Comments received on poems by Insanely Hilarious
Can I have it all?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that asks not only child questions but those of adults that have not grown up. Coices so many but priorities must take a role. So nicely written in a whirlwind and machinegun style that leaves the reader overwhelmed and making it clear its point that excitement and ambition are good but choices must be made or nothing will occur well done
November 8th, 2026 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that asks not only child questions but those of adults that have not grown up. Coices so many but priorities must take a role. So nicely written in a whirlwind and machinegun style that leaves the reader overwhelmed and making it clear its point that excitement and ambition are good but choices must be made or nothing will occur well done
November 8th, 2026 14:47
A Thousand Ways to Stay
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes \"To be chaotic and loud in your happiness,\" That is the line that caught me and makes the poem live. Loved it
November 1st, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes \"To be chaotic and loud in your happiness,\" That is the line that caught me and makes the poem live. Loved it
November 1st, 2026 13:29
Just enough of a father.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what many are compared to what they need to be and how so many fall short. Nicely written
October 28th, 2026 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what many are compared to what they need to be and how so many fall short. Nicely written
October 28th, 2026 09:49
Life should be magic.
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a box of chocolates you never know what you get. A fun poem of wishes and disappointments.
October 26th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a box of chocolates you never know what you get. A fun poem of wishes and disappointments.
October 26th, 2026 14:48
I Can\'t Write Anymore
Paul Bell said:
Ah, when the muse goes on holiday without telling you, all hell is let loose.
Hopefully be back soon, tanned and ready to go.
October 8th, 2026 07:17
Paul Bell said:
Ah, when the muse goes on holiday without telling you, all hell is let loose.
Hopefully be back soon, tanned and ready to go.
October 8th, 2026 07:17
I Can\'t Write Anymore
sorenbarrett said:
In search of one\'s muse. We have all been there before. Nicely written
October 8th, 2026 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
In search of one\'s muse. We have all been there before. Nicely written
October 8th, 2026 05:11
Lonely
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for help at finding freedom. Nicely imaged in metaphor. Well done
August 31st, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for help at finding freedom. Nicely imaged in metaphor. Well done
August 31st, 2026 07:32
My potential
Syd said:
I enjoyed this write. Think of the money before committing though.
- Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 16:22
Syd said:
I enjoyed this write. Think of the money before committing though.
- Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 16:22
My potential
sorenbarrett said:
To want a life of any type is the person\'s choice and I have known geniuses that have been common laborers and idiots that have been in charge of large corporations. Well written
July 6th, 2026 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
To want a life of any type is the person\'s choice and I have known geniuses that have been common laborers and idiots that have been in charge of large corporations. Well written
July 6th, 2026 13:08
The poet inside is dying.
sorenbarrett said:
All is good in moderation and sometimes compromises have to be made. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
All is good in moderation and sometimes compromises have to be made. Well written
July 3rd, 2026 18:07
Sensitive
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! This poem speaks volumes by condensing many into one it magnifies the meaning of all these words. Nicely written
June 26th, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! This poem speaks volumes by condensing many into one it magnifies the meaning of all these words. Nicely written
June 26th, 2026 05:36
Father
sorenbarrett said:
It is such pain that leads to independence where too many stay home too long now days. This poem presents the dichotomy of parent child relations and what one perceives as opposed to what the other thinks. Nicely written
June 25th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
It is such pain that leads to independence where too many stay home too long now days. This poem presents the dichotomy of parent child relations and what one perceives as opposed to what the other thinks. Nicely written
June 25th, 2026 04:27
To be loved is to be understood
sorenbarrett said:
That certainly is part of it to be cared enough about to be known to want to be known. A lovely poem
June 23rd, 2026 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
That certainly is part of it to be cared enough about to be known to want to be known. A lovely poem
June 23rd, 2026 13:35
Healing
sorenbarrett said:
All that society tells us that we buy into without thinking like why must I be a better person. Why not be who one is. Well done
June 10th, 2026 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
All that society tells us that we buy into without thinking like why must I be a better person. Why not be who one is. Well done
June 10th, 2026 13:46
A writer\'s pain.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of quantity not quality well written
May 12th, 2026 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of quantity not quality well written
May 12th, 2026 20:42
I met my younger teen self.
Doggerel Dave said:
I was sucked in by this, and found, all credit to you, the suspension of disbelief easy to navigate. Would like to see another when the real you is 25.
May 9th, 2026 20:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I was sucked in by this, and found, all credit to you, the suspension of disbelief easy to navigate. Would like to see another when the real you is 25.
May 9th, 2026 20:19
I met my younger teen self.
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting approach to self love in retrospect. Nicely done
May 9th, 2026 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most interesting approach to self love in retrospect. Nicely done
May 9th, 2026 19:34
You\'ve changed.
sorenbarrett said:
Change in oneself is an extremely difficult thing to accomplish like whittling on an iron bar it usually takes a bit of heat and a hard tool. Well written
March 28th, 2026 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
Change in oneself is an extremely difficult thing to accomplish like whittling on an iron bar it usually takes a bit of heat and a hard tool. Well written
March 28th, 2026 12:26
I Wish I Never Had a Sister
Paul Bell said:
This is a three in the morning job with a baseball bat.
Though you didn\'t get that from me.
February 2nd, 2026 09:19
Paul Bell said:
This is a three in the morning job with a baseball bat.
Though you didn\'t get that from me.
February 2nd, 2026 09:19
I Wish I Never Had a Sister
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hurt and agony about siblings with whom one has to compete. Control seems to be a major issue and bullying is always an issue. Nicely written it speaks of a relationship that is mixed but balanced to the negative.
February 2nd, 2026 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hurt and agony about siblings with whom one has to compete. Control seems to be a major issue and bullying is always an issue. Nicely written it speaks of a relationship that is mixed but balanced to the negative.
February 2nd, 2026 09:00
Daddy Issues
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is dark and raises the issue of where does blame lay, you inherited what you are from father and mother and they from theirs none asked to be here yet we are stuck with who we are and where we are. How much is heredity and how much learned? We still don\'t know. And at the end of all this who is to blame for the feelings we have. Well written
January 27th, 2026 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is dark and raises the issue of where does blame lay, you inherited what you are from father and mother and they from theirs none asked to be here yet we are stuck with who we are and where we are. How much is heredity and how much learned? We still don\'t know. And at the end of all this who is to blame for the feelings we have. Well written
January 27th, 2026 10:12
Daddy Issues
StarLoom said:
A raw, fearless piece that turns personal pain into powerful truth, showing a person brave enough to name their wounds and transform them into unforgettable honesty.
January 27th, 2026 10:05
StarLoom said:
A raw, fearless piece that turns personal pain into powerful truth, showing a person brave enough to name their wounds and transform them into unforgettable honesty.
January 27th, 2026 10:05
I tried to write my book today.
Lorenz said:
Hang in there ! Its really a good and hilarious start !
January 11th, 2026 12:55
Lorenz said:
Hang in there ! Its really a good and hilarious start !
January 11th, 2026 12:55
I tried to write my book today.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of how other\'s criticism affects the belief of others. A sad write of diminished belief of oneself
January 11th, 2026 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of how other\'s criticism affects the belief of others. A sad write of diminished belief of oneself
January 11th, 2026 09:54
Wretched society
sorenbarrett said:
Here I see a society asking us to be something we are not and the true individual not willing to buckle under the pressure. Well said
January 10th, 2026 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
Here I see a society asking us to be something we are not and the true individual not willing to buckle under the pressure. Well said
January 10th, 2026 10:55
I Met a Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and a poem of the inner self. Nicely done
December 9th, 2025 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and a poem of the inner self. Nicely done
December 9th, 2025 11:44
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