Comments received on poems by Sassy Lou
The High
Poetic Licence said:
A write of the ever increasing dependency of drugs to get the high they are looking for, to forget their daily troubles and life and a moment to feel free, a path that is so easy to follow but very difficult to get of off, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 23:13
Poetic Licence said:
A write of the ever increasing dependency of drugs to get the high they are looking for, to forget their daily troubles and life and a moment to feel free, a path that is so easy to follow but very difficult to get of off, nicely expressed and written
August 12th, 2025 23:13
The High
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being high. I could almost feel the floating in this one. Nicely done
August 12th, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being high. I could almost feel the floating in this one. Nicely done
August 12th, 2025 20:49
Fakeness
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, in a world that everything appears to be now fake, fakeness has always been there but today it seems the norm, nicely written
August 7th, 2025 01:05
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely crafted write, in a world that everything appears to be now fake, fakeness has always been there but today it seems the norm, nicely written
August 7th, 2025 01:05
Fakeness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that many can identify with. Not so sure it is only today, I remember when linoleum replaced wood floors, when formica replaced tile and granite. I remember when false words were said to preserve feelings, so they say. I remember when hugs turned to a pat on the back, now a stab. Today everything is plastic, digital when we used to write with ink on paper but once they wrote on stone. Maybe it is my perception but fake today is an extension of what has been fake for a long time. A lovely write with which I identify
August 6th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that many can identify with. Not so sure it is only today, I remember when linoleum replaced wood floors, when formica replaced tile and granite. I remember when false words were said to preserve feelings, so they say. I remember when hugs turned to a pat on the back, now a stab. Today everything is plastic, digital when we used to write with ink on paper but once they wrote on stone. Maybe it is my perception but fake today is an extension of what has been fake for a long time. A lovely write with which I identify
August 6th, 2025 08:53
Broken Promises
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write of the continued broken promises being delivered, feels like a very one sided relationship which is causing alot of pain and hurt, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:30
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt write of the continued broken promises being delivered, feels like a very one sided relationship which is causing alot of pain and hurt, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:30
Broken Promises
sorenbarrett said:
Disappointment comes through in this poem of broken promises. Intentions may mean something but actions speak louder. One error can be overlooked but multiple tell a different story. Nicely worded this poem speaks of unkept vows. Well done
August 5th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Disappointment comes through in this poem of broken promises. Intentions may mean something but actions speak louder. One error can be overlooked but multiple tell a different story. Nicely worded this poem speaks of unkept vows. Well done
August 5th, 2025 05:24
Givers & Takers
Poetic Licence said:
A sad truth but it has always been the case, and they will always just take, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
A sad truth but it has always been the case, and they will always just take, nicely expressed and written
July 30th, 2025 13:47
Givers & Takers
sorenbarrett said:
A plus and minus world that is hard to undeerstand from the giver\'s side. Well done
July 30th, 2025 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A plus and minus world that is hard to undeerstand from the giver\'s side. Well done
July 30th, 2025 12:54
Givers & Takers
Sassy Lou said:
Thank you so much for the kind words a day taking the time to read my work
July 30th, 2025 12:50
Sassy Lou said:
Thank you so much for the kind words a day taking the time to read my work
July 30th, 2025 12:50
Decide
Priya Tomar said:
Your poem describes how a man changes ....
You are right ...
Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 22:26
Priya Tomar said:
Your poem describes how a man changes ....
You are right ...
Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 22:26
Decide
sorenbarrett said:
Words in this poem, tell of a person where talk is cheap. It is hard to change a style or pattern. Boundary set nicely said.
July 19th, 2025 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
Words in this poem, tell of a person where talk is cheap. It is hard to change a style or pattern. Boundary set nicely said.
July 19th, 2025 18:35
Lost Myself
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of a plea to return to the person they once was, and not liking what they currently have become, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 06:46
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of a plea to return to the person they once was, and not liking what they currently have become, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 06:46
Lost Myself
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change either in the direction not desired or to return to what one once was and still desired. This dichotomy makes the poem. Very nicely written
May 13th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change either in the direction not desired or to return to what one once was and still desired. This dichotomy makes the poem. Very nicely written
May 13th, 2025 05:10
Love Is Pain & Pain Is Love
Poetic Licence said:
A declaration of love in this write, expressed with strong feeling and power, as with the title some say you cannot have one without the other, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
A declaration of love in this write, expressed with strong feeling and power, as with the title some say you cannot have one without the other, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 02:19
Love Is Pain & Pain Is Love
Sassy Lou said:
Thank you for the kind words and taking time to read my work
May 8th, 2025 20:40
Sassy Lou said:
Thank you for the kind words and taking time to read my work
May 8th, 2025 20:40
Love Is Pain & Pain Is Love
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem with power and strong feeling. Lovely
May 8th, 2025 20:33
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem with power and strong feeling. Lovely
May 8th, 2025 20:33
Murmurs In the Night
sorenbarrett said:
A need for privacy in a moment of weakness. Nicely written
May 7th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
A need for privacy in a moment of weakness. Nicely written
May 7th, 2025 03:38
Murmurs In the Night
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of withdrawing from the outside world and battening down the hatches for self protection, very relatable to many, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:49
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of withdrawing from the outside world and battening down the hatches for self protection, very relatable to many, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 02:49
Murmurs In the Night
Soman Ragavan said:
Powerful words, but rather plenty of despair. Retreating into oneself, as life outside is unbearable. The house becomes a cell, a prison a hell.
May 7th, 2025 00:18
Soman Ragavan said:
Powerful words, but rather plenty of despair. Retreating into oneself, as life outside is unbearable. The house becomes a cell, a prison a hell.
May 7th, 2025 00:18
One Day
sorenbarrett said:
The search for a person that fits one\'s needs goes on and in world of billions there must be a good fit somewhere. Patience and time are the only factors. A good write.
April 24th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
The search for a person that fits one\'s needs goes on and in world of billions there must be a good fit somewhere. Patience and time are the only factors. A good write.
April 24th, 2025 04:50
Grief
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly we all experience grief at one time or another and it is a powerful emotion,difficult to deal with at times, however we are not forlorn, nicely expressed and written
March 17th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly we all experience grief at one time or another and it is a powerful emotion,difficult to deal with at times, however we are not forlorn, nicely expressed and written
March 17th, 2025 04:49
Grief
sorenbarrett said:
Grief comes to us all at one time or another. Pain is part of life and no we are not forlorn. Good write
March 16th, 2025 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Grief comes to us all at one time or another. Pain is part of life and no we are not forlorn. Good write
March 16th, 2025 18:47
Good Enough
Cassie58 said:
I read you words Cassie. You have expressed yourself well here. So sorry you feel this way. Keep writing and find someone to talk to who has a sympathetic ear. I hope you feel better soon.
December 7th, 2024 13:10
Cassie58 said:
I read you words Cassie. You have expressed yourself well here. So sorry you feel this way. Keep writing and find someone to talk to who has a sympathetic ear. I hope you feel better soon.
December 7th, 2024 13:10
Good Enough
rin said:
Nil value is infinite and valuable value is finite.
Creativity is infinite and ready-made is finite.
We think we can go back and forth between the two, think and stop thinking because we are free to do so.
December 7th, 2024 04:49
rin said:
Nil value is infinite and valuable value is finite.
Creativity is infinite and ready-made is finite.
We think we can go back and forth between the two, think and stop thinking because we are free to do so.
December 7th, 2024 04:49
Good Enough
Poetic Licence said:
Dealing with an issue a lot of people feel every day, if relating to the poet i can say from experience it takes time but it can be done, First step is find someone you trust to open up to, wishing you all the best
December 7th, 2024 03:52
Poetic Licence said:
Dealing with an issue a lot of people feel every day, if relating to the poet i can say from experience it takes time but it can be done, First step is find someone you trust to open up to, wishing you all the best
December 7th, 2024 03:52
Scorned Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and literal in one with great images and well written lines. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and literal in one with great images and well written lines. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 10:46
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