Comments received on poems by Sassy Lou
Game Over
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
onwards, let your shadows
swallow your past regrets
boldly, forth you step
with hope in your heart
and hard earned, wisdom
to call upon
if time gets hard, onwards
striving to make up all that lost time
don\'t waste an extra second
onwards, ever
onwards
stay strong!
thanks for sharing
December 19th, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you!
onwards, let your shadows
swallow your past regrets
boldly, forth you step
with hope in your heart
and hard earned, wisdom
to call upon
if time gets hard, onwards
striving to make up all that lost time
don\'t waste an extra second
onwards, ever
onwards
stay strong!
thanks for sharing
December 19th, 2022 05:05
BFF
L. B. Mek said:
it happens
some, in mere 28 mins
some in 28 days
28 years, is a lengthy time
may you eventually fight through the hurt
to a place where the mementos
you\'ve accumulated
are not tarnished, but treasured
sometimes, we need to open our hands
and simply let go, let what will be
be
like burnt toast, we scrape away
the bad parts
and make the best of what\'s left...
thanks for sharing, stay strong
hope you get answers to your why\'s
at some point, for what its worth
December 16th, 2022 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
it happens
some, in mere 28 mins
some in 28 days
28 years, is a lengthy time
may you eventually fight through the hurt
to a place where the mementos
you\'ve accumulated
are not tarnished, but treasured
sometimes, we need to open our hands
and simply let go, let what will be
be
like burnt toast, we scrape away
the bad parts
and make the best of what\'s left...
thanks for sharing, stay strong
hope you get answers to your why\'s
at some point, for what its worth
December 16th, 2022 06:38
I Just Love You
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so beautiful ,a love like this brings a tear to my eyes,
December 6th, 2022 22:16
Crowns4Christ said:
This is so beautiful ,a love like this brings a tear to my eyes,
December 6th, 2022 22:16
I Just Love You
Ash :) said:
\"Your lips are like the taste of Strawberry Wine\" beautiful line, the whole poem is beautiful
December 6th, 2022 21:29
Ash :) said:
\"Your lips are like the taste of Strawberry Wine\" beautiful line, the whole poem is beautiful
December 6th, 2022 21:29
Jail Talk
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wonderfully done. You are spot on. Some people will say anything to manipulate to get what they want, and in the meantime, cause a lot of hurt and pain. I get this write!
December 5th, 2022 18:22
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Wonderfully done. You are spot on. Some people will say anything to manipulate to get what they want, and in the meantime, cause a lot of hurt and pain. I get this write!
December 5th, 2022 18:22
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