Comments received on poems by Sassy Lou
Scorned Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and literal in one with great images and well written lines. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor and literal in one with great images and well written lines. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 10:46
Convenience
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up for yourself the first step in self esteem well expressed here.
August 18th, 2024 16:05
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up for yourself the first step in self esteem well expressed here.
August 18th, 2024 16:05
Misconception
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines here. A plea for understanding evoking feelings of loss and betrayal. Nicely worded
July 27th, 2024 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines here. A plea for understanding evoking feelings of loss and betrayal. Nicely worded
July 27th, 2024 06:05
Misconception
Olive Anderson said:
\"Thief in the night you were Stole my heart, body & soul\" Excellent line especially in the context of a first love. Your writing threw me back to my first love. A love that was so young yet so bold. A staple in the memories of my mind flew threw me as I read your poem. Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2024 03:25
Olive Anderson said:
\"Thief in the night you were Stole my heart, body & soul\" Excellent line especially in the context of a first love. Your writing threw me back to my first love. A love that was so young yet so bold. A staple in the memories of my mind flew threw me as I read your poem. Thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2024 03:25
Letting Go
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes a loss is a good thing. Losing a bad relationship is one of those things. We must always consider ourselves as first priority and not endure hardship, abuse, or fear, just to save a relationship. Your poem is very well spoken and wise in its conclusions. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 18:05
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes a loss is a good thing. Losing a bad relationship is one of those things. We must always consider ourselves as first priority and not endure hardship, abuse, or fear, just to save a relationship. Your poem is very well spoken and wise in its conclusions. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2024 18:05
Bachelor Girl
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. They say there is someone for everyone.
October 21st, 2023 00:39
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. They say there is someone for everyone.
October 21st, 2023 00:39
Insidious Change
peto said:
The only constant is chance
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 13th, 2023 17:13
peto said:
The only constant is chance
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
October 13th, 2023 17:13
Bachelor Girl
peto said:
A step back?
Usually finds us when least expected
Well named
Words seem sassy
Enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2023 03:44
peto said:
A step back?
Usually finds us when least expected
Well named
Words seem sassy
Enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2023 03:44
I Just Love You
Caring dove said:
Like the mention of strawberry wine .. nice writing
June 28th, 2023 01:40
Caring dove said:
Like the mention of strawberry wine .. nice writing
June 28th, 2023 01:40
Love Me or Leave Me
Caring dove said:
Difficult when we care for someone but their behaviour hurts us .. and yeah some people are selfish in their ways .. a sad writing tho well expressed
June 28th, 2023 01:06
Caring dove said:
Difficult when we care for someone but their behaviour hurts us .. and yeah some people are selfish in their ways .. a sad writing tho well expressed
June 28th, 2023 01:06
Confined
Bobby O said:
Confined could mean temporarily interrupted. You write well, you think well, so I’m guessing you will outwit the confinement when your spirit and strength demand it.
June 13th, 2023 01:52
Bobby O said:
Confined could mean temporarily interrupted. You write well, you think well, so I’m guessing you will outwit the confinement when your spirit and strength demand it.
June 13th, 2023 01:52
Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde
Peter Gates said:
A common story of unrequited love told well by someone with so much love to give.
June 3rd, 2023 07:12
Peter Gates said:
A common story of unrequited love told well by someone with so much love to give.
June 3rd, 2023 07:12
My Individual
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My individual” by Sassy Lou
Your poem is touching. It is a sad human story as one often sees on poetry sites. Poetry is the perfect medium for expressing one’s emotions and experiences. Take courage. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 26 May, 2023. //
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May 25th, 2023 23:07
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My individual” by Sassy Lou
Your poem is touching. It is a sad human story as one often sees on poetry sites. Poetry is the perfect medium for expressing one’s emotions and experiences. Take courage. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 26 May, 2023. //
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May 25th, 2023 23:07
Not Over
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful
a lovely read, thank you
I\'ll keep my fingers crossed
it all works out for you
March 3rd, 2023 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful
a lovely read, thank you
I\'ll keep my fingers crossed
it all works out for you
March 3rd, 2023 06:37
Time
L. B. Mek said:
read it twice and my uncultured mind
barely gleaned a portion of meaning
yet enjoyed the read, each time
so richly worded, thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 07:02
L. B. Mek said:
read it twice and my uncultured mind
barely gleaned a portion of meaning
yet enjoyed the read, each time
so richly worded, thanks for sharing
January 27th, 2023 07:02
Me Time
L. B. Mek said:
empowering, hope you have a great year ahead
thanks for sharing
January 16th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
empowering, hope you have a great year ahead
thanks for sharing
January 16th, 2023 03:47
My Angel
charles69 said:
I read and re-read your poem and was mildly shocked and suddenly touched by the last section. I think it is a fine and not at all a sad poem, but an expression and sharing of the love between two people.I am a little confused however in that I can\'t be sure if the companion, the angel, is your, the speaker\'s child.Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good poetic, literary work.
January 4th, 2023 09:38
charles69 said:
I read and re-read your poem and was mildly shocked and suddenly touched by the last section. I think it is a fine and not at all a sad poem, but an expression and sharing of the love between two people.I am a little confused however in that I can\'t be sure if the companion, the angel, is your, the speaker\'s child.Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good poetic, literary work.
January 4th, 2023 09:38
Fading Away
mvvenkataraman said:
Superb free verse indeed,
The flow is excellent,
The meaning is gloomy
But, it has fine meaning,
Thanks for this poem,
But, I hope this is a poem
Not about you surely,
If so I pray for your peace,
May God bless you friend!
January 3rd, 2023 12:39
mvvenkataraman said:
Superb free verse indeed,
The flow is excellent,
The meaning is gloomy
But, it has fine meaning,
Thanks for this poem,
But, I hope this is a poem
Not about you surely,
If so I pray for your peace,
May God bless you friend!
January 3rd, 2023 12:39
Danielle
abbasptry said:
Such a beautiful poem... makes me happy to see parents write poems about/ to their children.
January 2nd, 2023 07:28
abbasptry said:
Such a beautiful poem... makes me happy to see parents write poems about/ to their children.
January 2nd, 2023 07:28
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