Comments received on poems by Aviksha
HEART LIES SOMETIME
Cheeky Missy said:
The fascinating thing about spelling dye that way, instead of "die" is the implication......the grief leaves a permanent mark, never to be erased. So...let me see, your heart sleeps among the thorns and your soul in the roses? Your heart is sorely wounded beyond repair by the lie and yet your soul smells of sweetness? It is quite the fascinating piece. Very sorrowful, yet I do like it.
November 24th, 2010 21:19
Cheeky Missy said:
The fascinating thing about spelling dye that way, instead of "die" is the implication......the grief leaves a permanent mark, never to be erased. So...let me see, your heart sleeps among the thorns and your soul in the roses? Your heart is sorely wounded beyond repair by the lie and yet your soul smells of sweetness? It is quite the fascinating piece. Very sorrowful, yet I do like it.
November 24th, 2010 21:19
HEART LIES SOMETIME
Aviksha said:
THANKS MR.JORGE G SIFUENTES FOR U COMMENT AND POEM RATED...............................
November 22nd, 2010 23:44
Aviksha said:
THANKS MR.JORGE G SIFUENTES FOR U COMMENT AND POEM RATED...............................
November 22nd, 2010 23:44
HEART LIES SOMETIME
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Uff... well I love happy endings...
but with the ones we hope to hold some love...
you never know...
waiting for it...
November 22nd, 2010 23:37
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Uff... well I love happy endings...
but with the ones we hope to hold some love...
you never know...
waiting for it...
November 22nd, 2010 23:37
THANKU FOR BEING MY FRIEND
nikhilps said:
hi, its a nice poem.... u had expressed friendship in its rightfull manner. i mean frndship is not that much formal, nope its not formal, the had a touch of humor... and it i'll be more enjoyed by the youth... and its a good poem......
November 22nd, 2010 09:17
nikhilps said:
hi, its a nice poem.... u had expressed friendship in its rightfull manner. i mean frndship is not that much formal, nope its not formal, the had a touch of humor... and it i'll be more enjoyed by the youth... and its a good poem......
November 22nd, 2010 09:17
HEART LIES SOMETIME
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw....I look forward to the rest of it.....thorns are part of roses and sky and earth make one whole, neither seems to be without the other.....we fly high in one and creep along or dig deep into the other....those are my initial thoughts.
Then again, considering the title, it is a sorrowful love longing...hopeless.
Very interesting.....I do look forward to more.
November 22nd, 2010 08:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw....I look forward to the rest of it.....thorns are part of roses and sky and earth make one whole, neither seems to be without the other.....we fly high in one and creep along or dig deep into the other....those are my initial thoughts.
Then again, considering the title, it is a sorrowful love longing...hopeless.
Very interesting.....I do look forward to more.
November 22nd, 2010 08:29
my solar love
Cheeky Missy said:
Very nice....you captured the enlivening, refreshing, heightening, exciting sense of falling in love.....it is like the sun, a fire, yet flickering, and similar to the reflection moonlight is, gaining strength from the source of its desire.
I like it very well. Good job!
November 15th, 2010 08:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Very nice....you captured the enlivening, refreshing, heightening, exciting sense of falling in love.....it is like the sun, a fire, yet flickering, and similar to the reflection moonlight is, gaining strength from the source of its desire.
I like it very well. Good job!
November 15th, 2010 08:35
WORRY
Cheeky Missy said:
It is so hopeless and yet so sweet....bittersweet. If it is forgiveness, then won't your beloved forgive, and is it so hopeless....he is dying? Oh how I wish it might end rather happily. Let forgiveness be the balm that restores life, eh?
November 14th, 2010 00:24
Cheeky Missy said:
It is so hopeless and yet so sweet....bittersweet. If it is forgiveness, then won't your beloved forgive, and is it so hopeless....he is dying? Oh how I wish it might end rather happily. Let forgiveness be the balm that restores life, eh?
November 14th, 2010 00:24
I HAVE FAITH IN MYSELF
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, I don't doubt it....ya, that really HURT.
November 12th, 2010 09:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, I don't doubt it....ya, that really HURT.
November 12th, 2010 09:12
