Comments received on poems by mikeal
would you
Anna said:
Wow! This is very cute, in my opinion. It's sweet...
Also, I liked the structure you built for it very much XD
July 29th, 2011 20:01
Anna said:
Wow! This is very cute, in my opinion. It's sweet...
Also, I liked the structure you built for it very much XD
July 29th, 2011 20:01
broken promises
Hoween94 said:
very powerful n well written. i like it very much!!
May 17th, 2011 05:37
Hoween94 said:
very powerful n well written. i like it very much!!
May 17th, 2011 05:37
broken promises
Lonelykaren said:
WOW.. it has power in a way.]
this is a great poem i practically have tears in my eyes. i like it..
January 25th, 2011 14:19
Lonelykaren said:
WOW.. it has power in a way.]
this is a great poem i practically have tears in my eyes. i like it..
January 25th, 2011 14:19
would you
Lonelykaren said:
i like it, it has spark.
i feel kinda like that but the guy dosent know i like him lol
January 25th, 2011 14:17
Lonelykaren said:
i like it, it has spark.
i feel kinda like that but the guy dosent know i like him lol
January 25th, 2011 14:17
would you
Cheeky Missy said:
I quite enjoyed this one! It is...oh, I dunno...it is sweet and very interesting. I like it!
November 30th, 2010 09:24
Cheeky Missy said:
I quite enjoyed this one! It is...oh, I dunno...it is sweet and very interesting. I like it!
November 30th, 2010 09:24
broken promises
mikeal said:
she made a promise to me she will never leave me for no reason would she part from me but when the time came she broke up with me cried and said sorry cux she said she had no choice but i kept saying not to leave but now shes gone i never broke mine but she broke hers its kinda complicated
November 27th, 2010 21:01
mikeal said:
she made a promise to me she will never leave me for no reason would she part from me but when the time came she broke up with me cried and said sorry cux she said she had no choice but i kept saying not to leave but now shes gone i never broke mine but she broke hers its kinda complicated
November 27th, 2010 21:01
broken promises
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, it is so almost powerful, maybe because I can identify with it.....I can feel it. You did an excellent job. And it is VERY sad. But Mikeal, why was it broken by THEIR tears? It sounds as if YOU are the one who was lied to and deceived and so woefully mistreated....she/he cried when lying and leaving?
November 27th, 2010 07:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, it is so almost powerful, maybe because I can identify with it.....I can feel it. You did an excellent job. And it is VERY sad. But Mikeal, why was it broken by THEIR tears? It sounds as if YOU are the one who was lied to and deceived and so woefully mistreated....she/he cried when lying and leaving?
November 27th, 2010 07:44
my lady o lady
Anna said:
I really liked this poem and the way it was built!~♥
November 25th, 2010 17:42
Anna said:
I really liked this poem and the way it was built!~♥
November 25th, 2010 17:42
my lady o lady
mikeal said:
i was in a little hurry so i have a lot of mistakes in this one but i will try my best not to make many in the future
November 24th, 2010 22:26
mikeal said:
i was in a little hurry so i have a lot of mistakes in this one but i will try my best not to make many in the future
November 24th, 2010 22:26
my lady o lady
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is quite the piece, especially with the comment you give explaining it. Your end-rhyming is pleasant, but in an inconsistent fashion that I don't quite catch the pattern. I like it. Thank for the explanation.
November 24th, 2010 21:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is quite the piece, especially with the comment you give explaining it. Your end-rhyming is pleasant, but in an inconsistent fashion that I don't quite catch the pattern. I like it. Thank for the explanation.
November 24th, 2010 21:08
TEARS of BLOOD
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. The pleasantly interesting thing is that you gave the speaker a touch of repentance....that is very nice, and something I don't generally expect....I assumed the fellow would be too hard for such things.
What is it a picture of?...fits since it looks like blood and is rather in a tear shape.
November 22nd, 2010 08:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. The pleasantly interesting thing is that you gave the speaker a touch of repentance....that is very nice, and something I don't generally expect....I assumed the fellow would be too hard for such things.
What is it a picture of?...fits since it looks like blood and is rather in a tear shape.
November 22nd, 2010 08:23
velvet butterfly
Cheeky Missy said:
And you improved it thereby! I thought it was good as I first saw it.
Congratulations! You made it even better! I do so like it! It is so romantic the way you depicted it all...wonderful...you are flying so beautifully high, painting the sky together....Excellent!
November 21st, 2010 00:07
Cheeky Missy said:
And you improved it thereby! I thought it was good as I first saw it.
Congratulations! You made it even better! I do so like it! It is so romantic the way you depicted it all...wonderful...you are flying so beautifully high, painting the sky together....Excellent!
November 21st, 2010 00:07
velvet butterfly
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, sweet! This is so delightfully romantic.
I love it! And spoken truly with the irresistable enticement of the guy...."no more can I wait/this is our fate..."
November 20th, 2010 22:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, sweet! This is so delightfully romantic.
I love it! And spoken truly with the irresistable enticement of the guy...."no more can I wait/this is our fate..."
November 20th, 2010 22:47
request
Cheeky Missy said:
I like the pictures you painted.....and I LOVE the picture you put with it! It borders on idyllic with the lack of vanity and lofty superhero, but I dislike tainting the love by letting it at all be "profane".......fascinating piece....I like it....good "love" poem! Oh, and I loved the end-rhyming!
November 13th, 2010 07:47
Cheeky Missy said:
I like the pictures you painted.....and I LOVE the picture you put with it! It borders on idyllic with the lack of vanity and lofty superhero, but I dislike tainting the love by letting it at all be "profane".......fascinating piece....I like it....good "love" poem! Oh, and I loved the end-rhyming!
November 13th, 2010 07:47
my angel
mikeal said:
thank you for +the kind words for i will always will hold dear my words and my angel for no poet on this world can describe her beauty thus for me she is a godess
thanks cheekey u commented on my poem
November 11th, 2010 19:06
mikeal said:
thank you for +the kind words for i will always will hold dear my words and my angel for no poet on this world can describe her beauty thus for me she is a godess
thanks cheekey u commented on my poem
November 11th, 2010 19:06
my angel
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the love you have for your darling angel. I hope you always treasure her so.
I have been twice called an angel by guys who liked me.....neither has me, nor did the last really want me. So, it is an interesting thing for me to read your sweet lines to your beloved.
I like the sentiment expressed....it is very sweet and romantic!
November 10th, 2010 13:27
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the love you have for your darling angel. I hope you always treasure her so.
I have been twice called an angel by guys who liked me.....neither has me, nor did the last really want me. So, it is an interesting thing for me to read your sweet lines to your beloved.
I like the sentiment expressed....it is very sweet and romantic!
November 10th, 2010 13:27
