Comments received on poems by Sassy Lou
Dark is Chiaroscuro
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of instruction or divulgation acknowledging awareness and preparedness. A plan to stay one step ahead. Well done.
December 11th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of instruction or divulgation acknowledging awareness and preparedness. A plan to stay one step ahead. Well done.
December 11th, 2025 03:47
She\'s
sorenbarrett said:
Several nice lines in this poem, they are set up in couplets where the first line sets up the second. Well done
November 21st, 2025 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
Several nice lines in this poem, they are set up in couplets where the first line sets up the second. Well done
November 21st, 2025 17:12
The Monkey
Paul Bell said:
A bit of self loathing in here, and we all get it from time to time.
Sometimes the chains get tighter before they release.
Great poem.
November 13th, 2025 10:12
Paul Bell said:
A bit of self loathing in here, and we all get it from time to time.
Sometimes the chains get tighter before they release.
Great poem.
November 13th, 2025 10:12
The Monkey
sorenbarrett said:
And a monkey it is. We all have one, some small and we think cute, others a gorilla that tears us apart. Well written and with meaning.
November 13th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
And a monkey it is. We all have one, some small and we think cute, others a gorilla that tears us apart. Well written and with meaning.
November 13th, 2025 08:24
Change of Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty and its alure can cause a change of heart in anyone no matter how temporary. A wonderful write that has its own allure. Loved it
November 12th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty and its alure can cause a change of heart in anyone no matter how temporary. A wonderful write that has its own allure. Loved it
November 12th, 2025 04:29
Alpha Tempest
sorenbarrett said:
Alpha is the beginning and Omega the end and aptly said in a poem that relies on letters of the alphabet. A poem of strength
November 2nd, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Alpha is the beginning and Omega the end and aptly said in a poem that relies on letters of the alphabet. A poem of strength
November 2nd, 2025 13:12
Cannot Escape Oneself
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting yes no one escapes themself. Like our shadow we are stuck with it. Well done
October 15th, 2025 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting yes no one escapes themself. Like our shadow we are stuck with it. Well done
October 15th, 2025 20:44
She\'s Tired
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes shouting it from the rooftops isn\'t enough.
Action is called for.
October 12th, 2025 06:00
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes shouting it from the rooftops isn\'t enough.
Action is called for.
October 12th, 2025 06:00
She\'s Tired
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through loud and clear of the exhaustion that comes with a life of abuse and difficult times. A poem of pain and frustration
October 12th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
The message comes through loud and clear of the exhaustion that comes with a life of abuse and difficult times. A poem of pain and frustration
October 12th, 2025 04:17
Her Silent Battle
Poetic Licence said:
A feel of a quiet strength that is slowly building, and will overcome all difficulties, well written
October 12th, 2025 02:30
Poetic Licence said:
A feel of a quiet strength that is slowly building, and will overcome all difficulties, well written
October 12th, 2025 02:30
Her Silent Battle
sorenbarrett said:
That was quite creative fading out on the last two lines by smaller and lighter font. Well done
October 11th, 2025 18:26
sorenbarrett said:
That was quite creative fading out on the last two lines by smaller and lighter font. Well done
October 11th, 2025 18:26
No Exodus
Paul Bell said:
Solitude can be fulfilling for a time, but only for a time.
The reader picks up the frustration in this write, cos at some point we\'ve all been on that journey.
October 5th, 2025 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Solitude can be fulfilling for a time, but only for a time.
The reader picks up the frustration in this write, cos at some point we\'ve all been on that journey.
October 5th, 2025 06:51
No Exodus
sorenbarrett said:
Although there are several five dollar words in this piece it rolls out like a red carpet with trumpets. It has a royal feel to it and with pomp and ceremony it call out to all about. A fave
October 5th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Although there are several five dollar words in this piece it rolls out like a red carpet with trumpets. It has a royal feel to it and with pomp and ceremony it call out to all about. A fave
October 5th, 2025 05:05
Through the Chaos
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of difficulties overcome by support most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of difficulties overcome by support most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 16:34
Karma
sorenbarrett said:
The basic idea of karma as energy one accumulates by one\'s actions and thoughts. A lovely development in this poem. Well done
October 2nd, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
The basic idea of karma as energy one accumulates by one\'s actions and thoughts. A lovely development in this poem. Well done
October 2nd, 2025 19:29
She Held On
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tenacity and grit like determination displayed in this poem that can be taken as for love or other things. In a sense it speaks to character of the person. Nicely written in most poetic form
September 30th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tenacity and grit like determination displayed in this poem that can be taken as for love or other things. In a sense it speaks to character of the person. Nicely written in most poetic form
September 30th, 2025 04:17
Check Up on Me
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective poem of an existential nature. It asks questions many of us ask. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective poem of an existential nature. It asks questions many of us ask. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 13:03
Perpetual Imperfections
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic assertion of being made up of choice. A strong statement and as an alloy with ones past should stand the pressures of time. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic assertion of being made up of choice. A strong statement and as an alloy with ones past should stand the pressures of time. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 03:54
Becoming
Fred1794 said:
A sense of viciousness and conjures up images of a bestial transformation. Nicely put.
September 12th, 2025 07:39
Fred1794 said:
A sense of viciousness and conjures up images of a bestial transformation. Nicely put.
September 12th, 2025 07:39
Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the list of adjectives that build a picture of darkness that at the same time is most intriguing. Very nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the list of adjectives that build a picture of darkness that at the same time is most intriguing. Very nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:37
Foretold
sorenbarrett said:
Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of frustration in a chaotic world. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of frustration in a chaotic world. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 09:29
Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world. Nicely and powerfully written
August 19th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world. Nicely and powerfully written
August 19th, 2025 04:43
Lust & Love
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting comparison and weighing of the two. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting comparison and weighing of the two. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:27
Lust & Love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and very accurate write, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 03:30
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and very accurate write, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 03:30
Lust & Love
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. List and love. Two very different things. Vdry well written.
August 17th, 2025 00:06
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. List and love. Two very different things. Vdry well written.
August 17th, 2025 00:06
The High
Poetic Licence said:
A write of the ever increasing dependency of drugs to get the high they are looking for, to forget their daily troubles and life and a moment to feel free, a path that is so easy to follow but very difficult to get of off, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 23:13
Poetic Licence said:
A write of the ever increasing dependency of drugs to get the high they are looking for, to forget their daily troubles and life and a moment to feel free, a path that is so easy to follow but very difficult to get of off, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 23:13
The High
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being high. I could almost feel the floating in this one. Nicely done
August 12th, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being high. I could almost feel the floating in this one. Nicely done
August 12th, 2025 20:49
Fakeness
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, in a world that everything appears to be now fake, fakeness has always been there but today it seems the norm, nicely written
August 7th, 2025 01:05
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, in a world that everything appears to be now fake, fakeness has always been there but today it seems the norm, nicely written
August 7th, 2025 01:05
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