Comments received on poems by Sassy Lou



Fallen Angel
Paul Bell said:

I don\'t know why I love journeys of despair, maybe it\'s the people you meet in the dark.
I think it makes you stronger when the axe falls on the fallen foes.
Around the corner, another war wages.

September 30th, 2026 05:22

Fallen Angel
Anna Wakey29 said:

A thorough decimation of the soul. A good write, I enjoyed it

September 29th, 2026 21:12

Fallen Angel
sorenbarrett said:

A civil war with oneself is the most devastating with casualties suffered on both sides. A sad and dark write.

September 29th, 2026 21:11

Upside Down
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, damn...this one feels painfully close to the bone. I’m glad the ending still reaches for breaking the curse instead of surrendering to it. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 28th, 2026 06:44

Upside Down
sorenbarrett said:

So many elements out of place, feelings of dismay and trouble. There is an existential angst in this poem that gives it a sense of discomfort like an ill fitting shoe that must constantly be adjusted. Very nicely expressed it tells its tale well. Good job.

September 28th, 2026 04:01

Upside Down
James Michael said:

Very well written and heartfelt. We do endure pain, hopefully we can persevere and find solace in this mess.

September 27th, 2026 22:06

Spiritual Darkness
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, I’m sorry you know this kind of loss. Some bonds do not disappear just because the person is no longer physically here. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 26th, 2026 22:46

Spiritual Darkness
sorenbarrett said:

There is a longing in this write that calls out to another that is gone. Well done

September 26th, 2026 04:34

A Counterfeit Affection
David A Liebermann said:

It is sad to be in this situation but see at least clearly will let go forward and find peace within you. You wrote a powerfull poem.

September 25th, 2026 23:32

A Counterfeit Affection
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, this hurt. Sometimes knowing you should walk away does absolutely nothing to make walking away easier. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 25th, 2026 22:33

A Counterfeit Affection
sorenbarrett said:

It happens to many that what looks good at first becomes something else. Sad it is. Well done

September 25th, 2026 20:54

Contemplations
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This felt very close to home, Cassie...especially the part about losing your resolve. Been there! Great write, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 18th, 2026 09:15

Contemplations
sorenbarrett said:

One is who one is and no matter the thinking it does not change. Well written.

September 17th, 2026 18:51

The Fiends\' Within
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, that final turn stopped me cold...after all those threatening shapes, the possibility that the enemy has worn one’s own face all along is devastating. Raw, fearless work. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 17th, 2026 10:08

The Fiends\' Within
sorenbarrett said:

We all have our own demons and most are what we fear in ourselves. Nicely written it takes us on a journey. Well done

September 16th, 2026 10:01

Pieces of Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, what a raw and vulnerable piece. The shifting identities, memories, and burdens gather into a deeply human struggle to be seen and held as a whole person. That closing lands with tremendous weight. Powerful writing, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 15th, 2026 09:21

Pieces of Me
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.

September 15th, 2026 07:59

Pieces of Me
FrΓ€nz MΓΌller said:

Powerful emotions in this one…love it!

September 14th, 2026 19:57

Pieces of Me
sorenbarrett said:

We all wear a body of disguise and armor and shedding it leaves us vulnerable. Well written

September 14th, 2026 17:09

Fight or Flight
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This really moved me, Cassie. Neither choice is presented as weakness, and that makes the uncertainty feel completely human. Then that question of thirty more years arrives and opens everything again. Powerful and painfully honest, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 14th, 2026 10:54

Fight or Flight
sorenbarrett said:

There is resilience and persistence in this write of love and its difficulties. Well spoken

September 14th, 2026 03:59

Down for Life
Paul Bell said:

This could be a mother to a child.
The support is unbreakable just like the bond.
Seems to be a distance mind you, the child no longer there.

September 4th, 2026 14:17

Down for Life
sorenbarrett said:

A pledge of support in this poem the love of a friend laid out in a poem. Nicely worded

September 4th, 2026 03:53

Love No More
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a deeply painful piece, Cassie. The heartbreak here reaches beyond losing one person...it leaves you grieving the part of yourself that once believed love would be enough. Beautifully expressed, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

September 1st, 2026 12:32

Love No More
sorenbarrett said:

A sad write of giving only to receive nothing in return. Well said

August 31st, 2026 20:40

Lure and Desert
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, I connect with the ache in this. Sometimes the hardest part is not just losing the person, but questioning your own judgment afterward and wondering how you missed what was happening. This lands hard, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

August 31st, 2026 08:30

Lure and Desert
sorenbarrett said:

A most poetic admission of being taken. Well written

August 30th, 2026 19:51

Heavy Wears the Crown
sorenbarrett said:

Hard words about a temporary crown that needs renewal. It is powerful and speaks with some grit. Well done

August 19th, 2026 03:59

Heavy Wears the Crown
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Cassie, this is dark, seductive, and devastating. Intoxication first appears almost regal, only for the promised elevation to reveal itself as enslavement...a fiercely powerful warning. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›


August 18th, 2026 21:50

Heavy Wears the Crown
Antra Sharma said:

Loved it

August 18th, 2026 20:47

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