Comments received on poems by magzzbaby
ME N YOU
falcon_mn said:
You have certain word fluency in this poem. Like you opened a book and words march free like your minds flow here. I like your poem.
August 23rd, 2024 12:50
falcon_mn said:
You have certain word fluency in this poem. Like you opened a book and words march free like your minds flow here. I like your poem.
August 23rd, 2024 12:50
WATER WOMAN
falcon_mn said:
Mother a miracle word which gives the life ,which care , hugs and wait in sleepless nights.
An ode to mother is a little gift compared we feel..
Great poem
Thanks!
August 23rd, 2024 12:44
falcon_mn said:
Mother a miracle word which gives the life ,which care , hugs and wait in sleepless nights.
An ode to mother is a little gift compared we feel..
Great poem
Thanks!
August 23rd, 2024 12:44
WATER WOMAN
sorenbarrett said:
Alienation, existential crisis yet a mythical and mystical feel. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2024 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Alienation, existential crisis yet a mythical and mystical feel. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2024 12:14
NEVER ENDING
sorenbarrett said:
Loss is a difficult thing and sometimes is buried under protective barriers Lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Loss is a difficult thing and sometimes is buried under protective barriers Lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:19
NEVER ENDING
Thoughtless said:
A hard road of unrequited love and a toxic partner. Liked the imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2024 10:50
Thoughtless said:
A hard road of unrequited love and a toxic partner. Liked the imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2024 10:50
ME N YOU
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of loss. Hoping things work out. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem of loss. Hoping things work out. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 16:56
PISCES WOMAN
sorenbarrett said:
Astrological this poem is a great description of those aspects. As a fish hope you hooked her. Nice write.
August 6th, 2024 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
Astrological this poem is a great description of those aspects. As a fish hope you hooked her. Nice write.
August 6th, 2024 13:10
WE ARE ONE
sorenbarrett said:
Poignant, deep and a sense of self awareness and understanding. I hear no blame here only a regret and a taking of responsibility. My favorite lines were the last \"I am you and you are me\" A very deep statement no matter how you interpret it. Brilliant!
July 31st, 2024 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
Poignant, deep and a sense of self awareness and understanding. I hear no blame here only a regret and a taking of responsibility. My favorite lines were the last \"I am you and you are me\" A very deep statement no matter how you interpret it. Brilliant!
July 31st, 2024 16:19
WHISPERS OF FORBIDDEN LOVE
Bloomingcereus said:
great poem through and through.
June 19th, 2024 16:47
Bloomingcereus said:
great poem through and through.
June 19th, 2024 16:47
THE THOUGHT OF YOU
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, and a very relatable theme
more power to you! thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, and a very relatable theme
more power to you! thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 06:15
THE THOUGHT OF YOU
Melike said:
It is sooo great. I\'ve been there, however you explained my feelings better than myself:) It is an epiphany moment about being right side of the relationship and giving yourself the value you deserved whole time and finally a warm hug you got
December 22nd, 2022 14:39
Melike said:
It is sooo great. I\'ve been there, however you explained my feelings better than myself:) It is an epiphany moment about being right side of the relationship and giving yourself the value you deserved whole time and finally a warm hug you got
December 22nd, 2022 14:39
