pink elephant?
January 5th, 2011 21:24
Trevor’s Little Squirrel
Cheeky Missy said:
Reminds me of the time, when a child, that I thought I would catch me a squirrel for my pet, 'round about dinner time......I was actually rather successful, nearly able to grab him, for he finally barred his teeth at me, but the dinner bell ringing for me, escaped up back into his tree.
January 3rd, 2011 15:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Reminds me of the time, when a child, that I thought I would catch me a squirrel for my pet, 'round about dinner time......I was actually rather successful, nearly able to grab him, for he finally barred his teeth at me, but the dinner bell ringing for me, escaped up back into his tree.
January 3rd, 2011 15:18
The Luncheon
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Very interesting. What was the meaning behind it....made me smile and chuckle, was it supposed to?
January 3rd, 2011 00:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Very interesting. What was the meaning behind it....made me smile and chuckle, was it supposed to?
January 3rd, 2011 00:20
The SHORT Bus Ride
Cheeky Missy said:
It is not the nicest poem....but by the conclusion I laughed out loud. Sounds like grade school, and yet it seems to be pointing to something else...what is it?
January 1st, 2011 21:58
Cheeky Missy said:
It is not the nicest poem....but by the conclusion I laughed out loud. Sounds like grade school, and yet it seems to be pointing to something else...what is it?
January 1st, 2011 21:58
Love
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful love poem! Your mention of walking a mile, oddly reminded me of the fun song 500 Miles. I like it.
December 30th, 2010 21:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful love poem! Your mention of walking a mile, oddly reminded me of the fun song 500 Miles. I like it.
December 30th, 2010 21:14
Me and You
Cheeky Missy said:
Your alternately rhymed stanzas were very enjoyable to read! It is a sweet poem....I like it.
December 29th, 2010 23:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Your alternately rhymed stanzas were very enjoyable to read! It is a sweet poem....I like it.
December 29th, 2010 23:25
Love
nair36 said:
Ha. Very nice poem, I was thinking how I could ever ryhme in a poem with Happy and Crappy and have it look good but it seems you have ryhmed the two very nicely. Great poem and great feelings coming from it.
December 29th, 2010 23:18
nair36 said:
Ha. Very nice poem, I was thinking how I could ever ryhme in a poem with Happy and Crappy and have it look good but it seems you have ryhmed the two very nicely. Great poem and great feelings coming from it.
December 29th, 2010 23:18
The One
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a sweet romantic poem....one that many a girl could sing.
December 23rd, 2010 22:45
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a sweet romantic poem....one that many a girl could sing.
December 23rd, 2010 22:45
True Love
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a sweet poem...I especially enjoyed the first two lines. I like it.
December 22nd, 2010 21:22
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a sweet poem...I especially enjoyed the first two lines. I like it.
December 22nd, 2010 21:22
Your Love
Cheeky Missy said:
It is sweet....and short. I like it. Reciprocating love, that's how it best goes for us, especially when you consider that the Lord says, "We love Him because He first loved us," you know?
December 21st, 2010 22:48
Cheeky Missy said:
It is sweet....and short. I like it. Reciprocating love, that's how it best goes for us, especially when you consider that the Lord says, "We love Him because He first loved us," you know?
December 21st, 2010 22:48
Your Smile
Dolphine29 said:
I love it.. makes me feel like I want to be kissed too.. I miss that feeling very much!
:)
December 20th, 2010 21:55
Dolphine29 said:
I love it.. makes me feel like I want to be kissed too.. I miss that feeling very much!
:)
December 20th, 2010 21:55
Hang In There
Dolphine29 said:
And as one we will share.. so beautiful. I like it a lot. :)
December 20th, 2010 15:03
Dolphine29 said:
And as one we will share.. so beautiful. I like it a lot. :)
December 20th, 2010 15:03
Your Touch
Dolphine29 said:
It's very sweet and has a very strong sense of longing.
December 20th, 2010 15:00
Dolphine29 said:
It's very sweet and has a very strong sense of longing.
December 20th, 2010 15:00
Your Touch
a soldiers wife13 said:
i love this poem....it has soo much to say....
December 20th, 2010 14:39
a soldiers wife13 said:
i love this poem....it has soo much to say....
December 20th, 2010 14:39
Your Touch
Cheeky Missy said:
I like this piece very well! It is very sweet. Excellent! I really like it for the sentiments it expresses. It is very nice.
December 19th, 2010 15:37
Cheeky Missy said:
I like this piece very well! It is very sweet. Excellent! I really like it for the sentiments it expresses. It is very nice.
December 19th, 2010 15:37
I Still Love You
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like this one very well! It is a sweet piece. Very, very nice! I really like it!
December 17th, 2010 08:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I like this one very well! It is a sweet piece. Very, very nice! I really like it!
December 17th, 2010 08:58
Stay Strong
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a sweet piece, tinged with the darkness of sorrow and fear. Very nice.
December 16th, 2010 12:11
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a sweet piece, tinged with the darkness of sorrow and fear. Very nice.
December 16th, 2010 12:11
(UN)HAPPY
Cheeky Missy said:
Me too...I want to be happy. Something seriously to consider, part of the solution does lie somewhat within our ability, in that it is our attitude in it all, our perspective, that really can make it better or worse.
December 15th, 2010 23:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Me too...I want to be happy. Something seriously to consider, part of the solution does lie somewhat within our ability, in that it is our attitude in it all, our perspective, that really can make it better or worse.
December 15th, 2010 23:02
I Just Can’t Have You
StormyDay said:
How sad to find the one person you want to be with only after you've commited to someone else. I'm sorry for your loss.
December 15th, 2010 12:07
StormyDay said:
How sad to find the one person you want to be with only after you've commited to someone else. I'm sorry for your loss.
December 15th, 2010 12:07
From Inside My Heart
Cheeky Missy said:
Your end-rhyming is pleasant, and the cry could be echoed, I suspect, by many. But what are we running away from? Is the root of the problem within? Or is it only the oppression outside of us, crushing us? I disagree that you need a backbone. We need the Lord's strength and grace.
December 14th, 2010 22:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Your end-rhyming is pleasant, and the cry could be echoed, I suspect, by many. But what are we running away from? Is the root of the problem within? Or is it only the oppression outside of us, crushing us? I disagree that you need a backbone. We need the Lord's strength and grace.
December 14th, 2010 22:31
Unlucky
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, I think I know the feeling! Argh! La, reminds me of all the times I make my plans and everything just has to go awry....I say then, la, I guess I should just live life without making any plans for anything? Go figure.
November 18th, 2010 20:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, I think I know the feeling! Argh! La, reminds me of all the times I make my plans and everything just has to go awry....I say then, la, I guess I should just live life without making any plans for anything? Go figure.
November 18th, 2010 20:20
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