Comments received on poems by mary.soft
midnight rain
Bella Shepard said:
I love the build up to \"wiping my tears away and calling that pizza place where we met\". Someone seeing past the flaws we imagine we have. The last line is superb. Well done!
March 2nd, 2023 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
I love the build up to \"wiping my tears away and calling that pizza place where we met\". Someone seeing past the flaws we imagine we have. The last line is superb. Well done!
March 2nd, 2023 14:38
untitled
Bella Shepard said:
Great analogy my friend, so true of many things we lose.
March 2nd, 2023 14:31
Bella Shepard said:
Great analogy my friend, so true of many things we lose.
March 2nd, 2023 14:31
midnight rain
Caring dove said:
Interesting writing nice words with nice flow .. especially like the repeat of the lines
‘ by the window in the night
Aimlessly pointing at the stars’
And really nice last line .
January 19th, 2023 14:03
Caring dove said:
Interesting writing nice words with nice flow .. especially like the repeat of the lines
‘ by the window in the night
Aimlessly pointing at the stars’
And really nice last line .
January 19th, 2023 14:03
Seasons change
ruthtitus54 said:
love any poems about the season reasons for change great job!!keep writing!!!
November 30th, 2022 18:54
ruthtitus54 said:
love any poems about the season reasons for change great job!!keep writing!!!
November 30th, 2022 18:54
Seasons change
Bella Shepard said:
The seasons of love are so often like the seasons of nature, for we are natural beings. This is sadly, but beautifully told. Love, loss, recovery, empowerment, couldn\'t be better. A great write my friend!
November 30th, 2022 10:24
Bella Shepard said:
The seasons of love are so often like the seasons of nature, for we are natural beings. This is sadly, but beautifully told. Love, loss, recovery, empowerment, couldn\'t be better. A great write my friend!
November 30th, 2022 10:24
Seasons change
Ash :) said:
The seasons are an amazing way to describe a relationship in my opinion, it shows all different emotions.
November 30th, 2022 10:02
Ash :) said:
The seasons are an amazing way to describe a relationship in my opinion, it shows all different emotions.
November 30th, 2022 10:02
silly us
Bella Shepard said:
The juxtaposition of the color white with hurtful experiences is so very clever, and adds a wonderful dimension to this poem. Beautifully penned dear poetess.
October 5th, 2022 09:43
Bella Shepard said:
The juxtaposition of the color white with hurtful experiences is so very clever, and adds a wonderful dimension to this poem. Beautifully penned dear poetess.
October 5th, 2022 09:43
Treasure hunt
Bella Shepard said:
This is a poem of youth and remembrance so beautifully and lovingly written. You cannot read it without being touched by the emotion in each stanza, that assurance we feel as children that everything will always be the same. You have a great gift my friend!
October 5th, 2022 09:27
Bella Shepard said:
This is a poem of youth and remembrance so beautifully and lovingly written. You cannot read it without being touched by the emotion in each stanza, that assurance we feel as children that everything will always be the same. You have a great gift my friend!
October 5th, 2022 09:27
the castle
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this is just priceless. I love the metaphors of glass, sand, ice and stone that you have used to express such deep feeling and reflection. Building yourself over and over again swells to a great climax in that final verse. It\'s a little late, but this is a fav.
October 5th, 2022 09:16
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this is just priceless. I love the metaphors of glass, sand, ice and stone that you have used to express such deep feeling and reflection. Building yourself over and over again swells to a great climax in that final verse. It\'s a little late, but this is a fav.
October 5th, 2022 09:16
the castle
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this is just priceless. I love the metaphors of glass, sand, ice and stone that you have used to express such deep feeling and reflection. Building yourself over and over again swells to a great climax in that final verse. It\'s a little late, but this is a fav.
October 5th, 2022 09:15
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend this is just priceless. I love the metaphors of glass, sand, ice and stone that you have used to express such deep feeling and reflection. Building yourself over and over again swells to a great climax in that final verse. It\'s a little late, but this is a fav.
October 5th, 2022 09:15
I wonder.
Bella Shepard said:
I love to meet new poets! The beauty of poetry is to express those thoughts and feelings which reside deep inside, the courage to use the words and connect with others. Thank you for sharing and caring.
October 4th, 2022 13:10
Bella Shepard said:
I love to meet new poets! The beauty of poetry is to express those thoughts and feelings which reside deep inside, the courage to use the words and connect with others. Thank you for sharing and caring.
October 4th, 2022 13:10
I wonder.
Neville said:
I seriously enjoyed this introduction to your ink sister .. Keep posting :)
Oh\' n welcome to MPS .. Here\'s wishing you All Good Things .. N
October 4th, 2022 00:18
Neville said:
I seriously enjoyed this introduction to your ink sister .. Keep posting :)
Oh\' n welcome to MPS .. Here\'s wishing you All Good Things .. N
October 4th, 2022 00:18
Treasure hunt
Paul Bell said:
Where does the time go, and how can we get back to the old times?
Isn\'t life strange.
September 22nd, 2022 11:46
Paul Bell said:
Where does the time go, and how can we get back to the old times?
Isn\'t life strange.
September 22nd, 2022 11:46
