Comments received on poems by Sassy Lou
No Exodus
Paul Bell said:
Solitude can be fulfilling for a time, but only for a time.
The reader picks up the frustration in this write, cos at some point we\'ve all been on that journey.
October 5th, 2025 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Solitude can be fulfilling for a time, but only for a time.
The reader picks up the frustration in this write, cos at some point we\'ve all been on that journey.
October 5th, 2025 06:51
No Exodus
sorenbarrett said:
Although there are several five dollar words in this piece it rolls out like a red carpet with trumpets. It has a royal feel to it and with pomp and ceremony it call out to all about. A fave
October 5th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Although there are several five dollar words in this piece it rolls out like a red carpet with trumpets. It has a royal feel to it and with pomp and ceremony it call out to all about. A fave
October 5th, 2025 05:05
Through the Chaos
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of difficulties overcome by support most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 16:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of difficulties overcome by support most lovely
October 3rd, 2025 16:34
Karma
sorenbarrett said:
The basic idea of karma as energy one accumulates by one\'s actions and thoughts. A lovely development in this poem. Well done
October 2nd, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
The basic idea of karma as energy one accumulates by one\'s actions and thoughts. A lovely development in this poem. Well done
October 2nd, 2025 19:29
She Held On
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tenacity and grit like determination displayed in this poem that can be taken as for love or other things. In a sense it speaks to character of the person. Nicely written in most poetic form
September 30th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tenacity and grit like determination displayed in this poem that can be taken as for love or other things. In a sense it speaks to character of the person. Nicely written in most poetic form
September 30th, 2025 04:17
Check Up on Me
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective poem of an existential nature. It asks questions many of us ask. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A reflective poem of an existential nature. It asks questions many of us ask. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 13:03
Perpetual Imperfections
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic assertion of being made up of choice. A strong statement and as an alloy with ones past should stand the pressures of time. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic assertion of being made up of choice. A strong statement and as an alloy with ones past should stand the pressures of time. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 03:54
Becoming
Fred1794 said:
A sense of viciousness and conjures up images of a bestial transformation. Nicely put.
September 12th, 2025 07:39
Fred1794 said:
A sense of viciousness and conjures up images of a bestial transformation. Nicely put.
September 12th, 2025 07:39
Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the list of adjectives that build a picture of darkness that at the same time is most intriguing. Very nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the list of adjectives that build a picture of darkness that at the same time is most intriguing. Very nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:37
Foretold
sorenbarrett said:
Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of frustration in a chaotic world. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of frustration in a chaotic world. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 09:29
Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world. Nicely and powerfully written
August 19th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world. Nicely and powerfully written
August 19th, 2025 04:43
Lust & Love
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting comparison and weighing of the two. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting comparison and weighing of the two. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:27
Lust & Love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and very accurate write, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 03:30
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and very accurate write, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 03:30
Lust & Love
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. List and love. Two very different things. Vdry well written.
August 17th, 2025 00:06
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. List and love. Two very different things. Vdry well written.
August 17th, 2025 00:06
The High
Poetic Licence said:
A write of the ever increasing dependency of drugs to get the high they are looking for, to forget their daily troubles and life and a moment to feel free, a path that is so easy to follow but very difficult to get of off, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 23:13
Poetic Licence said:
A write of the ever increasing dependency of drugs to get the high they are looking for, to forget their daily troubles and life and a moment to feel free, a path that is so easy to follow but very difficult to get of off, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 23:13
The High
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being high. I could almost feel the floating in this one. Nicely done
August 12th, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being high. I could almost feel the floating in this one. Nicely done
August 12th, 2025 20:49
Fakeness
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, in a world that everything appears to be now fake, fakeness has always been there but today it seems the norm, nicely written
August 7th, 2025 01:05
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, in a world that everything appears to be now fake, fakeness has always been there but today it seems the norm, nicely written
August 7th, 2025 01:05
Fakeness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that many can identify with. Not so sure it is only today, I remember when linoleum replaced wood floors, when formica replaced tile and granite. I remember when false words were said to preserve feelings, so they say. I remember when hugs turned to a pat on the back, now a stab. Today everything is plastic, digital when we used to write with ink on paper but once they wrote on stone. Maybe it is my perception but fake today is an extension of what has been fake for a long time. A lovely write with which I identify
August 6th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that many can identify with. Not so sure it is only today, I remember when linoleum replaced wood floors, when formica replaced tile and granite. I remember when false words were said to preserve feelings, so they say. I remember when hugs turned to a pat on the back, now a stab. Today everything is plastic, digital when we used to write with ink on paper but once they wrote on stone. Maybe it is my perception but fake today is an extension of what has been fake for a long time. A lovely write with which I identify
August 6th, 2025 08:53
Broken Promises
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write of the continued broken promises being delivered, feels like a very one sided relationship which is causing alot of pain and hurt, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:30
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write of the continued broken promises being delivered, feels like a very one sided relationship which is causing alot of pain and hurt, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:30
Broken Promises
sorenbarrett said:
Disappointment comes through in this poem of broken promises. Intentions may mean something but actions speak louder. One error can be overlooked but multiple tell a different story. Nicely worded this poem speaks of unkept vows. Well done
August 5th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Disappointment comes through in this poem of broken promises. Intentions may mean something but actions speak louder. One error can be overlooked but multiple tell a different story. Nicely worded this poem speaks of unkept vows. Well done
August 5th, 2025 05:24
Givers & Takers
Poetic Licence said:
A sad truth but it has always been the case, and they will always just take, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
A sad truth but it has always been the case, and they will always just take, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 13:47
Givers & Takers
sorenbarrett said:
A plus and minus world that is hard to undeerstand from the giver\'s side. Well done
July 30th, 2025 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A plus and minus world that is hard to undeerstand from the giver\'s side. Well done
July 30th, 2025 12:54
Givers & Takers
Sassy Lou said:
Thank you so much for the kind words a day taking the time to read my work
July 30th, 2025 12:50
Sassy Lou said:
Thank you so much for the kind words a day taking the time to read my work
July 30th, 2025 12:50
Decide
Priya Tomar said:
Your poem describes how a man changes ....
You are right ...
Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 22:26
Priya Tomar said:
Your poem describes how a man changes ....
You are right ...
Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 22:26
Decide
sorenbarrett said:
Words in this poem, tell of a person where talk is cheap. It is hard to change a style or pattern. Boundary set nicely said.
July 19th, 2025 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
Words in this poem, tell of a person where talk is cheap. It is hard to change a style or pattern. Boundary set nicely said.
July 19th, 2025 18:35
Lost Myself
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of a plea to return to the person they once was, and not liking what they currently have become, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 06:46
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of a plea to return to the person they once was, and not liking what they currently have become, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 06:46
Lost Myself
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change either in the direction not desired or to return to what one once was and still desired. This dichotomy makes the poem. Very nicely written
May 13th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change either in the direction not desired or to return to what one once was and still desired. This dichotomy makes the poem. Very nicely written
May 13th, 2025 05:10
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