Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
A Note to My Fellow Would-be Sonneteers.....
jvl narasimha rao said:
trying to write a sonnet is a challenge but I will write a sonnet with your guidance.
yoursJVL
February 20th, 2011 12:15
jvl narasimha rao said:
trying to write a sonnet is a challenge but I will write a sonnet with your guidance.
yoursJVL
February 20th, 2011 12:15
The Squirrels We Lost
SauravRHS said:
Good theme. One seldom thinks of writing poetry on creatures like squirrels. I loved the way you explained the frivolous nature of the lovely creatures. I wish I could find some of them in India. I haven't seen one in all my life! :(
February 20th, 2011 02:01
SauravRHS said:
Good theme. One seldom thinks of writing poetry on creatures like squirrels. I loved the way you explained the frivolous nature of the lovely creatures. I wish I could find some of them in India. I haven't seen one in all my life! :(
February 20th, 2011 02:01
The Squirrels We Lost
Zojinjo said:
Squirrels: The best creatures on earth!
And you, taking time to make a poem about squirrels, well... /bow .
February 19th, 2011 04:30
Zojinjo said:
Squirrels: The best creatures on earth!
And you, taking time to make a poem about squirrels, well... /bow .
February 19th, 2011 04:30
Prince Charming and Mr. Right
StormyDay said:
'Tis very acurate, and I think women often do this to men, also. Well, at least they're more notorious for it. What's sick is that some admit it openly. . . "You marry them and then you train them until they're what you want them to be."
February 18th, 2011 12:58
StormyDay said:
'Tis very acurate, and I think women often do this to men, also. Well, at least they're more notorious for it. What's sick is that some admit it openly. . . "You marry them and then you train them until they're what you want them to be."
February 18th, 2011 12:58
Doe's Tale of E-love
StormyDay said:
Wow, very good. Perhaps it isn't best to begin relationships online.
February 18th, 2011 12:55
StormyDay said:
Wow, very good. Perhaps it isn't best to begin relationships online.
February 18th, 2011 12:55
Doe's Tale of E-love
Zojinjo said:
Well, to be honest, I don't think all romances end online, for I see no love, nor romance in the bonds made online, by and for own self. True romance online is found in love between disguises, for no one shows their face, just as it is, to the ones they love online.
"Love online is loving a disguise, just as much as it loves you. True love lies beyond disguises and beyond bonds made in a single click."
February 18th, 2011 03:22
Zojinjo said:
Well, to be honest, I don't think all romances end online, for I see no love, nor romance in the bonds made online, by and for own self. True romance online is found in love between disguises, for no one shows their face, just as it is, to the ones they love online.
"Love online is loving a disguise, just as much as it loves you. True love lies beyond disguises and beyond bonds made in a single click."
February 18th, 2011 03:22
In Love's Haunts, Valentine.....
dbremner said:
Another really good one! No need to alter this at all, I love it!
February 12th, 2011 05:26
dbremner said:
Another really good one! No need to alter this at all, I love it!
February 12th, 2011 05:26
With You, Valentine.....
dbremner said:
Good piece sonneteer. Paints the description well.
February 10th, 2011 15:32
dbremner said:
Good piece sonneteer. Paints the description well.
February 10th, 2011 15:32
I Luv U 2
jvl narasimha rao said:
No love is greater than jesus love for us.Valentine is lust.Your love is different.It is pious
yours JVL
February 9th, 2011 13:00
jvl narasimha rao said:
No love is greater than jesus love for us.Valentine is lust.Your love is different.It is pious
yours JVL
February 9th, 2011 13:00
It's U Valentine
jvl narasimha rao said:
This is all for your husband.You are a pious woman.I am a pious man.Can we use the word pious?
yours lovingly,
JVL
February 9th, 2011 12:54
jvl narasimha rao said:
This is all for your husband.You are a pious woman.I am a pious man.Can we use the word pious?
yours lovingly,
JVL
February 9th, 2011 12:54
Has to be LOVE.....
StormyDay said:
Wow, I'm stunned. Seems written by a master, if not one very experienced in verse.
February 7th, 2011 15:45
StormyDay said:
Wow, I'm stunned. Seems written by a master, if not one very experienced in verse.
February 7th, 2011 15:45
Has to be LOVE.....
dbremner said:
Wondefully written - wonderfully familiar!
February 7th, 2011 13:17
dbremner said:
Wondefully written - wonderfully familiar!
February 7th, 2011 13:17
Be Mine....
dbremner said:
You are at the top of your sonnetering game with this!
February 4th, 2011 15:35
dbremner said:
You are at the top of your sonnetering game with this!
February 4th, 2011 15:35
Dear Valentine......
Zojinjo said:
Loved it! You have a perfect choice of words and the rhythm is flawless.
February 3rd, 2011 16:48
Zojinjo said:
Loved it! You have a perfect choice of words and the rhythm is flawless.
February 3rd, 2011 16:48
Your Valentine.....
Leonard Dabydeen said:
Dance to the music of the mind, the closer you twirl towards him your Valentine will get closer to you. Keep dancing.
February 2nd, 2011 23:34
Leonard Dabydeen said:
Dance to the music of the mind, the closer you twirl towards him your Valentine will get closer to you. Keep dancing.
February 2nd, 2011 23:34
Re: the Church
Marius said:
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the environment you describe here. Not your typical religious poem. Not many who believe would admit to the fear factor so prevalent in Christianity.
I would respectfully take exception to the hate mentioned in the last verse, though. I don't hate believers. Hate is the most honest feeling; it cannot be faked. They say love is the most powerful feeling in the world? Well, one can fake love, but not hate.
However, it is also too strong a feeling to be used against people you don't even know personally, and in my opinion, not worthy of being used at all.
Well written.
January 30th, 2011 00:27
Marius said:
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the environment you describe here. Not your typical religious poem. Not many who believe would admit to the fear factor so prevalent in Christianity.
I would respectfully take exception to the hate mentioned in the last verse, though. I don't hate believers. Hate is the most honest feeling; it cannot be faked. They say love is the most powerful feeling in the world? Well, one can fake love, but not hate.
However, it is also too strong a feeling to be used against people you don't even know personally, and in my opinion, not worthy of being used at all.
Well written.
January 30th, 2011 00:27
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